❶ 大学生给高中生的建议英语作文
运用各种句型会复啥写啥,连接词in a word, what's more, otherwise之类制的要多用,掌握一些不常用、牛逼的单词代替平时写烂的词语,如significant代替important,cosy代替comfortable(要符合语境)
❷ 高中英语作文 建议信 任务多,如何规划时间
英语来作文自 建议信:
Hello Li Hua,
I’ve heard that you are worried about your current work as so many things you have to finish in a short time.
Sometimes we do have difficulties in something. My advice is that you make your plan first, and see what are urgent to do and what may take times. Make sure you can accomplish your job in your schele.
Remember do one thing at a time, and efficiently.
Good luck and all the best.
from Hua Lee.
❸ 如何写建议信 高中英语作文
例如
Dear Ms.Gupta,
It's our great pleasure to announce that Jan.19th is the 3rd anniversary of the founding of our corporation.We have a small party as follows:7:00p.m.,Jan.19th,Room No.123,Kunlun Hotel.At this moment,we would like to express our sincere gratitude to our clients for both courtesy and support over the past three years.Please confirm if you plant to attend.
Yours Sincerely,
Lewis
❹ 请为我写一篇谈谈高中生活和学习的建议的英语作文,要点包括:1 感谢老师们的关爱2.学习状况:努力学
感谢老师们给我这个努力学习追美女的机会,我因此有很强的学习动力!
❺ 求标题为《建议》的英语作文,最好是高一水平的
1.建议信(A Letter of Suggestion)
your wish to be a volunteer. Dear Wang Qishan,
I am a senior in Peking University. The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games is coming in two years. After watching the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, I can not help writing to you.
First of all, here is my suggestion for the preparation work of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. The construction work of the sports building must be completed in time according to the contract. In Athens, the swimming stadium was not accomplished in time so that the event had to be held in the open air, which has brought negative effect on the performance of athletes. In one word, to protect the international image of China and ensure the Olympic competition, we must finish our preparation work well and in time.
Last but not least important, I want to express my wish to be a volunteer. In the first place, it is the ty of every Chinese to do his bit for the 2008 Olympic Games. In the second place, I have a good command of foreign languages. I can speak
2.
A suggestion to my English teacher
My English teacher is the most hard-working(最高级+复合形容词的运用,不错!) teacher I have ever seen.(定语从句,可以尝试用同位语哦,比如the elegant lady, my English teacher, is the most …) During her class, she tells us all the knowledge she knows. She also answers our questions as possibly as she can.(这句前可以用现在分词作状语,Being patient, she also…) With the help of my teacher, my English improves a lot.
However, she is so strict with us that everyone is scared to talk to her. (so …that…结构用的好!) So I suggest that my teacher should be good-tempered to us. Besides (除了…的表达方法?)to prepare the lessons, she is too tired. A good rest is necessary.
I hope our teacher may totally change after seeing these suggestions, (这里的suggestion要注意不能用复数,前文也只能提及一个建议,多拓展。比如 If my teacher is good-tempered, it is beneficial not only to her health, but also to her popularity)
By Wang Lin
A suggestion to my physics teacher
Physics is my favourite subject. Nonetheless I always fall asleep when I am having physics lessons. Because it is so boring that I can’t help sleeping. Not only me but also my classmates do other things ring the class. So I am going to give a suggestion to my physics teacher: to make the class more interesting in order to attracts students. They will listen to the teacher more carefully than before and make progress. I really hope I can do better.
Ø 内容充实,先说明提出建议的原因,自然地过度到建议。结尾稍显单薄。可再补充些(I sincerely hope that my physician teacher can take my advice so that I can do better in class.)
By Gao Ruilin
A suggestion to my politics teacher
With the time passing by and the development of modern science and technology, (第一句和文章并无大关系,放在这里略显牵强) politics is more and more important today. However, I also have a suggestion to my politics teacher. (also放在这里合适吗?)We are Grade Nine students and we are really busy now.(可用can词组,we are Grade Nine students so that we can’t help but be busy with our lessons now.) Should we don’t read news every day? (情态动词不可以和助动词放在一起哦!)It takes me much time and I can’t study on other subjects better.(这两句可以换种说法,informative as reading news is, it takes me too much time and I am not able to focus on other subjects.) In addition, I know how important the politics is (感叹句作宾语从句,不错!) and I will review the current (可以说recent) events. And I hope teacher will accept my suggestion.
By Sun Bowen
I want (to) give my English teacher a suggestion. You always give us a lot of exercise for homework, but you always says our exercise is too little. I will do these exercise try my best(try my best 可改成with my great efforts). I will learn English the hardest (harder and harder). I will Make my grades up. (和前一句可合并,so as to make progress in English.) I want to be good at this subject. And get a good performance in Senior high school entrance examination.
Ø 题目要求是写我给老师的建议,但是除了第一句涉及到了建议外,其余都在讲我要如何提高英语成绩,跑了题。千万要仔细审题!
By Luo Qikai
A suggestion to my physics teacher
No one is perfect,everyone must be make a lot of mistakes,including my physics teacher. (句与句之间要有连接词!可改成Everybody cannot be free from mistake. My physics teacher is without exception. )
She has a great number of errors. For example,when we have a lesson with her,she always forget that she talks about what (可用宾语从句forget what she talks about), then she needs some seconds to back to her title at first. (need做实义动词要加s, to review her title) It waists too much time.
But I have to admit that she is beautiful and gentle, she is proud of me and sure (appreciate) my ability. I have her to thank for my success. (I owe my success to her a lot.) I must become better (后面加上in return,作为报答),at the same time,I hope that she corrects her mistakes.
It that she tell me ‘time is your friend,if you don’t value it enough,it can be the worst enemy. (最后一句的用意是什么呢?)
❻ 一封高中水平的英文建议信,5-10句话左右,写给老师的,给老师提一些建议,紧急求助有悬赏!!!
Dear ______,
①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ , and I will try to make some conctive suggestions here.
②In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______(建议的内容).
③I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
(这是一个模版,版自己填充完善就可以权了)
❼ 高中英语作文,老师要求我们写作文,讲写给老师的,要求几点建议的,比喻如何提高质量等等
老师在对英语作文的评分时 首先看有没有用错的单词 句型 错误的地方 会扣分版 然后 在基本没有错权误的情况下 根据使用单词的复杂性 精确性 使用句型的多样性上来考虑 分数层次
所以 要想英语作文得高分 首先要掌握好单词 不要拼写错误 多用些好的词汇 而不是那些大多数人用的 例如 人家用 quiet 你就用 silence 还有句型 要多背些固定句型 就像小学生写作文 老师强调多用 拟人 比喻 排比一样 英语的写作 经典句型是亮点 可以提高作文得档次
我经常帮老师批改英语卷子 所以知道老师是怎么改作文得 希望有帮助
❽ 高一英语建议信作文
Dear editor,
I have read many articles on the school magazine.I find that almost all the essays on the school magazine are about the daily trifles in the campus.It is good for us to know the whole things in the campus.But I think if there are some articls about current affairs and learning methods must be better.Current affairs can open students’ eyes to know more about the world.Sharing learning methods can help some students find the best way for themselves to study.I hope you will find these proposals useful and put into effect as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Lei
❾ 写一篇给高一学生提供学习方法和生活建议的英语作文
I‘ a middle school student,I like English very much and I do well in it, too. Do you know how i can learn it? Here are some ways you can try.
In class, you should listen to the teacher carefully and be active all the time. If you have any questions, you should ask your teacher in time.
After class, you must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time.
At home, you should practice pronunciations by listening to tapes. Do you like English movies?
Watching movies can improve your spoken skills . And do more reading in your free time. If you do like that, I'm sure you will be a good learner soon.
❿ 刚升高中感觉不适应给建议英语作文
I am glad to receive your letter.from your letter,I know you are facing the problem on making friends in your new school. But I think there is no need to be worried. Since the students in your class come from different places, they may have the same trouble with you.So you'd better join in their games in your free time and have lunch togehter.In a word, as long as you get in touch with them actively,you are sure to make friends with them.I hope you can have a good time in your new schol.
Look forward to hearing from you.