1. S +V
第二、词汇量太小，且对已学词汇记忆不清。除了底子太薄这个历史原因之外，学生词汇量太小也是一个不容忽视的原因。有的学生汉语功底很好，用汉语作文，他们就会思如泉涌，下笔千言，但是一到用英语作文就好像被缚住了手脚，不知如何下手。比如99年1月的作文，题目是”Don't Hesitate to Say No”, 大部分学生能够领会题意并能按给出的汉语提纲作文，但有的学生连Hesitate是什么意思都不知道，更不用说在此基础上再作发挥了。另外有的学生虽然对题目及要求非常清楚，但是因为自己所掌握的词汇所限，无法用一些合适的词来表达自己的思想，于是只有绕着题目翻来覆去乱说一气，再加上这次出的作文提纲就象一道绕口令：
所以在说过一个又一个的”No”再加几个”Yes”之后，阅卷老师也给搞得云里雾里，头脑发胀，最后也只得酌情给个两三分罢了。还有的一写到纸上就是错字别字满篇，有些词汇的用法也走了样。其中最典型的就是for example写成example for , for instance写成for a instance, illegal 写成unlegle, 而such as, in spite of 等许多短语则是乱用一气。词汇的有限导致许多学生有口难言，欲说不能，对他们来说，用英语作文实在是一件很头疼的事情。
第三、缺乏思想，深度不够。99年1月的考试中很大一部分学生不能得高分还有一个重要的原因，就是他们的作文缺乏思想，深度不够。很多学生虽然本科毕业，但是他们在作文当中所表现出的智力水平与阅历似乎只相当于一个高中生。写出的文章着眼点低，视野狭窄。作为学生，作文着眼于学生之间的关系，反映学生之间的帮忙，这并不为过，但是这种帮忙不能仅仅限于在考试当中的帮忙，而且对这种帮忙都是一句话 ”Don't hesitate to say 'No'”。更有相当一部分学生在文章中写帮忙就是这一次考试当中的帮忙。与在校考生比较起来，社会考生应该多了许多社会阅历，也多了一些见解，但是举出来的例子也是范围太窄，大多是讲老板或领导让干的事只能答 ”Yes”而不能回答 ”No”。其实除了这些，可举的例子很多，关键是要抓住实质。
第四、缺乏应试技巧。缺乏应试技巧，主要表现为有些学生在篇首或篇尾有喊口号倾向（如Dear Friends, let's not hesitate to say”No”）,或画蛇添足,本来文章该结束了却偏要罗罗嗦嗦再来两句多余的话；另外一些学生字数把握不准，不是写得太短就是写得太长，写得太短的会因为字数不够而失分，太长的又因为阅卷老师任务繁重，时间窘迫，不能因为一篇文章乱了整个阅卷节奏。还有一些学生的笔迹（尤其是用纯蓝墨水钢笔和出水太浅的圆珠笔写的），让阅卷老师怎么也看不清楚。
I study in the No.1 Primary School. It's one of the best primary schools in my city. There are four buildings in campus. Two of them are teaching buildings. The other two are library and gym. The teaching buildings are huge and the classroom is large and bright. There are plenty of books in the library. I like reading books in the library. After class, students like playing in the gym. 全文你参考这个“英语作文网”吧: http://www.adreep.cn/xx/50150.html 十五的月亮_2011
1. My Friend（我的朋友）
I have a good friend. Her name is May. She is 12 years old. Her telephonenumber is 87634966 Her birthday is March 5th. She is good at English andChinese. She often plays the piano. She likes reading books and listening tothe music. Her hobbies are reading and listening to music. She is a nice girl.We often help each other. We
are good friends.
2. 假设你是李枚，下面的照片是你的全家福，请你写一篇文章介绍你的家庭。Hello, everyone! I'm Li Mei. Look! This is myfamily photo. This is my grandmother. She is 58. This is my father. He is ateacher. He is 36. and my mother is 36, too. Who’s that boy? Oh, heis my brother. He is 13 and I am 12. My brother and I are students.
Look! This is Tom’s room. His photos are on the wall. His T-shirt is on thebed. His baseball bat is behind the dresser. The keys are in the drawer. Thecomputer is on the desk. Where is Tom’s baseball? Oh, It’s under the bed. Whatis on the floor? They are Tom’s shoes, socks and computer games. What do youthink of Tom’s room?
Hello, everyone! I don’t like sports, but Ilike eating very much. I eat a lot food every day. For breakfast, I like milk,eggs and bread a lot . For lunch, I likeFrench fries, chicken, hamburgers and apples. For dinner, I like fruits,vegetables and rice.
5. 以My Favorite…为题，写一篇短文
My favorite subject is English. I like itbecause it is interesting. I have English every day. I can speak a littleEnglish. I join the school English club. Every afternoon I go there to talk inEnglish. I can see the English movies and read English books. I think it isuseful for me. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.
6. My English Teacher（我的英语老师）
Miss Wang is my English teacher. She looksvery young. She's about thirty years old, and she wears glasses. She's funny .But she is strict with us. She wants us to study hard, Her lessons areinteresting. We are very happy in her class and we all like her lessons. She isa good teacher, and we all like her.
My name is Wang Ming. My birthday is June 5th.I am Chinese. I am a student. I study very hard. My favorite subject isEnglish. I like it because it is interesting. I can play the piano and thetrumpet, but not very well. I love swimming and I am good at it. Of all kindsof movies, I like comedies best. I think they're interesting. I’m one of thebest students in my class. My teachers all say I am a good student. They alllike me and I like them, too.
参考作文 Help Wanted
Are you goodwith children? We need help for summer holiday . Can you help kids with sports? Can you help kids with music ?Can you paint ? Can you play computer games ?Come and join us ! Please call Wang Ping at 6367786 . Our e-mail address is firstname.lastname@example.org.
I usually getup at 6:30 . Then I have breakfast . At7:10 I go to school . We have fourclasses in the morning ., and three classes in the afternoon . At 4:30 p.m. Igo home . After supper I do my homework . I usually watch TV from 8:00 to9:00.in the evening . Then I go to bed at 10:00 .
Zhang Jing ismy good friend. She studies in Qing.Her home is about three kilometers from school. She usually rides her bike toschool and it takes her about twenty minutes .But when it rains, she goes toschool by taxi. It takes her only five minutes . Her father and mother bothwork in a hospital. It’s eight kilometers from their home. They take a car towork . It takes them about ten minutes.
2. 写作题目：根据下面提示写一篇60词左右的短文。Tom 正和他的一个朋友Jim 谈论他所在的学校。Tom 很不喜欢这所学校，原因是这所学校的规章制度太多。要点：（1）保持安静（2）不准吃零食（3）不准乱扔垃圾（4）不准打闹（5）按时上课（6）做好课前准备
Tom is talking about his school with his friend Jim. Tom tells Jim hedoesn’t like this school very much, because there are too many school rules forus.
1. Keep quiet in the classroom,please.
2. Don’t eat snacks in theclassroom ,or it will make our classroom dirty.
3. Don’t throw around.
4. Don’t fight and chase aftereach other in the classroom. Of course, you can’t make any noise.
5. Please arrive at the class ontime ,don’t be late. Or our teachers will be unhappy.
6. Get ready before the class. Don’tlook for anything after the class begins.
If we break anyone of them, we will be punished.
2. 写作题目：根据下面表格的内容，以A Trip to the Zoo写一篇60词左右的短文介绍一下动物园新来的两只动物。
A Trip to theZoo
Welcome to the zoo. There are two newanimals. The panda’s name is Feifei .She is from China .She likes eating bamboo. Sheis lovely and shy. She is only two years old. The other animal is a lion .Hisname is Karl. He is from Africa. He likeseating meat. He is very dangerous and strong. He is three years old .We all like them.
2. 写作题目：假设你叫魏梅，根据下面提示给你的朋友Helen 写一张明信片，介绍一下你和你的家人正在做什么，不少于60词。提示： 现在是星期三晚上八点，你的爷爷和爸爸在下象棋，奶奶和妈妈在看电视，姐姐在房间看书，哥哥在玩电脑游戏。你们很开心。
Dear Helen ,
How are you? It’s eight o’clock in theevening now. What are you doing now? People in my family are doing differentthings. My brother is playing computer games. You see, he likes playing gamesvery much. My grandpa and my father are playing chess. My grandma and my motherare watching TV and my sister is reading a book in her room. We are having agood time.
See you soon.
2. 写作题目：你家乡的气候怎样？你喜欢什么样的气候？以The Weather in My City 为题，写一篇介绍天气的短文。
The Weather in My City
Hello, everyone！ I’m from Shengyang. Do you want toknow what the weather is like here? Let me tell you!
Shengyang is in the northeast of China. In spring, the weather ischangeable(多变的).Sometimesit’s warm, and sometimes it’s cold.. Insummer, it’s hot.. But I like it very much because I like swimming. The autumnin Shengyang is very nice. It’s neither too hot nor too cold .In winter, it’svery cold. You can see heavy snow everywhere. I like snow. I like to makesnowman with my friends.
2. 写作题目：假设你叫李雷，这个星期天是你的生日，你准备在家举办一个生日聚会，聚会在六点钟开始。你邀请了你的一些朋友参加，Susan 也在其中， 可她不知道去你家的路。你家住在Bridge Street，乘坐六路或八路公共汽车在Bridge Street站下车，下车后直走，然后在第一个十字路口右拐，左边有一个邮局，你家就在邮局的对面，房子是红色的，很容易找到。请根据所给信息给Susan写封邮件。
ThisSunday is my birthday. I’ll have a birthday at my home. It starts at 6p.m..Would you like to come? I’ll ask some of my friends to come. My home is on Bridge Street. Youcan take a No.6 or No.8 bus, and get off on Bridge Street. Go straight ,and then turnright at the first crossing .You can see a post office on your left. My home isacross from the post office. It is a red house. You won’t miss it..
Ladies and Gentlemen, we are look forPeter. Peter, a four-year-old boy, was missing in the shop. He is of mediumheight, and he has short hair. His face is round, and his eyes are big. Hewears a white T-shirt and white trousers, and a pair of black sports shoes. Andhe has a blue bag. If someone finds him, please bring him into the BroadcastingRoom. His mother is there. Thank you .
2. 写作题目：根据以下信息为朱老大饺子屋（ Zhu Laoda Dumpling House ）写一则广告。提示：（1） 本店饺子品种齐全，个大味美（2） 现有两种特价饺子：鸡蛋蔬菜饺子每10
Zhu Laoda Dumpling House
Would you like to have mplings? At ZhuLaoda Dumpling House ,we have all kinds of mplings and they are all large anddelicious.
Now we have two great specials! Special 1has eggs and vegetables and is just 3 yuan for 10. Special 2 is only 5yuan for10 and has beef and vegetables.
Welcome to our house! The address is No.118 Guangming Road.Our telephone number is 685-8588
Dear Li Ping,
I had a good time ring my summervacation. Here is my vacation to show you.
First I did sports and learned to ply tabletennis. It’s good for my health. Then I read some books .After that I enjoyedan interesting sight for two weeks. Also, I volunteered to serve in thevolleyball game. Of course, at home I helped my parents do some cooking ,washing and so on.
I think I had a wonderful time ring thevacation . Did you have a nice summer vacation ? P lease tell me !
Last Sunday, Liu Ming and his friends wentfor a picnic at the foot of the mountain. Some of them were playing games, somewere dancing , they felt very relaxed. Suddenly, Liu Ming saw a goat running .He was interested in it and began to run after it for a long time . When hethought of his friends again. He got lost. At that time, a farmer came. Withhis help ,Liu Ming found his friends again. He thanked the farmer and said:Goodbye” to him.
Football is my favorite sport. Every time I play football with my classmates in the playground, we are very excited.
During this summer vacation, I usually play football at four o’clock in the afternoon. I usually play it with Xia Haoran. He is one of my good friends. I haven’t got a football. But Xia Haoran has a good one. He always plays with me and we are happy.
I watched the FIFA World Cup 2006 on TV in this summer vacation. My father and my mother are all football fans. They made me into a little fan.
I like the German football team, but they didn’t win the champion in the end, and I was very disappointed.
I love this game, and I hope that I can be a football star in my school.
Learning English takes time so if we want to learn it well, we should spend much time practicing using English every day. Besides, we should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Go over what is learnt regularly and finish doing our homework carefully. If we have time,we'd better isten to English radio programmes, read English stories and newspapers, watch English films and TV programmes ,keep a diary in English . If we make mistakes, correct them at once and try not to make the same mistakes. What's more, we should look up new words in the dictionary before class and prepare each lesson carefully before class. I believe if we work hard and have good ways of learning English, we will learn English well.
A great change has taken place in my hometown.Many years ago,my hometown was very small.But now it is bigger and bigger.The school is newer.And there is more and more books in our library. There are more cars on the road.And the street is wider than before.There used to be too much rubbish in the corner.But now it is cleaner and cleaner.I hope my hometown will be better and better.And I will try my best to make my dream come true.
All the students have mobile phones now. So there are two opinions about mobile phones.Some people think that mobile phones are useful and convenient.If someone has something wrong, he can call others for help in time.But others are agaist this.They think some students use mobile phones for ill purposes.The students can send short messages in the class and miss listening to the teachers.Some students even play games with mobile phones and stop studying.As far as I know,students should not own mobile phones. Because it is not necessary for them to study.
Jenny is my desk-mate. She is a hard-working girl. When she was twelve years old, she won the first in a city-wide poetry recitation contest. Now she is chairman of the Student Union in our school. She gives us the impression that her ability to express her ideas is excellent. In spare time, she likes to carry a book .with her and writes down what she sees and hears. She's such a lovely girl that I enjoy talking with her to share her ideas
（五）my ideal life
I earnestly hope to lead a healthy and prosperous life in the future. Judging from my aptitude inclination and personality streaks, my ideal life will be that of a scientist, researching, lecturing, and writing books. As I am from a farming family, I particularly enjoy being close to earth. If I can afford to live a pastoral life in the countryside, I will feel most blessed. As far as social life is concerned, simplicity is what I intend to pursue, so I really don't need too many friends. All these will be mere talk if I am idle now. To attain my goal, I must make a point of training my body and mind. This is a highly competitive society in which everyone is eager to come out on top. That is not only a competition of physical strength and mental power, but a marathon of patience, faith, and perseverance. Life is not all roses, but with what I am being equipped with by the top teachers in this elite school, I surely deserve a promising prospect.
（六）the future holds for me
Man’s life is a process of growing up, actually I’m standing here is a growth. If a person’s life must constituted by various choices, then I grow up along with these choices. Once I hope I can study in a college in future, however that’s passed, as you know I come here, now I wonder what the future holds for me.
When I come to this school, I told to myself: this my near future, all starts here. Following I will learn to become a man, a integrated man, who has a fine body, can take on important task, has independent thought, an open mind, intensive thought, has the ability to judge right and wrong, has a perfect job.
Once my teacher said :” you are not sewing, you are stylist; never forget which you should lay out to people is your thought, not craft.” I will put my personality with my interest and ability into my study, ring these process I will combine learning with doing. If I can achieve this “future”, I think that I really grow up. And I deeply believe kindred, good-fellowship and love will perfection and happy in the future.
How to say future? Maybe it’s a nice wish. Lets make up our minds, stick to it and surely well enjoy our life.
(七)What do you think of Internet
Internet is very useful for us. the Internet is a facility for collecting information. the Internet makes it easy to build social connections. we can have a lot of friends all over the world and reach much knowledge by Internet. Millions of people communicate today through E-mail.
But the disadvantages of Internet also have a lot. the network information may be falsehood, so mach as leading to a wrong decision-making. May online socialization weaken our ability to deal with relationships in the real world? the weak-willed persons maybe inlge network-game and amusement in Internet thereby disrepair own career.the loveliness of Internet is infinitude and colorful, but strengthen to manage it. We make good use of it only while we have an appropriate approach to Internet .
Panda is one of the scarcest animals. People in the world like it very much. there used to be many pandas in China long ago. As the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer, pandas became less. But at present, the number of pandas is increasing year by year. there are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.
Nowadays, the biggest nature park for panda in China is in Sichuan. there is a research centre for nature and wild life there. Scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again.
My father has small eyes,Wear a pair of glasses,looking more gently,the daddy＇s hair are not many, he said "the intelligent head does not grow hair"，daddy does the management, but daddy usually ever not talk bureaucratically to others, therefore his personal connection is specially good,is the same as me.daddy speaks always extremely temperately,never say hit the person,curse at people are also few,calculated scolded people not to be big, although sometimes also can be angry for a longtime,but just only about one day,could no surpass in one day-long.
He usually ecate me that the person must to be honestly,friendly to other,and working diligently.
This is my father, I love him forever.
Spring festival is the most important festival in China. During Spring festival, people visit their relatives, sending their best wishes for a new year. Children are the happiest in spring festival. They will receive red envelopes that contain money as new year presents. They can also play crackers and fireworks. What's more, they are given a lot of freedom, which they have dreammed of for a whole year. During Spring festival, there will be plenty of foods. That's why many people put on "holiday weight" after Spring festival. When it comes to food, there are many festival specialties. The world famous Jiaozi and Chunjuan(spring roll) have even been accepted by foreigners as fast foods. Spring festival usually comes in Feburary, sometimes earlier. It's a festival full of hope and good wishes. It's a symbol of Chinese culture.
eg： Miss Wang is my English teacher. She is very young and beautiful. She is tall and she looks like a model, She is always happy every day, just like a child, I like her very much, because she acts in every lesson and we have an interesting class every day.
One day, we learned a lesson called "Try it on"It was about Professor Barfin, who bought a hat from Mexico and let Sandy try it on. The teacher asked me to play the role of Sandy. But I didn't have a Mexican hat. Just when I was hesitating, Miss Wang put a big paper bag on my head and said, "Try it on!" I suddenly cried, "I can't see anything!" As a result, I learned the sentence and remember it very well.
我最喜欢的节日 My Favorite Festival The Spring Festival is my most favorite festival, because it’s time for family gathering. And the Spring Festival is a new start of a year. It brings me hope and courage. On Spring Festival, my parents usually take me back to my hometown. My hometown is a small town. Many of my relatives move to the larger cities, but we usually go home when the Spring Festival comes. During the gathering, we share our lives with others and care about each other. Of course, big meals are necessary. Families prepare for the big meals together. They all cook their specialty dishes. Therefore, our meals are always delicious. We often stay at home for three days and then we leave with others’ wishes. I like the Spring Festival, because I like family gathering. 春节是我最喜欢的节日，因为它是家人团聚的日子。春节也是一年中新的开始，它带给我希望和勇气。在春节这一天，我父母经常带我回老家。我的老家是一个小镇。我很多亲戚都搬到大城市去了，但是春节的时候我们经常回老家。团聚之时，我们相互分享各自的生活，互相关心。当然，大餐是少不了的。全家人一起准备丰盛的晚餐。他们都煮自己擅长的菜。所以，我们的晚餐总是很美味。我们通常在家一起待上三天，然后带着各自的祝福离开。我喜欢春节，因为我喜欢家人团聚。
未来生活 Future Life With the development of science and technology, our lives have changed a lot in the past century. Many things that wouldn’t happen before have come into reality now. Therefore, our lives will change as well in the future. Our pace of live will greatly speed up, because we will help many machines to finish our work. Many things can be done autonomously. Therefore, people will have more time for fun. People can travel the outer space freely. Space shuttle can bring people to planets far from the earth. Human beings may live in other planets. Besides, our environment will be much better than now, because some effective measures are taken to protect the environment. Earth is still a beautiful home for human. 随着科技的发展，上个世纪我们的生活发生了很大改变。很多以前不可能发生的事现在都成为了现实。因此，我们将来的生活也会改变。我们的生活节奏会大大加快，因为我们会让很多机器帮我们完成工作。很多事情都可以自动完成。这样人们就有更多时间来玩了。人们可以自由到外太空旅游。航天飞机可以把人们带到远离地球的行星上。此外，我们的环境会比现在好，因为我们可以采取一些有效措施来保护环境。地球仍旧是人类的美好家园。
Changes in My School
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! It's my honor to tell you about the changes of
When you walk around our school, you can see various flowers and trees everywhere.
At the same time, you can smell the taste, breathe fresh air. It's a nice place for us to
Please look at the new building over there. It's our library that was painted white
again this year. It not only looks more beautiful, but also has increasingly more books than
before. Reading different kinds of books can enhance our horizons and increase our
knowledge. I still remember I entered the school two years ago, the library was old enough
and I always couldn't find my favorite comic books. Therefore, I often complained to my
classmates that the library was out of fashion that we were not able to learn fresh
knowledge in it.
What was even worse, as a member of school basketball team, my partners and I had
few chances to practice, as the playground was too small to play and full of so many
students after school. Luckily, I don't have to worry about that anymore, because our
playground is large enough for all of us to play games, and basketball court is also bigger.
My school has changed a lot, for it is more beautiful and modern. I love my school.