高考英语写作案例分析

⑴ 高考英语写作，如何提升文章亮点

要想把一篇文章写好，不仅要注意行文通顺与连贯、过渡与衔接等，还要对文章进行润色，尝试使用高级词汇和复杂句式，以增加文章的亮点，给阅卷者留下深刻的印象。

一、巧设开头和结尾

1．开头

常见的开头方式有开门见山式、描述主题式、提供背景知识式、小故事引导式、提出问题式、设置悬念式、倒叙式和名言引入式等。虽然开头有着各式各样的风格，不能千篇一律，要因不同文章的需要而各异，但又有其共同遵循的原则：

开头多是通篇文章内容的摘要

开头常能展示文章的主题

开头应能抓住读者的注意力，引导读者读下去。

用于文章开头的句型有：

(1)There is a general discussion today about the issue of...；Those who object to...argue that...；They believe that...；But people who favor...，on the other hand，argue that...

(2)Faced with...，quite a few people argue that...；But other people conceive differently.

(3)Currently there is a widespread concern that...

(4)Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...

(5)Now it is commonly held that...；But I doubt whether...

(6)Recently the issue of...has been brought to public attention.

(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believes that...Now more and more people share this belief.

(8)More and more people are realizing/have come to realize...

(9)There is no denying/doubt that...

2．结尾

结尾的方法有很多，如总结式、重复式、结论式、暗示式和求解式等。

结尾一般是文章的升华或对文章主题的归纳，也是写好文章的关键。好的结尾能唤起读者共鸣，深化主题，给人回味，引人深思。

用于文章结尾的句型有：

(1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that...

(2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on...

(3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of... if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...

(4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.

(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.

(6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of...，but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.

(7) There is little doubt/denying that...

(8)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of... require immediate attention.

(9) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...

(10) In conclusion，...

(11) In my opinion, I am in favor of...

(12) Personally，I prefer to...

(13) In short，...should learn to...；Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.

(14) As far as I am concerned，I agree with the opinion that...

二、准确地道的英美式表达

1．注意区分同义词、近义词的细微差异

a little boy小男孩(有可爱之意)

a small boy小男孩(强调身材瘦小)

2．恰当使用限定词

用词准确，从另一个角度来讲就是要使论述客观、适度，这就需要考生适当使用一些限定词，以避免观点的绝对化，从而提高说服力和可信度。

He is the top student in our class.

He is one of the top students in our class.

3．注意词语的习惯搭配

用词准确不仅要求考生掌握具体单词的含义，还要熟悉词语的习惯搭配，一定要避免受汉语影响而出现错误。

Nobody is to be blamed for it.(F)

Nobody is to blame for it.(T)

4．避免口语化

高考作文一般应该使用较正式的书面文体，因此在写作时要避免使用口语化的词汇。

This is the best hotel you can find here.

You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.

5．避免赘言啰嗦

赘句是指用词不简练。表达某一思想，本来只需要一两个词，却用了冗长的词组或者从句，如repeat again，return back，still remain，very perfect等。

三、提升表达结构

1．变简单句为并列句或复合句

Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.

It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future，though it is unlikely to be true.

2．借用关键词汇(介词，不定式等)压缩句子长度，提升句子品味

The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom，a bathroom，and a kitchen in it.

The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen.

3．语态互换

Someone saw him studying hard in his study.

He was seen studying hard in his study.

4．语序调整

The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term.

Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term.

5．强调句式

You must write to me when you get there.

Do remember to write to me when you get there.

6．感叹及省略

Time flies like an arrow.

How time flies!

Look out for cars when you are crossing the street.

Look out for cars when crossing the street.

7．语气虚拟

You didn't take my advice，so you failed in the exam.

If you had taken my advice，you wouldn't have failed in the exam.

8．非谓语动词的使用

They sang and laughed as they went back to school.

Singing and laughing，they went back to school.

9．插入语

I think the book is well worth reading.

The book，in my opinion，is well worth reading.

10．格言警句的套用

(1)Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者，事竟成。

(2)Every coin has two sides.凡事皆有好坏。

(3)No pains，no gains.不劳无获。

(4)It's never too late to learn.活到老学到老。

(5)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

(6)One is never too old to learn.学无止境。

(7)Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。

(8)Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。

11．句式调换

He came here at 5 pm yesterday.

He didn't come here until 5 pm yesterday.

Not until/till 5 pm did he come here yesterday.

⑵ 一篇高考英语作文 请点评 找出错误 并提出改进方案 并打分（以高考30分评定）

which make students worried and annoyed .时态错误，用一般现在时就可以，为什么会用到过去时？如果你告诉我这是make的用法，那请你再去重新看下你们老师是怎么讲make的用法的。
thy almost tried all kinds of ways 这里最好不用way用methods
For fear of thier child get into trouble 孩子用复数，否则的话get用第三人称单数。同时，For fear of只能加名词，如果想加句子要用that引导名词性从句来指代，不能直接加句子。
For fear of thier child get into trouble in daily life with no one turn to help,so they are eager to read our diaries so as to give us some sugestions.
把so去掉，否则句子没有主语。
with no one turn to help能告诉我这是什么结构么？with no help 就可以。

简单看了一下，问题还挺多的，分以下几点评定吧。
一，文章内容：内容缺失 ，没有完全忠于题目。
请仔细阅读题目。“演讲稿的主要内容应包括：认为同学们不必为此苦恼，”你的文章里根本没有提及到这一点，“认为同学们不必为此苦恼”，当然后一点是主体，要仔细写，但是题目要求的内容必须必须要写。哪怕一两句也好，简单的说一下。首先写出题目搜提到的现象，然后加上这样一句“However,in my point of view we needn't to worry about this”。
二，语法错误：时态、从句以及一些词的用法。
这是一篇演讲文章，里面的内容都是一些观点性的看法，以及对于事实现象的阐述，只用一般现在时就可以。那么什么时候需要用到过去时和将来时呢？将来时很好说的，就是比如说你最后希望将来大家都会如何如何。过去时可以用在例子当中，不过必须是个具体的例子，比如说，我的好朋友某某某，他家里发生过类似的情况，但是因为他和他家长有很好的沟通，所以他和家长都可以信任并且理解对方。这就可以用过去时，同时举例子也会增加文章的可信度。
很多地方你使用了从句来增，但是使用的并不是很好。建议自己再仔细看看语法书，然后多练习造从句，随心所欲的使用只会给你的文章增加错误。
还有就是一些词的用法，with的用法还有For fear of的用法。一定要用自己熟悉的、确定了解的词的用法，如果自己不确定千万别自造。这样会让阅卷老师一眼看出你的问题来。

最后一段还不错，用了强调句，而且没有错误。

修改：
GOOD morning ,ladies and gentlemen.
【Some of us are having problems with our parents ,as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.】Parents always do such things ,which worry the students a lot.However,in my point of view we needn't to worry about this.Actually,all of us should try to understand our parents' behavior. In order to know more about us ,they almost tried all kinds of methods .They just want to give us a hand when we study with great difficulties.For fear of thier child gets into trouble in daily life with no help, they are eager to read our diaries so as to give us some sugestions.
All in all,we should communicate with our parents as often as we can .Only in this way can we let our parents trust us.I do hope both parents and children can get on well with each other.

⑶ 各类型高考英语作文经典范文

高考英语满分作文-租房
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1．词数：100左右：
2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

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译:
我很高兴收到你的信，我很高兴地听到你会去中国且在我们这里学习中文的消息。我已经找到了寓所。在芳草街，不远处就是我们的中文学校。乘坐11号巴士就可以到达，前一站就是中文学校。寓所是在三楼,有3个房间，其中一个是卧室，其他两个卫生间和厨房。有一张床，一个沙发和一个办公桌，25平方米小公寓里有椅子，租金是每月500元。也许这房子不如你的愿望，但我会尽我所能，满足您的需求。如果还不够，给我写信，我会寻找另外一个更好的地方。
希望你能很快来到这里！
就到这里啦！
此致，
李华

⑷ 求高考英语作文素材例子

70单词，范文10篇（希望能对楼主有所帮助）

一：THE VALUE OF TIME 爱惜时光

An English proverb says that time is money. I consider it (this) wrong. Why? Because we all know that we can earn money be work but can not in any way get back time (in anyway). For this reason, we may (can) say that time is more valuable than money.

Many people do not know the value of time. It (this) is indeed a great pity. We must bear (keep) in mind that wasting time is equal to wasting your life.

英国有句谚语说，时间就是金钱。我认为这是不对的。为什么？因为我们大家都知道我们能够用工作赚钱，但无论如何却无法把时间争取回来。基于此种理由，我们可以说时间比钱钱更宝贵。

许多人不知爱惜时光。这确实是可惜的。我们必须记住浪费时间等于浪费生命。

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二：WHY SHOULD WE STUDY ENGLISH 为什么我们要学英文

If you want to ask me why we should study English, my answer will be simple and clear. Now let me enumerate the reasons one by one in the following.In the first place, English has become an international language. If you know English, you van make a trip round the world without being misunderstood.In the second place, most valuable books, newspapers and magazines are written in English. If you wish (hope) to get knowledge, you must learn English.

如果你要问我们为什么我们要学英文。我的答复很简单明了。现在让我来把我的理由一一列举在下面：英文已成为一种国际语言。如果你通晓它，你可以环游世界不会被人误解。大多数有价值的书籍，报纸和杂志都是用英文写的。如果你希望获得知识，你必须学习英文。

三：MY BIRTHDAY 我的生日

Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sent me presents. Mother prepared a tea party for me. I invited all of them to come and take part in it.The tea party began at half past six. There were cold drinks and refreshments. We ate, talked and laughed. We felt that we were the happiest men in the world.Time passed quickly. In a twinkling, the clock on the wall struck nine. We could not but say “Good-bye” to one another.

昨天是我生日，所以有几位我的同班同学送我礼。母亲给我准备一个茶会。我邀请他们都前来参加。茶会下午六点半开始。有冷饮和点心。我们又吃又谈又笑。我们觉得是世界上最快乐的人。时间过得很快。转瞬间，墙上的钟敲九点了。我们不得不互道再见。

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四：HOW TO SPEND SUNDAYS 如何消度星期日

Some of us always spend Sundays aimlessly. We can seldom derive profits from the valuable hours (time) of Sundays. This is indeed a great pity. Though Sundays are set aside as a day for rest, we must make good use of them.We know that our school lessons are usually not sufficient. We should often utilize Sundays to read reference books. In this way we will increase our knowledge. Besides, we must be engaged in sports or outing so as to strengthen our bodies.

我们许多人终是把星期日毫无目的地消度掉。这确实是十分可惜。我们很少能从星期日的宝贵时光中获得益处。虽然星期日是被指定为一个休息的日子，但是我们却应好好利用它。我们知道我们学校的功课通常是不够的。我们应时常利用星期日来阅读参考书。如此我们的知识就会增加了。此外，我们必须从事运动或郊游以便强壮我们的身体。

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五：HONESTY IS THE BEST POLICY 诚为上策

There is an English proverb which says (saying) “Honesty is the best policy.” It signifies the importance of honesty.

What are the benefits of honesty? If you are honest to others, they will be honest to you in return. When you are sad, they will comfort you. When you are in trouble, they will help you.
There is no enumerating the evils of dishonesty here. In a word, a dishonest man will be looked down upon by others and (be) regarded as a public enemy.

英国有一句谚语说“诚为上策”。它说明了诚的重要性。

诚的益处是什么？如果你对他人诚实，他们也会对你诚实作为报答。当你忧悉的时候，他们会安慰你。当你是处在困难中的时候，他们会帮助你。

无法在这里数述不诚实的害处。一言以蔽之，一个不诚实的人会被人看轻的而且被看作为一个公敌。
六：HOW EXERCISE HELPS 运动的利益

If our bodies are not strong, our spirit to do things will certainly be quite ll. And at the same time, we are lack of energy (ies) to study. Diseases will only attack the weak, but not the strong.

Why are our bodies not strong? Because we do not pay attention to exercise. For this reason, we students must often take different kinds (sorts) of exercise in the gym.

Exercise helps us (to) strengthen our bodies and avoid disease. It also teaches us cooperation, for most exercise is played by team.

如果我们的身体不强壮，我们做事的精神一定会十分迟钝。而且同时，我们也缺少足够的精力来读书。疾病只为侵击体弱的人而不是强壮的人。

为什么我们的身体会不强壮呢？因为我们不注意运动。基于此种理由，我们学生必须时常在运动场做不同种类的运动。

运动帮助我们强壮身体并避免疾病。它也教我们合作，因为大多数的运动都是团体游玩的。

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七：THE BENEFITS OF TRAVELING 旅行的益处

I am always interested in traveling. My reasons are quite (extremely) simple and clear. If anybody is not satisfied with my viewpoint(s), I shall be greatly surprised at his ways of thinking.

In the first place, traveling increases our knowledge. Only by traveling can we see （因为用（only）开头，主动词须颠倒）things outside our home town.

In the second place, traveling is good to our health. While we are traveling, we usually exercise our bodies.

In conclusion, I earnestly hope that everybody must seize (grasp at) the opportunity of traveling.

我对旅行终是感觉有趣。我的理由非常简单时了。如果任何人对我的观点不满意的话，我将对他的想法会大大吃惊。

旅行增加我们的知识。只有藉旅行我们可以看到我们故乡以外的东西。

旅行对我们的健康有益。当我们旅行的时候，我们通常运动我们的身体。

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八：HOW TO BE A GOOD CITIZEN 如何做一个好公民

My aim is to become a good citizen so as to be able to render service to the (my) country. However, to become a good citizen is not an easy thing. He has many ties to fulfill.The first ty of a good citizen is to love his country. He is to (must) be ready to sacrifice even his own life for the country.His second ty is to obey the law and help the government (to) maintain order. If everybody can do so, the country will be rich and strong (powerful).

我的志向是做一个好公民以便能给国家效力。然而，做一个好公民不是一件容易的事情。他有许多责任要尽。一个好公民第一件责任是爱他的国家。他须准备为国家牺牲自己的生命。他第二件责任是服从法律并且帮助政府维持治安。如果人人都能这样做的话，国家必定富强。

九：THE NATIONAL FLAG 国旗

it is the ty of every citizen to honor the national flag. Why? Because the national flag is the symbol of a (the) country. To respect it means to respect the country. In other words, if a man loves his country, he must love the national flag.

In school, the national flag is usually raised at a certain time every day. Then the principal, teachers, staff and students are to (must) stand before it and sing the national anthem. It is indeed extremely meaningful to attend such a ceremony.

尊敬国旗是每个公民的责任（义务）。为什么？因为国旗是国家的象征。尊敬它意思就是尊敬国家。换句话说，如果一个人爱国，他必须爱国旗。

在学校里，通常每天定时要升旗。那时，校长，老师，教职员学生教师将恭敬地站在它前面并且唱国歌。参加此项仪式确实非常有意义。

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十、THE IMPORTANCE OF EDUCATION 教育的重要性

It is impossible for us to make our country rich and strong without developing ecation. Why? Because ecation gives people knowledge and teaches them how to become good citizens so as to be able to serve their country. No wonder they say that ecation decides the progress, prosperity and civilization of a country.At present (Nowadays) most countries in (of) the world are enforcing compulsory ecation. It is necessary for all kinds of people, both rich and poor, to receive ecation. Taiwan is an exception as well not.

我们不可能使我们的国家富强而不发展教育。为什么？因为教育给予人民知识并教他们如何成为好公民以便能为国家效力。难怪，有人说教育决定一个国家的进步，繁荣与文化。现在世界大多数的国家都在实施强迫教育。所有各类人民不论贫富都必须接受教育。台湾也不例外。

⑸ 如何提高英语写作能力案例分析

一、 案例背景
(一) 问题提出
语言是人们思想交流的工具，有声语言和书写语言是语言交流的两种媒介。写作是学习者英语综合能力的体现。高中英语新课程标准对写作提出了更高的要求，八级要求为“能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要；能根据用文字级图表提供的信息写短文或报告；能写出与一连关切结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺”。但在教学中或在高考阅卷中常常发现：学生的审题能力差，偏离主题现象严重；文章词语贫乏，语言素材不丰富，句子意识差；表达不得体，结构单一，缺少连贯性，篇章意识差等等，在学生的口语表达能力有较大提高的情况下，学生的写作能力还相对滞后。可以说，长期以来，写作一直是困扰我国英语教学的一大难题。学生面对写作任务时常常不知从何下手。这一严重现象的出现，笔者认为有以下几个原因：
1.目前高中英语教学中一般不开设专门的英语写作课，没有对学生英语写作基本功进行系统训练，往往是在高考前期进行短期的突击性应试模拟训练，平时对学生写作技能的培养较少。
2.学生的阅读量小和阅读面窄，造成词汇量小，写作语言素材贫乏。
3.学生良好的阅读策略与写作策略缺少，导致学生的篇章意识差等。
为了适应发展中的社会，满足社会的需求，使高中毕业生的英语写作水平达到高中英语新课程标准的八级或九级的写作目标，高中英语教学中对学生写作技能的培养必须是长期的、有目的循序渐进的写作技能培养。阅读是语言输入的主要途径，更是写作的基础。阅读能给学生提供大量的写作素材，通过阅读,学生可以积累词汇，储存句法、语篇知识，学习遣词造句、布局谋篇的写作技巧。大量阅读又有助于培养语感，并逐步养成用英语思考的习惯。用英语写作就必须用英语思考，这与大量阅读是分不开的。否则，就会写出中文式英语。不要阅读谈写作犹如谈无米之炊。自己在教学实践中，逐步形成了以下设想：高中阶段对学生进行“多而杂”的阅读训练，即向学生提供程度相当、题材广泛的阅读材料，结合单元话题补充相应的课外阅读材料, 在阅读中扩大学生的语言词汇、强化语言结构、介绍文化背景知识篇章结构知识、训练篇章理解能力，再结合阅读指导学生写作，将阅读成果转化为写作, 提高英语写作能力。
（二）理论依据：
1.语言习得理论:美国语言学家克拉申(S. D. Krashen)在二十世纪七十年代提出了“语言习得”理论。该理论认为，人们掌握某一种语言所通过的方式主要有两种：一种是习得(acquisition),另外一种是学习(learning)。所谓“习得”是指学习者通过与外界的交际实践，无意识地吸收到该种语言,并在无意识的情况下，流利、正确地使用该语言。在英语课堂教学中，笔者认为应通过学生之间和师生之间的交流获得思维的碰撞，在这种潜移默化的语言习得中促进学生英语的学习。而“学习”是指有意识地研究且以理智的方式来理解某种语言（一般指母语之外的第二语言）的过程。学生只有在大量接触和使用真实、自然的语言中，才能养成运用英语的能力。
二、阅读与写作教学的结合案例
（一）教学设计
设计意图：运用“讨论式”的英语教学模式和采用“任务型”英语教学途径，培养同学们的听说读写能力，突出阅读和写作技能训练、学习策略的培养、阅读和写作的实践，从而使学生领会语言信息的输入与输出、阅读和写作之间的内在联系，并引导学生独立思考并以讨论、合作学习的方式练习英语写作。
（二）教材分析
1新颁布的《英语课程标准》明确指出此次英语课程改革的重点就是要改变英语教学过分重视语法和词法知识的讲解与传授，忽视对学生实际语言运用能力的倾向。强调从学生的学习兴趣、生活经验和认知水平出发，倡导体验、实践、参与、合作与交流的学习方式，发展学生的综合语言运用能力。因此，在教学中，教师不应采取满堂灌的教学模式，而应将语言的形式与意义和真实情景结合起来，提供给学生一个观察，发现，体验、实践而习得语言的平台。
2本案例的中心话题是艾滋病。通过课文学习学生知道了艾滋病是怎么一回事、艾滋病的传播途径以及目前世界上青少年患艾滋病的情况，让学生对当今世界艾滋病的现状有一个更深入的了解。在此基础上，使学生懂得设身处地地为他人着想，倾听艾滋病人的心声，并最终转化为对艾滋病人的同情和关注，高度升华了本课的主题，并取得了知识教育与道德教育的双重成功。
（三）学情分析
教学的对象是高二学生，思维活跃，他们稍微了解一些艾滋病的知识，但词汇量掌握的非常少，通过阅读课文，可极大的扩充学生这方面的词汇量，能够开展话题讨论，各抒己见。与此同时，他们具备了一定的计算机基础知识和网上搜索信息和查阅知识的能力。这些都为此写作课奠定了良好地基础。
（四）教学目标
1．知识技能：了解和掌握艾滋病的一些词汇，短语表达等，掌握课文中描绘艾滋病人相关的词汇和句型，如“With the help of 、look like 、deal with、…They work as a …、They can…and…、a deadly disease”并让学生在此基础上加以运用，完成自己的一篇演讲稿 “Cherish your life & prevent AIDS”的写作教学任务。
2.能力培养：为学生设置具体的语言环境，使学生较好地完成围绕怎样帮助艾滋病人和珍爱生命为主题的话题，培养学生的英语思维能力，语言表达能力和一定的写作能力，以及通过课堂上师生，生生互动，培养自主，合作和探究的能力。
3.情感态度：在师生互动的活动中，激发学生的学习兴趣，加强教师的亲和力，增进师生之间与生生之间的了解和沟通，充分发挥情感教学的优势。学生能在情景中分享丰富的情感体验，感受写作完成后的成功和喜悦。与此同时，通过对围绕怎样帮助艾滋病人和珍爱生命为主题的话题的讨论和写作，以培养学生的创造能力和想象能力。
（五）教学重点和难点
1.调动学生学习的积极性，让他们主动参与学习活动是教学的重点之一。
2.通过设置任务，启发学生讨论，激活学生思维，激发学生的写作兴趣，学会写作关于珍爱生命这类话题的文章。
3.在交流中培养学生的交际策略，帮助其掌握用英语表达观点和做决定的功能用语。
（六）学习环境
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（七）课前准备
教师：研读教材和新课程标准，设计教案和任务型作业；上网收集相关资料并制作课件。
学生：鼓励学生课前认真预习课文并主动通过网络查找资料，充分的自我准备。教师提供相关网络让他们上网查找有关的信息并做汇报并写一篇珍爱生命的文章