Ⅰ 英语写作——句子段落篇章part two
这个什么都没有啊，怎么答题呢，如果把题目完整的放上来，可能答题的人会更多一些，质量也会更好一些，有的时候也要站在答题者的角度。
Ⅱ 怎样写好英语段落
段落是文章的缩影。写好了段落，就能比较成功地写出较好的文章。经过中学英语基础阶段的学习之后，大学英语的写作重点就从选词造句转移到了联句成段和联段成篇上。进行段落层次上的写作训练，是写好英语文章的关键一环。下面介绍的是段落结构。
段落（ paragraph ）是由表达单一中心思想（controlling idea or central idea ）的一组句子（包括主题句 topic sentence,推展句supporting sentences及结论句concluding sentence）构成，是文章结构的基本独立单位。本讲我们将就主题句和中心思想这两个方面展开讨论。
主题句与推展句
1． 主题句
主题句（topic sentence）是表达段落主题的句子。它用以概括段落大意，要求全段其他文字都围绕它展开。请看下例：
My mother has passed along to me certain rules for getting along with others. Don't argue with parents; they will think you don't love them. Don't argue with children; they will think themselves victimized. Don't argue with spouses; they will think you are a tiresome mate. Don't argue with strangers; they will think you are not friendly. My mother's rules, in fact, can be summed up in two words: Don't argue.
主题句中提出的 "certain rules" 指的是什么？展开句中通过四个 "Don't argue --" 逐一加以交代。从结构来看，这是一个比较典型的段落，它包括了主题句，推展句和结论句（即本段中的末句）。
1．1 主题句的位置
主题句通常放在段落的开端，其特点是开门见山地摆出问题，然后加以详细说明。其作用是使文章的结构更清晰，更具说服力，便于读者迅速地把握主题和想象全段的内容。主题句可以放在段中起到承上启下的作用，或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。但初学者比较难于掌握，因而在四级考试中，考生应尽量采用将主题句放在段落开头的写作手法。
例1: Our life today depends very much on energy. In towns and in villages, on farms and in factories, machines have made life easier than it used to be. The machines use energy, and energy is needed for heating, lighting, communications, carrying goods -- everything. Factories and instrial plants use a great deal of energy to make the things that we use and buy and sell.
这段文字所讲的主要是能源问题。第一句就概括性地提出“我们目前的生活很大程度上依赖于能源”。而随后出现的三句都是具体事例，对第一句进行说明和论述。我们可以断定第一句为该段的主题句（斜体部分）。
例2: （主题句）No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements. （推展句1）Much as we may pride ourselves on our good taste, we are no longer free to choose the things we want, for advertising exerts a subtle influence on us. （推展句2）In their efforts to persuade us to buy this or that proct, advertisers have made a close study of human nature and have classified all our little weakness.
以上这段由三句话组成。第一句是主题句，直截了当指出无人不受广告影响这个主题，接着列举两个推展句对其补充和支持，指出我们已无法自由选择所需的商品，理由是广告商已仔细研究了我们
Ⅲ 描写不知道的英语段落
个人觉得来非常棒!源是关于毅力和成功的励志段落,还引用了谚语.
就是最后一个句子小改一下：
Persistence, a characteristic of being great, always paves the way to success.
Ⅳ 英语段落写作，急急急急
There is a shop at the north gate.when you go into the
park through the north gate,you will find a large square on
your right and you will see lots of trees and flowers around
you.in the west of the park,there is a playground.
Sometimes some children fly kites on it and some people
sit on the grass and chat.in the middle of the park,there is
a lake.there are many boats on it.there is a hill in the
east of the park.
The park is very beautiful.Isn't it?I love it very much
Ⅳ 英语段落的写法
好模糊。对你的问题2中理解。
先简单的说：
1.左对齐
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independen2.左缩进2个字符（和中文的一样）
I do not understand ehy people confuse cat， prissy， whith rhw one I had saveral years ago. Henry. the two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine//
如果你的意思是如何写好一个段落，那么请继续往下看
首先，一个段落必须有一个中心即主题思想，该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题（stick or hold to the topic），这就是段落的统一性（unity）。其次，一个段落必须有若干推展句，使主题思想得到充分展开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，这就是完整性（completeness or adequateness）。再者，一个段落不是杂乱无章的，而是有机的组合，句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑，从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅（smooth），这就是连贯性（coherence）。下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。
1、统一性
一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例：
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we’d always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主题句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences，一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，这一段是讲的是Joe and I ，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。考生在四级统考的作文卷上常常因为造出irrelevant sentences（不相关语句）而丢分，值得引起注意。再看一个例子：
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有两个irrelevant sentences，一个是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一个是My mother was a premature baby。
从上面两个例子可以看出，native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果这种句子多了，造成偏题或离题，那问题就更严重了。
2、完整性
正象我们前面说得那样，一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现，如果只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实，就不能构成一个完整的段落。同样，虽然有推展句，但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待，给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。这样的段落也不能完成其交际功能。例如：
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work ---- you proce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
本段的主题句是段首句。本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。什么是“a mind in turmoil”（心境不平静）Physical work又如何能改变这种情况？为什么它能起therapy的作用？读者得不到明确的答案。由于四级统考的作文部分只要求写一篇100～120个词的三段式短文，每一段只有大约40个词左右，因此，要达到完整就必须尽可能地简明。例如：
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
段首句所表达的主题思想是一种看法，必须有具体事例加以验证。上述两个推展句只是在文字上对主题作些解释，整个段落内容空洞，简而不明。如果用一两个具体的例子的话，就可以把主题解释清楚了。比如下段：
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can’t swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?
3、连贯性（coherence）
连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面，前者指的是内在的逻辑性，后者指的是使用转换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连，句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系；反之，只有意连而没有形连，有时行文就不够流畅。
1）、意连
段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序，不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思，边写边想，写写停停，那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。
A．按时间先后排列（chronological arrangement）
B. 按位置远近排列（spatial arrangement）
C. 按逻辑关系排列（logical arrangement）
a. 按重要性顺序排列（arrangement in order of importance）
b.由一般到特殊排列（general-to-specific arrangement）
c. 由特殊到一般排列（specific-to-general arrangement）
2）、形连
行文的逻辑性常常要靠适当的转换词语及其他手段来实现。
4、有损连贯性的几种情况：
考生在写作中经常出现下面几种错误：
1、不必要的改变时态，
2、不必要的改变单复数，
3、不必要的改变人称
因此写作中，一定要注意时态，人称以及数的变化是否正确，要注意保持一致。
Ⅵ 英语段落写作
Now in the today's society,the phenomenon of the corruption overflowed.As far as I am concerned,the reason for it is that many penple relax vigilance.The rensons for it are listed as follow.Firstly,weather a state is good or not depend on the common people's estimation.As a famous saying goes,"If you are not inquire into it, you will not have a right to speak".So only the common people improve vigilance do they estimate correctly,which can rece the phenomenon of the corruption .Secondly,only under the common people's supervision, can the government serve his people better.After all ,it is disgraced for they to do some corruption behaviours .If everyone improve vigilance,the government dare not do some things that is harm to people .Thirdly,everyone should improve vigilance and stop the bad behaviours as soon as he find the corruption behaviours ,which can avoid the further development of the corruption.
Ⅶ 英语段落写作的结构要点 要英文回答
The structure of an English essay is separated into three parts.The introction,the body paragraphs and the conclusion.
The introction is where you introce your ideas and give an overview of what you are going to write about.By reading this,the examiner should have a good idea of the content of your essay.
Then you go on to explain your ideas in detail.It is perferred to have one idea per paragrph.Each paragraph should consist of a main statement,an explination and an example to support your idea.
Finally,the essay should end in a conclusion.A conclusion is where all your ideas are summerised and reinforced.The conclusion should end with something that leaves the readers thinking.
Ⅷ 求精彩的英文人物外貌描写，最好是名著里的！
（1）《呼啸山庄·中英对照》——Mr. Heathcliff and I entered the huge maindoor. It could have been any Yorkshire farmhouse kitchen, except that there wasno sign of cooking, and no farmer sitting at the table. Mr. Heathcliffcertainly does not look like a farmer. His hair and skin are dark, like agipsy's, but has the manners of a gentleman. He could perhaps take more carewith his appearance, but he is a handsome. I think he is proud, and alsounhappy. 希斯克利夫先生和我进到极大的正房。它很像是约克郡一个普通农家的厨房，只是没有做饭的迹象，桌旁也没坐着农夫。希斯克利夫先生看上去显然不像个农夫，他的头发和皮肤是深色的，像吉卜赛人，但有绅士的派头。他还能对自己的外表再多上点儿心，但已经算得上英俊了。我觉得他很高傲，而且郁郁寡欢。
（2）360doc个人图书馆——女性描写1：Alice is 20 years old. She is a little overweight. But she is tall andfairskinned, so she looks healthy. Her hair is jet-blacked and straight. Shehas a very pleasant smile and she always has a twinkle in her eye. Whensmiling, Alice’s dimples will appear who receive them feel very special. Whenshe works, she always put on her glasses. She always dress very elegant andtidy. Because of her fair skin and kindness, we all like her very much. 艾丽丝20岁了，她有一点胖，但是由于她很高而且皮肤白皙，所以看上去很健康。她有一头乌黑的直发。她时常灿烂地微笑，两只大眼睛闪闪发光。露出两个特别的酒窝。她工作的时候，总是戴上眼镜。她的穿着优雅而整洁。由于她很善良，我们都很喜欢她。（【评析】用并列连词和连接副词及词组连接两个独立的句子，使之成为并列句。在写作时根据相邻的两个句子所包含的观点选择适合的连词也会令文章生动。）
女性描写2：While her physical beauty was astounding, it was herinvisible beauty that I shall always remember. She really cared about otherpeople and was an extremely talented listener. Her sense of humour couldbrighten you entire day and her wise words were always exactly what you neededto hear. She was not only admired but also genuinely respected by members ofboth sexes. 尽管她美得惊人，但我更对她的内在美记忆犹新。她总是很关心身边的人，并且擅长倾听。她的幽默感总是可以使你整天都感到非常开心，而她智慧的话语更是能道破天机。无论男人或是女人，不仅羡慕她，而且打心里尊重她。
男性描写1：He was standing on a raised platform in a corner ofthe room.he was a wizened old man with wrinkled face and a sad expression overhis shoulder was thrown a rough brown coat, all torn and full of holes, histhick boots were old and patched ;and with one hand he leant on a rough stick, while with theother he held out his battered hat for money. 他站在屋子角落一个支高的台子上，他是一个老人，满脸的皱纹和悲伤的表情。他的肩膀上搭着一件粗糙，破烂的棕色外套，他的厚靴子上也打了补丁，他用一个手倚着一根拐杖，另一只手拿他的破帽子讨钱。
男性描写2：Robert is 21 years old. He is about 5 feet, 9 inchestall. His face is long and narrow. His eyes are green. His hair is light brown.He doesn’t look very Italian. He smiles a little and usually has a friendlylook on his face. He isn’t fat and he isn’t thin. His build is average. 罗伯特21岁了，他身高大约5.9英尺，脸瘦瘦长长的，绿眼睛。浅棕色的头发，看起来不大像意大利人。他总是面带微笑，非常友好。他不胖也不瘦，中等身材。
（3）《德伯家的苔丝》——On an evening in the latter part of May amiddle-aged man was walking homeward from Shaston to the village of Marlott, inthe adjoining Vale of Blakemore or Blackmoor. The pair of legs that carried himwere rickety, and there was a bias in his gait which inclined him somewhat tothe left of a straight line. He occasionally gave a smart nod, as if inconfirmation of some opinion, though he was not thinking of anything inparticular. An empty egg-basket was slung upon his arm, the nap of his hat wasruffled, a patch being quite worn away at its brim where his thumb came intaking it off. Presently he was met by an elderly parson astride on a graymare, who, as he rode, hummed a wandering tune. 五月下旬的一个傍晚，一位中年男子正从沙斯顿赶回自己的家乡—马洛特。该村庄坐落在与沙斯顿毗邻的布雷克摩(或布莱克摩)山谷里。这位中年人拖着两条蹒跚的腿，步态倾斜，整个身子总是向左边歪着。他偶尔也把头轻巧地一点，仿佛是对什么事情表示赞同，其实他什么都没想。他胳膊上挎着一只盛鸡蛋的空篮子，帽子的绒面皱皱巴巴的，摘帽子时大拇指接触的那个地方已经磨损了一大块。不一会儿，一个骑着灰色母马、随口哼着小调的老牧师迎面而来。
Ⅸ 描写学习英语的段落
写出好段落语句需要学会观察：
一是多看，二是多练。这里的“多看”即指回多观察。这就说明答：要写好语句，要掌握娴熟的语句写作手法，就要多观察，学会观察，观察是写作的必要前提和基础。
(一)观察决不要仅仅局限于“用眼看”。广义的更有实际意义的观察是指要将人的五官全部调动起来：用耳朵去聆听，用身体去感受，更重要的是要用心、用脑去思索，这样的观察才会更加细腻、深刻。
(二)观察过程中要注意运用好“烂笔头”。俗语说得好：好记性不如烂笔头。好多同学每天看到的挺多，思索的也挺多，但是不善于随时记下来，这样就会使观察到的材料付之东去，许多有价值的东西也会白白浪费掉。
(三)观察尤其要注意持之以恒。你要将观察生活、思索生活贯穿于你生活的每一天，这样你才会写出妙文佳作来。 学会观察对于写好段落语句有着巨大的奠基和推动作用，离开了观察，你往往会感到难以下笔。愿你学会观察，不断培养，提高赞成的观察能力，在写作实践中取得得大的进步。
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