㈠ 写作文用到的英语动词
be动词,look,see ,hear等感观动词.get,catch,help,think,do,know,dare,satisfied……建议你看看语法动词那一章节,有很多动内词.你的课文也行容,里面很多动词呀
㈡ 关于英语写作(句子的语法)
句子的开头就是主语吧，主语当然不能用动词，只能用名词性质的单词或者短语，这不单单是写作里的语法，而是渗透在英语各个方面中的语法。其实个人认为，学好语法最大的优势就是英语写作，帮助作文整体的严密工整，所以如果要学好语法的话，还是建议买一本好的语法书，每天多看多练，还有就是模仿优秀英语作文中的语句和写作技巧，会有很大帮助的哦~
㈢ 高考英语写作最易犯的100个错误，看看你有多少
一. 名词
写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。
1. He gave me a very good advice yesterday.
句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在其前加a piece of，类似的词有：news, bread, work, paper, chalk, furniture, information等等。
2. That girl loves reading book.
可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.
3. He went into a book’s shop and bought a dictionary.
一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如my mother’s car, 而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为a book shop.
4. My family is watching TV.
一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如My family is a happy one; 如强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team, class, audience等。
5. I bought some potatos and tomatos at the supermarket.
中学阶段以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato, potato, Negro, hero; 其余的都加s变为复数。
6．This has nothing to do with their believes.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）
以f, fe 结尾的词变为复数时一般去f, fe 加ves，如knife—knives, thief—thieves; 而roof 和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.
二. 冠词
7. The boss wants to hire an useful person.
用a还是an，取决于后面单词的第一个音标，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说a European country.
8．Plane is a machine that can fly.
Plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有a machine, 因此只能在其前面加a，变为A plane。
9．He played a piano at the party yesterday.
把a 改为the ，因为乐器前用定冠词。
10．The machine was invented in 1920s.
在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代in the 80s。
11．Xiao Hong went to school by the bus every day.
去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。
三. 代词
使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。
12．He is one of those speakers who make his ideas perfectly clear.
定语从句的先行词是those speakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。
13． Whom do you think has left the lights on？
放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的do you think / believe / guess / imagine / suppose等都不参与句子成分，把它们去掉后，疑问词在句中做主语用主格，做宾语用宾格。本句中去掉do you think后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。
14．The boss pretended not to see John and I.
John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I 改为me。
15．These books are mine; those in the bag are her.
Her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her 改为hers。
四. 数词
16．There are fourteen hundreds students in our school.
Hundred / thousand / million / score/ dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s 和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如 two hundred students（两百个学生），hundreds of students（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds 改为hundred。
17．Their school is twice as larger as our school.
表倍数关系的as---as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此把larger改为large.
18．Today’s homework is a five-hundred-words composition.
几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.
19．Two third of the students in our school are from America.
英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third 改为thirds.
五. 形容词和副词
形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。
20．The patient appeared nervously when he talked to the doctor.
appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以把nervously改为nervous.
21．The artist worked hardly to finish his drawings on time.
此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard 也可以是副词，表努力，因此把 hardly 改为hard.
22．This shirt is more cheaper than that one.
More只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。
23．He is the most successful of the two businessmen.
两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.
24．He works less harder than he used to.
表不如… 时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.
25．The book is fairly more interesting than that one.
fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much, even, still, far, a lot, a little, a bit, any, no, by far, rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.
26．This is as an interesting a story as the one in the magazine.
as … as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为as interesting a story as the one.
27．The weather here is nicer than Xizang.
同样的事物才能相比较，weather和Xizang不具有可比性，因此应改为The weather here is nicer than that of Xizang.
29．I would rather take a train than went by bus.
这个词组为would rather do … than do …，因此把went改为go.
30．Is there interesting anything at the meeting?
修饰anything, something, every-thing, nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。
31．I never have seen such a person before.
像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为I have never seen such a person before.
32．The book is worth to be read.
be worth doing 意为值得被做。因此改为The book is worth reading.
33．It is sure that he will succeed.
sure 的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.
34．He is regarded as one of the best alive writers at present.
alive 为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive 放在writers后面。
35．I don’t know that he has finished the work yet.
yet 用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet 改为already.
36．He said nearly nothing at the meeting.
nearly 不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly 改为almost.
六. 介词
37．He usually goes to school by his father’s car.
by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如by car, by bus, by plane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.
38．Please wait me at the school gate.
wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。
39．He has been married with Betty for more than twenty years.
marry不跟 with连用，应把with改为to。
40．I finished the work on time under the help of him.
“在…的帮助下”用with而不用under。
七. 情态动词
41．He can be at home now because the light in his room is still on.
表特别有把握的肯定判断时用must，表特别有把握的否定判断时用can, can表判断时只用在否定句中。因此把can 改为must。
42．He need come here before the meeting begins.
作情态动词时need用在否定，疑问和条件句中，不能用于肯定句中，而作实意动词时则可以。所以应改为：He needs to come here before the meeting begins.
43．He used to get up very early in the morning, and now he is still doing so.
used to 用来表示过去常常做某事而现在不了，所以应把后半句改为：but now he is not doing so.
44．I needn’t come yesterday because all the work had been finished.
由于情态动词本身不体现时态，所以在谈论过去的事情时在情态动词后加 have done，因此在 needn’t 后加have。
45．You hadn’t better stay up too late because you have to get up early tomorrow.
had better 的否定在 better 后面加not.
八. 动词的时态
英语的常用时态有十六种，一般根据上下文和时间状语来确定时态。
46．I will tell her about that when she will come tomorrow.
主句为将来时，其时间、条件、方式和让步状语从句中用一般现在时。因此将will come改为comes。
47．The meeting is about to begin in ten minutes.
be about to 一般不与具体的时间状语连用。因此把 in ten minutes 去掉。
48．The boy opened his eyes for a moment, looking at the captain and then died.
此处look并非伴随状语，而是三个并列的谓语动词，因此把looking 改为looked。
49．I have bought this bike for ten years and I am still using it now.
当句中有for加一段时间作状语时，谓语动词必须为延续性动词，此处把bought改为kept。
50．I haven’t learnt any English before I came here.
我来这儿已经是过去的动作，在此之前发生的事应该用过去完成时。因此应把haven’t改为hadn’t
九. 动词的语态
及物动词用在主动语态时要有宾语，因此可以变为被动语态；不及物动词用于主动语态时不能接宾语，因此无被动语态。
51．The two thieves have been disappeared.
disappear 为不及物动词，因此不能用于被动语态。所以把 been去掉。
52．The building built now will be our teaching building.
表“现在正在建的”应用被动语态的正在进行时，因此在built 前加being。
53．He is being operated by the famous doctor.
主动语态变为被动语态时，应注意短语动词的完整性，别忘了介词或副词。“给…做手术”应为operate on sb，所以在operated 后加上on。
54．I wonder if the doctor has been sent.
原因同上，应在sent 后加上for。
55．The book written by him is sold well.
说一本书畅销是指书本身的属性，因此不用被动语态。本句应改为：The book written by him sells well.
56．This history book is worthy reading.
“值得被做”可以有如下几种说法：be worth doing; be worthy of being done; be worthy to be done. 因此本句应该为：This history book is worthy to be read.
十. 非谓语动词
57．We are going to talk about the problem discussing at the last meeting.
此处为分词作定语，问题应该被讨论，所以把discussing改为discussed。
58．The girl dressed herself in red is my sister.
dress为及物动词，意为“给…穿衣服”，此处为分词作定语修饰girl, girl应是它的逻辑宾语，因此把herself去掉。
59．Being seriously ill, his class-mates sent him to hospital.
分词作状语时，其逻辑主语为这句话的主语，此句应为“因为他病了，他的同学才把他送到医院去”，因此把前半句改为：He being seriously ill.
60．Having not seen her for many years, we could hardly recognize her.
现在分词的否定应把not放在现在分词前面，所以前半句应改为：Not having seen her for many years.
61．Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball.
分词作状语，其逻辑主语应是这句话的主语，此句中地球应该被看，所以把Seeing 改为Seen。
62．English is easy to learn it.
此句中是不定式作状语修饰easy, English应该是learn的逻辑宾语，所以把it去掉。
63．I will get somebody repair the recorder for you.
“让某人做某事”可以有以下几种表达法：make sb do sth; have sb do sth; get sb to sth. 因此在repair 前加to。
64．She decided to work harder in order to not fall behind the others.
不定式的否定把not放在to前面。因此应改为：She decided to work harder in order not to fall behind the others.
65．It’s better to laugh than crying.
表比较时比较的双方应为同种结构，或都是名词或都是不定式。因此有两种改法：It’s better to laugh than to cry 或 It’s better laughing than crying.
66．It’s no use to send for the doctor.
做某事是没用的要说成It’s no use doing,所以把to send 改为sending。
67．She practices to play the piano after school every day.
practise 后只跟动名词作宾语，因此把to play 改为playing。
68．When the teacher came in, he stopped listening to the teacher.
stop doing 为停止做这件事，而stop to do 为停下来正在做的事去做这件事。所以后半句应该为：he stopped to listen to the teacher.
十一. 名词性从句
69．We are talking about if this plan should be carried out.
If 和whether都可以引导动词的宾语从句，如果从句做的是介词宾语，只能用whether引导。所以把if 改为whether。
70．I can not decide if to stay or not.
只有whether才能和不定式搭配使用。因此把if 改为whether。
71．My suggestion is we try for a second time.
表语从句的引导词如为that，一般不省略。因此在we前加上that。
72．What will the professor say is not known yet.
名词性从句的语序都是陈述句语序。因此应改为：What the professor will say is not known yet.
十二. 状语从句
73．I will go unless he invites me.
此句意为“除非他邀请我，否则我不去。”而unless相当于if not, 所以本句应改成：I won’t go unless he invites me。
74．Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others.
although 和but 不能同时用在一句话中，去掉任何一个都可以。
75．I won’t stay until he comes back.
含有not…until的句子的谓语动词应是点动词，含有until的肯定句的动词应是延续性动词，此句有两种改法：I will stay until he comes back.或I won’t leave until he comes back.
十三. 定语从句
76．An orphan is a child who’s parents are dead.
定语从句中表“…的”引导词只有whose，所以把who’s 改为whose。
77．This is the very thing which I lost yesterday.
如果先行词为物且前有the only, the last, the very修饰时，定语从句的引导词只能用that。
78．This is the car for that I paid a high price.
定语从句的先行词为物，而且引导词放在介词后时，只能用which.
79．She is one of the students who has passed the exam.
定语从句修饰one of 加上复数名词时，复数名词是定语从句的先行词，因此把 has 改为have。
80．This is the place where we visited last year.
定语从句的先行词用关系代词还是关系副词要看定语从句中缺不缺主语或宾语，如缺用关系代词，如不缺用关系副词。此句中visit为及物动词，后无宾语，因此把where 改为which或that。
81．I, who is your friend, can understand you.
定语从句的谓语动词应与其先行词保持一致，因此把is 改为am。
82．China is a developing country, that is known to all.
非限定性定语从句的引导词永远不会是that，因此把that 改为which 或as。
十四. 主谓一致
83．The poet and writer are invited to give a speech at the meeting.
poet和writer共用一个冠词，指的是一个人身兼二职，所以谓语动词应为单数。把are改为is.
84．No one except my parents know it.
主语后加except再加上若干数量的名词，谓语动词和主语保持一致。所以把know改为knows。类似的用法的词或短语有：but, besides, with, together with, along with, as well as等等。
85．Your clothes is on the table over there.
clothes为复数句词，谓语动词应为复数。把is改为are。
86．The number of the students in that school are about one thousand.
此名的主语为number而不是students。因此把are 改为is。
87．The class was watching TV when I entered the room.
class作主语时，把它看成一个整体时谓语动词用单数，看成每一个成员的个体行为时谓语动词用复数。一般来说，一些具体行为如看电视、吃饭、洗澡等都属于每一个成员的个体行为。此处把was改为were。
88．The population of our country are increasing slowly now.
population 单独作主语谓语动词经常用单数；如果其前有分数或百分数，而且后面又有复数名词时谓语动词用复数。如：One fifth of the Chinese population are workers. 此处把are改为is。
十五. 倒装
89．No sooner he had reached the station than the train left.
no sooner 为否定副词，放于句首时句子要部分倒装，因此此句应改为：No sooner had he reached the station than the train left.
90．Here comes he.
here 放于句首时，句子主谓要完全倒装，但句子主语为代词时，则主谓不倒装。此句应改为：Here he comes.
91．A child as he is, he can speak five languages.
用as引导让步状语从句，可把形容词、副词和不带冠词的名词放于as前。所以前半句改为：Child as he is...
十六. 虚拟语气
92．She would have come if we invited her.
这是与过去事实相反的虚拟假设，从句应该用过去完成时。所以在 we 后加 had.
93．My suggestion is that we would send a few people to help them.
suggestion 的表语从句也应用虚拟语气，必须用should加动词原形，should可以省略。此处去掉would 或把would 改为should。
94．The secretary wishes that she has time to type the letter now.
wish 后的时态应该把真实时态往后推一个时态，所以把has改为had。
95．It’s time that we go to bed.
句式为It’s time sb did sth 所以把 go 改为 went。
96．I would rather you have another try tomorrow.
词组为would rather sb did sth. 所以把have改为had。
十七. there be句式
97．There are a bag and several books on the table.
There be 句式遵循谓语动词就近原则，a bag为单数，所以把are改为is。
98．There were several people stood at the back of the room.
There be句式的谓语动词为be动词，句中其他的动词应为非谓语动词。所以把stood改为standing.
十八. 修饰语在句中的位置不当
99．We almost have written twenty compositions this term.
像almost这样的副词在句中放在助动词、be动词之后，实意动词之前。因此把almost放在have后面。
100．The girl has beautiful, silky hair who lives high in the mountains.
定语从句应紧跟先行词，所以改为：The girl, who lives high in the mountains, has beautiful, silky hair.
㈣ 如何在英语写作中做到用词生动，简洁，多样，具
1. 如何做到用词生动
中国同学写作喜欢滥用两个词：is 和make。make sb do sth, 这个结构广泛收到中国学生们的欢迎。
这两个词语的问题在于是静态的， there be 句型也是如此。只有尽可能在英语表达中选用短小有力的动词，比如action verb，才能使文章更有活力。
要尽量避免be/make的系动词形式表达，尽可能选择表示强有力的行为动词，写出生动、简洁、有力、耐读和连贯的文章。
例如，如果你想表达“让某事变得更快”，在考场的紧张心情下可能直接会写出“make it faster”,为了让这个词组更生动地表达，我们可以用动词accelerate(v.加速)来取代make词组。Accelerate就是一个“行为动词”。
举例
1.
His criminal record made him unable to be admitted to the university.
His criminal record disqualified him from being admitted to the university.
原句中用了make sb unable to…这个词组，我们可以用disqualify（使失去资格）一词来取代。
2.
Ecological imbalances is the biggest threat to the survival of wild animals and plants.
Ecological imbalances threaten the survival of wild animals and plants, even human beings.
要表达“某事物是一种威胁”，很多学生会直觉地用汉英直接翻译的思维写出sth is a threat to…, 然而，threat其实可以直接做动词，它使得修改后的句子更加的生动。
在日常写作训练中，我们需要摆脱习惯性思维的束缚，直接以英语来思维和表达，而不是先用汉语思维，再翻译成英语。
想要学习更全面的英文行为动词，来改善你贫乏的写作用词？
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2. 如何做到用词简洁
善用分词短语
例如
他猛然倒在一把椅子上，椅子被压得吱吱作响。
He crashed down on a chair which proced a protesting sound.
He crashed down on a protesting chair.
有的定语从句可以直接简化为一个分词形式作为定语，修饰名词成分。
善用形容词短语
例如
当我的工作很忙时，不得不经常搬家，我女儿只得转学。
My daughter had to change schools when my work schele was busy and this made it necessary for me to move houses.
My daughter had to change schools when my busy schele made it necessary for me to move houses.
某些单独的形容词就表示复杂的意思
例如
这份杂志内容有趣，文字浅显，立即受到大家的喜欢。
The magazine is immediately popular as its content is interesting and its language is easy.
The magazine has gained immediate popularity at once as it is interesting and easy.
路面结冰，又很滑，加上能见度很低，因为导致了这场交通事故。
The road was frozen and slippery and one could hardly see clearly, so the road accident was caused.
Icy road and poor visibility led to the accident.
运用单个副词
例如
然而，近年来关于该问题的警告引起了公众的广泛关注，这是可以理解的。
Nevertheless, recent alarms about this problem caused wide public concern. This is understandable.
à Nevertheless, recent alarms about this problem have understandably caused wide public concern.
运用抽象名词
例如
他每天花三小时看体育节目。他把心思都放在体育上，这对他的学习是妨碍的。
He spends nearly 3 hours on watching sports events. The fact that he was completely absorbed in sport interfered with his studies.
He spends nearly 3 hours on watching sports events. His complete absorptioninterfered with his studies.
他有才能，人品好，办事效率高，他肯定会提升的。
He is capable, easygoing and works efficiently. He will surely be promoted.
His aptitude, personality and efficiency guarantee his promotion.
运用介词短语
例如
医生给了她一些治疗感冒的药。
The doctor have her some medicine for her cold.
For 就是治疗的意思，写成give her some medicine for curing her cold 就是不了解介词的意思。
英语中at, with, over, out of 等这些介词在表示感情列致使行为时，往往替代动词。如：I am surprised at the news. / He is pleased with your progress.等
3. 如何做到用词多样
“Never use the same word or write the same thing twice in a sentence unless you are repeating intentionally for emphasis or for clarity.”
英语中的意思接近，场合接近的同义词种类非常多，但是汉语的同义词主要集中在形容词上。
中文是意合型语言，不是靠连词，代词等语言手段，而主要是靠句子内在的意思来连接的。这就给句子的表达提出了更高的要求。也就是说句子的意思必须清楚明了，歧视性和模糊性要低，句子才能行文通畅。英语则可以大量变换用词，不会引起歧义。
丰富的词汇变换手段包括——
同义词
例如
I first heard this tale shortly after the Cultural Revolution (1966-1976). Later someone told me that the story appeared in a travel magazine.
同义词还可以扩展到结构
例如
One great ignorance about the distant past also makes it difficult to identify great men. For example, no one knows who invented the wheel or discovered he proctive use of fire. Little is known about the invention of writing and of numbers.
近义词
近义词和同义词只是程度上有差异而已。有些词孤立起来看完全没有联系。但是在上下文里指的是同一间事。它们就构成了同义关系。
例如
The Second World War in some ways gave birth to less novelty and genius than the First. It was, of course, a greater cataclysm, fought over a wider area, and altered the social and political contour of the world at least as radically as its predecessor.
笼统词
指的是那些范围更大，意思更含糊的词，比如thing, task等。
例如
Perhaps is will suffice to mention the nuclear bomb. Imagine the effect on a reasonably advanced technological society, one that still does not possess the bomb, of making it aware of the possibility, of supplying sufficient details to enable the thingto be constructed.
4 如何做到用词具体
用词具体忌笼统是使文章具体生动的又一方法。
例如
She had straight A’s and scholarship offers from some of the most prestigious universities in the country.
She had straight A’s and scholarship offers from some of Stanford and Cornell.
在第二句话中，“prestigious universities”被具体地改为“斯坦福”与“康耐尔”
在写作时，要有意识的注意具体词的用法，表示人可以具体地用称谓来表达，如babysitter, colonel, teacher, doctor等；表达“说”，除了“say”或者“speak”还有很多表达方式，如exclaim （大声说）、 blurt （脱口而出）、stammer （结结巴巴说）等。
㈤ 英语论文写作要如何避免动词和主词搭配错误
英语学术论文写作是很多大学生（特别是海外学生）需要掌握的一个技能，一篇文笔简洁优雅的论文对于提高被采纳发表的成功率会有很大帮助。但目前的情况是，很多人并没有受过专门的学术论文写作训练，在写论文时经常会出现各种各样的语言问题。今天的文章主要谈一谈英文学术论文写作中的常见错误，希望对你有所帮助。
总体来说，学术论文写作跟其他类型的英文写作一样，都要遵循清晰简洁的原则，这一原则主要有以下体现：
1.主动语态与被动语态
英文中的主动语态特点是简洁有力，动作发出者明确，而被动语态特点是较为冗长且有时候看不出动作的发出者是谁（比如Measures should be taken to address this issue. 从这个句子里面我们无法确定应该是谁采取行动）。在学术论文中，很多地方都要明确指出动作的发出主体（比如实验是谁操作的，数据是谁测量的），且语言要尽可能简洁。因此，学术论文中应该多使用主动语态。
类似下面的句子：
(1) Consideration of whether countries work well on cross-border issues such as immigration was undertaken by Raul (2007).
(2) Identification of poor food, bad housing, inadequate hygiene, and large families as the major causes of poverty was made by Jones (2005).
应该改为：
(1) Raul (2007) consideredwhether or not countries work well on cross-border issues such as immigration.
(2) Jones (2005)identifiedpoor food, bad housing, inadequate hygiene, and large families as the major causes of poverty.
那么有没有需要使用被动语态的情况呢？
有。当我们无法明确动作的发出者，或者需要强调动作本身而不是强调动作发出者的时候，就可以使用被动语态。比如：
(1) Up to 90% of the energy in light bulbs is wasted in the form of heat.
(2) The first edition of Freud’s earliest writings on dreams was published in 1899.
第一个句子里面waste这个动作的发出者无法明确（也没必要明确），第二个句子里面谁出版了Freud的作品并不重要，因此也没有必要使用主动语态来说明出版商是谁。
2.比较句
我们知道，在英语比较句中有时候可以省略被比较主体后面的动词，比如：
On average, men are taller than women are.
可以省略为：
On average, men are taller than women.
但这种省略有时候会造成歧义，举个例子：
Women prefer friendly doctors more than men do.
如果我们将do省略的话，会变成：
Women prefer friendly doctors more than men.
此时句子会产生歧义，因为它可以有两种不同的理解：
Women prefer friendly doctors more than men prefer friendly doctors. 女人比男人更喜欢友善的医生。
Women prefer friendly doctors more than they prefer men. 比起喜欢男人，女人更喜欢友善的医生。
为了避免歧义，我们应该保持比较句型形式上的完整。类似这样的句子：
(1) The finance department focuses on profits more than the human resources department.
(2) Country A funds high-tech innovation more than Country B.
应该改为：
(1) The finance department focuses on profits more than the human resources department does.
(2) Country A funds high-tech innovation more than Country B does.
3.使用动词而不是名词
英语中动词通常要比名词要简洁，因为名词本身看不出动作，经常需要额外的动词去修饰它。比如要表达“做出贡献”，使用名词形式我们要说make contributions to，但如果用动词只需要说contribute，在论文写作中能使用动词的场合尽量使用动词，以保持文章的简洁。类似下面这样的句子：
(1) Enumeration of three reasons why the English language has become so important was made by Thompson (2006).
( 2) Discussion of the challenges and strategies for facilitation and promotion of ERP was performed by Smith (2007).
需要改为：
(1) Thompson (2006) enumeratedthree reasons why the English language has become so important.
(2) Smith (2007) discussedthe challenges and strategies forfacilitatingand promotingERP.
4.减少there be句型以及it的使用
There be句型可能是中国学生最熟悉的句型之一，但大部分there be句型都不够简洁，可以使用其他形式来替换。比如：
There is a necessity for a semi-structured approach to be chosen.
可以改为更加简洁的版本：
A semi-structured approach must be chosen.
又比如：
There is a need for implementation of the policy on a larger scale by the president of the association.
可以改为：
The association president must implement the policy on a larger scale.
对于形式主语it，我们也可以进行精简，比如：
(1) It is essential that the model be revised.
(2) It was important for the government to intervene.
可以改为：
(1) The model must be revised.
(2) The government must intervene.
5.Misplaced modifiers
Misplaced modifiers是指将修饰语放在错误的地方，从而产生歧义的现象。举个例子：
I was told that I would be awarded the scholarship by my professor.
这句话因为by my professor这一修饰语放置不当而产生了歧义。它可以理解为“我被我的教授告知我会获得奖学金”，也可以理解为“我被告知我的教授会授予我奖学金”。避免歧义的方法是调整by my professor的位置，比如：
I was told by my professor that I would be awarded the scholarship.
类似的例子还有：
A team led by Dr. Craig Smith from the University of Hawaii at Manoa found the crabs using a remotely operated submersible.
这句话同样有歧义，因为using a remotely operated submersible可以理解为螃蟹发出的动作，也可以理解为研究团队发出的动作。为了避免歧义，句子可以改为：
A team led by Dr. Craig Smith from the University of Hawaii at Manoa used a remotely operated submersible to find the crabs.
6.慎用代名词
我们有时候会用代名词来指代前面提到的名词或是句子成分，但它有个缺点：读者有时候很难确定代名词究竟指代哪一部分。学术论文写作要求清晰严谨，因此使用代名词时一定要谨慎，必要时可以对代名词进行替换。比如：
A case study approach was chosen; thisallowed a closer observation of a single specimen.
句子中this可能指代a case study approach，也可能指代a case study approach was chosen这一整句话，为了使句意清晰，我们可以将句子改为：
A case study approach was chosen to allow a closer observation of a single specimen.
又比如：
X substantially alters Y. Thissuggests that Y can be modified using the proposed model.
句子可以改为更清晰的版本：
X substantially alters Y. This findingsuggests that Y can be modified using the proposed model.
7.避免使用可能会造成性别歧视的代名词
在使用he, she, his, her, him这类代名词时，应避免出现只偏袒一方情况，举个例子：
When a politician campaigns for office, hemust spend considerable funds to compete with his opponents.
这里代名词只提及到了男性一方，为了避免出现性别歧视，我们可以使用名词和代词的复数形式：
When politicians campaign for office, theymust spend considerable funds to compete with theiropponents.
或者将句子中的代名词去掉：
A politician whocampaigns for office must spend considerable funds to compete with opponents.
同时，在使用一些名词的时候也要注意性别问题，比如要表达“人类”，用humankind会比用mankind好一点，因为mankind带有一定的性别色彩，一些人会质疑为什么只有mankind而没有womankind，而使用humankind会显得公平很多。
希望能帮助到你，望采纳！
㈥ 老是好写些中文式英语,怎么改正英语写作时最基本的语法规则(如介词后接动名词)有哪些
要记得分析句子结构，分得清主谓宾定状补，记住英文的习惯用法，还有救是要记得几个结构，主谓结构，动宾结构，系表结构，介宾结构。弄清楚哪及物不及物动词。弄清哪些词后面加不定式，哪些加动名词。语法要全部过关
㈦ 英语写作中的动词名词化短语
所谓复用“名词短语”代替“动制词”，其实可以看成是“同义词、近义词”。
例：
1、借钱：
Borrow sb's money = take a loan from sb.
= take a credit from sb.
2、感谢：
Thank sb.= Show gratefulness to sb.
= express appreciation to sb.
= express gratitude to sb.
3、拒绝：
Refuse sb.= give sb. a refusal.
= give sb. a denial.
= say no to sb.
= reply sb. in negative.
很多很多的呀。
建议你买一本英语同义词典（dictionary of synonym）
㈧ 英语中有的动词作名词是不需要加ing的，那有哪些呢我写作文有时都不敢用如help,study等
应该说明的是，动复词作名词 与动名制词是两个完全不同的概念。动名词通常用在各类的从句里。
但动词作名词的概念就不一样了，你所问的只涉及单词而不是从句。
动词作名词需不需要加ing? 有的要加，有的不需加。有没有规律技巧，没有。只能靠长期使用中的积累。
需要加ing的几个例子： begin beginning (开始)， belong belonging (属于/属于物)
不需加ing的几个例子： take a (look), (look) at that, have a nice (travel), (travel) to somewhere.
希望对你有帮助。
㈨ 英语写作多用名词
在英文句子中动词不存在少用多用这种说法.一个句子的核心就是动词,在没有专连词的情况下一属个句子只能有一个动词,其他的动词都是要转换成其他形式的.
而主谓宾结构中谓语就是动词,不可能用其他词性的词.
for example:
1.她跟我讲了个故事.
She told me a story.
She是主语,told是谓语,me是宾语
2.他太年轻了以至于不能参军.
He is too young to join the army.
这句话实际上有两个动词:is,join.但是原则是一个句子只能有一个动词,所以这里就把join转换成动词不定式的形式:to join
这只是一个例子,动词可以通过转换形式而可以有其他的用法.
有:动词+ing,动词+ed,to+动词,他们都可以当作名词和形容词用,这就是你问的"动词写成名词"但这种说法是不妥当的,动词怎么能"写"成名词呢...
总之记住:一句话在没有像and这样的连词的情况下只能有一个谓语动词出现,其他的动词必须转换形式.
㈩ 英语问题 写作时first和firstly后面的句子有什么不同吗动词要注意什麽之类的
firstly可以单独使用表示首先 就等于at first
first加逗号与后面句子隔开表示第一点 一般写作时为避版免单权调 不这样使用
另外在写作中副词的作用 非常重要 应多进行积累好的副词 如occasionally等等 并应用于写作中