英语写作赏析

⑴ 赏析英语作文

Of all the subjects the first the last one of the most 最高级
Though neither ……nor 关联词
lively and interesting kind and friendly形容词贴切符合教师身份内
enjoy 含享受之意容

⑵ 评析英语作文

首先的你的用词不够好，大量口语话的用词和拼写，在书面表达这是应该避免的。例如，首句中的many可以改为a plenty of 或者numerous；第二行中的mom最好写成mother；另外你用and作为开头太多了，或许这样可以调节句式，但是毕竟不是正式用法，你可以把and小写，直接作为并列从句。
第二，你的文章不是太简洁，虽然写够了70词，但是并没有传达出很多信息。例如，“she asked me for the resons and telled me to believe ···”一句，ask实际就有tell的意思，你可以把它改成，she ask me the reason and to beliece myself.
第三，你的文章逻辑性不强，也就是说连接词用的太少，句子间的过渡太突兀了。例如，首句你可以写成when I got "c "in a English test,I was very nervous.and I cried in my bedroom. At that moment my mom came in.你可以用连接词把文章整个串起来，这样的话时态就比较清晰，句式也复杂，逻辑性就强了。

⑶ 英语作文赏析一句话的结构

自己写吧！
1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，…
3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……
4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的，
5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到，…
6.It's generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…
7.It's likely that … 这可能是因为…
8.It's hardly that… 这是很难的……
9.It's hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是
11.There's no denying the fact that…毫无疑问，无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…
13.what's far more important is that… 更重要的是…

⑷ 英语作文欣赏某人80词左右

My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.
Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.
Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.
This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

⑸ 英语作文赏析，急。

这篇文好方面应该是思路清晰,观点全面深刻.

全文用了whenever 引导的状语从句， 虚拟语气从句（但是用的是一般时态 ）， disposable chopsticks 指的是一次性筷子，翻译得很到位，出彩句：I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help our world a better place to live in.其中用了多个从句和不定式
不足的:
有部分语法和逻辑错误:
I should try to use both sides of a piece of paper .paper在这里是不可数名词，表统称；a piece of paper 才是表达纸张的意思
I will not use( something )like paper cups and disposable chopsticks beacuse they're made of wood.
For me,I can try to save electricity in my daily life.前面的everyone是can 后面的I 最好保持一致
For example,if i am the last person to leave the classroom,I will always remember to turn off the lights不一定是晚上才开灯

PS.在中国式作文是很不错的一篇文了 ，但是以外教的眼光来看就显得有点“中式”英语.也许是被外教退文退得多了，挑了很多毛病而不是好的方面来说 还请见谅哈~

⑹ 4级英语作文要范文和评析

References:

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[BSR96]: A. Bonner, A. Shruf, and S. Rozen. LabFlow-1: A Database Benchmark for High Throughput Workflow Management. In Proc. of the 5th. Intnl. Conference on Extending Database Technology,pages 25-29, Avignon, France, March 1996

⑺ 用英语写一篇外国文学作品赏析，800字左右

最好LZ 要自己花点心思，哪怕参考现成的文章但是加上自己的理解也成，最起码要挑本自己喜欢的书？

我很喜欢简爱，所以下面这篇简爱的赏析供LZ参考。不是我写的，是外国人写的。
这书真好^_^

Jane Eyre is the rare book that manages to be good by virtue of ineffable charm alone, despite not having very much going for it in terms of overall plot.
There is something more going on in Jane Eyre than mere charm, true, something authentically powerful--if, as will be see, brief. But the power of Jane Eyre has less to do with the conflict of great forces that typifies great works of literature, and more to do with the subtle irritation of a delayed resolution to its most important episode. Instead of a race between values through the people who represent those values, Jane Eyre tasks us with a race to turn its pages and find out its secrets--still a race, but a race whose victory, barring the boredom of the reader, is assured.

The word "episode" above is a clue to the larger problem. Jane Eyre is a novel built on episodes, loosely tied together by their common, likable and eponymous protagonist. Jane Eyre is an orphan in the care of her brutal relatives, who despise her e to her outspoken character combined with her low social station. They eventually foist her off on the grim boarding school of Lowood.

As a narrator, Jane is ideal: objective enough to provide us with a good account of events, outspoken enough to bump the plot along whenever it needs bumping, and virtuous enough never to frustrate our expectations. Often enough, our viewpoint is hers; only we're not quite so witty and we're without quite so apt an eye for injustice--again making Jane, in page-after-page of her revelations, a delight to read. The novel's rhetoric is also inventive, accomplishing its routine narrative tasks via devices more elaborate than are probably necessary, yet with something fresh about each.

Jane's attempt to chide herself into abandoning her interest in her brooding employer, Edward Rochester, takes the form of a contest between two mental pictures, and the inevitable attempt by Rochester to coax out Jane's feelings involves an elaborate and well-detailed ruse involving disguises and a gypsy fortuneteller. The book, and its narrator, both definitely have charm: we like Jane, we like what she says, and we want to see what she will say next.
What We Like About Jane Eyre

Where we like Jane the most is in the book's principal episode, which involves Jane working as a governess for a young charge of dark, Byronic Rochester amidst the mysteries of his dark, Byronic estate Thornfield--all revealed, of course, after many dark, Byronic outbursts of extreme sentiments that Charlotte Bronte probably enjoyed writing very much. And, Rochester is actually enjoyable: a match for Jane in terms of wit, impressive in his authority, and sympathetic in his vulnerability. He's likable enough, in fact, that once Jane begins to speculate on the possibility of becoming closer still to her employer, we realize that we like the idea of these two becoming a pair. Suddenly, the story floods with tension. We're no longer reading just because we happen to like Jane, but because we're invested in a likable outcome.
More: we're invested in a likable outcome that seems increasingly threatened by Rochester's secrets. Bronte hints at these with the facility of a mystery novelist: she knows the ideal times to drop a scream from the walls or a mysterious guest from the past into our laps. In her continued ability to strain, felicitously, at the bounds of rhetoric, she raises the novel to a level no mystery writer usually wants to attempt.

And the conclusion, when it finally hits, is worth the wait--not only raising the level of tension and rhetoric, but also the thematic level of the book as well. The Rochester episode is the story that everyone remembers from Jane Eyre, and the one part of the book that deserves to be called truly great.

But then there's the rest of the book, which isn't great; it's just there. Jane's school is infested with typhus, Jane meets her long-lost cousin, Jane is tempted to run off and become a missionary: really, how does this stack up to Thornfield? And why does it need to be there at all, other than filling in a necessary gap in time before Rochester can come storming back in on his black horse (figuratively, of course, considering certain events in the plot) and make the story interesting again?

It needs to be there, one might think, because the story isn't about Rochester and Jane; it's about Jane--which would be true. But, if the story is about Jane alone, relegating Rochester to a brief but important incident in Jane's life, then it's not a great story. With her her likable, narratorial qualities, Jane may be a great narrator, but she makes an extremely lousy dynamic character, even if she is involved in a typhus scare.

Jane is objective, outspoken, and virtuous throughout, which means she's not particularly susceptible to temptations (except those Rochester provides). That means that Rochester is crucial to the real, emotional conflict of the book--crucial to the power of the book. The rest is just Jane being Jane, which may be fun to read, but it doesn't intersect with any real threat, any real conflict of values that lends a great book its electric charge.

So what the novel has to its name is rhetorical brilliance, a good episode that doesn't take up nearly a large enough percentage of the page count, and a lot of needless distractions.
There are great books that are structurally unbalanced, even structurally deranged, Don Quixote being maybe the prime example, but even Don Quixote is unusually good about keeping its Quixote chapters strictly separate from its "filler" chapters, allowing the knight to remain his untarnished self throughout its plot, and throughout our memories.

Whereas Bronte, in taking as her narrative logic an episodic structure united by an ideal protagonist, gives her book a larger measure of consistency at the expense of diluting its overall strength. Thus Jane Eyre remains a beautiful sandcastle while it's being experienced, but not one of which much (save its brief heart) remains after the tides of time and memory crash down over its Thornfieldean parapets.

⑻ 英语作文赏析怎么写呀

画出语法、短语

⑼ 大学英语作文评析的目录

第一部分 议论和说明文
1 The Importance of Confidence
2 Winners and Losers
3 My View on Opportunity
4 No Peace,No Development
5 Technology
6 Science and Technology
7 Space Researdh
8 The Internet and US
9 How Does the Computer Change Our Life
10 Computer Crime
11 Online Chatting
12 My View on China's Unemployment Today
13 Environmental Pollution
14 Traffic and Population
15 Western Regions Development
16 The Best Preparation for Life and Career
17 Job Interviews
18 My Ideal Job
19 Migrant Workers,a Blessing or a Curse?
20 Re-employment of laid-off Workers
21 A Boom in Alt Ecation
22 Project Hope
23 How to Do Well in an Exaamination
……
第二部分应用文
第三部分图表作文