㈠ 谈谈目前新课程背景下高中英语写作教学存在什么问题
中学生英语写作中常见的问题(一)基础的语法词汇知识掌握不熟练要想充分地表达自己的思想,掌握内足够的词汇容量是前提,准确理解词义是基础,写出语法正确、结构合理句子是目的。由于高中起始阶段,老师在教学中,常常忽视初高中教学内容的衔接,而新课标教材跨度大,起点高,加上许多学生初中英语底子薄,学习方法不当,对学习英语产生畏惧心理,难以跟上老师的教学。因此,他们在写作时就感觉力不从心,无法用英语正确地表达自己的思想。(二)不会使用关联词许多学生虽然具备一定的语法词汇知识,会使用五种简单句式,但他们的文章表达不足之处包括层次不清、句式缺乏变换、前后衔接手段单调等。说具体一点,对于并列连词,如:or
but and so等,以及从属连词。
㈡ 高中英语作文技巧
多背范文，复积累好的短语词制汇。其实作文真的没有什么技巧可言，只要你读的多，积累的多了。自然能顺手拈来。平常可以多读一些英文报纸、杂志之类的。还有是要保证准确，如果一些复杂的句型用不好就不要用。这是我个人的一些经验，希望能帮到你。
㈢ 高中英语作文写作技巧
刚参加过高考~~绝对有用（总结了很久）
①给观点分组讨论类 开头模版 Recently,we had a heated discussion on ****(根据题目要求套用了)
论述观点 when it comes to this hot topic ,students'views vary from people to people ,some people think that **** ,nevertheless ,just as the saying goes"every coin has two sides " ,so others have the opposite opinion ,they consider that ***
结尾as far as i concerned,Ithink that ****
②一些精彩亮点连接词 in addition ,what"s more ,furthermore
moreover（另外）
last but not least important ,most important （最重要的是）
worst of all （最糟糕的是）,
to make matters wores（更糟的是）
as far as i concerned, personally（我个人看来）
however ,nevertheless（然而）
希望对你学习有用！
参考资料：自己咯~
㈣ 高中英语写作技巧：人物介绍作文怎么写
技巧点拨：
1. 仔细审题，确定主题。
2.合理安排短文的结构层次，组织好所提示内容表达的先后顺序。
3.句子时态要在上下文中有相关性、连续性，要与表达内容一致。
4.审题后要先列出简明扼要的提纲，其次写出草稿，经过修改之后，再正式成文。
常见可运用句型：
sb. is considered to be one of the greatest ...
Well known as ..., he ...
Born in a poor family, he had to ...
When he was a small boy, he showed a great interest in ...
Thanks to the help of ..., he was able to continue his ecation.
Between ... and ..., he studied at ...
From ... to ..., he first worked as ..., and then he became ...
He was praised/honored for ...
She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to ...
She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievements.
His achievements are worthy of praise.
㈤ 浅谈如何提高高中英语写作教学的趣味性
创设趣味教学情境,营造轻松教学氛围在新课改的教学背景下,传统高中英语写作教学的方回式已经不能答满足学生的学习需求了,现阶段,随着信息技术的快速发展以及素质教育要求的不断提升,我国高中英语写作教学已开始向趣味性教学发展,逐渐摆脱了“一刀切”、“满堂灌”这些教学模式的影响。为了更好的提高实际教学的趣味性,教师就可以在写作教学的过程中积极创设极具趣味的教学情境,让学生在轻松和谐的教学氛围中产生对写作学习的兴趣,进而实现高效学习、快乐学习
㈥ 看图，帮忙写一篇高中英语作文作为参考，并详细叙英语写作技巧。万分感谢！
由于美国人生活繁忙、紧张，讲求快速，时间就是金钱，所以近年来许多美国大学也在推行日常生活的讲和写，不用难字，不写长句，不含偏见的「三不」。也就是说，尽量使用简短易懂的白话英语 (Plain English)，写得愈白愈好，用字愈少愈妙，使别人可以一目了然，充分了解。这不但可节省「思索」时间，也可避免对方的误解。还有，老外为了族群和谐相处，也不使用带有偏见的字眼。以下即为一些例子，以供读者参考。
1. 尤其在商业上，报章杂志或公文书信上，尽量不用难字 (big word) 或过时的字眼 (old-fashioned word); 例如：
Many people feel that moral ecation is the infrastructure of higher learning. (许多人认为道德教育是高等知识的基础) (如果用 foundation 或 basis 代替 infrastructure 就更明白)
Three hundred acres of land is the parameter of our university，s expansion (growth). (三百英亩的土地是本大学发展的限度) (如果用limit代替parameter，会更简单易懂。)
This news has been disseminated all over the U.S. (这消息已散布到全美各地) (如果用spread取代disseminated，不更简单？) (动词时态是：spread, spread, spread)
The president of this college is not diminutive in size. (这大学的校长个子不小) (假如用small代替diminutive，不更明白吗？)
I have to elucidate this document to my staff. (我要向我的员工解释这份文件) (如用explain代替elucidate，也许更明白。)
Mr. A will endeavor to be a physician. (A 先生想尝试当个医生) (如果用try代替endeavor，会更浅白。) (endeavour = endeavor)
We hope to visualize world peace in the future. (我们希望将来看到世界和平)（如果用see代替visualize，也许更简单！）
The charitable organization solicits for our annual donation. (慈善机构要求颐且荒暌欢壤志?（假如用 ask 代替 solicit，更浅白易懂。）(solicitation是名词)
We don't know what may transpire when we have a new boss. (当新老板来后，我们不知会有什么发生。) (如果用happen代替transpire，也许更明白。)
Please act as soon as possible on the aforementioned matter. (前面提过的事，请尽速办理。）(如果用 previous 代替古字 aforementioned 不是更明白？）
这就像美国大文豪马克吐温 Mark Twain 也曾说过：「我不愿在字典里找长字或难字，我绝不用『metropolis』这个字，因为我同样可以用『city』这个字来代替」。罗斯福总统为了强调美国政府不会遗忘那些穷人，在一篇讲词里用了这么一句：「We are endeavoring to construct a more inclusive society.」后来被人批评咬文嚼字，卖弄文笔。如果用浅白易懂的字眼写成：「We are going to make this country in which no one is left out.」或「We are trying to make everyone equal.」也许更简单明白！
2. 老外也主张不写噜苏或绚丽的字眼（flowery or wordy），句子应该越短越好，一句能用两个字，绝不多加一个。 例如：
At this point in time, we should pull together for our goal. (现在我们应该为我们的目标团结一致）(如果说：Now, we should pull……更简单。因为 at this point in time = now)
Despite the fact that my English is not very good, I am not discouraged. （虽然我的英语不好，但我不灰心。) (如果说：Although my English is not…… 就更简短。因为despite the fact tha t= although = Though）
I am of the opinion that Mr. Lee should resign from this position. (我想李先生应该辞职) (假如说：I think Mr. Lee should……不是更简单吗？因为I am of the opinion = I think)
He quitted the job e to the fact that he was sick. (他由于生病而辞职) (若说：He quitted the job because he was sick. 更简单。因为 e to the fact that = because）
In the majority of cases,he likes to ride bike to the office.（他通常喜欢骑单车到办公室) (如果说：Usually, he likes to ride…… 更简单。因为 in the majority of cases = usually）
She shows a preference for tea rather than coffee. (她喜欢茶而不是咖啡) (若说：She prefers tea rather……更简短清楚，因为 show a preference for = prefer)
I will bring the matter to the attention of Mr. Wang. (我要通知王先生)
如果只说：I will tell Mr. Wang (about the matter). 不是更简单吗？因为 bring the matter to the attention of = tell = inform) (句子最后面：「about the matter」可以省去); 同理，也要避免意义的重复或用字的多余 (rendant);
例如：
The consensus（of opinion）is that we have to act right away.（大家认为我们必须立即行动）(of opinion 可以省去，因为 consensus 的意思，就是大家的意见。）
The letter shows that the problem（continues to）remain unsolved.（他的信显示问题尚未解决）(continue to 是多余的字，因为 remain 已经有 continue 的含意。所以句子就成为：The letter shows that the problem remains unsolved.）
He has made his (final) conclusion in his speech.（他在演说里做出结论） (final 是多余的字，因为 conclusion 已经含有 final 的意思。）
He has had many years of (actual) experience in business。（他有多年经商的经验) (actual 也是多余的字，因为 experience 已有 actual 的意味）
We assembled (together) all the parts for our radio.（我们装好收音机的零件）(因为 assemble 本身就有 together 的意思，所以 together 是多余的）
Enclosed (herewith ) please find the report of the meeting.（herewith 是多余的字，因为 enclosed 就有 herewith 的意思）(即：附上会议报告，请查收)
写到这里，想起一位深受美国人民爱戴，一向主张不写长句、不噜苏的美国已故参议员 Stephen Young，他每次受邀参加会议、演讲、宴会时，他的回信只有三个字「我会到」（I'll be there）……。也有人打趣的说：「讲演或写作的句子，就像穿迷你裙，愈短愈好。」（Like wearing mini-skirt, sentences in speech or writing should be the shorter, the better.）
此外还有：in reference to = about;draw to close = end; at an early date = soon等。
3. 老外为了族群和谐相处，除不用歧视或偏见的字眼外，连男女性别，也要避免区别，以示「平等」。 例如：
Mankind are considered the smartest animals in the world。（人类是世上最聪明的动物）= Man is the smartest animal……。 (如果改为：Human beings are considered the smartest animals…… 就能包括男女。所以 mankind = man = human beings） (注意：mankind 后面动词要用多数，而 man 的后面动词，则用单数）
Manpower seems not strong enough in developing our economy here. (发展这里的经济，似乎缺乏人力资源。）(如果说：Labor power seems not strong enough… 也就没有「男性主义」的感觉。可见 manpower = labor power = work force = human resources）
This small company hired a cleaning woman yesterday.（这个小公司昨天请来一名清洁女工）(如果说：This small company hired an office cleaner…也就没有男女之分了）
He (she) has been a committee chairman (chairwoman) since 1998. (自从1998年他就是委员会主席) (假如把chairman或chairwoman改为chairperson或chair，就没有男女之分。) (如指讨论会的主持人，也可称为 moderator 或 coordinator。)
Many businessmen (businesswomen) feel their jobs are very stressful.（许多商人觉得工作压力很大）(如果把 businessmen (businesswomen) 改为 business people 或 business executives 或 business managers 就可包括男女了）(凡是单数 man 或 woman，其多数都是 men 或 women。)
Policemen (policewomen) should treat citizens with courtesy.（警察对人民应该有礼貌）(假如把 policemen 或 policewomen 改为 police officers 就可避免男女性别）
Congressmen (congresswomen) should speak up for their constitutes. （国会议员应该为其选民说话）(constitute = voter) （我们也可以把 congressmen 或 congresswomen 改为 members of congress 或 congressional representatives） Stewardesses for international regions may get jet lag sometimes.（国际航线的空中小姐有时会有时差疲惫的现象）（如把 stewardess 改为 flight attendant，就能包括男女空中服务员。）同理，我们可以把 salesman 或 saleswoman 改为 salesperson；把 mailman 改为 mail carrier 或 postal worker；把 foreman 改为 supervisor 等等。
当然，一些带有种族偏见的字眼，甚至有侮辱的味道（insulting words 或 slur），也要尽量避免使用，以免闹出麻烦。例如：
对黑人不要用 Negro，更不能用 Nigger（用 Black 还可以），礼貌的说法是 Afro-American 或 African-American；
对白人不要用 Honky（这是黑人骂白人的用字），正确用法是 Caucasian，或 white people； 对犹太人不要用 Hymies，应该叫 Jewish 或 Jewish people；
对越南人不要用 Gook，要用 Vietnamese； 至于墨西哥人、西班牙人及中、南美洲人，包括 Puerto Rico，正确的用法多是 Hispanics 或 Latins，不过据说西班牙人为了维护自己的文化，倒喜欢别人称为 Spaniard。
还有黑白结婚的孩子，也不可称为 Oreo（Oreo 饼乾外面是巧克力，里面是白奶油）。
有偏见的老外，不叫华人为 Chinese，而叫 Chink 或 Chinaman（从前还叫「Yellow Peril」，即黄祸）。遇到这种事，怎么办呢？我建议：「君子不与小人斗」，最好是「不理」（ignore）或「走开」（walk away）。不过老外与你谈话时，如果使用这些不礼貌的字眼，那么你就可以说：「For your information,the word you just used is derogatory（或 inappropriate）to describe someone of my race.」（只想让你知道：你刚刚所用的字，来描写我的族群，是很不合适的）。这时，你也可说一句「拜拜」了。
㈦ 高中英语写作技巧
一是通过词汇教学训练写作能力。要写好文章不是一朝一夕就能达到的，必须从最基础的词汇入手。扩大词汇量，让你词不离句，强化写作训练。
二是通过一句多译练习训练写作能力。多做一些一句多译练习，这样有助于启发写作思路。写作时选择自己有把握的句子灵活地表达同一内容，减少失误，提高得分率。
三是结合课文进行各种体裁的写作训练。要学好英语写作就必须从课文练起，从一些常见的文体练起，由短到长，由浅入深，循序渐进地进行。
四是通过背诵训练写作。培养英语写作能力，以文章为中心训练写作能力非常重要，因为文章中的句子就是规范的英语范文。把词语放在句型、段落、篇章中去理解、记忆和体味，以至于能够仿写、改写。
五是通过仿写和改写训练写作能力。仿写也是提高英语写作能力行之有效的方法，模仿写作中，格式、构思、表达方式等方面都可模仿。但要注意灵活变通，语句要通顺，符合英语表达习惯。
另外，改写也是一种很好的方法，改写就是对文章材料的文体、式样、句式等进行改编的一种训练方式。无论是改人称、改时态，还是改对话材料为叙述文字，这都有助于复习巩固所学知识，又能培养你所学知识的迁移运用能力，还能起到提高写作能力。
我之前学的那个网络写作班，你也可以去申请一个免费的写作资料啊~报名还赠送语法讲座视频和电子英语杂志，挺好的啊~希望可以帮到你~
㈧ 浅谈如何提高高中学生的英语基础写作水平
新课程《标准》倡导的是任务型的教学模式，让学生在教师的指导下，通过感知、体验、实践、参与和合作等方式，实现任务目标，感受成功；在学习过程中进行情感和策略调整，以形成积极的学习态度，促进语言实际运用能力的提高。以下是我的几点心得：1、积累词汇我们都知道没有词汇，我们无法表达我们的思想，无法与别人正确交流。丰富的词汇有助于使文章更加生动、活泼，更加能够吸引读者。因此，我们要注意词汇的学习和积累。我们要设立一个词汇积累本，在平时的模块学习和复习中，在阅读训练和完型填空练习中，专门收集词组，短语，句型和特别的句子；并且要牢固掌握他们的用法，平时经常拿出来高声朗读，以防因时间长了而忘记以往所学。这样，我们需要用时才能够随时从记忆中抽调出来，也不会有书到用时方恨少的感叹了。在积累词汇时,我们可以针对不同的写作题材和词的用途，把词组分门别类地收集。例如，表示教育类的词组：graate from, department ofuniversity; at college, major in, receive a doctor’s degree, get higher ecation, go abroad for further studies.表示因果总结归纳的词组：as a result/consequence, consequently, generally speaking, last but not the least, in short, all in all, in conclusion, in brief;常见的固定句型：As we all know that, I hold the point that ,There is every reason to believe that ,The main reason is that,Another thing we can’t forget is that, I can’t agree more,Everything has two sides./Every coin has two sides.
这样,有利于我们学习和记忆，为基础写作积累丰富的词汇，为培养英语遣词、造句和谋篇的能力奠定基础。2、掌握句子结构
英语书面表达能够最真实地 反映出一个学生的语言能力和水平。如果要写好一篇五个句子的短文，需要经过较长一段时间的培训；学生要通过大量的语言输入和写作训练才能掌握的技能。学生的写作训练应该从句子的写作入手，然后才到语篇。英语有自己的基本句型和固定搭配短语以及自己的句子结构。几乎所有的英语句子都是这五种句型的扩大延伸和变化。因此，要牢记这五种基本句型并不断地练习运用。掌握了句子的基本结构，也可以减少象There are many students very like the book .这种中国式英语的出现。当然， 我们首先要知道这五种句子：1）S+V2）S+V+O3）S+V+O+O4）S+V+P5）S+V+O+C为了熟练掌握句子结构，我们可以采用以下的方法进行训练1）经常分析划分句子成分 2）扩充和合并句子 3）翻译句子。在此，我们要注意引导学生使用长短句和语言表达的多样性，灵活运用各种句式结构。如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词作状语等，这样能够增加文章的亮点，节奏和韵律美。3、背诵范文和行文模式
经典的语言模式则存在于范文中，背诵范文不仅可以加强语句记忆，积累语言材料，，而且可以定型语式句式，语套模式和行文模式。语言的具体句子和语篇是无限的，而其结构模式则是有限的。掌握一种行文模式就意味着具有生成无数语篇的能力。语言模式和行文模式就如同数学公式一样，非常重要。掌握了行文模式，学生写作时，句子与句子之间的衔接具有逻辑性，行文连贯，而且可以加快学生答题的速度，避免了因时间不足而无法完成写作任务。例如在训练学生写求职信时，我们可以给出求职信行文模式：
• 身份
• 个人特长
• 盼望回信,获得机会I am姓名
, male/female, at the age of , who
个人身份具体信息
. I am writing to apply to work assthand I believe I can do a good job for I am not only good at特长
, but also特长
. Besides,
特长
, which is useful for申请职位.
Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.4、勤于动笔，熟能生巧
光谈写作而不去动笔，是写不出好作文的。在<<高中英语课程标准中的七级语言技能目标规定了高中毕业生在书面表达方面应该具备的能力:
1) 能根据文字及图表提供的信息进行简单的描述;
2) 能写出常见体裁的应用文,例如信函和一般通知;
3) 能描述人物或事件,并进行简单的评论;
4) 能填写有关个人情况的表格,例如申请表等;
5) 能以小组形式根据课文改编短句。
基础写作属于内容控制性的写作。对照课准，教师应该对学生进行各种体裁的写作训练， 设计出不同的文体练习，总结各种文体的特点和规律，不同的题材，我们要给出行文模式，然后反复写，使之熟练。 在训练写作时，我们应该定量限时，形成一种快速完成任务的习惯，改掉学生写作时那种拖泥带水的坏习惯。俗语说得好熟能生巧，因此，我们要坚持勤写多练，每星期固定一定的时间进行写作训练，使学生经常处于英语思维状态，形成英语思维习惯，使学生写出的文章得体流畅。
㈨ 求高中英语写作技巧和一些有用短语,句式
Chapter One 文章开头句型
1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,
适用于有争议性的主题.
例如(e.g)
[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently.
当被问及····，大多数人认为|说·····但是我有点不这麽认为。
[2]. When it comes to .... , some people bielive that ....... Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter ...)
当它涉及·····一些人相信·····其他人主张相反的观点。在这些观点里，有可能有一部分是真的，但是我倾向于前者或后者····
[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....
现在，大家普遍认为·····他们主张·····但是我怀疑····是否······
1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 .
e.g
[1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.
最近，·····问题（现象）的逐渐严重已经引起广泛的关注。
[2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention)
大意同上
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.
通货膨胀|腐败|社会不平等·····是另外一个新的令人感到苦涩的我们不得不学会去面对的一个事实。
1-3 观点法 ----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.
e.g:
[1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ... Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. benn more visible/popular than...
[2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...
现在，越来越多人开始认为（意识到）·····
[3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognation to the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ......
大意同上
[4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......
也许，是时侯对······观点拥有新的认识。
1-4 引用法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!
e.g:
[1]. "Knowledge is power." such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people .
“知识就是力量”这句是培根的名言。这句名言已经被广泛的接受。
"Ecation is not complete with gralation." Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opnion.
“教育不是完成于毕业”这句是美国一位著名的哲学家所说的。越来越多的人接受这句话。
[2]."........." How often we hear such statements/words like thoses /this .
“······”我们经常听到这样的话。
In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this "......".
在我们的日常生活中，我们习惯于听到如此传统得解释“·······”。
[3]As the saying goes that"````````"
正如某句名言说的“······”
1-5 比较法 ------ 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.
e.g:
[1]. For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ... , people ....... .
[2]. People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now share this new.
人们过去常常认为·····但是现在人们持这个观点。
1-6 故事法 ---- 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的主题.
e.g:
[1]. Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt .... The phenemenon of ... has aroused public concern.
这个现象激发人们的公共意识。
[2]. I have a friend who ... Should he .... ? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life.
如此进退两难的局面是我们日常生活中经常面对的。
[3]. Once upon a time , there lived a man who ... This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now.
很久以前，·······也许这个故事令人难以置信，但它仍有重大的现实意义
1-8 问题法 ----- 先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适用于有争议性的话题.
e.g:
Should/What ...... ? Options of ... vary greatly , some ..., others ...
But in my opinion , ...... .
Chapter 2 文章中间主体内容句型
原因结果分析
2-1. 基本原因 --- 分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因.
e.g:
[1]. Why ... ? For one thing.. For another ... 为什么·····？第一·····第二·····
[2]. The answer to this problem involes many factors. For one thing... For another...... Still another ...
这个问题的答案涉及到许多因素。第一·····第二·····另外·······
[3]. A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect .... /both indivial and social contribute to ....
许多因素，包括物质上的和精神上的·····个人原因都能导致·····
2-2 另一原因 --------> 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用!
e.g:
[1]. Another important factor is ....
[2]. ... is also responsible for the change/problem.
[3]. Certainly , the ... is not the sole reason for .....当然，······不是·····的唯一因素
2-3 后果影响 --------- 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响 .
e.g:
[1]. It will proce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on....
[2]. In involves some serious consequence for ........
Chapter 3 文章结尾形式
3-1 结论性--------- 通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点 .
e.g:
[1]. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that .....
从以上所讨论的，我们确实可以得出·····的结论。
[2]. In summary/In a word , it is more valuable .......
3-2 后果性------ 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果.
e.g:
[1]. We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of ... , if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of .......
我们必须提出一个紧急方案，因为当前的····现象，如果被允许进行，将理所当然的导致·····的重大代价\花费
[2]. Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that .. will be put in danger.
明显的，如果我们对这个问题视而不见，····将有更大的可能被置于危险之中。
3-3 号召性 -------- 呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.
e.g:
[1]. It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of ......
是我们促使将不好的趋势结束的时候。
[2]. It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.
有效的措施被用来改变这倾向是必须的。
3-4 建议性 -------- 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法.
e.g:
[1]. While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most popular is .... Another method is ... Still another one is .....
[2]. Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.
对这问题的察觉\认识是面对这种情况的第一步。
3-5 方向性的结尾方式 ---- 其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决提出总的, 大体的方向或者指明前景.
e.g:
[1]. Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be recognized in a wide way .
make some sense：有意义，讲得通，有道理
[2]. There is no quick method to the issue of .., but .. might be helpful/benefical.
[3]. The great challenge today is ...... There is much difficulty , but ........
3-6 意义性的结尾方式 --------> 文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义!
e.g:
[1]. Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort . It will not only benefit .....but also benefit .....
[2]. In any case, whether it is posotive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly ..
一)比较
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.
2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that...
5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
6.Like anything else, it has its faults.
7.A and B has several points in common.
8.A bears some resemblances to B.
9.However, the same is not applicable to B.
10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.
12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.
13. The same is true of B.
14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...
二)原因
1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.
A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).
2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.
3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...
4. The factors that contribute to this situation include...
5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that...
6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are...
7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...
One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...
Another contributing factor (cause ) is ...
Perhaps the primary factor is that …
But the fundamental cause is that ...
三)后果
1. It may give rise to a host of problems.
2. The immediate result it proces is ...
3. It will exercise a profound influence upon...
4. Its consequence can be so great that...
四)批驳
1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that...
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6) It makes no sense to argue for ...
7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ...
9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ...
五)举例
1) A good case in point is ...
2) As an illustration, we may take ...
3) Such examples might be given easily.
4) ...is often cited as an example.
六)证明
1) No one can deny the fact that ...
2) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...
4) Recent studies indicate that ...
5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ...
6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ...
七)开篇
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...
6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.
7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...
8) According to a recent survey, ...
9) With the rapid development of ..., ...
八)结尾
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...
3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...
4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...
5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.
6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...
7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...
10) Taking all these into account, we ...
11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
1)With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up
2)When it comes to...，some people think ／believe……that...，others argue ／claim that opposite ／reverse is true.There is probably……some truth in both arguments／statements，but...当说到……，有些人认为……，但另一些人则持相反的观点……。这两种观点可能都有点道理，但……。