英语高分写作作业

Ⅰ 初中英语作文怎么写能得高分

一般说来，每次考试后，阅卷老师要在很短的时间内评阅完大量的试卷，工作量非常大。尽管作文评分有具体的标准，但它仍然是主观性较大的部分，而且写作部分没有“半分”的评分标准，有时我们阅卷之时的一念之差，就可能令你失去宝贵的一分。因此，这里我觉得介绍一些这些阅卷老师阅卷时的心理，对考生是极为有用的。
1.整洁的卷面和漂亮的书写
漂亮的书写令人赏心悦目，可使阅卷老师从疲惫不堪中解脱出来，给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。就我而言，每次批改作业，如遇龙飞凤舞、字迹较为潦草者，均“押后处理”。说老实话，当改至后期，我便两眼发直，精神极度疲惫，于是也龙飞凤舞，草草给个分数，算是交差了。
2.字数要达到最低要求
因为作文对字数要求高，每篇小作文的字数在100-150字左右，大作文的字数必须达到160~200字左右，所以考生切记要在规定的范围内完成自己的工作。但是，有些考生在写作过程中总存在这样的想法：写的越长，阅卷老师的分数肯定会打得更高，其实未必。有时候，甚至会适得其反。试想，考生的文章是写长了，但是考生同时又将自己的弱点暴露得“一览无余”，那样，考生怎么可能得到高分呢？所以，考生应注意在写作中长度一定要适当。
3.结构完整，脉络清晰
考试时作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global
scoring（整体评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你的大作。作文阅卷老师都是经验非常丰富的大学英语教师，他们要在数分钟内浏览完考生作文，给出评分意见。如何吸引阅卷老师的注意呢？我认为，一个完整框架是必不可少的，首先应让阅卷老师觉得你的文章是结构完整合理、符合要求的。换言之，即具备英语文章的基本要素：引言段、扩展段和结尾段。引言段中要包含thesis
statement（中心句），扩展段的每段均应有topic
sentence（主题句），结尾段应该是一个自然收尾的段落。中文讲究意合，而英语注意形合，要求句与句、段与段之间运用恰当的过渡词，把上下文有机地连接起来。因此，应适当运用关键词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。

Ⅱ 高考英语作文怎么拿高分的技巧

一、作文得分标准分成四个部分～ 1、【内容分】（7分），内容分也叫要点分，也就是题目给的所有信息都写全、不要漏点，没有反社会言论，就可以拿7分了。【想拿高分和优秀的孩子千万不要漏点！！！一定要检查再检查，内容分扣分是很夸张的，漏一个大要点直接扣10分，也就是降两档处理（阅卷老师会怀疑我们提前背了与考试无关的作文去考场写），漏一个小要点也要扣2分了】 2、【结构分】（6分），结构分包括（1）段落分配和（2）连词的运用。我们平时背的那些模板，其实就是在帮我们梳理结构，背下模板，拿到结构分满6分是非常非常正常的～～所以，我非常鼓励大家背模板～～（结构写的灰常棒，比模板还好的娃请折叠我）后面结构分我会重点说。 3、【词句分】（6分），词句分，顾名思义，是指运用‘’准确的单词+优秀多变的句型‘’得到的分数。词句这一块是整个作文最难的部分，考察的是学生的基本功，6分满分非常难得，但是拿2～4分还是相当容易的。优秀和高分的分水岭就在词句分上～ 4、【卷面分】（6分），卷面一是字迹工整美观，二是不能涂改（所以一定要打草稿啊）。这两个都达到了，卷面满分6分妥妥拿到～ ［我对大家的要求就是，想拿高分，卷面请不要扣分！！！在这里扣分非常不划算，要用好几个准确的单词和高级语法才能换回来。］二、【结构分】提分方法（一）完美的段落分配前文已经说过，全国卷是提纲类作文，当拿到一个提纲作文时，我们首先要干嘛呢？对咯，就是要根据背景和提示内容分段。我和其他老师一致认为，高考作文分成三段来写最清晰简单、容易得到结构分。所以为了节省空间，我就直接说一下如何把题干写成三段式作文了哈。三段式作文请按照下图结构来写～

Ⅲ 《如何写好英语作业》语文作文大全

想要写好文章，积累最重要。当年我们老师就让我们准备一个本本，将平内时见到的优美句段摘录容，可以每天早上读几遍。而且对于好的作文的格式也可以借鉴。在文章中写出自己的见解，自己感情。灵魂的文章才是好的文章。

高中英语作文很好骗分的，但前提要有大量的词汇量，写文章是使用一些高等词汇，不要总是那几个词，对于时态的把握很重要，不出错就能得高分，语言要连贯。还是老话，多积累开到过的一些好的开头或者能够套用的句子。

经验之谈莫见笑。祝你中秋快乐
谢谢

Ⅳ 求10篇200字的英语作文！高分！坐等！

BuildaHarmoniousSociety

Dearfellowstudents,

Ourgovernmentisgoingtobuilda"harmonioussociety".Ithinkitiseveryone'.

Ashighschoolstudents,whatshouldwedo?

Firstofall,weshouldloveourmotherland.Let'ourschool'sactivities.

Secondly,let'sfilltheworldwithlove.,ourparentsandourteachers..Mostimportantofall,.

Finally,let',includinganimals,trees,flowersandgrass.

Asformyself,.

Dearfellowstudents,let',everyhour,andeveryminute!

LiXiaoping

FromHuanggangHighSchool

heOlympicGames.It’sheldonceeveryfouryears.

Thetwenty-.,.Forexample,theGreatWall,theForbiddenCity,theTempleofHeavenandsoon,.

“,OneDream”isthesloganofthetwenty-ninthOlympicGames.?TheyareBeibei、Jingjing、Huanhuan、YingyingandNini.Infact,they’.

Withthenicecity,,.Ithinkthetwenty-!

WelcometoBeijing,welcometoChina!

Inrecentyears，，.，infiltratethesubject'sbusinessandfamily，orevenbugandwiretapthem——.

famouspeople'slives.Theyareinthespotlight，renownedornotorious，.Tosatisfytheircuriosity，or“thepeople'srighttoknow”，.

Moreover，.，henceahugeprofit.，，gprivatelivesoffamouspeople.

However，..Toescapereporters，theycan'tevenleadanormallife..Forexample，hasethroughParis.

Famouspeoplearealsocitizens.——，.

这里是3篇，如果可以，我再把其余7篇给你

1..,Ihadfinisheditverysoon.AlthoughsometimesIfeelbored,happinesswasthemainstream..Itwasverynice.IliketheNationalDayholiday.

2.,fromMondaytoFriday,,.ChinesemathematicsandEnglish,sports,art,etc.,at8:00everymorning,wehadtomakeamorningexercise,Ilikedformorningcalisthenics,Itmadeuswhohadstronghealth.Myfavoriteclasseswassports,weoftenraninPEclass,itwasveryinteresting.Wehadaweekofreading,,wehadtoolittletimetoread..Myelementarylifewascolorful,andImissmyprimaryschoollife.

3.,.Thesecondday,I,togetherwithmyfamily,.Thethirdday,.Afterwereturnedhome,.

.Howaboutyou?

4.,.

Onthefirstday.Itwassunnyandhotallday.Wewenttoabeautifulbeach.Wehadaswimthere.Weplayedgames.Itwasreallyfun.Wehadseafoodfordinner.Itwasdelicious!

Onthesecondday.Theweatherwasnotgood.sowewenttothemountains.Wegottothetopofthemountain.Weplayedgamesandflewkites.Iwasverytired.butIhadagoodtime.

Onthethirdday.Theweatherwascool.sowewenttoamuseum.Itwaskindofboring.sowedidn'treallyenjoyit.

5.Lastweekend,IwenttovisitOldHenry.

..OldHenryandIwenttobeach.Wehadaswimthere.Weplayedgamesandflewkites.

.

Wehadagreattime.

Ihopetovisithimagain!

6.ABusyWeekend

Ihadabusyweekend.OnSaturdaymorning,Ireadbooksanddidhomework.Intheafternoon,Icleanedmyroom.Intheevening,IwatchedTVandmovies.OnSundaymorning,.Wewerehappy.Intheafternoon,Iwenttothesupermarket.Intheevening,Ireadabookabouthistory.

Thisweekend,Iwasverytired.

7.Dear***,

Nicetomeetyouagainbyletter..

.It'ssointerestinghere,world!

.!

BestWishes,

yours***

8.June4th,SundaySunny

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-.Inordertobeaqualifiedteacher,Igotmyselffully-prepared.Ipickedoutsomefrequently-.Beforetheclassbegan,Ifeltquitenervous.Buttomysurprise,mylessonwasagreatsuccess!,.Intheend,!Howamazing!.

再送一篇

9.ABusyWeekend

Ihadabusyweekend.OnSaturdaymorning,Ireadbooksanddidhomework.Intheafternoon,Icleanedmyroom.Intheevening,IwatchedTVandmovies.OnSundaymorning,.Wewerehappy.Intheafternoon,Iwenttothesupermarket.Intheevening,Ireadabookabouthistory.

Thisweekend,Iwasverytired.

Ⅳ 高考英语作文有什么高分技巧

答：
一、学习高级词抄汇。比如说用袭challenging代替difficult，用vital代替important，这样老师打的分会高一些。
二、使用短语。比如说用take part in 代替join，用make good use of 代替use
三、具体化的单词优先。比如说，I go to school everyday可以写成I ride to school everyday。仔细品品，是不是不一样？很多这些技巧和单词，在一个叫秒词邦的小程序上都有视频讲解，你可以去看看

Ⅵ 英语作文的写作方法及技巧

您好!
一般应做到
内容切题:不能走题、偏题
表达清楚:要让别人知道你想说什么，不要用你认为能看懂的汉语式英文句子
意义连贯:中英文化差异造成思维方式和文字表述方式的不同，英文表述更注重事实，所以写英语作文不要过多的进行心理、环境描写，120个字的作文结构要缜密，理由和例子要简洁有力，说明问题，不要东拉西扯。
句法多变:为避免文章平淡、呆板，可使用不同的句式:强调句、倒装句、否定句等等
语言正确:不要犯低级的语法错误
英语作文其实不难，如果你的英语底子不好，不太擅长使用比较复杂的语法，词汇量也比较有限的话。建议用最简单的句子表达意思，句式越简单越好，能表达意思就好，一些生辟的单词如果不会不需要直译，可以用些词组。能表达意思就好，如果不会用用多了反而容易出错，平时作业时可以慢慢积累，可以试着用些当作练习，考试时就不必了，原因就不多说了。我觉得要写好英语作文还是平时多积累些，加上一些练习，比如平时可以多看些英语美文，如果有时间也可以刻意记些，时间长了语感自然就出来了，考试时有可能不知不觉的就闪出了平时的记忆。
多用连接词!
递进型:besides
;what's
more
;let
alone解释型:that
is
(to
say);in
other
words转折型:however;but;yet;otherwise列举型:for
example;such
as
;on
the
other
hand因果型:since;therefore;as
a
result并列型:and;or;also;as
well
as总结型:in
a
word
;in
short;
on
the
whole;in
conclusion见解型:in
my
opinion;speaking;as
far
as
I
am
concerned
祝您成功

Ⅶ 【急求 英语小作文 (英汉互译）满意高分悬赏】每篇作文50个单词以上，可是适当加入一些词组或句子。

1.My family
There are 4 people in my family, my father and mother are my brother and I. My dad is very the attention is clean, always put the house be arranged in good order, he is love with flowers and plants, we have a lot of beautiful flowers. My mother is very busy, often going to work, the evening till ten o'clock to go home. My brother is going to primary school, he read capability is very strong, he is very naughty.
我家有4个人，分别是我的爸爸妈妈弟弟还有我。我的爸爸十分注重清洁，总是把家里打扫的井井有条，他还很喜欢摆弄花草，我们家里有很多漂亮的花花草草。我的妈妈十分忙碌，经常要上班，晚上要到10点钟才能回家。我的弟弟即将要上小学，他认字能力很强，他很调皮
2.Introce Myself
My name is AMY two. I'm not tall, wearing a pair of black frame glasses. This year 12 years old. My star sign is pisces. My ideal is that when a guitar player. There are 4 in my family. From XX XX primary school, will graate this year. I like my school. My hobby is reading, acting, guitar, Allegro, calligraphy. I am a cheerful, generous girl, and students get along very well
二.我的名字是AMY。我个子不太高，带着一副黑框眼镜。今年12岁。我的星座是双鱼座。我的理想是当一名电吉他手。我家有4个人。来自XX市XX小学，今年即将毕业了。我很喜欢我现在的中学。我的爱好是阅读、表演、吉他、快板、书法。我是一个开朗、大方的女孩子，和同学们相处很融洽。
3.My school
Three. My school is six in Xiamen. Fujian province Xiamen sixth middle school was founded in 1953. The campus covers an area of 97648 square meters, has a teaching building, office building, modern ecational technology center, network center, art ecation complex building, laboratory building, library, planetarium, the student activities center, student dormitory, auditorium, gymnasium, 400 meters standard plastic stadium, 25 meters * 50 meters standard outdoor swimming pool and other major construction
三.我现在就读的学校是厦门六中。福建省厦门第六中学创办于1953年。学校校园占地面积97648平方米，有教学楼、行政办公楼、现代教育技术中心、网管中心、艺术教育综合楼、实验楼、天文馆、图书馆、学生活动中心、学生宿舍、大礼堂、体育馆、400米标准的塑胶运动场、25米*50米室外标准游泳池等主要建筑
4.My English teacher
四.我们的英语老师是李老师。她很年轻，挺高的个子，短头发。他对我们很严格，每个字都要求我们写的清清楚楚，作业布置得不多，很多都是一些实践的作业，都很有趣。我们毕业了，就要升入新的中学，但是大家都十分想念李老师，还希望再见到我们的小学英语老师李老师。
Four. Our English teacher is miss li. She is very young, very tall, short hair. He is very strict with us, every word has asked us to write clearly, homework assignments, not much, many are some practice work, is very interesting. We graated, will go to a new school, but we all miss li, also hope to see our primary school English teacher teacher.
5.My Hobby
五.我的爱好是阅读、表演、吉他、快板、书法。我学习吉他已经有8个月了，我现在正在学习和弦，它对于我来说有些难度。快板我是刚学的，我对民间艺术十分感兴趣。阅读是我的兴趣，每天晚上睡觉前，我都会看30分钟的书。我的书法一直都不错，但是仅限于钢笔，毛笔不是我的强项。
Five. My hobby is reading, acting, guitar, Allegro, calligraphy. I learn the guitar has been 8 months, I am learning chords, which for me is a little difficult. Allegro I was just learning, I was very interested in folk art. Reading is my hobby, every night before going to sleep, I will read the book in 30 minutes. My handwriting has been good, but only a pen, writing brush is not my strong suit.
6.My best friend
六.我的好朋友叫ALICE。她是我的死党。在生活中，学习上都是我的好伙伴。在生活中，遇到很多我无法决定的事情，我便会去求助她，她也很热情。在班上，她是我们的开心果，经常逗大家开心。她现在和我一样，也在福建省厦门第六中学，虽然，我们不能同班，但我们友谊永不变。
Six. My good friend named ALICE. She is my best friend. In life, learning is my good friend. In life, met a lot of I can't decide things, I will go to help her, she is also very warm. In class, she is our pistachios, often make people happy. She like me now, also in Fujian province Xiamen sixth middle school, though, we can't class, but our friendship will never change.

Ⅷ 求两篇英语作文 ！ 符合要求！ 高分悬赏！！！符合初二写作水平！！

第一篇

Dear Lucy.
I am very happy to receive your letter in which you ask about Chinese Moon Festival. Let me tell you briefly about it.
It is on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. At this time of the year, it is just in the middle of the autumn that is why it is also translated as the Mid-Autumn Festival. On the 15th day, there is a full moon. Chinese people always consider that the moon is the most perfect than any other days of the year.
The Moon Festival is an occasion for family reunions. The full moon the symbol of the happiness for the whole family. When the moon rises, families get together and watch the moon, eat moon cakes and fruits that are in season.
Moon cake is the traditional food for the occasion. They are normal round in shape which ensemble the shape of the moon.
My family celebrates the Moon Festival each year with my parents, grandparents and my sister. When we watch the moon, we eat the moon cake and my sister and I would recite some classic poems and my grandma would tell the legendry story of the beautiful woman called Chang Er who flew to the moon.
I hope that one day you come to China and the time of the Moon Festival and I believe that you will have a great time to experience Chinese culture.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

第二篇 :这是标准答案，你可以参照着稍微修改一下 O(∩_∩)O~

January9，2009 Sunny
Now．it's the year of 2009．I have a little plan for the New Year．I am going to study hard and get good grades．I am going to read more books and practice spoken English more．As for health．I am going to eat healthy food．I am also going to do more exercise．I want to help my mom to do more chores at home．I will cook meals on weekends．I love traveling．I am going summer camping if possible．But I am too shy and too quiet to be good at conversations，so I am going to make more friends this year．

Ⅸ 英语作文要怎样写才能得高分

1.整洁的卷面和漂亮的书写
漂亮的书写令人赏心悦目，可使阅卷老师从疲惫不堪中解脱出来，给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。就我而言，每次批改作业，如遇龙飞凤舞、字迹较为潦草者，均“押后处理”。说老实话，当改至后期，我便两眼发直，精神极度疲惫，于是也龙飞凤舞，草草给个分数，算是交差了。
2.字数要达到最低要求
因为作文对字数要求高，每篇小作文的字数在100-150字左右，大作文的字数必须达到160~200字左右，所以考生切记要在规定的范围内完成自己的工作。但是，有些考生在写作过程中总存在这样的想法：写的越长，阅卷老师的分数肯定会打得更高，其实未必。有时候，甚至会适得其反。试想，考生的文章是写长了，但是考生同时又将自己的弱点暴露得“一览无余”，那样，考生怎么可能得到高分呢？所以，考生应注意在写作中长度一定要适当。
3.结构完整，脉络清晰
考试时作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global scoring（整体评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你的大作。作文阅卷老师都是经验非常丰富的大学英语教师，他们要在数分钟内浏览完考生作文，给出评分意见。如何吸引阅卷老师的注意呢？我认为，一个完整框架是必不可少的，首先应让阅卷老师觉得你的文章是结构完整合理、符合要求的。换言之，即具备英语文章的基本要素：引言段、扩展段和结尾段。引言段中要包含thesis statement（中心句），扩展段的每段均应有topic sentence（主题句），结尾段应该是一个自然收尾的段落。中文讲究意合，而英语注意形合，要求句与句、段与段之间运用恰当的过渡词，把上下文有机地连接起来。因此，应适当运用关键词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。
有些写作的大作文要求用160~200词写出一篇高质量的议论文，其形式有图示、漫画、情景等专门类型。近几年来则集中体现为灵活多变、隐含寓意的图示/漫画作文和具有学术分析特点的图表作文。这要求考生要精确设置构架，内容、例子紧扣主题，并且严谨地遣词造句。
满意请采纳谢谢

Ⅹ 急求好心人士帮写英语作文 高分在线等

If I was a high one of the students, I would get up at six o'clock, to do pre-school preparation. Then, I will certainly went to school at seven o'clock, 15 minutes a day reading the English, and then do a good job in class preparation.假如我是一名高一的学生，我六点钟就会起床，做上学前的准备。接着，我一定七点钟就到学校，每天读15分钟的英语，然后做好上课的准备。
Our class is eight o'clock in the political, language, mathematics, physics, chemistry, English, history and geography eight subjects, my favorite English and physics, therefore, these two subjects are particularly good.我们上课是八点钟，在政治，语文，数学，物理，化学，英语，历史和地理八门科目中，我最喜欢英语和物理，所以，这两科成绩特别好。
After school, I often play basketball or go to the library to read books。放学后我经常打篮球或到图书馆看书
Evening, I will review homework, because it would enhance academic homework. 10:00 I go to bed因为这样会提高学习成绩做作业。我十点睡觉 。

给你两篇吧：
I am a student in middle sinior high school and I am in grade one.Now , let me introce something about my school life to you.
I get up at 6a.m. everyday and get ready for school.Then I go to shcool at 7a.m.And then I do some English reading for about 15min and get ready for the first lesson.The class begins at 8:00.In fact, I do not mind what time do what at all.Of the subjucts,such as English,Chinese, History and so on,I love English and Physics best.The most exciting thing is that I can do some reading in the library after school.At night,I aways do my homework and have a retext.Then...I can go to my favorite-my bed at 10p.m.