『壹』 高考英语书面表达如何审题
高考英语书面表达写作指导-如何审题
审题是书面表达的第一步,也是关键一步。考生在真正开始写作之前,必须舍得花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备工作。只有审准了题,弄清了题目要求,才有可能写出好文章。具体说来,审题准确包含以下四个方面:
一、审体裁
根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁的文章,是记叙文、说明文、应用文,还是议论文等。无论提供材料的方式是通过文字描述还是图画或表格,但要求文章的体裁是唯一的。倘若体裁不对,评卷时原则上要从考生应得分数中扣掉7分。所以动笔之前,认真审题至关重要。
二、审格式
一定的体裁有其特有的格式,近年高考书面表达题中,应用文居多,应弄清应用文该用什么格式,是否有其固定的套语等。例如书信、日记、.通知(口头或书面)、便条等都有其特定的格式,不能随便写。其中书信最复杂,根据试题要求,要注意信的开头、称呼、主体、结尾、签名,这五个部分都要写全面,而且每个部分又各有要求,考生对这些都要有明确的认识。
三、审内容
要点齐全是得分的基本保证,漏掉要点就会被降低档次评分。要想书面表达得高分,内容全面和不跑题也是最基本的要求。所以考生在身体是还要弄清什么改写,什么不该写;那些该详写,那些该略写等。尤其是图画式书面表达题,考生应注意,不能把图中的所有内容都表达出来,要学会连贯性读懂图意,要分清哪些是主要内容,那些是次要内容。同时还要注意,有的内容是做暗示用的,有些上文出现的内容要与下文的内容相衔接,有些下文出现的内容需要在前面作铺垫。总之,所写内容既要符合图画所描绘的情景,又要连贯通顺,自圆其说。如写记叙文,要抓好“wh-” 问题,即时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)以及其它一些要素。
四、审人称
审人称即弄清书面表达要求用何种人称,用第一人称,第二人称,还是第三人称来写。高考书面表达阅卷中非常重视人称,出现人称错误要扣除相应的分数。其中有几年高考书面表达题的评分标准明确规定,用错人称从总分中扣7分。所以考生在审题时,千万不要忽略人称的正确使用。
五、审时态
审时态即根据所给材料信息确定短文的基本时态。一般说来,一篇特定的短文,它通常有自己特定的基本时态。如通知常用将来时态,日记常用过去时态,等等。另外,由于每一个句子都涉及时态问题,所以考生容易忽略这个问题,随便用错时态,则每个句子都会因时态用错而扣分(时态错误属于扣分较严重的错误)。具体地说,表示现在经常性的情况用一般现在时;表示过去发生的动作要用一般过去时;而当我们要强调一个过去发生的动作对现在的影响或一个过去发生的动作持续到现在时,则要用现在完成时,等等。这些都是时态方面的基本规则,考生每写一个句子,都要引起注意。
以下我们以NMET 2005年全国卷I、II书面表达为例,看一看如何审题。
原题:
假定你是李华,正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训,计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件,询问有关情况。
注意:1.词数100左右,信的格式已为你写好。
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:牛津——Oxford 费用——fee
Dear Sir/Madame,
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Yours,
Li Hua
审题:
首先,确定体裁。注意提示内容所给信息。本文是发给旅行社的一封电子邮件,询问有关去伦敦旅游的情况。电子邮件属于书信的一种,本文体裁是一片应用文。
其次,确定格式。既然是书信,就会有一定的固定格式和套语,原题中已给出书信的固定格式,考生须注意一些书信的套语。
第三,确定内容要点。通过图表所示信息,我们可以看到其要点包括:①开头;②是否有学生特价;③票价包含的项目;④是否有午餐;⑤返回时间;⑥是否有购物时间。
第四,确定人称。本文是一封电子邮件,且题干中有“假定你是李华”这样的提示,因此可以确定本文应使用第一人称写作。
第五,确定时态。本文是询问去伦敦旅游有关问题的书信,时态应基本使用一般现在时。
范文:
Dear Sir/Madame,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University , I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li hua
我们再看一个例子,以下是2004年高考北京卷书面表达情景作文试题:
原题:
某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查,结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动,并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数不少于60。
生词:图表chart
审题:
首先,确定体裁。注意提示内容所给信息。本文是一篇图表作文,根据图表所提供信息,表达个人观点。因此,本文体裁是说明文。
其次,确定格式。本文是图表作文,需要根据图表提供信息,表达个人观点。因此在格式上,应注意在文章开头清楚表明图表信息。
第三,确定内容要点。通过图表所示信息,我们可以看到其要点包括:①学生主要课余活动及时间;②学生各项主要活动所站课余时间比例;③做作业所需时间最长,所占课余时间比例最大;④其次为看电视;⑤做家务时间最短,所占课余时间比例最小;⑥体育锻炼、用电脑、听音乐所占比例基本在10%左右。
第四,确定人称。本文是一篇图表作文,根据表格表达个人观点。因此,可客观陈述表格内容,并在表达观点是使用第一人称写作。
第五,确定时态。本文是一篇图表作文,根据表格表达个人观点,属说明文。时态应使用一般现在时。
范文:
Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time-93 minutes-into their homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.
As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class. This way, they may be healthier and more energetic.
注意:由于书面表达写作时间有限,审题时间一般应控制在3~4分钟。
『贰』 高考英语书面表达题型及其范文
自己收集的。。。
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___话题______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and rece the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
图标作文
As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. In one hand, ____.In the other hand, _____ is e to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
书信作文模板
Your addressMonth, Date, yearReceiver's addressDear ...,
I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.
……
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,
话题作文
Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _. It is estimated that ___. Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
The first one is ______. Besides,_____. The third one is _____. To sum up, the main cause of it is e to _____. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing,_____. For another thing, _____. All these measures will certainly rece the number of _____.
对比观点作文
_____ is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say ____ is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ____. What is more,_____。Moreover,______.
While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,_____. Secondly (besides),______. Thirdly (finally),_____.
From my point of view, I think _____. The reason is that _____. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.
(1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1. 有一些人认为……
2. 另一些人认为……
3. 我的看法……
The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
(2) 给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二).
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).
阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.
1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.
2. 分析并举例使其更充实.
The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.
First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).
In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)
议论文的框架
(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and rece the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
( 3 ) 答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.
Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.
( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically )
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..
图表作文的框架
as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to
______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is e to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
实用性写作(申请信 )
Your address
Month, Date, year
Receiver's address
Dear ...,
I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in .... And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising.
.../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, .... On the other hand, .... I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.
I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours,
X X X
现象说明文
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.
There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.
what is more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.
Considering all there,________________________.For one thing_____________________,for another____________.In
Conclusion____________________.一种事物或现象(负面意义倾向)
『叁』 高考英语作文怎么拿分
要想在高考中拿高分,要注意以下几点:
(一)内容要点的完整性
内容要点要全,这是高考书面表达的首要要求。阅卷时,评分老师首先根据考生的内容要点初步确定考生作文的档次。缺少一个要点,往往要降低一个档次。也就意味着减少5分。所以书面表达要上档次,要点齐全是关键。要点提纲式书面表达以及表格式书面表达一般不会遗漏要点,而看图写话,和提示图、示意图之类的书面表达容易遗漏要点。所以考生一定要认真审题,仔细观察,合理想象,正确理解。保证不漏掉要点。
(二)语言表达的多样性
现在的《考试说明》评分标准强调使用语法结构的数量和复杂性,鼓励考生尽量使用较复杂的结构或词语,并且对由此所产生的错误采取了宽容态度。
所以学生在写作中即要使用简单句,也要学会使用结构复杂的复合句、并列句;要讲究措词,既要有普通词语,也要使用高级词汇。
(三)语言交际的得体性
培养跨文化交际能力是英语教学的终极目标。跨文化交际的过程既涉及语言的规约,也涉及文化的规约。交际错误因此也分为两种:一是语言错误,二是文化错误。现代外语教学观点认为文化错误往往比语言更严重。因为在与外国人的交往过程中,他们一般对语言错误持宽容态度,而对文化错误却常常耿耿于怀,因为它不合乎他们的交际规则。在其文化习俗上不可接受。在其价值体系上发生冲突。高考评分标准强调了语言交际的得体性,是适应了时代发展的需要。
一位同学给好友写信,信末用了这样一个句子:“I'd appreciate it if you wrote me an earlier reply.”。从语法上来看这是一个非常好的句子,但用在这里不得体。因为这是一个非常正式的结构,多用于对上级和陌生人,朋友之间是不宜使用这种口气的。如果使用I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon . 就好得多。
(四)语篇结构的连贯性
评分标准把衔接和连贯是作为核心标准来要求的。之所以如此强调衔接和连贯,是因为这是构成语篇的最基本的条件。语句间的连接成份是衡量衔接与连贯很重要的标准之一。构成语篇连接成份的过渡词语,被称为“篇章纽带”,其语篇衔接作用是不言而喻的,学生要学会正确恰当地使用这些表示逻辑关系的关联词语,使文章前后连贯,结构紧凑,过渡自然。如:表示顺序的:first, then, finally ;表示时间的:in the past ,now, at present, in the future;表示转折的:but, however; on the contrary, in the mean while, at the same time, instead ,unfortunately;表示递进的:What's more, besides, even;moreover 表示并列的:as well as ,both …and, neither…nor, either…or ,some…some…;表示因果关系的:so, therefore ;表示列举的:for example, for instance, such as ;表示总结的:in a word ,in all ,in short;表示对比的:on one hand, on the other hand, while ;表示程度的:first of all, above all, again and again等。
文章的结构也要体现内在的逻辑性,避免杂乱无章。可以按时间、空间、结构及逻辑顺序等依次地写,这样才能使文章环环相扣,上下衔接,层次清晰,逻辑分明,达到形式和内容的完整统一。
『肆』 高考英语书面表达 求助信的写作技巧
It is my pleasure to recommend Li Ming, my good friend, for his application to work in your company. Li Ming graated from Beijing Instry University. His major is Computer Software. During the four years'study he has done a good job. Every year he got the first grade scholarship. And he also has got the title of the Excellent Graate.
He is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with high potentiality. He is not only quick at learning but also good at solving difficult problems with logical mind. I am sure that it will benefit your company if he can work for your company. I strongly recommend him to your company.
『伍』 高考英语书面表达题型
提纲式作文
提纲类写作可分为提纲要点式和提纲表格式两种。命题者把材料分割成信息块,提纲要点式就是将信息块用文字条目的形式表示出来,提纲表格式则是将信息置于表格之中。
经典范例:
1.提纲要点式(2006天津卷)
假设你是李华,在出国交流学习期间,到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影,但在观影过程中发现了一些问题。请你根据下列提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。
1.因广告过多,影片放映晚点;2.影片播放音量过大;3.安全出口标识不明,存在安全隐患;4.适当结尾。
注意:1.词数:80-120;2.可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头已为你写好(不计入词数)。
参考词汇:安全出口-exit 安全隐患-potential safety hazard
Dear Manager,
I'm an exchange student from China.Yesterday,I went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but_____.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
2.提纲表格式(2006陕西卷)
暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划,提出了不同看法,请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文,并谈谈你的看法。
注意:1.短文写在答题卡上的指定区域,词数80-120(不含已写好部分)。2.短文必须包括表中所列要点,可根据内容分段表述。3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。4.参考词汇:眼界-horizon(或view)
解析:这类题型的主要特点是:要点明确,范围具体,贴近生活,易于动笔。此类试题中有较多的文字说明,实际上规定了考生表述的思路,对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定,试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避。由于这一类试题包括较多的文字说明,容易改变书面表达的性质。考生极易受中文提纲的制约,将书面表达变成了翻译,造成语法结构和语汇上的单调。提纲类书面表达在体裁上,一般以说明文和议论文为主,要求考生根据提纲说明某种情况或辩论某种观点。提纲类书面表达有时也可能是记叙文。
答题策略:
1.对于这类试题的处理,考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,把握准情景和要求,使表达的内容不走题;
2.根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料,
3.考生可以充分发挥自己的思维想像力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将试题要求的要点完整地表述出来,力求准确,简洁,礼貌,规范。最后,进行合理的总结。
-图画式作文
近几年来,看图作文在高考书面表达中占有相当大的比例。它是一种检查学生观察理解能力及运用语言能力的题型。它不仅考查考生对图形的观察力和想像力,而且也考查考生的分析,概括和组织材料的能力。想象空间大,因此难度也大。
经典范例:(2006辽宁卷)
下面四幅图片描述的是李明和爷爷从养鸟到放鸟的一段经历。请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称用英语写一篇短文。注意:①短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容,短文的内容要连贯、完整;②短文单词数:100左右(开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数)。
解析:这类题型的主要特点是:形象,直观,内容具体,且在图画的前面一般还有文字说明,题材仍以贴近现实生活为主,因此考生一般都有话可写,且不会走题。此类题型的体裁比较广泛,可以是记叙文,将图画中所表达的信息完整地记录下来;也可以是说明文,根据图画从时间,过程,步骤等方面对之加以解释,说明;还可以是议论文,针对图画中所表现出来的一般现象,加以议论,得出结论,提出解决问题的最佳办法。
答题策略:
1.针对此类题型,考生应仔细阅读图画及文字说明,首先应确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文或说明文为主。
记叙文:要抓住记叙文的六要素:时间(when),地点(where),人物(who),事件(what),原因(why)和过程(how)。即:五个“W”和一个“H”。
说明文:一般先要把图画联系起来,弄清楚图画的目的,意图;然后进行抽象概括,找出一个说明对象,接着根据图画从时间,过程,步骤等方面加以解释,说明;最后进行总结,得出结论。对事物进行说明时,一定要做到条理清楚,明了易懂。
议论文:议论文的写作要点是:a.观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。b.层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。c.最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。d.一般采用一般现在时。e.语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
2.确定人称。如果以日记,回忆录等形式来写,一般采用第一人称;如果是以讲故事的形式来写,则一般采用第三人称来写比较方便。但不管用哪种人称,全文都必须一致。
3.确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁,确定文章所要用的时态。切记全文时态的一致性。
4.发挥联想要合理,适度。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生做适度的联想和发挥,以便使上下文能更好的连贯起来。但联想和发挥一定要根据图画做到合情合理,不能过多地胡乱联想和发挥。
5.虚实结合,详略得当。对于图画中的内容,该详细叙述描写的,就必须要详细,具体;可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。比如图画中所有的时间,数字或言论须一词不漏地写清楚,而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。
-图表式作文
图表类书面表达在近年的高考中时有出现,,主要是一些关于生产,销售,发展进程等各种项目统计的示意图。这类统计图在日常生活中应用得非常广泛,因此,这类题能很好地与生活结合起来,具有很强的实际意义。
某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查,结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动,并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数不少于60。生词:图表chart
解析:图表式书面表达常以曲线图形式,流程图形式,柱星图形式,饼式图形式,数据表格形式及平面图解形式出现。这类题型具有文字少,信息少,要点分散等特征。我们在写作时只有在看懂图示的基础上才能动笔写。如果不能全部领会图表信息,写作中就会出现遗漏信息,分析不准确等一系列问题。
从图表作文的内容和要求来看,主要是介绍或说明某方面的情况,文体上属于说明文。因此,考生应按照说明文的形式和特点来进行写作。
答题策略:
1.对于这类题型的书面表达,考生首先要根据图表前的文字说明,弄清楚图表的性质;2.仔细阅读图表,了解图表的内容;3.研究图表所显示出来的规律,要对图表里面的内容进行抽象概括,在掌握全部信息的基础上,着手分析这些信息或数据。通过分析与对比,抓住问题,便可以开拓思路,构思文章的布局,段落的划分及上下文的连贯等。段落的划分可根据内容而定。一般第一段应对图表做一简要的概述,点出所要涉及的问题;中间段落应对图表的重要问题进行分析;结尾段对全文做一小结。(作者:刘春英)
『陆』 高考考英语二有写作吧
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十日背下作文模板,胜过考前百日苦练! 目录
第一章 高考书面表达考点透析
第一节 解读新课标对写作的分级要求
第二节 解读新课标高考书面表达评价标准
第三节 高分作文的测试要点、方式和要素
第四节 阅卷教师的厌倦点和兴奋点
第五节 考生的主要失分点
第六节 近十年高考书面表达一览表
第二章 高考十句作文法及写作技巧
第一节 十句作文法的两大原则
第二节 十句作文法的特点
第三节 十句作文法基本步骤
第四节 十句作文法的写作技巧
第三章 经典十句作文模板
第一节 五大类文章的十句作文模板
第二节 四大类题型的十句作文模板
第四章 十句作文模板演练高考真题
第一节 图画作文
第二节 图表作文
第三节 提纲作文
第四节 开放作文
第五章 十句作文模板演练名师预测题
附录Ⅰ 句型多变和必备句型
附录Ⅱ 高考书面表达常用谚语、名言
附录Ⅲ 高考书面表达常用标点符号
附录Ⅳ 高考书面表达的书写规则
内容简介
书面表达在高考英语试题中占25分,是试卷总分的六分之一,书面表达的成绩一定程度上影响到高考英语的成败。
从平常英语考试和高考阅卷来看,很多考生的英语书面表达得分让人大跌眼镜,往往看起来写了一大堆东西,到头来却只得了七八分,令人惨不忍睹!究其原因,一方面是他们缺少对英语书面表达的正规训练,缺少英语书面表达写作的基本技能,以至于写出来的英语作文没有章法,错误百出。另一方面,多数英语老师在平常的英语教学中对英语书面表达的训练重视程度不够,没有像练习听力和阅读那样给学生安排更多的训练,这也是一个很重要的原因。即使偶尔练几次,也缺乏应有的指导,书面表达的作业批改是一项繁重的劳动,老师们往往很难持之以恒地去指导学生练习书面表达。这些都导致了考生的英语写作水平整体偏低。
考生和老师都迫切希望有一种简便、有效的方法来解决作文训练中存在的这些问题。英语书面表达到底有没有捷径或者是技巧?实际上,相对于听力、词汇、阅读等其他要花相当长时间积累才能取得进步的项目,书面表达的考分却是可以在短时间内得以提升的,这正是《星火英语高考专项突破·书面表达》要帮助我们实现的。“十句作文法”是编者根据多年的教学实践独创的写作技法,简单易学,科学实用。它以模板学习来代替旷日持久的按词汇、语法、句法、篇章的顺序来进行的训练,省时省力,效果显著。需要指出的是,所谓“十句作文法”并非指一定要十句,而是指一个相对准确的数字。但我们同时也看到,历年来的高考书面表达范文,基本上都是十个句子左右,这说明
十个句子确实可以表达清楚、完整。一句话:十句就能搞定高考英语作文!
本书共分五章。第一章对高考考点进行透析,明确考查的重点。第二章透彻分析高考十句作文法的基本步骤及写作技巧,为考生提供高考书面表达的制胜法宝。第三章直接提供清晰的分类写作模板,这些模板均为编者在长期的高三教学实践中总结归纳出来的,极具实战性;模板易于模仿,勤加练习,定会使考生的写作水平得到快速提高;选材均为高考常考题材,极具仿真性;材料新颖,不落窠臼,文体及选材丰富,完全覆盖高考常考内容。第四章结合高考真题进行模板演练。第五章则以模板为基础,结合编者多年实践对高考书面表达进行了预测。考生按照本书的写作方法去演练,定会起到事半功倍的效果,定能成为英语作文的高手!
本书附录部分提供了丰富的写作句型及素材,可作为模板的有益补充,时间充裕的考生可以对这部分进行学习,可使您的作文锦上添花。
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