『壹』 如何写开放性的英语作文
在学习英语必修一抄Unit 2 的Writing时,我袭给学生布置的作业是以Why should we …?为题制作一个英语海报,并借这次作业进行一次英语海报制作比赛,对优秀作品进行了奖励和展览。先给学生讲清楚制作海报的格式,即上方中间写海报的Title,中间位置列举5-6条Reasons,下面写一句话作为Conclusion。学生们积极性很高,精心制作,制作出的海报内容丰富多彩,并绘制有精美的图案,学生们在快乐地手工制作中既提高了英语书面表达能力,又提高了学习英语的兴趣。上学期在自己所带的高二二班进行了一次英语手抄报制作比赛,让学生以学习小组为单位,小组成员各自发挥所长,协同合作,兴致勃勃地制作出了一份份图文并茂的英文手抄报,通过评比对优秀作品进行了奖励与展览。我还结合各种节日,让学生自制各种贺卡。如本学期5月份,让学生自制母亲节贺卡,用英文表达对母亲的感恩之情和节日祝贺。通过用英语完成各种形式的手工制作作业,使学生把学到的英语知识运用到生活实践当中,使学生在快乐实践中既提高了语言运用能力,又激发了学习英语的兴趣。
『贰』 开放式英语作文 求助
I Should Thank my dear friends~
thank you for encouraging me ~recently it was a hard time for me ~and i feel disappointed these days ~but the situtation does not change~finally i realize that if i want to change~i should change myself first~and i think it's the right time ~~ life is going on ,and i have to move on~~all in one word~thank you, my friends~~applause ,applause for me ~~
Now standing in front of you is an optimistic and confident girl, but no more than half a year ago, things were quite the opposite. I was recommended for admission to Fudan University, so my parents sent me to study with undergraates. I really had a hard time fitting in. Since it was the first time for me to live in a dormitory, and all the students around me are two or three years older. Worst of all, I couldn't get use to the food there. I kept complaining to my father on the phone, hoping to get some comfort. To my surprise, he said to me:" Stop complaining, my dear. You are so lucky. You don't have to take part in the college entrance examination, so you can manage your time freely. The difficulties you have now will make you braver. Just remember: gratitude is the right attitude everyday." After my father told me the last few words, I realized how I should lead my life. That is to take a grateful attitude towards my family, my friends, the people who helped me, and even the difficulties I had. I should thank my family for taking care of me, and always being there to support me. I should thank my friends for sharing good times and bad with me. I should never miss a chance to smile and say "thank you" to others. I should also thank the difficulties I have, because by overcoming them, I will improve a lot.
I tried to communicate more with the people around me, and find that they were all kind and friendly. Now we have a wonderful time together. This experience taught me how to make friends, and how to be independent. Life becomes much easier for me now. Everyday I take some spare time to meditate, and to appreciate all I have.
My living principle is: "Gratitude is the right attitude." What about yours?
Thank you!
『叁』 高考英语作文中开放式作文怎么答
北京卷自从2008年往后比较固定,让你从图画里面摸索一些道理出来,拿这个道理来写一篇相对内简单的容英文的议论文。 首先做到这个题目时,应该是考试接近尾声的时候,所以请考生在这个题目上,务必以保险为主,不要标新立异去追求一些别人根本都想不到的观点。 因为开放式作文,考生题目的角度是自拟的,但是为了保险完成这篇文章,让考试顺利完成。请考生切记不要把开放式作文的图画和社会问题扯上关系,你要说的一定是和个人生活方面有关的一些问题,个人生活方面,基本上重点强调素质、能力。 这幅图画里面要不然反应的一个和素质有关的问题,要不然反应的就是能力有关的问题。命题者不希望你在很短的时间内,用英文发表一篇对于社会问题这样 有关系,我觉得这些都是考试的重点。 另外一个方面这个题目的写作要求比较直接,你在图画里面一定能看到一个对比关系。要求考生把对比关系抓出来写清楚。
『肆』 怎样提高英语写作能力.特别是开放性作文
我深以为然。其实对于英文写作训练也是如此,失恋可遇而不可求,阅读和模仿却是每个人都能做到的。写作能力的提升一定离不开大量的阅读和模仿(写作练习)。在英文听说读写四项基本技能里面,写作是最难掌握和精进的一项。它也是一个人综合英语能力的体现,通常来说,写作水平高的人,其他听说读三项的水平也不会低。
严格来讲,我们所说的写作其实可以分为Creative Writing 和Academic Writing 两种,Creative Writing 会偏文学类一点,应用会相对少一些,而Academic Writing 则几乎是所有英语学习者都必需用到的技能,比如从四六级到托福雅思的考试作文,学术论文,日常邮件,陈述讲稿等,我们接下来要说的也是Academic Writing 这一类型的写作。
对于英文写作提升,我们要解决的有两个主要问题:阅读和模仿。
先说阅读。
一个现实情况是,有不少人虽然学了好几年英语,但学习过的资料大部分是为了应付考试,比如四六级的词汇书、作文书,或者各种习题资料,终归没脱离开考试的范围,除此之外读过的原版书几乎一个手指头都能数得过来了。如果没有足够的素材储备,他们写出来的作文可能会是这样的:
Nowadays,with the rapid development of society, purpose of ecation being changed.There are some people who think that competition in children should be made .Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate as well as become more useful alts.There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.
To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They can develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the competition.To prove this, in my country it is popular and common to have a tutor who come to students' house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. ...
上面的这两段是我从一篇学生习作中选的,其文风和错误应该都非常典型:生硬套用作文模板,中式英语,语法错误,内容空泛...造成这种问题的一个主要原因就是读英语读得太少了,脑子里几乎没有什么地道的英文储备,写出来的东西也不会高明到那里去。
因此,提高英文写作水平的第一步是:大量阅读,阅读是一个量变引发质变的过程,在你读到一定量的时候,可能会在某一瞬间突然发现虚拟语气原来是这种感觉,动词搭配原来是这么回事...当你提笔写作的时候,你会在脑海里重现类似的例句。新手可以从泛读开始,选择一些生词较少,内容简短且情节精彩的小说,慢慢培养阅读的习惯,有条件的可以去买个kindle, 阅读体验会更好。大量的阅读会带来词汇量的提升,通过阅读积累的词汇理解最为深刻,记忆效果也最好,最容易转化为积极词汇从而应用到写作中去。
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在泛读的同时还要注意一点:强化语法。语法有多重要?举个例子,现在分词过去分词及各种从句的灵活运用,主动被动的转换,虚拟语气表达的特殊感情,这些都是写作的基本技巧。语法不好,写作水平也不会高到哪里去,具体表现为通篇语病,只会用简单句型,不会写漂亮的长短句,偶尔憋出个长句还是错的。不会运用高级语法,比如独立主格,虚拟语气等,句式的多样性和表达的灵活性受到很大的影响。因此我们有必要强化一下语法。基本思路是先通读一两本语法书,建立起基本的语法框架,然后通过大量的阅读和听力练习不断巩固完善语法。目前市面上的语法书非常多,但内容其实都大同小异,挑选好一两本认真啃下去就是,推荐《赖世雄语法》 或者剑桥的语法在用系列。
写作进阶:品经济学人,习上乘佳作
在大量阅读,强化语法的基础上,相信你现在写作时已经能够做到少犯或不犯语法错误,写出来的英文还算凑合了,这个时候如果需要进一步提高文笔应该怎么做?可以采用精读经济学人以及使用英英词典和搭配词典的方法。以Academic Writing 为例,一篇漂亮的文章至少要做到以下几点:句式丰富多变,长短句灵活应用,用词准确出彩,论点丰富,论证有力,逻辑严谨。而经济学人就满足这种“漂亮”文章的标准,是非常好的阅读和模仿素材。好的文章是模仿出来的,要学会模仿阅读时遇到的优美的词汇用法、句型结构、巧妙的比喻、幽默的风格等等,慢慢化为自己的熟练表达。
比如很多人习作中出现的一个问题是句式单一,用词平庸。我们可以学习一下经济学人文章的写法,增加语言的张力。举个例子,下面的这一段节选自上周的经济学人文章 The enemy within:
EMPLOYEES are often said to be a company’s biggest resource. It is equally true that they are its biggest liability.Scarcely a week goes by without a company falling victim to employees-turned-enemies-or-embarrassments. On July 20th Ashley Madison, a website for married people looking to have an affair, announced that it had been hacked. Noel Biderman, the company’s chief executive, says that he thinks the attack was “an inside job”. On July 6th HSBC fired a group of employees when it emerged that they had filmed themselves engaged inan “ISIS-style mock beheading” of an Asian colleague dressed in an orange jumpsuit.
The most familiar type of enemy within is the fraudster. The Economist Intelligence Unit, a sister organisation of The Economist, concts a regular poll of senior executives on the subject of fraud committed by insiders. In 2013 the poll discovered that about 70% of companies had suffered from at least one instance of fraud, up from 61% in the previous survey. Fraud is often petty: a survey of British employees for YouGov in 2010 found that a quarter of staff eligible for expenses admitted to inflating claims. But fraud can also be more audacious and more harmful: think of former employees setting up rivals using stolen technology and purloined client lists.
从上面的文章中我们可以学到什么?
4个写作时可以用上的句式:
1....are often said to...it is equally true that...
2.Scarcely a week/month/year goes by without...
3....when it emerged that...
4.discovered that about 70% ...up from 61%...
10个词汇和短语:
1.liability
2.fall victim to
3.have an affair
4.behead
5.fraudster
6.eligible for
7.inflate (to make a number or price higher than it should be)
8.audacious
9.set up
10.purloin
这仅仅是两小段而已,整篇文章能学到的东西更多。你可以有意识地将上面学到的单词和句式应用到你的写作中去,比如第一个句型"...are often said to...it is equally true that..."可以用来说明事物具有两面性,这个句式不知道比那句蹩脚的 "there are advantages and disadvantages..." 要高到哪里去了。
送个福利给大家吧,我用kindle看经济学人的过程中碰到好的句型以及值得注意的词汇短语会把它们都做上标记,到目前为止已经积累了1000多条笔记了。我打算把它们共享出来。这1000多条笔记里既有像 "That so many people in so many different parts of the world are prepared to risk so much for this idea is testimony to its enring appeal." 这样读起来铿锵有力的长句,也有像"Their likes and dislikes make or break procts." 这样短小精悍,用词惊艳的短句。没事把这些句子读一读,学习其中的好词好句,并将它们运用到写作中去,相信你会有很大的收获。(笔记下载链接在文末)
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写作中容易出现的另外一个问题是:文章空洞无物,整篇文章翻来覆去都是在表达同一个意思,而且论证不够有力,缺乏逻辑性,这样的文章即使辞藻再华丽也是没有灵魂的。怎样让文章有内容有灵魂?看看经济学人是怎么做的:
经济学人的文章除了出色的语言表达技巧之外,最大的亮点其实它能够提出一套解决方案。怎么理解?举个例子,比如美国发生了严重的枪击案,其他的报刊一般这样报道:美国又发生枪击案了,这次又造成了多少伤亡,凶手是什么什么背景,末了可能还会吐槽下枪支制度不合理,发几张照片煽煽情。
如果换做是经济学人的话,它除了报道基本新闻事实之外还会提出一个解决方案:大家别忙着悲伤了,冷静一下,既然现在已经发生枪击案了,为了防止悲剧再次发生,我们需要 a.修改枪支管理法律 b.个人要加强枪支安全意识 c.回收部分管制枪支 d...... 有理有据地跟你摆事实,讲道理。而我们要学习的就是经济学人对新闻事件的解读分析思路,关注从新闻推断事物的逻辑过程,从而提高在写作时发散论点的能力以及论证的力度。
The weaker sex 这篇文章就很好地体现了从发现问题到提出解决方案的过程。文章的背景是富裕国家男孩的表现正在落后于女孩。我们来看看经济学人是怎样分析问题提出解决方案的:
1. What can be done? Part of the solution lies in a change in cultural attitudes. 解决方案1
2. Policymakers also need to lend a hand, because foolish laws are making the problem worse. 解决方案2
3. Even more important than scrapping foolish policies is retooling the ecational system, which was designed in an age when most men worked with their muscles. 解决方案3
4. More generally, schools need to become more boy-friendly. 解决方案4
四个段落总起句提出了四种解决方案,并在每一段详细展开,论点发散充分,论证过程也非常有力度,整个解决问题的思路非常清晰。写作的时候多体会这种发现问题-解决问题的思路,像经济学人一样去论证你的观点。
『伍』 开放式英语作文
Personally, I think it is necessary for students to take occasional examinations. They can tell us how much the students have learned and what their strong points and what their weak points are in their study progress. Therefore, proper exams are useful to the students’ further studies. At the same time, they are also helpful to the teachers. The teachers can get to know clearly what their students’ problems are. Then they can get to change their teaching plans and improve their teaching methods so as to help their students study. However, if there are too many examinations, they will do more harm than good to the students. The examinations will become a heavy burden on the students. Sooner or later the students will get tired of them and lose interest in studying. In a word, examinations are necessary, but too many are not good. Therefore we should rece unnecessary examinations.
『陆』 一道大学开放性英语作文思路,急!在线等,有追加分: I wish I knew....
你怎么天天都要写作文呢~~
如果我以前学会了做中国菜~~那该多好啊~~
身在异国他乡十分想念中国的食物。
在味道上,中国食物是世界上数一数二的~~
要是我以前学过做中国菜,我就可以经常做给自己吃,以聊介自己的思乡之情~~
还可以展示给外国朋友~~~
.......
i wish i knew how to cook Chinese food. as a student in a foreign country, i do really miss Chinese food.
In taste, Chinese food is the world's best.
If I had learned some Chinese food, I can often do it myself to relief my homesick~ ~and can show to foreign friends ~ ~ ~
。。。。。。
额~~~在中国的话。。。
那就虚伪一点:要是我早知道低碳生活的概念,该有多好呀~~~
然后谈四大点~~
环境会更好~没有污染的困扰~资源不会被浪费~人与动物和谐相处~
I wish I knew the concept of low carbon lifesytle.
our environment would be better~~
we human beings would't be confused with pollution all over the would.
resources would not be wasted ~
man and animals stay in harmony ~
再自己扩展一下~~
『柒』 高考英语作文中开放式作文怎么答
北京卷自从2008年往后比较固定,让你从图画里面摸索一些道理出来,拿这个道理版来写一篇相对简单的英文的议权论文。
首先做到这个题目时,应该是考试接近尾声的时候,所以请考生在这个题目上,务必以保险为主,不要标新立异去追求一些别人根本都想不到的观点。
因为开放式作文,考生题目的角度是自拟的,但是为了保险完成这篇文章,让考试顺利完成。请考生切记不要把开放式作文的图画和社会问题扯上关系,你要说的一定是和个人生活方面有关的一些问题,个人生活方面,基本上重点强调素质、能力。
这幅图画里面要不然反应的一个和素质有关的问题,要不然反应的就是能力有关的问题。命题者不希望你在很短的时间内,用英文发表一篇对于社会问题这样
有关系,我觉得这些都是考试的重点。
另外一个方面这个题目的写作要求比较直接,你在图画里面一定能看到一个对比关系。要求考生把对比关系抓出来写清楚。
『捌』 写英语作文有哪些技巧
许多人把写英语作文当作英语考试中最头痛的一件事,因为英语作文的分数像是定型了一样总是提不上去.我以前也有这个迷茫,在高一和高二时,满分30分的英语作文,每次总是徘徊在20左右,提不上去.可是进入高三后,我用了另一种特殊的写作手法,使得我的英语作文水平提高了将近5分,也就是说,我每次总能把英语作文的分数保持在25分左右,最低也不会低于23分,而且这方法是屡试不爽.在今年的高考中,虽然其他几门课我考的不怎么样,但是我的英语还是过得去的,我想在这看这篇文章的今年应该没有英语考到139的吧,实话说吧,今年的英语作文我得了23分,这是我有史以来,英语得的最低分,但据我所知,今年英语作文分数普遍偏低,一般都只有10多分,上20的都没几个,我这个英语作文分数应该很过得去了.这也暗示着我写英语作文的成功之处,呵呵. 写英语作文,当然基本功很重要,好的英语作文中肯定必不可少的得有长句和复合句,这只能靠自己大家平时自己的练习,我帮不上忙.但是,有些同学可能会发现,有时候即使句子写得很好,但分数最多也只有21,2分,还是不够高.其实,说到底,是因为你的英语作文中缺少闪光点,句子写得很好,但是嚼之无味,很难把作文提上去.说实话,我的作文中也没有多么复杂的句子,句子可能比一般得21分的同学还要简单,但是每次我分数都不会太低,现在细细想来,可能是我的闪光点起了作用吧. 至于如何创造闪光点嘛,嘿嘿,就是我接下来要讲的重点啦.首先我给大家介绍一些段首的万能公式,你在每次写作时100%能派上用场. 段首万能公式一:名人名言.嘿嘿,有些人肯定会说啦,我又没有这个闲工夫去记住名人名言.说得好,我们确实没这个闲工夫.但是,我有一妙计,嘿嘿,去编!名人名言不也是名人自己造出来的么,所以只要你造的句子读起来有滋有味,你就是那个名人!而且没准将来我们自己就会成为一个大大的名人呢!有这样一些经典句型可供你参考:A proverb once said,"."在引号里加上你自己认为很有哲理的句子.或者:it goes without saying that.../as everyone knows,no one can deny that...我想更多的人可能倾向于用后面两句,因为这两句字数多嘛,呵呵. 段首万能公式二:用数据.要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明问题.原则上在议论文中不应该出现虚假数字,可是在考试时鬼才晓得你的数字到底真不真实了,反正能够使字数增多就行了,比如说我们可以用这个:according to a recent survey,about 78% of the students wanted to futher their study after their graation. 刚才我讲了用名人名言,现在想起来还有一点遗漏之处,有些人可能不太会编,太老实.在这里,我给大家总结出一些名人名言,不出意外,在考试时肯定能够派上用场,下面就是英语写作时必备的英语成语啦. 1.practice makes perfect--熟能生巧 2.god helps those who help themselves--天助自助者 3.easier said than done--说起来容易做起来难 4.where there is a will,there is a way--有志者事竟成 5.one false step will make a great difference--失之毫厘,谬以千里 6.slow and steady wins the race--稳扎稳打无往不胜 7.a fall into the pit,a gain in your wit--吃一堑,长一智 8.experience is the mother of wisdom--实践出真知 9.all work and no play makes jack a ll boy--只工作不休息,聪明孩子会变傻 10.beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance--无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰,图有其表 11.more hasty,less speed--欲速则不达 12.it's never too old to learn--活到老,学到老 13.all that glitters is not gold--闪光的未必都是金子 14.a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step--千里之行始于足下 15.look before you leap--三思而后行 16.Rome was not built in a day--伟业非一日之功 17.great minds
『玖』 英语作文的写作方法及技巧
您好!
一般应做到
内容切题:不能走题、偏题
表达清楚:要让别人知道你想说什么,不要用你认为能看懂的汉语式英文句子
意义连贯:中英文化差异造成思维方式和文字表述方式的不同,英文表述更注重事实,所以写英语作文不要过多的进行心理、环境描写,120个字的作文结构要缜密,理由和例子要简洁有力,说明问题,不要东拉西扯。
句法多变:为避免文章平淡、呆板,可使用不同的句式:强调句、倒装句、否定句等等
语言正确:不要犯低级的语法错误
英语作文其实不难,如果你的英语底子不好,不太擅长使用比较复杂的语法,词汇量也比较有限的话。建议用最简单的句子表达意思,句式越简单越好,能表达意思就好,一些生辟的单词如果不会不需要直译,可以用些词组。能表达意思就好,如果不会用用多了反而容易出错,平时作业时可以慢慢积累,可以试着用些当作练习,考试时就不必了,原因就不多说了。我觉得要写好英语作文还是平时多积累些,加上一些练习,比如平时可以多看些英语美文,如果有时间也可以刻意记些,时间长了语感自然就出来了,考试时有可能不知不觉的就闪出了平时的记忆。
多用连接词!
递进型:besides
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words转折型:however;but;yet;otherwise列举型:for
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祝您成功
『拾』 如何写开放性的英语作文
这些都是很简单抄的题目啊袭!主要是范围可以很广所以感觉无从下笔是吧?!呵呵!语法问题的话。。。还是要多学习啊!
My hobbies这类的题目就要靠你平时生活中的积累咯,你可以重点写一两个爱好,略写其他的啊!
An experience关于自己的经历这类题目的话,一个是平时积累,一个是你从这次经历中能学到什么东西,这才是这个题目的意义。
The best special news这个就不要写过时的东西啦,多写点时下流行的东西啊,比如说新科技啊,新药物啊等等。
总之如果题目的范围很广的话,就从自己身边的熟悉的东西开始写,这样有话可写,也不至于把事实写错。呵呵!