1. 能提供一些高考英语写作的好的句子吗
1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.
在这个迅速发展的世界里,对每个人来说,学好英语是非常重要的。
同样句型包括:It is important/(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible)for sb. to do sth.
2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.
你工作越努力,你取得的进步就越大。
(1)The+比较级..., the+比较级...
(2)比较级+and+比较级(The world is getting smaller and smaller.)
3. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献,世界会变得更加美好。
类似的句型还有:If necessary…, they can…
4. The best way to remember new words is to practice them everyday.
记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。
5. The atmosphere in my family is fantastic.
我的家庭气氛温馨和睦。
6. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.
人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。
7. I had a great first impression of American people.
我对美国人民有了很好的第一印象。
8. We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.
我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。
9. With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.
随着现代科技的迅速发展,互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。
10. You should read as many books as you possibly can.
大家应该尽可能的多读书。
11. China is becoming more and more prosperous because of the reform and “opening up” policy.
由于实施了改革开放政策,中国变得更加繁荣了。
12. We all need clean air to breathe; we all need clean water to drink; we all need green places to enjoy.
我们都需要呼吸清新的空气,我们都需要饮用洁净的水,我们都需要绿地来享受。
13. Let's work together to make our world a better place.
让我们一起努力把世界变得更加美好。
14. We should make full use of our time to do useful and proctive things.
我们应该充分利用好时间去做有用的、富有成效的事。
15. We should get into the good habit of using our time wisely.
我们应该养成一个好习惯,明智地利用时间。
16. What I really want to know is whether he will go abroad next month.
我的确想知道的是,他是否会在下个月出国。
17. Television is harmful to developing minds.
电视不利于开发心智。
18. Children usually have far more potential than their parents had realized
孩子们都有很大的潜能,而父母却没有意识到这一点。
19. In the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in our school.
在过去的10年里,我们学校发生了巨大的变化。
20. People who spend more time with their families are usually healthier and happier.
那些花更多时间和家人在一起的人通常会更健康更幸福。
21. The job was hard, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.
这份工作太辛苦,差点使我半途而废。
(1)直接使用:so… that…
The job was hard, boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.
这份工作太辛苦、太无聊,而且没完没了,这使我非常累,差点半途而废。
(2)能够增加句子层次的高级连词还有:
(Not only …but also…)、(Because…)、(because of…)、(As long as…)、(so long as…)
22. The Red Star Television Factory, which proces TV sets of quality, was set up in th
e 1980's.
生产高品质电视的红星电视机厂,始建于1980年。
23. The E-reading room, where we can send e-mails to all parts of the world, is open to both teachers and students.
我们可以向世界每个地方发电子邮件的电子阅览室,对老师和同学都同样开放。
24. I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your company.
我感觉我会是你们公司所需要的人。
25. The number of workers and engineers has risen(更高级词汇:increased) to over 2000, and 80% of them are college graates.
工人和工程师的数量已超过了2000人,而且他们有80%都是大学学历。
26. There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus.
在校园内,学生拥有手机的趋势在不断增长。
27. Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling.
现今,在农村地区还有很多孩子失学。我认为原因之一就是他们的家庭太贫困,而无法供应他们上学。
28. People should pay more attention to the ecation of children because they will play a very significant /(important) part/(role) in the future of our country.
人们应该增加对儿童教育的重视,因为他们会在祖国的未来扮演重要的角色。
29. In 2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden, with cleaner water and clearer sky.
到2008年,我们会看到北京像花园一样,有着更加清澈的河水和碧透的天空。
30. How nice to hear from you again.
能再次收到你的来信真是太好了。
31. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
敬盼早日回复。
I'm looking forward to meeting you in no time.
我期待与你早日相见。
32. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.
如果你有什么问题和请求只管跟我说。
33. No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.
不管你将来做什么,英语都是最重要的。
34. Nothing is more important than to receive ecation.
没有什么比接受教育更重要的事了。
35. There is no doubt that playing video game is going to be their biggest problem for students to affect study.
毫无疑问,玩电子游戏正在成为影响学生学习的最大问题。
36. Obviously, it is high/(about) time that we took some effective measures to solve the problem.
显然,早该采取一些积极的措施来解决问题。
写作高手使用的高难度表达:
I suggest the department concerned taking some effective measures to improve the present situation.
我建议有关部门采取一些有效措施改善现状。
37. Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中,他一直很用功。
38. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
39. Smoking has a great influence on our health.
吸烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
40. As a proverb says, /( As is well known to us,) storms make trees take deeper roots.
有句名言说道:风暴使树木深深扎根。
41. It is a great honor for me to introce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.
很荣幸给你介绍我的一位好朋友,刘翔。
42. Coming from a family of English teachers, she always had a particular interest in English.
出于英语教师世家的她,对英语有着特别的兴趣。
描写人物性格的高级得分词汇如下:
diligent 勤奋的 energetic精力充沛的 humorous幽默的 attractive有吸引力的
modest谦虚的 optimistic乐观的 talkative健谈的enthusiastic热情的
43. I have fully realized that English is essential to my future.
我充分认识到英语对我的未来是多么的重要。
44. I suppose electronic dictionaries are convenient, but Iead to laziness!
我觉得电子字典很方便,但会使人们变懒。
45. In conclusion, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages.
总之,出国留学的优点要大于它的缺点。
46. Now, I think it is really successful experience, and I totally understand what labor means.
现在,我想这真是一次成功的经历,并且我完全理解了劳动的意义。
47. From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.
通过这次的地震,我认识到了群众的力量是无穷的。
高级名言谚语活学活用。
解释:“群众的力量是无穷的”这句名言是我们自己造的,极具威力,然后再安在毛主席的头上,更显力量。最后为了增加真实性加上时间和地点,使判卷老师误以为真,根本不敢怀疑。于是,心想:“这个句子太棒了,我都没听说过!”
造句:In 1951 Chairman Mao said in Nan Jing that the power of the mass is endless.
48. If you have spare time to visit my hometown, I'd be more than happy to be your guide.
如果你有空闲时间我的家乡做客,我会非常乐意做你的导游。
49. Nowadays, both teachers and parents worry a great deal about students' using the Internet.
如今,老师和家长都对学生上网现象极为担心。
50. Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.
对于该问题的看法因人而异。
51. We are blessed with new opportunities and faced with new challenges.
我们被赋予新的机会和面临着新的挑战。
52. Thank you for your consideration.
感谢你的体谅。
53. I really appreciate what you've done for my family and me.
我衷心感谢你为我和我家人所做的一切。
We should be very grateful if you help our children with their English study.
如果你帮助我们小孩学英语,我们将感激不尽。
54. We will never forget the happy days we spent together.
我们永远都不会忘记在一起度过的日子。
55. Many people are becoming aware of the importance of exercising.
很多人开始意识到锻炼的重要性了。
56. The talk will be given at the Lecture Hall on Oct.12th, starting at 3:30p.m.
报告将在10月12日3:30在报告厅举行。
57. Students should know how to take advantage of their time.
学生应该知道如何利用他们的时间。
58. I got sick and tired of doing the routine work day after day.
我厌倦了日复一日地做一些例行公事。
59. Conquering English is not different from conquering a great mountain; both of them require determination, courage, and perseverance.
征服英语不亚于征服一座高山,都需要决心,勇气和毅力。
60. I'm disappointed in the performance of our team at the sports meeting.
我对我们队在运动会上的表现感到失望。
61. I'm very satisfied with what we have achieved so far.
到目前为止,我对我们取得的成绩很是满意。
更多表示“决心”的高级句型:
I'm determined to…
I have made up my mind to complete the task.
62. The city is located on the banks of the Long River.
这个城市位于长江畔。
63. I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
两星期前收到了你的来信,我真是太高兴了。
64. I'm writing to request more information about the day tour to London.
我写信是为了了解更多去伦敦旅行的信息。
65. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.
最近,我们班展了开一场讨论,是关于中学生是否有必要带手机去上学。
66. I wonder if you could tell me more about the trip.
我不知道你是否方便多告诉我一些有关旅行的事。
67. It is certain that if there are fewer people driving, there will be less air pollution.
可以肯定,如果开车的人少一些,空气污染就一定会减少。
68. I personally feel that teacher is the most important profession in the world.
我个人认为教师是世界上最重要的职业。
69. We can't imagine what the world is going to be without purified water.
我们无法想象没有纯净的水,这个世界会变成生么样子。
70. I was walking east along Park Road, when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.
当我沿着公园路往东走的时候,有一个老人在街的另一边从公园里走出来。
71. In the big city, there are more schools and hospitals are available for its people.
在大城市,有更多的学校和医院供人们使用。
72. Some people think that we should read extensively.
有一些人认为,我们应该有选择性地阅读。
73.In my opinion, you should come back after you finish you studies abroad.
在我看来,你结束留学后应该回国。
74. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after you parents as they are getting old.
另一个原因,我认为你回国可以更方便地照顾你日渐年迈的父母。
75. Classes in our school usually finish at four in the afternoon.
我们学校通常下午四点下课。
76. I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend tomorrow's lecture on American history.
我很抱歉,明天我不能参加那场关于美国历史的演讲。
77. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.
花在教育锻炼上的时间是25分钟,只有12分钟的时间用来做家务。
78. Maybe you forgot you spent the money on something else yesterday afternoon.
你可能忘了昨天下午你花钱买了其他东西。
79. Good habits are the crosscut to success.
好习惯是成功的捷径。
80. I was deeply moved by the young boy, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.
那个年轻的小男孩深深地感动着我,因为我相信雷锋一直活在我们的心中。
81. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.
很多新的楼房建了起来,路也都拓宽了。
82. It is more than ten months since we last met.
从我们上次见面到现在已经有十个多月了。
83. It's very nice of you to help me with my lessons every day.
每天帮助我复习功课,你真是太好了。
84. Nothing can live without air and water.
没有空气和水,任何东西都不能生存。
85. I prefer to live in the country rather than live in the city.
我宁愿住在农村,而不愿住在城市。
86. People must be stopped from throwing dirty things into the river.
应阻止人们往河里扔脏东西。
英语学习的供重豪:Emily0英语(不要0)
2. 谁有高考英语作文六大类型的范文!(带翻译)
高考英语满分作文-租房
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.词数:100左右:
2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
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译:
我很高兴收到你的信,我很高兴地听到你会去中国且在我们这里学习中文的消息。我已经找到了寓所。在芳草街,不远处就是我们的中文学校。乘坐11号巴士就可以到达,前一站就是中文学校。寓所是在三楼,有3个房间,其中一个是卧室,其他两个卫生间和厨房。有一张床,一个沙发和一个办公桌,25平方米小公寓里有椅子,租金是每月500元。也许这房子不如你的愿望,但我会尽我所能,满足您的需求。如果还不够,给我写信,我会寻找另外一个更好的地方。
希望你能很快来到这里!
就到这里啦!
此致,
李华
1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
2.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。
3.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。
4.Where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
5.One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘,谬之千里。
6.Slow and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。
7.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit. 吃一堑,长一智。
8.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。
9.All work and no play makes jack a ll boy. 只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰,徒有其表。
11.More hasty,less speed. 欲速则不达。
12.Its never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。
13.All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。
14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。
15.Look before you leap. 三思而后行。
16.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。
17.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。
18.well begun,half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。
19.It is hard to please all. 众口难调。
20.Out of sight,out of mind. 眼不见,心不念。
21.Facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
22.Call back white and white back. 颠倒黑白。
23.First things first. 凡事有轻重缓急。
24.Ill news travels fast. 坏事传千里。
25.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
26.live not to eat,but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭,吃饭为了活着。
27.Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。
28.East or west,home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。
29.Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。
30.Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。
31.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。
34.An idle youth,a needy age. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
35.As the tree,so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。
36.To live is to learn,to learnistobetterlive.活着为了学习,学习为了更好的活着
3. 2012北京高考英语情景作文平均分是多少开放式作文平均分是多少
文科情景作文平均8.9, 开放写作 4.7;理科情景作文平均10.2.开放写作5.6.
4. 高考英语写作技巧
1.尽量来用短句,避免长句。自
2.多用高级词汇,避免误用。
3.字迹清晰,尤其注意要工整,不能涂改,有时间最好打草稿。
4.多留意范文的开头与结尾。注意借鉴
5.注意总结,对各种类型的文章最好能背上一二篇范文。
(这是我的亲身经验!)
(我今年高考英语作文应该只扣了2分。也祝你取得成功)
5. 高考英语写作技巧是什么
1
改变句子开头方式
在通常情况下,英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”,即主语位于句子开头。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式,比如使用倒状语或以状语开头等,会使文章增强表现力。
· We can protect the environment only in this way.
→ Only in this way can we protect the environment.
只有这样我们才能保护好环境。
· A young woman sat by the window.
→ By the window sat a young woman.
窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。
2
用词要丰富
为了使表达更生动,更富表现力,同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字,就会立刻想起like,事实上,英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。
· I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
我喜欢看书,而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。
·Thank you very much for your help.
→ I really appreciate your help.
很感激你帮助我。
3
合理使用省略句
恰当地使用省略句,不仅可以使文章精练、简洁,而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。
· He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?
→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?
他可能很忙,要是这样,我以后再来拜访。要是不忙,我现在可以见他吗?
· She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.
→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.
她本可申请这份工作的,但她没有。
4
运用非谓语结构
非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构,适当运用非谓语结构,会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。
· When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.
→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.
听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。
· As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
由于不知道她的地址,我没法和她联系。
·The baby was accompanied by her mother and it got quiet immediately.
→ Accompanied by her mother, the baby got quiet immediately.
有妈妈的陪伴,宝宝很快
5
结合使用长、短句
在英语写作中,过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是,根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语,使文章显得错落有致,这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。
At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.
→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后,我们唱的唱歌,跳的跳舞,还有的讲笑话、下棋,大家玩得很开心。
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使用短语代替单词
一味使用单词也会让阅卷老师产生审美疲劳,适当地用一些常见的的词组和短语,也能让文章闪亮起来。
· He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.
→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.
他已决定长大了当老师。
· He doesn't like music.
→ He doesn't care much for music.
→ He shows no interest in music.
他不大喜欢音乐。
· Jim is very smart. He always gets new ideas.
→ Jim is very smart. He always comes up with new ideas.
吉姆很聪明,他总是能想出新的点子。
· The students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books.
→ The students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.
学生们认为应该省出一些零花钱来买书。
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套用某些固定表达
好的固定表达能让你的文章显得不那么生硬。
· He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.
→ He was too tired to walk any farther.
他太累了,不能再往前走了。
· The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.
→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.
这电影很有趣,学生和老师都很喜欢。
· Your son is old. He can look after himself now.
→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.
你的儿子已经长大,可以自己照顾自己了。
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使用地道英语。我们只能写地道的英语。
· Don't worry. Be bold and try it, and you'll learn it soon.
→Don't worry. Just go for it, and you'll get it soon.
别担心,大胆试一试,你很快就会学会的。
· Thank you for playing with us.
→Thank you for sharing the time with us.
谢谢你陪我玩。
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合理使用“高级”结构
使用一两句定语从句,名词性从句或状语从句等高级的句型,能给文章增色不少。
· This is the factory. We visited it last week.
→ This is the factory which/that we visited last week.
这就是我们上周参观的工厂。
· We work hard. And we will make progress.
→As long as we work hard, we will make progress.
只要我们努力工作,我们就会进步的。
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引用名言警句点缀
在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章,不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧,而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。
· As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.
正如俗语所说:“有志者,事竟成。” 虽然这次你失败了,但你没必要灰心。只要你努力工作。坚持梦想,总有一天你会成功的。
· There is a proverb going like this, “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is true that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.
有句俗语是这样说的:“生活不是玫瑰花床。”每个人在生活中很可能在生活中遇到问题和困难,这是真的。
· In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”
在当代世界,越来越多的人独自生活,这对我们的生命是不太好的。我们最好多交朋友,享受友谊。正如俗话所说:“远亲不如近邻。”
怎么样,你学会了吗?祝你英语写作得高分!
英语学习的供重豪:Emily0英语(不要0)
6. 如何让高考英语写作达到一类文标准
一类文的关键:
1用简单句写复杂思想--凝练
学了这么多年英语,为什么还不能写出好的句子?原因在于想得太复杂了。我们可以将要表达的汉语思想,全部说成简单的句子,而简单句,在写作时是考生可以掌控的。之后再将简单句加以润色、组合,使之登堂入室,夺取高分。
例如写这句话:大学生刚刚毕业就想立刻找到高薪的工作是不可能的。看到这样的汉语句子,一般我们的反应是要用It is impossible for sb. to do sth.. 这样的句型,然后想着往里填词:在sb. 的位置填上刚刚毕业的大学生,在不定式的位置填上找到高薪的工作,如下所示:
It is impossible for刚刚毕业的大学生to找到高薪的工作。
那么刚刚毕业的大学生怎么写?英语里面好像找不到一个表示刚刚毕业的形容词放在大学生前面,所以就要用定语从句,写成college students who have just graated,然后怎么写高薪的,英语里面也没有这样一个形容词放在jobs的前面,所以用定语从句,写成to find jobs which can give them a lot of money。这样这个句子将写成:It is impossible for college students who have just graated to find jobs which can give them a lot of money. 这样就能将两个定语从句放在这个句型里面,然而会很容易容易犯错。实际上,刚刚毕业的大学生可以写成:newly-graated students, 而高薪的工作可以写成well-paying jobs, 将这两个短语放进去,成为:It is impossible for newly-graated students to find well-paying jobs,与上面的定语从句相比会获得更高的分数。原因是语言更加凝练,富有感染力。
2 复合句的合理使用--润色
我们能不能换一种思路,想得简单点,把上面一句话拆分成为四句:
①每年,都有很多大学生毕业。
②他们都想找到工作。
③这些工作可以给他们很多钱。
④这是不可能的。
我相信这样的句子大部分考生很快就可以写出来:
①Every year, many college students graate。
②They all want to find jobs。
③These jobs can give them a lot of money。
④This is impossible。
第一句话属于五种简单句中的主谓句,第二句是主谓宾,第三句是主谓间宾直宾,第四句是主系表。
下面我们看看能不能润色一下:第一句话我们将熟悉的many改为heaps and heaps of (一批一批的),这是换词;然后?:from universities;又想到还有独立的学院,再加上and institutes。第一句话变成:Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graate from universities and institutes。
这句话这样一改,便成气候了。
第二句和第三句可以用定语从句连接起来,因为第三句的主语是第二句最后jobs的重复,所以②+③成为:They all want to find jobs,which can give them a lot of money. 再润色,我们发现give可以改为offer,a lot of money可以改为handsome salaries。利用学过的语法知识我们可以让这个句子更加复杂,给定语从句中加一个插入语:they hope,放在which后面,这样这句话就成为:They all want to find jobs,which they hope can offer them handsome salaries。
第四句话也可以和前两句连在一起,这次不采用主从复合句,而采用并列句,因为意思发生转折,故用but连接,而impossible太绝对了,改为hardly possible,于是成为:They all want to find jobs,which they hope can offer them handsome salaries,but this is hardly possible。
所以最初的那句话,经过拆解、加工(换词和连句)形成了下面的一组句子:Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graate from universities and institutes. They all want to find jobs,which they hope can offer them handsome salaries,but this is hardly possible。
上文总共32个词,与我们刚才认为很难达到的那个句子It is impossible for newly-graated students to find well-paying jobs (10个词)相比,气势上毫不逊色,但是哪一种写法更适合广大考生的情况呢?当然是从熟悉的东西着手改造更为可取,像newly-graated和 well-paying这样的天外来客式的词组需要积累,或者自己有意去搜寻。再强调一下:上面这组句子是我们从简单句变过来的。这说明:简单句这只丑小鸭也可以变成白天鹅!这是对高考考生写作应试方面最大的启示!