Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________
Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________
The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________
Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.
In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.
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A or B
将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________
The second reason can be seen by every person that________.
In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.
There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.
In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.
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单一命题式
The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.
Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.
Futhermore,______________.
In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.
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agree or disagree
Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.
The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.
What is more, some students are interested in____________.
In a word, _
Some people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that_____________________. Take___________as example, ______________. There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as ________________________.
Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that______________.(exmaples:___________).
From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________.
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Agree or disagree
Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.
One of the primary causes is that_______________________.
Examples_______________.
But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider. Examples.
What is more_______________. Examples___________
General speaking, __________. Recongizing the fact that _______________should drive us to conclude that______________.
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A or B
In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For exmaple,___________________
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________
It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.
In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B. 托福作文模板推荐之八
A or B
When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points. We may looksintosevery possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ____________________. For example, ______________.
Also, ________________________.
This is&n
bsp;arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.
Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________. Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.
一, “点对点”的结构
“点对点”的结构指的是把综合写作中的阅读材料和听力材料的每一个对应点都单独提炼出来用一个段落加以阐述。这种结构的优点是可以把阅读文章和听力材料的对应关系更细致地进行说明,使文章层次感强,同时反映出考生提炼信息和对比信息的能力更高。比如下面的一篇范文就是ETS给出的满分作文,是一篇典型的“点对点”型的结构安排方式。
Introction-
Relationship between reading and lecture The lecturer talks about research concted by a firm that used the group to handle their work. He says that the theory stated in the passage was very different and somewhat inaccurate when compared to what happened in reality.
First Point of Contrast First, some members got free rides. That is, some didn’t work hard but got recognition for the success nonetheless. This also indicates that people who hard were not given recognition they should have gotten. In other words, weren’t given the opportunity to “shine”. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.
Second Point of Contrast Second, groups were slow in progress. The passage says that groups are more responsive than indivials because of the number of people involved and aggregated resources. However, the speaker talks about how the firm found that groups were slower than indivials in decision making. Groups needed time for meetings, which are necessary proceres in decision making. This is another place where experience contradicted theory.
Third Point of Contrast Third, influential people might emerge and lead the group towards glory If the influent people are going in the right direction there would be no problem. But in cases where they go in the wrong direction, there is nobody that has influence to counter the decision made. In other words, the group might turn dictatorship, with the influential party as the leader, and might become less in its thinking. They might become one-sided, and thus fail to succeed.
二, “面对面”的结构
“点对点”的结构指是最理想的结构安排模式,但有时候考生并不能准确地寻找到阅读和听力材料之间的对应点。这有可能是因为阅读和听力材料之间的对应点本身就不是很明显,或者由于考生自身的能力问题,没有完全听懂或看懂,则要写成“点对点”的结构安排模式,难度会比较大。遇到这种情况,朗阁海外考试研究中心则建议考生可以尝试使用“面对面”的结构安排模式。它与“点对点”的结构安排模式的区别在于,“面对面”作文的结构并不是逐条阐述对应点,而是在总得阐明听力和阅读文章之间的关系后,分别总结听力材料或阅读材料的要点,从“面”上阐述听力和阅读材料之间的联系。以下一篇范文也是根据ETS提供的一套模考题所写的范文,由于此题很难“点对点”地分析听力和阅读之间的关系,因此采取了“面对面”的写法。
Introction-
Relationship between reading and lecture The lecturer talks about the natural process of crystallization and how the speed of cooling can influence such process, which is proved by Bowen’s crystallization experiment explained in the reading passage.
Points in the lecture Natural crystallization happens when magma, which is extremely hot in its molten form deep in the earth, graally cools off when it moves towards the surface of the earth. During the cooling process, the energy from heat is lost, and the atoms which compose the magma begin to move more slowly, forming into an orderly pattern, which turns the magma into a solid crystal structure. However, if the cooling process takes place too rapidly, then there is not enough time for the atoms to be arranged into such an orderly pattern. Therefore, crystallization can’t take place. Instead, a brittle, glass-like material will form.
Points in the Reading Norman Bowen’s experiment in the 1920s proved this theory. By collecting and melting elements in rocks, Norman created artificial magma in his laboratory. He first cooled the magma slowly, as in the natural crystallization process, and got mineral crystals. But then he suddenly replaced this normal cooling with rapid freezing, and found frozen glass materials surrounding the solid crystal structure.
可以看出,“点对点”和“面对面”的结构有各自的特点,但总得来说“点对点”的结构在“对比型”的新托福综合写作中要更适用一些,因为它能把矛盾点逐一呈现,更细致地体现了听力和阅读材料之间的关系。但掌握“面对面”的结构也很有必要,因为它可以适用一些听力和阅读材料之间的关系是一致、延伸或解释型的考题。此外,在考生无法寻找到所有的对应点时,用“面对面”的结构也算是一种补救措施。
附:新托福综合写作sample answer 两篇,针对的是同一个考题,第一篇用的是“点对点”结构,第二篇用的是“面对面”的结构。
_______________________________________________________祝你成功啦!
Ⅱ 托福独立写作范文有什么书推荐的
新挑战TOEFL iBT作文满分--时代焦点英语学习丛书(轻松搞定托福作文,畅销十年,经典力作)
这本书是挺不错的,你可以看一下
Ⅲ 托福独立写作大约需要准备几个模板
一般不用记模板。
你只要记住一些常用的连接词,句型,和较为常用的词组就够了。专
大概安排那么一个属结构,有条理的叙述你自己的观点。
外国的作文一般都是辨析试的叫你说出你赞同或者不赞同某些观点,要明确观点,在详细举例说明支持你的观点的内容或小点。一般都不会低分。
Ⅳ 求托福独立写作模板
同学,最好不用别人的模板,自己做一个(在准备的过程中)
Ⅳ 新托福独立写作套用模板可能得高分吗
不会得高分的抄,独立写作注重袭的是逻辑思维(文章结构、举例子)和表达能力(句式多样),对观点的逐步展开,例子是否能支持观点才是最重要的。
小段的开头结尾可以少量用模板,但是大段套用模板,再加上生硬的例子会死的很惨的
Ⅵ 托福独立写作有模板吗,文中需要举例子吗,是例子越多越好吗
模板要自己多写。对每个类型的题目进行总结。
例子并不是越多越好,要回有详有略,有抽象答有具体,能够从各个方面说明你的观点。
例子不一定要求文采稀罕,但一定要真实贴切,能够很好的说明你的论据。
根据我的经验,一般写4段。
第一段开头综述,提出背景,阐明观点。最好还考虑下与下面段落的衔接。
第二段,第一个论据以及支撑论据的例子。总结的时候最好兼顾一下引出第三段。
第三段,第二个论据以及支撑论据的例子。
第四段,总结前面的论点,重复你开头的观点得出结论。
阐述论点的时候举例也有几种方法。
一种是先提出论据,展开讨论,然后举一个相关的能够说明问题的例子。最后将你的论据与例子结合说明你的观点。
还有一种就是提出论据后先举例子,然后通过例子推广到更广泛的领域说明你的问题。
总的来说,文章要多思考,不要盲目的写。文章要连贯,论点论据例子是一个整体,切勿割裂的来对待。只有将这些东西融为一个整体,文章看起来才不突兀,而显得更有说服力。英语作文切忌和中文作文一样扯虚的。我觉得老外比较实在,喜欢更实在的例子,更喜欢依据事实得出结论。所以切勿空泛的说理,一切都要建立在例子和论据的基础上。
Ⅶ 托福独立写作求范文
Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________. 就理由进行解释_____________________. For instance,____________________
Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________. 就理由进行解释___________________. For example,____________________ argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.
In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.