上海英语写作指导

❶ 写上海的英语作文

shanghai
is
a
beautiful
city.
上海是个漂亮的城市there
are
many
tall
buildings
in
shanghai
and
the
air
in
shanghai
is
fresh
and
there
are
many
green
trees
and
flowers,
birds
are
singing
everywhere.上海有很多高楼大厦，鸟语花香
shanghai
is
a
big
international
city,
many
people
come
from
different
places
and
countries
are
doing
business
here,
上海是国际化版城市很多来自世界各地的权人都来上海做生意shanghai
people
are
very
nice
and
friendly.上海人很友好

❷ 上海高考英语作文评分标准

高考英语高考作文评分标准:

1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次 的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。

4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。

5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。

6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。

(2)上海英语写作指导扩展阅读：

高考英语的复习方法：

1.词汇题。词汇是组成英语知识大厦的基石，英语词汇量的多少标志着英语水平。扩大词汇量的好方法是：把阅读材料中以及练习题的生词和短语全都标出，在字典中查一遍，注上音标，注解和典型用法。

高考复习时的那份高考词汇表，包括了高考要考的所有词汇。在最后阶段，可以将词汇表从头到尾背3-4遍。首先把词汇表过一遍，熟悉和简单的一带而过。重点放在不熟悉的和重要的词汇上。把不熟悉的单词一定用特殊颜色的笔记号下来，然后下次专门反复阅读。

而重要的词汇就是在考试中经常见到，而又一知半解的词汇。这些词汇一定要用字典认真查出，加以记忆。

2.语法题。在复习语法的时候，注意查漏补缺， 扫除盲点。认真对待所有的语法题目。在对答案和讲评时，则一定要把错的更正，把知识点记忆一遍。查找自己知识结构中存在的缺陷，扫除知识的盲点。在语法题方面，配备一本专门的"错题本"，有时间就经常翻看，解决记忆问题。

3.完形填空题。多做练习，做完之后全文读一遍，建立自己的语感，有助于以后的做题。同时，建议一边读一边做，能确定的就选择了，不确定的就标记上，暂时不管。第二遍的时候再通过对上下文的理解去分析不确定的选项。这样可以节省时间，而正确率也能有所提高。

4.阅读理解题。阅读量大，分值高。平时要多做阅读，多做限定时间的阅读。做题时先粗看全文，理出文章的大体意思，再看问题，根据问题的特点，再带着问题在文章中找出细节的支持点来。

5.七选五题。此道题是一个新点。建议多找一些练习。注意七个选项中的有信息意义的实词，利用上下文重复的原理来做出推理判断。

6.作文题。首先注意的是书写工整。给阅卷老师一个良好的印象，这是成功的第一步。在下面写好并且记忆下来开头的一两个句子和结尾的句子，考试时进行改写放上去。

参考资料来源：网络--高考英语

❸ 写上海的英语作文

shanghai
is
a
beautiful
city.
上海是个漂亮的城市there
are
many
tall
buildings
in
shanghai
and
the
air
in
shanghai
is
fresh
and
there
are
many
green
trees
and
flowers,
birds
are
singing
everywhere.上海有很多高楼大厦，鸟语花香
shanghai
is
a
big
international
city,
many
people
come
from
different
places
and
countries
are
doing
business
here,
上海是国际化城市很多来自世界各地的专人都来上海做属生意shanghai
people
are
very
nice
and
friendly.上海人很友好

❹ 介绍上海的英语作文

Shanghai is the largest city in China in terms of population with over 20 million people in its metropolitan area. Located on China's central eastern coast at the mouth of the Yangtze River, the city is administered as a municipality with province-level status
The city is an emerging tourist destination renowned for its historical landmarks such as the Bund and Xintiandi, its modern and ever-expanding Pudong skyline including the Oriental Pearl Tower, and its new reputation as a cosmopolitan center of culture and design. Today, Shanghai is an important centre of commerce and finance. One conference paper has referred to it as a future global city and the popular press have described it as the "showpiece" of the world's fastest-growing economy

❺ 英语作文：介绍上海是怎样的城市

Shanghai
is
a
beautiful
city.
上海是个漂亮的城市There
are
many
tall
buildings
in
Shanghai
and
the
air
in
Shanghai
is
fresh
and
there
are
many
green
trees
and
flowers,
birds
are
singing
everywhere.上海有很多高楼大厦，鸟语花香
Shanghai
is
a
big
international
city,
many
people
come
from
different
places
and
countries
are
doing
business
here,
上海是国际化城回市很多来自世界各地答的人都来上海做生意Shanghai
people
are
very
nice
and
friendly.上海人很友好
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❻ 英语作文：介绍上海是怎样的城市

Shanghai is a beautiful city. 上海源是个漂亮的城市There are many tall buildings in Shanghai and the air in Shanghai is fresh and there are many green trees and flowers, birds are singing everywhere.上海有很多高楼大厦，鸟语花香 Shanghai is a big international city, many people come from different places and countries are doing business here, 上海是国际化城市很多来自世界各地的人都来上海做生意Shanghai people are very nice and friendly.上海人很友好

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❼ 请问谁能帮我找到08年英语高考上海卷及江西卷写作题的范文,谢谢!

广东卷
第一节 基础写作（共小题，满分15分）

你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。

写作内容

请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：

背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。

1896：第一次成为奥运项目

1904：中断

1928：中断

1932：重回奥运会

1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛

现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。

写作要求

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容

评分标准

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

第二节 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.

Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it---good facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The Students’ Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.

One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way… it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.

写作内容

学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”，内容要点包括：

1、以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点；

2、然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括：

（1）对中学生活的感受；

（2）理想的大学生活；

（3）中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。

写作要求

1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

范文：
第一节

Shooting, at first only a means to make a living to our ancestors, became an item/event in Physical Ecation at the end of the 19th century. In the year 1896 it came into the Olympic Games but between the years 1904 and 1928 it was stopped. It was in the year 1932 that shooting came back into the Olympic family and in 1968 women athletes were allowed to take part in it for the first time. Shooting has been developed smoothly and steadily by now. In 1896 there were only 3 shooting competition items but now there are 17.

第二节

Mike’s mother did almost everything for him when in high school, which brought him a hard time adjusting to the first-year college life. However, afterwards he got accustomed to it because of the academic atmosphere and colorful activities there.

As for me, what I do everyday is to study hard to enter a famous university, which is always the expectations of my parents and teachers. So traveling among classroom, dormitory and canteen is the routine work. Seldom do I have the time to do some activities. Anyway, unlike you, I have learned how to be independent in a boarding school, which is beneficial to adjust to the college life.

It seems to me the ideal college life is that I become matured both physically and mentally， and that I obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society at the same time.

As we all know，college is wildly different from middle school. It connects not only adolescence to althood，but also the ivory tower to the real society. So an active part in activities，associations，as well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life.

重庆卷
学校网站新开设了一个“英语写作”栏目（column），以便学生发表（post）英语作文，进行交流，提高写作能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍，内容包括：

1、开设目的；

2、栏目优势：教师在线（online）指导等；

3、作文要求：内容贴近学生生活；

4、优秀作文的鼓励办法；

5、邀请大家参与。

注意：

1、词数100左右；

2、开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）；

3、请在答题卡上作答。

Welcome to the column “English Writing”!

范文：
Welcome to the columu”English Writing”!In order to improve students’ ablity of writing,let students communite with each other more conveniently and students can post their English articles easier,our school set up a new column “English Writing” in the Internet.

In this new column,there are many good teachers correct students’ English articles online.they will point out students’mistakes and correct them.In addition,the teachers will tell studenrs some new words,phrases and some advantage sentences to make their articles more wonderful.What’s more,if students have some mistakes of grammer,teachers will teach they patiently.

The articles which are about students’lifes are welcome.This new column encourages students to write their feeings when they see somethings in their lifes

Some good English articles will be post in the English Newsparper.And in every weekend,teachers and students will choose the top of 5 English articles. The student whose articles have been choosen 5times will be given a Free Books Card valus100 yuan.

Welcome to the columu”English Writing” again! ”English Writing” will be more wonderful sine you are here.

山东卷
假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语(Q吧)给他写封信：

1、帮他分析原因；

2、给他提出建议；

3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。

注意：词数120 ~150

Dear Li Ming,

Best regards,

Zhang Hua

范文：
Dear LiMing,

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. That’s because you are new here and people don’t know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advice below.

First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other people’s views. Second, you should learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly.Last but not least, I’m always here ready to help. we can take part in some activities together and I can introce you to others.

With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above.

❽ 写上海的英语作文

Shanghai is located in east of China, next to Jiangsu Province. Shanghai is very famous in China and even all over the world. It is the biggest city in China. And it is the commercial center of China, too. People from south and north come to here for trip and shopping. I like Shanghai very much. I like the high buildings and the convenient transport.

上海位于中国东部，毗邻江苏省。上海在中国甚至世界范围内都有很高的知名度回。它是中国最大的答城市，也是中国的商业中心。全国各地的人都来这里购物观光。 我很喜欢上海，喜欢这里的高楼大厦，还有它便捷的交通。