① 教我写这英语作文
题目很清楚啊,开头写最喜欢的活动（运动什么的）,然后接上一句“I like it very much!”之类的内,接着这一下你喜容欢它的原因,好玩,或者你能学到知识什么的.然后说一下你最喜欢的这个项目的明星,愿望就可以写想有一天去看他呃比赛之类的.这样,一篇文章就差不多了.
② 谁能教我写英语作文
1，积累一些写作的常用的固定句型，就是所谓的万能语句
2，积累常用的回英语固定搭配答用法
3，多看看一些优秀作品
总结一点，要想提高写作，主要还是积累，包括句型，短语，固定搭配，还有一点是要掌握英语思维，很多人写作都是用中文思维来写
想想我们学习母语，母语写作也是必备的，我中学的时候，那时候老师就是让我们多多摘抄好词好句，然后掌握每一种文体的写法，其实语言都是相通的，这个同样可以运用在英语写作上，我高中的英语作文，很多都是把每次学到的句型，好的句法及时运用在写作中，这样一来巩固了所学，还提高了写作表达！
③ 我的教室英语作文带翻译
My
Classroom
Look!
This
is
my
classroom.It’s
very
big.The
doors
are
orange.The
wall
is
white.There
are
two
beautiful
pictures
on
the
wall.The
fans
are
green
and
blue.The
board
is
black.
The
shelf
is
near
the
board.There
are
many
books
on
the
shelf.The
desks
and
chairs
are
brown.There
are
many
classmates
in
the
classroom.They
are
reading
books.
My
classroom
is
very
nice
and
clean.I
like
my
classroom.
【翻译】
我的袭教室
看!这是我的教室。它非常大，门是橙色的。墙壁是白色的。在墙壁上是两个美丽的图画。是绿色和蓝色的。黑板是黑色的。书架在黑板附近。书架上有许多书籍。课桌和椅子都是棕色的。有很多同学在教室里。他们正在阅读书籍。
我的教室是非常好也非常干净。我喜欢我的课堂。
④ 能教我英语作文吗
根据你们老师给的模板多练几篇，然后拿给老师修改，熟能生巧就会好的
作文模版：
一、说明利弊型：
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）
1． 说明事物现状
2． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）
3． 你对现状（或前景）的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ---------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------（A的优点之二）.
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点)．
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)．
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．)
二、解决方法型：
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 1．问题现状 2．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.
First, ------------(说明A的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.
For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法).
Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
三、阐述主题型：
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．
1． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．
2． 分析并举例使其更充实．
The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ---------------(释义).
Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)．
In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you"ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
四、对比观点型：
1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1．有一些人认为。。。 2．另一些人认为。。。3．我的看法。。。
The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is heir favorite. They hold their view for the reason of②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover,④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing,⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)．
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．
五、话题作文：
Nowadays, there are more and more (某种现象) in (某种场合). It is estimated that (相关数据). Why have there been so many (某种现象)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
The first one is (原因一). Besides, (原因二). The third one is (原因三).
To sum up, the main cause of (某种现象) is e to (最主要原因). It is high time that something were done upon it.
For one thing, (解决办法一). On the other hand, (解决办法二). All these measures will certainly rece the number of (某种现象).
六、信件和申请文：
Your address
Month, Date, year
Receiver's address
Dear ...,
I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in .... And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, .... On the other hand, .... I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.
I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.
Yours sincerely,
X X X
七、图表型作文：
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), __作文题目的议题__ has been on rise/ decrease(goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from__ in __ to __ in __. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that __.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for __. On the one hand, __. On the other hand, __ is e to the fact that __.In addition, __ is responsible for __.Maybe there are some other reasons to show __.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that __. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
常用句型和短语：
1、学校生活及学习成绩
be getting on well with one’s study
take several courses at school
have English (Chinese, Physics…) every (other )day work hard at …
put one’s heart into…
be interested in …
be fond of
like chemistry best
be good at …; be poor at …; do well in …; be weak in …
make progress in …; fail in …’ be tired of …’
pass the examination; give sb. a passing grade;
major in history 主修历史
has the best record in school 成绩最棒
get a doctor’s degree 获得博士学位
be more interesting to sb.
learn about; succeed in…; be active in class (work);
take an active part in …; learn… by heart;
work out a (maths) problem; improve oneself in …;
get 90 marks for (English); get an “A” in the exam;
have a good command of…
lay a good foundation in (language study)
2、师生关系
get on well with sb; like to be with students;
be gentle with us; be kind to sb;
be a strict teacher; be strict with one’s pupils;
be strict in work
We think of him (her) as …; help sb with sth;
praise sb for sth …; blame sb for sth..
give advice on …; question sb on …
be satisfied with …
correct the students’ homework carefully and prepare for the next day; give sb a lot of work;
try to teach sb good study habits; make one’s lessons lively and interesting; teach sb. sth.;
teach sb to do sth.
devote all one’s time to work;
admire (sb.for) his devotion to the cause of ecation 佩服他对于教育事业的献身精神。
3、课余活动及周末生活
spend one’s time in many different ways;
enjoy doing things by oneself; go swimming;
go for an outing; have an outing at (the seashore);
see the sights of Beijing; play the piano (violin);
play chess (basketball); have a swim;
have dances on weekends; have a picnic over the weekend;
go to the cinema; have a party; hold a sports meeting;
do some reading; help sb do sth; enjoy a family trip;
get everything ready for;
ride one’s bike with sb.to(the park);
There are a lot of activities at (the beach).
We enjoy a change from our busy life in the city.
She would like to bring sth. to the picnic.
It was a very relaxing Sunday.
There are good programmes on TV on weekends.
4、彼此沟通信息
take a message for sb; send a message to sb;
hear from sb; talk about/of sth; tell sb to do sth;
get information about…;
express one’s idea (feelings) in English;
Write sb a letter saying…; apologize to sb for …;
thank you for …; make a speech t at the meeting;
explain sth to s; look upon sb as …; think sb to be …;
take sb’s side
5、事件中人的态度
would like to do; allow sb to do;
keep sb from doing (prevent sb. from doing);
call on sb to do; be afraid to do (be afraid of …)；
fee like doing; insist on doing; drive sb. off;
speak highly of sb; speak ill of sb; think highly of sb;
force sb to do; offer to do; refuse to do; agree to do;
regret doing;
prefer to do A rather than do B; had better do;
would rather (not) do.
6、事情过程
have the habit of doing…; have no trouble doing;
make up one’s mind to do;
prepare sb for …; give up doing…; do sth as usual;
do what he wants us to do; set about doing;
try one’s best to do…=go all out to do;
get into trouble; help sb out; do one’s bit for New China;
wait for sb to do; find a way to do; make friends with sb;
show (tell) sb. how to do…; take (send) sb to …;
I’m trying to find…;
I’m afraid we are out of …;
pass the time doing; feel a little excited about doing…;
can’t help doing…; do some good deeds to people;
be prepared for more hard work;
Some are doing A, others are doing B, and still others are doing C.
7、感观活动与思维活动
look around for …; look up (down) at …; catch sight of …;
take a look at …; hear sb do (doing); take notice of …;
take view of …; have a good understanding of …;
consider sb (sth) to be …; come to know…;
realize that …; know that +从句
8、情感与欲望
be pleased with …; be delighted in doing…;
take a pleasure in doing; be worried about;
feel surprised at …
be sorry for …; be angry with sb for sth;
be angry about …(为某事生气)；
look forward to doing…; wish to do; expect to do;
long for (long to do); be sick for one’s home;
have a strong desire to do …;
9、健康状况及治疗
be in good shape; be in good (poor )health;
feel weak (well, terrible, sick); have got a high (slight ) fever;
have a slight (bad) cold; take one’s temperature;
have got a pain in …; be good (bad) for one’s health(eyes);
It’s nothing serious. stay in bed until…;
save one’s life
10、其它
It (take)sb. some time to do…; It is said that …;
be fit for; be short of; be well dressed;
miss the lecture (train); change…into…;
waste time doing; spend time doing; be busy doing;
have no choice but to do; I can’t help it. be in need of…;
be mistaken about …; fall behind…; catch up with;
on behalf of; instead of; be welcome to do…;
Running, biking and swimming are popular in summer.
Skiing and skating are my favorite winter sports.
11、信件开头常用语
You letter came to me this morning.
I have received your letter of July the 20th.
I’m writing to you about the lecture to be given next Monday.
I’m writing to ask if you can come next week.
How time flies! It’s three months since I saw you last.
Thank you for your letter.
In reply to your letter about (the exhibition this year)…;
Let me tell you that…
12、信件结尾常用语
Please remember me to your whole family.
Give my best regards (wishes) to your mother.
Best wishes.
With love.
Wish you a pleasant journey.
Wish you success. Wish you the best of health. (luck)
Looking forward to your next visit to China.
Looking forward to the pleasure of meeting you.
Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.
行文：
（一）段首句
1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______. 5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.
Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in
our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of
benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while. Obviously，______，but why?
（二）中间段落句
1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。
On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At
the same time，they say____.
2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。
But I dont think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.
3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……
______is necessary and important to our countrys development and construction.
First，______.Whats more, _____.Most important of all,______.
4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。
There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______
5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing，______For another，______
6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。
It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition._____.All these measures will certainly______.
7. 为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……
Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______e to ______.
8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。 However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.
9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.
10. 完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：
I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.
（三）结尾句
结论：
Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that…
To sum up, In conclusion, In brief, On account of this, Thus, It can be concluded that…, Therefore, We can find that…
建议：
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. Consequently, To solve the problem, Some measures should be taken.
高考英语作文各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档(很好)；(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差)：(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分：（0分）
未能传达给读者仟何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
三心二意 absent-minded
大相径庭 be totally different
不折不扣 extremely/completely
粗心大意 careless/carelessness
不计其数 countless
引人入胜 attractive
焕然一新 take on a new look
置之不理 take no notice of
固执己见 stick to one's own opinion
不屑一顾 throw all cantion to the winds
忍无可忍 can no longer put up with
不得而知 remain unknown
因人而异 vary from person to person/depend on the indivial
一箭之遥 within a stone's throw
别无选择 have no choice but to do
情不自禁 can't help doing
迫不得已 can do nothing but to do
迫不及待 can hardly wait to do
化险为夷 turn danger into safety
每况愈下 from bad to worse
安然无恙 safe and sound
全心全意/一心一意 heart and soul/whole-hearted
奋不顾身 have no through for one's own safety
视而不见/充耳不闻 turn a blind eye to/turn a deaf ear to
三言两语 in a few words
鼎力相助 do whatever one can to help
刮目相看 look at sb with new eyes
百听不厌 be worth listening to a hundred times
欣喜若狂 be wild with joy
不辞而别 take leave without saying goodbye
兴趣相投 share the same hobby
宁死不屈 would rather die than give in
反之亦然 vice versa
不知所措 be at a loss to do
坚守岗位 stick to one's post
坚持不懈 perserve in doing
半途而废 give up half way
一事无成 achieve nothing
梦想成真 one's fream come true/realize one's dream
一无所有 have nothing
一无所获 gain nothing
一鸣惊人 surprise the world with one's first success
不辞辛劳 take trouble to do/take pains to do
跋山涉水 travel over mountain and waters
不遗余力 spare no efforts
不能自己 can't control oneself
一见钟情 fall in love with....at first sight
受益匪浅 benefit a lot from
爱莫能助 be powerless to do
⑤ 英语作文，谁教我怎么写啊
Dear
Tomy,
How
is
everything
gonging
?
In
the
new
team
,
I
have
been
a
new
school
,and
everything
is
new
for
me
.But
I
feel
lonely
because
I
have
no
friends
in
the
new
school
,and
I
miss
you
very
much
,and
I
miss
the
days
when
we
were
together.
I
have
to
go
home
lonely
after
school
so
I
feel
very
sad
.What's
worse
,I
feel
that
it's
very
difficult
for
me
to
learn
the
subjects
well
.And
there
is
something
trouble
with
me
theose
days
.
And
how
about
you
?
Please
write
to
me
soon
.
Yours
,
译文：亲爱的TOMY，近来可好啊？在新的学期里我来到啦新的学校，但一切对于我来说也是新的
⑥ 教我也英语作文
JENNIFER:
I am very happy to take your letter! I will tell you something about my schoollife.
Now,I am in Grade 8,I study English ,Chinese,Math and so on.In all of this, I like English best,beacause it is very interest and usefull,beside English is a very imporant subject.
I also like sports ,but I love badminton best ,everyday after class,I with my friends play the badminton on the playground .this exercise can strength my body ,and it is always full of much fun!
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
XXX
⑦ 教我学教我写作文与英语拼音汉字
从我踏入学校的那一刻起，我就和汉语拼音结下了不解之缘。它不但帮助我读书认字，使我的吐字发音更标准；还能方便我和来自不同地方的人交流和沟通。我和汉语拼音之间，有很多故事呢。
说实话，刚开始我并不喜欢汉语拼音。它那数不清的组合搭配以及跌宕起伏的音调常常把我搞得晕头转向，再加上我爸爸妈妈都是有着明显口音的南方人，我的发音也不太标准，分不清前鼻音和后鼻音，所以我不禁叫苦连天。爸爸妈妈就总拿自己做例子来教育我，说明汉语拼音的重要性，于是我暗暗下了决心一定要学好拼音。从那以后，每天放学的路上，总有一个拿着一本厚厚的拼音学习书的小女孩，嘴里不断发出一组组复杂的拼音搭配组合，那个小女孩就是我。
功夫不负有心人。经过无数天的练习，汉语拼音对我来说越来越容易，我也越来越喜欢汉语拼音。我的发音越来越标准，开始纠正爸爸妈妈的发音了。一次，妈妈和一个多年不见的老同学联系上了，她俩在电话里聊得热火朝天。妈妈问道：“这些年你上哪儿去了，怎么应（音）讯全无啊？”我后来调侃妈妈：“妈，什么是‘应’讯全无啊？”“就是一点消息都没有的意思”妈妈根本没有领悟到我的本意，还一本正经地给我解释。我只好告诉妈妈，“妈，你的发音错了，应该读“音讯”而不是“应讯”！”妈妈这才恍然明白过来，笑着说：“看来妈妈要拜你为师了。”
拼音学好了，看书就可以随心所欲了。有不会的字，一查字典全搞定。我读书的速度也快多了，每次爸爸回来休假给我买的书不等他再次回来就读完了。随着年龄的增长，电脑用得越来越多，这个时候汉语拼音的作用尤为凸显。由于拼音学得好，我直接用拼音打字，不但准确率高，速度也快。现在，我经常用电脑给朋友写信，打印作文，写文章……我和网友交流学习经验时，以流利快速的录入受到了大家的好评。我知道，这都是汉语拼音的功劳。
我和汉语拼音的故事还有很多很多，一时半会儿也讲不完。总之，汉语拼音已经融入了我的学习和生活，我和它再也不可能分开。
⑧ 要一篇英语作文写同学教我学英语的。60词谢谢！
I am poor in my English. I am always have difficulties in doing my English homework. To complete my homwork, I have to be proactive to ask my classmates who are good in English for help. They are very kind and patient in helping me in my English school work. My English has improved and I am very thankful to my classmates
⑨ 老师教我学英语英语作文80词
I have a good English teacher. She is Miss Wu. She is my favorite teacher.
我有一个好英语老师。她就是吴老师。她是我最喜欢的老师。
We felt English very difficult when we began to study English. Miss Wu had a good idea to solve the problem. One day, she came into the classroom with some fruits, such as apples, bananas and oranges. She said, “Today we are going to learn the names of the fruits. You can eat the fruits if you can tell me their names in English. ”
我们刚开始学习英语的时候感觉英语很难。吴老师有一个好办法解决这个问题。一天，她带了好多水果来到教室，像苹果，香蕉和桔子之类的。她说：“今天我们要学习这些水果的名字。如果你们能用英语告诉我它们的名字，你们就可以吃它们。”
⑩ 教你如何写英语作文
主观题就意味着需要人工阅卷而不是机器阅卷，也就是说只要考生可以抓住阅卷老师的心里，按照他们所期待的模式去写，必定能在高考中取得高分。在历年的高考评卷过程中，阅卷老师是如何评判一份卷子的，阅卷人最注重的是什么，是每个高考考生迫切想知道的，笔者将结合多年的高考阅卷经验，告诉大家如何在高考中胜人一筹，在书面表达上拿到高档次的分数。 书面表达在评阅时遵循语言第一位(语言高级)，内容第二位(要点齐全)，结构第三位(文章分段)的原则，也就是说阅卷老师最注重的是语言，换句话说是亮点，根据语言使用情况，亮点的多少而定出档次，所以考生在书面表达中语言上的亮点是得高分的关键。亮点一共有四种：一、高级词汇和语法;二、修辞手法;三、有效的连词;四、名人名言或谚语。首先简单介绍亮点当中至关重要的高级语法，以及修辞手法当中的一些技巧的使用。
肯定不如双否好
修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”，如果写成the postman comes on time every day，就不如变成双重否定，the postman never fails to come on time，就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响，写成双重否定there was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not affected by the earthquake.应用类似的修辞会在高考中为考生加分。
陈述不如倒装妙
主动不如被动巧
在近些年的阅卷中，发现考生在写作中很少使用被动语态，也许是受中文思维的影响，几乎整篇文章都使用主动语态。其实在英文中，被动语态的使用是很重要的。因为英语是一门客观的语言，而汉语是主观的语言，具体体现在英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态;英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整个文章句型丰富。
分词结构不能少
在前文提到，在书面表达中老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。在所有的高级语法中，阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构，其次是剩下的几项。但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个最大的亮点。其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：if such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢?学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。
口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。
if such is the case, you should apologize to her.按照这个口诀来改，第一步，去掉连词if;第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格;第三步，改分词，is 变成分词是being，所以最后变成such being the case, you should apologize to her.就变成了独立主格。如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构，例如2005年高考书面表达中的一句话because i am a student, i’d like to know the price for students. 改成being a student, i’d like to know the price for students.其他想表达状语从句的时候几乎都一样。所以想表达由于，因为，如果等都写成独立主格或分词结构会让阅卷老师多给几分。
如何在短期内消除孩子学习上的顽疾，在有限的时间内取得成绩上的飞跃是每一位家长和学生关注的重点，更是昂立中学生vip学习中心研究的重心。“快速有效提高学习成绩”要通过多方面的努力来实现，包括帮助孩子找到适合自己的学习方法；教学中坚持夯实基础，查漏补缺，梳理知识框架，理清学习脉络；启发学生的学习兴趣，提升学习力；汇总考试要点，总结高频考点，解决常见错误和失分点并掌握应试技巧。