1. 关于大学生兼职的影响的英文作文按因果法中的结果展开方式写,怎么写
写人的文章,要先确定这个人的特点,你想写他的哪个方面。举个例子吧。比如你想写你的一个好朋友。写他这个人很热心,爱帮助人,那就先构思一些例子,比如如何帮助隔壁邻居家的小孩,如何帮助你还有你班上的同学,如何帮助马路上遇上的正要过马路的老人等等。记住!举例子是个好方法,既会让你的文章饱满丰富,又不会给人空洞的感觉,还能在瞬间使字数增加。写的时候要有详有略,详细的写一件事情,然后再略写几件事,一笔代过。采用最讨巧的结构——总分总,就可以了。 总体把握小学生写作文 一、提高认识事物和表达事物的能力。我国著名教育家叶圣陶先生指出:“写任何东西决定于认识和经验,有什么样的认识和经验,才能写出什么样的东西来。反之,没有表达认识的能力,同样也写不出好作文”。 二、把认识结构作为作文的核心,包括学习知识,观察积累,记忆储存,训练思维,丰富想象,培养情感,锻炼意志;从说到写,推敲修改,多读勤写。 三、树立大作文观,听、说、读、写有机结合 一要注重审题;二要明确写作目的,立意要新;三是选材要有根据;四要讲究谋篇技巧,安排好篇章结构;五要注意文章分段,事先列小标题,作文提纲;六要注重文章写法,因文用法;七要妙用语言,用思想调遣语言。 学会五种立意法:以事赞人,直抒胸臆,借物喻理,触景生情,托物言志。 四、作文大目标的逐年级分解: 一年级字词,二年级句子,三年级片断,四年级篇章,五年级综合,六年级提高。 五、实施五项训练 根据认识是作文的核心这一原则,围绕这个发展学生心理机制的核心,扎扎实实地进行了五项训练: (一)、字词训练。学习掌握大量字词。掌握运用字词的金钥匙:联系自己熟悉的事物;联系自己生活实际;联系自己学会的语言及字词知识。 运用“十引说”的方法,把字词学习与说话训练相结合。“十引说”是:1、分析字形;2、利用教具;3、凭图学词;4、组词扩词;5、选词填空;6、词语搭配;7、调整词序;8、触景用词;9、词语分类;10、联词成句。丰富了说话训练内容,使自己积累大量会说会用的字词,为写作文打下坚实基础。 (二)、句子训练。只要是一个句子,都包括两个方面:一是说的人、事、物、景,二是说目的。可有些教师指导学生说一句话时,没有很好凭借图画和事物,认真教学生观察、认识、分析、表达的方法,只是拿出一张图或一事物让学生说写一句话,学生不知道为什么要说写一句话,怎样说写一句话,说写一句什么句型、什么句式的话,导致作文中语调单一、呆板、不活泼生动。可以改让学生凭图、看物、对话、练习说写一句时间、地点、人物、事件四要素完整的话,四种句型,九种句式的话。学生才会在作文中运用不同句型、句式,表达不同的思想、感情、态度、目的。 (三)、段的训练。结合八种段式:以事物发展为序段,时间先后为序段,空间变换为序段,总述、分述结构段,因果段、转折段,递进段,并列段。以此认识客观事物的发生、发展规律。不论哪种段式,都是记叙事物的发展和人们对事物的认识,即段的内容,段的中心。它和一句话一样,也是对人、事、物、景的叙述,也是表达一个意思。只不过是把一句话进一步说得更清楚、更深刻。 (四)、篇章训练。篇是由段组成的。通过对审题、立意、选材、谋篇、定法、用语的知识与方法,通过记叙、描写、抒情、议论四种表达方法,文章开头与结尾、过渡与呼应方法,各种文章体裁的知识与方法。学会写中心明确,意思完整,详略得当的记叙文和应用文。 (五)、生活现场训练。采用生活现场训练,更好地体会“从内容入手”写作文。 通过各种作文教学活动,如“确定中心讨论会”、“选材讨论会”、“作文会诊会”、“小诸葛审题会”、“妙用词语比赛会”,从活动中生动具体地学到作文知识与写作文的方法。另外,还可开展各种校内外活动,如跳绳、拔河、踢毽、球类、背书比赛,从而学会如何写比赛作文;开展校内外义务劳动,学会如何写劳动场面;举行诗歌朗诵、讲演会,学会如何写会议场面及会议上的见闻;通过参观访问,浏览名胜古迹,学会如何写参观访问记、游记。学习观察方法,留心周围的事物、事件,“处处留心皆学问,人情练达即文章”。通过现场生活作文,进一步认识到:生活是作文的沃土。从而学会写真事、抒真情,陶冶真、善、美的情操,培养良好的文风。 实行“互评互改”,培养学生思维独立性和创造性。学生作文写好后,组织在小组内讲评。先学习别人作文的优点,再用批评的眼光互相指出作文中的缺点,并指出改进意见。在此基础上重新再写,从而使学生每写一篇都有收获。 写出诚实的自己的话 “写诚实的自己的话”是老教育家叶圣陶先生说的。旨在营造“自主”作文的五彩世界。所谓“自主”就是不受条条框框的限制,让学生无拘无束的思想,自由自在的写作。“自主”作文就是“言为心声”,率性而为,展现自我的风采,体现鲜明的个性。 应当脱离作文教学的陈旧方式,可以让学生在“自主”状态下写作,褪去矫揉造作、模仿穿凿,赋予其鲜活的想象力,丰富的创造力,等待收获的将是缤纷的色彩,清新的果实和勃勃的生机。 写作时,课堂上常发生这样的情况:有的学生文思枯竭,三言两语就把要说的倾倒完了,干干瘪瘪;有的学生却思绪绵绵,脑子里如有活水,或潺潺流淌,或波澜起伏,笔下洋洋洒洒。究其原因,与写作材料充足与否当然有密切关系,然而,切不可忽视另一重要因素,即想象力发挥得如何。 根据近代脑生理的研究,人的大脑可分为四个功能部位,即感受部位、判断部位、储存部位和想象部位。就多数人而言,前三个部位注意开发,想象部位比较忽视。据研究测试,一般人只用了自身想象力的15%,潜力很大。学写作,就要重视想象力的发展。人们说,科学是从想象开始的,如果人们不幻想能像乌一样飞,像鱼一样游,哪来今日的飞机、潜艇写文章也一样,发挥想象力,让思想插上双翅飞翔,就能上下求索,神游八荒,获得十分丰富的写作材料。 开展想象应选择不定向的、跳跃式的、自由自在的方式,也就是浮想联翩,不受限制地思考。一般地说,人们思考问题常常是按一定的常规、一定的角度进行,思维的范围比较窄,而想象却不是按部就班地思考,是不受任何拘束放开来想,思维充分发散。思维发散,头脑中就能形成许多从来没见过的事物形象,创造出前所未有的新形象。 写作文常犯的简单错误 小学生写作文,最常犯的错误,就是作文偏题或离题。 另一个常见的毛病是文笔不好,词汇不够,如果再加上内容“天马行空”,胡乱写一篇现实生活中不可能发生的事,或捣蛋、有负面影响的作文,那可就惨了。 几个原因: (1)选材不恰当:尤其是看图作文,没有照图片发挥,而是任意“创作”。 (2)词汇不够:形容“开心”的事,通篇都是“开心”,没有别的形容词; (3)句子不通顺:尤其是英语式华语,例如“小丽掉了课本”(正确是“小丽的课本掉了”)。 (4)构思不完整、详略不当:开头写了一大半,来到主题中心思想时却两句话带过,结尾更是草草了事,犯了主题不突出的毛病。 (5)观察力不够,描写不深入:例如描写弟弟顽皮,没有举例具体说明。 小学作文:看图作文最容易 窍门:依照个别的图片造句,然后将个别图片的造句串连起来,加上一些连贯词汇、描写和形容词等,便能达到基本要求。 中学作文:叙述文最易掌握 窍门:先不要考虑、担忧字数,一口气把一个人(例如我敬爱的人)、一件事(例如我难忘的事)描述和交待清楚,只要达到文字通顺就可及格;如在内容及技巧上下功夫,还可拿高分。 学生经常出现的错误包括抓不到重点、词汇不够、题材不够、联想力差等。 应多加练习 够多了吧
2. 谁帮我写8句英语的因果关系的句子啊
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3. 急需一篇英语作文,通过因果关系说明,阐述成功的主要因素。题目为On Success 要求按写作模式写,拜托各位
1) A closer analysis of the top achievers’ success can find that their success has much relation to the common factors as follows. 2) In the first place, it is the proct of their readiness to capture the fleeting but bright ideas. 3) As a growing body of evidence reveals, what separates the average person from the top achievers is the ability to encourage creative impulses and then act upon them. 4) In the second, it is the result of their effective adjustments to the changing world. 5) In response to difficulties and challenges, they manage to bring into play all the positive factors, such as changing their plain names, striking a balance between work and leisure, and motivating themselves in adversity. 6) And most of all, it is the effect of their perseverance in their struggle for success. 7) No matter what may happen to their pursuits, nothing can pull them away from striving toward their goals. 8) In sum, unyielding efforts in combination with the effective reaction to bright ideas and adaptive ability can almost always lead to success.
4. 怎样写好英语段落(二)
段落发展的手段及结尾段的写法 在上一讲我们讲了主题句,推展句的写法;这一讲我们要进一步来谈一谈段落发展的几种手段以及结尾段的写法。 段落发展的几种手段 1. 列举法(details) 作者运用列举法,是通过列举一系列的论据对topic sentence中摆出的论点进行广泛、全面地陈述或解释,列举的顺序可以按照所列各点内容的相对重要性、时间、空间等进行。 Yesterday was one of those awful days for me when everything I did went wrong. First, I didn't hear my alarm clock and arrived late for work. Then, I didn't read my diary properly and forgot to get to an important meeting with my boss. During the coffee break, I dropped my coffee cup and spoilt my new skirt. At lunch time, I left my purse on a bus and lost all the money that was in it. After lunch, my boss was angry because I hadn't gone to the meeting. Then I didn't notice a sign on a door that said "Wet Paint" and so I spoilt my jacket too. When I got home I couldn't get into my flat because I had left my key in my office. So I broke a window to get in and cut my hand. 根据本段主题句中的关键词组everything I did went wrong,作者列举了8点内容,分别由first, then, ring the coffee break, after lunch time等连接词语引出,使得该文条理清楚、脉络分明、内容连贯。 常用于列举法的过渡连接词有:for one thing , for another, finally, besides, moreover, one another , still another, first, second, also等。 2. 举例法(example) 作者通过举出具体事例来阐述、说明主题句的内容,严格地讲,举例法也是列举法的一种,它们的区别在于:列举法侧重罗列事实,所列事实力求全面;而举例法侧重通过举出典型事例来解释作者观点,且事例可多可少。 我们来看下面这个用举例法展开的段落。 There are many different forms of exercises to suit different tastes. For example, those who enjoy competitive sports may take up ball games. For another example, if they prefer to exercise alone, they can have a run or take a walk in the morning or in the evening. Besides, people can go swimming in the summer and go skating in the winter. In short, no matter what their interests are, people can always find more than one sports that are suitable to them. 本段采用了三个事例来说明主题句中的关键词组different forms of exercises,这三个例子分别由连接词for example, for another example 和 besides引出,最后由引导的结尾句总结全段内容。 举例法中常用的连接词有:for example (instance), one example is, besides, furthermore, moreover, in addition等。 3. 叙述法(narration) 叙述法发展段落主要是按照事物本身的时间或空间的排列顺序,通过对一些特有过渡连接词的使用,有层次分步骤地表达主题句的一种写作手段。用这种方法展开段落,作者能够清楚连贯地交待事物的本末,从而可以使读者可以清晰、完整地理解文章的含义,例如: In the flat opposite, a woman heard the noise outside. When she looked out through the window, she discovered that her neighbor was threatened by someone. She immediately called the police station. In answer to the call, a patrol police car arrived at the scene of the crime quickly. Three policemen went inside the flat at once, and others guarded outside the building to prevent anyone from escaping. 这段是按照事物发展的先后顺序,叙述从发现案情、报警、到警察赶到、包围现场的过程。全文脉络清晰,叙述的层次感强,结构紧凑。 常用于叙述法中的过渡连接词有:first, an the beginning, to start with, after that, later, then, afterwards, in the end, finally等。 4. 对比法或比较法(comparison & contrast) 将同类的事物按照某种特定的规则进行比较分析是一种常用的思维方法。通过对比,更容易阐述所述对象之间的异同和优缺点,例如: The heart of an electronic computer lies in its vacuum tubes, or transistors. Its electronic circuits work a thousand times faster than the nicer cells in the human brain. A problem that might take a human being a long time to solve can be solved by a computer in one minute. 在这段文字上, 作者为了突出电子计算机运行速度之快,首先将它与人脑进行了比较, "-- a thousand times faster than --" ;而后,又将这一概念具体到了 "a problem"上,通过对比使读者从 "-- a long time -- in one minute"上有更加直观的认识。 常用于对本法或比较法上的过渡连接词有:than, compared with等。 5. 分类法(classification) 在阐述某一概念的段落中,常用分类法。通过对概念中所包括的事物进行分门别类,分别加以叙述,使读者有更为清晰的认识,如: Ever since humans have lived on the earth, they have made use of various forms of communication. Generally, this expression of thoughts and feelings has been in the form of oral speech. When there is a language barrier, communication is accomplished through sign language in which motions stand for letters, words and ideas. Tourists and the people unable to hear or speak have had to resort to this form of expression. Many of these symbols of whole words are very vivid and exact and can be used internationally; spelling, however, cannot. Body language transmits ideas or thoughts by certain actions, either intentionally or unintentionally. A nod signifies approval, while shaking the head indicates a negative reaction. Other forms of nonlinguistic language can be found in signal flags, Morse code, and picture signs. 在该段中为了说明topic sentence中的 "various forms of communication",作者将其分为oral speech, sign language, body language及other forms of nonlinguistic language,并逐加阐述。 采用这种方法的段落并没有标志突出的连接词,所述各项均为平行并列关系,所以没有明显的主次之分。 6.因果分析法(cause and effect) 在阐述某一现象的段落中,常采用因果分析法。例如: The role of women in today's society is changing. One reason is that women have begun to assert themselves as independent people through the women's movement. Also, women are aware of the alternatives to staying at home. Another reason is that increasing numbers of women who enter new fields and interests serve as role models for other women. Moreover, men are becoming more conscious of the abilities of women and have begun to view their independence positively. 本段中,主题句提出了一种社会现象,推展句则对产生这种现象的原因作出各种解释。 常用于因果分析法的连接词有:because, so, as a result等。 7. 定义法(definition) 在科普文章的写作中,定义法是必不可少的。通过下定义,可以使读者对该事物有一个更直接的认识。 Automation refers to the introction of electronic control and automation operation of proctive machinery. It reces the human factors, mental and physical, in proction, and is designed to make possible the manufacture of more goods with fewer workers. The development of automation in American instry has been called the "Second Instrial Revolution". 这一段文字使我们了解了 "automation" 和 "Second Instrial Revolution" 两个概念,分别由 "refers to" 和 "been called" 引出。 常出现在定义法中的词语有:refer to, mean, call等。 8. 重复法(repetition) 句子的一部分反复出现在段落中,这就是重复法。它往往造成一种步步紧逼的气氛,使文章结构紧凑,有感染力。比如: Since that time, which is far enough away from now, I have often thought that few people know what secrecy there is in the young, under terror. I was in mortal terror of the young man who wanted my heart and liver; I was in mortal terror of my interlocutor with the iron leg; I was in mortal terror of myself, from whom an awful promise had been extracted; -- 该段中反复应用了I was in mortal terror of …我经常处于恐怖之中。 以上, 我们结合具体文章讨论了展开段落的几种方法。在实际写作中,我们往往不必拘泥于一种写作方法,而是将若干方法穿插在一起,使文章有声有色。 结尾段 我们知道文章的开头很重要,因为好的开头可以吸引读者、抓住读者的注意力。同样,文章的结尾也很重要,好的结尾会使读者对全文的中心思想留下深刻的印象,可以增添文章的效果和说服力,让人深思,回味无穷。确切地说,结尾的作用就是概括全文内容,进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想,使读者加深印象;有时也用于展望未来,提出今后方向或令人深思的问题给读者留下回味和思考的余地。 但是,如何才能写好英文短文的结尾呢? 下面就介绍几种写结尾段最常用的方法: 1.重复中心思想: 回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上,达到再次肯定和强调的效果。 (例1)A sense of humor is really one of the keys to happiness. It gives zest to life to make it worth living. (例2)With all these benefits, it is no wonder that sports and games have now become more popular with people than ever. 2.作出结论: 文章最后用几句话概括全文内容,并进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的观点。 (例1)In conclusion, a good teacher-student relationship can be mutual beneficial. The students gain knowledge eagerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job. (例2)On the whole there are more advantages than disadvantages in the use of TV. Yet different people may have different attitude toward TV. But we must realize that television in itself is neither good nor bad. Its value to people and society depends on how we look at it. 3.应用引语: 用格言、谚语或习语总结全文,既言简意赅又有更强的说服力。 (例1)If you have anything to do, try to do it yourself, for that is the safest way to
permanent success. Remember the famous saying. "God helps those who help themselves." (例2)If we stick to studies day after day, there is nothing that can't be achieved. As an old saying goes: "Constant dropping of water wears away a stone." 4.用反问结尾: 虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,具有明显的强调作用,引起读者思考。 (例1)Therefore, listening skills must be consciously improved. Since it is such an important means of learning and communication, why should we not develop this ability as far as possible? (例2)So,what can we benefit from wealth if we do not have health? 5.提出展望或期望: 表示对将来的展望或期待读者投入行动。 (例1)I am sure that Chinese will become one of the most important languages in the world in the next century. As China will open further to the outside world the language is sure to be spread world widely. (例2) If everyone has developed good manners, people will form a more harmonious relation. If everyone behaves considerately towards others and social ethics people will live in a better world. With the general mood of society improved, there will be a progress of civilization. 以上介绍了几种写结尾段最常用的方法,但到底选择何种方法结尾还得根据文体来决定。平铺直叙的记叙文,往往在故事或事实情节讲完时文章也就自然结束了,而说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文都应有一个正式的结尾。希望以上介绍的几种方法能对大家写好结尾有所帮助。 首先,一个段落必须有一个中心即主题思想,该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题(stick or hold to the topic),这就是段落的统一性(unity)。其次,一个段落必须有若干推展句,使主题思想得到充分展开,从而给读者一个完整的感觉,这就是完整性(completeness or adequateness)。再者,一个段落不是杂乱无章的,而是有机的组合,句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑,从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅(smooth),这就是连贯性(coherence)。下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。 1. 统一性 一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心,任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例: Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico. 本段的主题句是段首句,controlling idea(中心思想)是take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences,一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie,这一段是讲的是Joe and I,中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有,Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。考生在四级统考的作文卷上常常因为造出irrelevant sentences(不相关语句)而丢分,值得引起注意。再看一个例子: My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Every day I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby. 本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit,但段中有两个irrelevant sentences,一个是I bought two new suitcases last week,另一个是My mother was a premature baby。 从上面两个例子可以看出,native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果这种句子多了,造成偏题或离题,那问题就更严重了。权责声明:本站所有音乐均网上搜集仅做宽带测试,任何涉及商业盈利目的均不得使用,否则后果自负!如遇英文歌曲不能播放,系歌曲链接失效,请谅解!本站全部英文歌曲的所有权归其唱片公司或歌手所有。请购买正版英文歌曲支持你的偶像!
5. 英语听力与写作技巧的因果关系
听力的过程中可以积累词汇和语法的运用,这对于写作时表达自己的意思起到了很大的帮助。但是也要注意有些口头用语不要出现在写作中哦,显得太过随便是会被扣分的。
6. 雅思写作中因果关系如何表达
你好,关于如何表达好雅思写作中的因果关系?
写明因果关系很重要。关于因果关系的表达同学们都很熟悉,无非是BS(because / so),而且大家也一定很清楚的知道BS在英语中,用了前者就不能用后者的道理。例如:
ü Because further ecation has become more accessible for a wider range of people, an increasing number of people have degrees.
ü Further ecation has become more accessible for a wider range of people, so an increasing number of people have degrees.
但是除了BS之外,还有很多其它表示因果关系的表达,具体如下:
Because系列(表原因):
1. because of : because后接的是一个句子(主谓宾);because of 后一般直接跟名词。例如:
ü Because of the increasing number of machine—and as we noted before, machines magnify human effort—then anyone using a machine can get a higher wage than anyone not using a machine.
2. as / since(除了“因为“外,还有”自从”的意思,使用时要注意避免歧义)
ü Hours spent on commuting, traffic jams, and fights for parking should diminish, sinceworkers make fewer journeys or work staggered hours.
ü Unfortunately, as the number of people living in the city increases, so do the different problems associated with population growth. (注意此句中的so不表示“所以”,而是“…也…”的意思)
3. thanks to(positive situations通常适用于结果好的时候)
ü Thanks to new technology, it's easier than ever to work remotely.
e to (negative situations通常使用与结果不好的时候)
owing to / attributable to /on account of.
ü Due to /… / On account ofextreme weather conditions, damage to property occurs.
4. 当原因需要的表达较多时,我们还可以把以上表达改写为原因状语从句,使用thanks to the fact that / e to the fact that /owing to the fact that或者on the grounds that ,,,
ü Will we live longer merely e to the fact that / on the grounds that technology, if implemented properly, will take stress away from our lives
5. caused by /result from也表原因
ü Many car accidents were resulted from / caused bya lack of guardrails
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7. 写英语作文时并列,转折,因果,递进的叠词
并列抄than, and, or, so
转折袭but,however,unfortually,while,after all,although,in contract,yet,whereas,on the other hand,despite,...
因果because ,so(不可连用)
递进moreover,furthermore,nevetheless
8. 求该英语段落的写作技巧和特色,最后能逐句赏析,英语大神们,求教啊,在线等,着急。。。
写作的最高境界就是看不出技巧。这段英文不知来源是什么,通篇读来是平铺直版叙的风格,一句接权着一句,句式都很简单,陈述句。没有特别的语法结构。就第一句稍长,做了了比方,as a colonol might look at a private whose bootlaces were underdone. as 就像是,, might, 表示非常不确定的假设和推测的情形。除此之外没有特别可以分析的。如果你能读懂的话。
"他看着我的表情又惊讶又不满,就像是一个上校看着一个靴子鞋带没系好的士兵。“嗯,你最好进来”他说。房间狭窄阴暗,没有阳光;空气中弥漫着腐烂的卷心菜的难闻的味道;墙壁上满是墨水印迹;一室静寂。他的书房,从地摊上散落的面包屑来看,也是他的餐厅。“你最好坐下,”他说,然后他问了我一系列问题:我在学校里都上了什么课程,多大了,喜欢什么运动;接着,他用充满血丝的眼睛盯着我,问我觉得体育运动是否在男孩的教育中占据很重要的位置。我含含糊糊地回答说我不认为应该过度重视。他哼了一声。看来我说错话了。很明显我和校长之间没有多少共同点..."
9. 有因果关系的英语作文怎么写
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second… And then,Finally,In the end,At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In addition As well as,not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However,On the contrary,but,Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表 因 果 关 系:Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As a result 5.表换一种方式表达:In other words,that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example;For instance;such as+n/doing 7.表 陈 述 事 实:In fact,frankly speaking,
8.表达自己观点:As far as I know/concerned,In my opinion,personally, as to me
9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary,all in all, briefly/ in brief ; generally speaking, as you know, as is known to all
良好的开端等于成功的一半.在写作文时,通常以最简单也最常用的方式---开门见山法.也就是说, 直截了当地提出你对这个问题的看法或要求,点出文章的中心思想. A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and
disadvantages.(用于说明某物的正反两面) B. Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient.(用
于比较/对比 两事物) C.Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the
city and in the countryside. (人们关于生活在城市还是农村的优缺点的看法不同)(用于表达看法) D. As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.(用于说明某物的重要性) E. Why do you go to university Different people have different points of view.
(反问语气,更有吸引力,增强说服力)(用法广泛) 文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:定语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等. 宾语从句举例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.
状语从句举例:If everyone does something for the environment,our hometown will become clean and beautiful.
动名词做主语举例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes. =It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.
10. 大学英语作文怎么用因果论证
给你一个例文吧
为什么在我们眼里学校生活是枯燥的?
【内容提示】
学生们谈起假日活动便眉飞色舞,说到回校上课就有点愁眉苦脸。为什么学生们不喜欢学校呢?因为学校生活太枯燥。请你写一篇文章,分析一下其中的原因。是因为学生们不喜欢上课呢,还是什么别的原因?
【作文示范】
Why School Is Dull in Our Eyes
Whenever we talk about holidays, there is always a pretty smile on our faces. But when we realize our holidays will soon be over and we have to return to school, we feel a bit sad. This is not because we hate study. What we hate is our ll life at school.
The scope①of our school life is nothing more than our school, or even the much smaller classroom. Every day, every term, we have our lessons in the same classroom repeatedly. We have no chance to get in touch with society to enrich our life. School is just like a cage that binds②our thoughts and behaviors. How can we teenagers stay in a cage? For the teenagers it is just time that our own characters are formed. One's character must be moulded through practice and experiences. But the school passes us knowledge merely from text books. And no student can free himself from so many kinds of homework. Can we form our character in this way? No, never!
We can not make free use of our time. Everyday we are forced to do what we don't like to do. Everyday we have to study for better scores. We just don't want to be slaves of scores. Sometimes we do not even have time to read newspapers. Once I heard that one of us did not even know who Ronald Reagan③ is. But most of our teachers at school think that good scores are more important than stronger characters. They highly praise students who achieve good scores instead of praising those with strong characters.
All of us hope that life is becoming richer and richer, and the scope of life much wider. In school we should acquire not only knowledge, but also learn to understand nature of life. If school life is full of fun and interests, I believe we will enjoy school life much better.
【词语解释】
①scope [sk up] n.范围;眼界
②bind [nd] v.捆;束缚
③Ronald Reagan['r&n ld 'reig n] 罗纳德・里根(美国总统名)
【写法指要】
本文作者在引言段为自己立论“What we hate is our ll life at school.”。接着,作者在正文中运用因果辩证关系对这一论点进行了直接论证。如果我们把“our ll life at school”看作结果的话,那么本文就是由结果推断原因了。作者根据自身的体验和学校存在的事实,分析出了两方面的原因:一是教学脱离实际、脱离社会,二是学校推行的是应试教育。最后,作者的结论是多姿多彩的学校生活才不会枯燥。