① 国外essay补习 学术英语写作注意要点
1、避免使用反问句、设问句。
例如: What’s the objective of the information? Is it to makepeople more confused and astray? I partly agree with theauthor’s contention that the enormous and otiose information sometimes render people lose their way and fail to consider question penetratingly and originally.
在作文的开头就扔出两个问题,然后接下来的陈述却与问题基本毫无干系。作为读者,首先要考虑那两个问题的答案到底是什么,然后才能往下读。这些在中文里可能会被评作“引人入胜”的好词好句,在英语的论文写作里面,可以说是最大的败笔之一。如果同学一定要问问题的话,那就改成陈述句式,例如:Whether this issue is right or wrong? 可以改成:It has been a controversial issue that.....
2、避免集中使用“Be”动词。
避免集中使用"Be"动词,包括is, are, has been, have been, etc.
例如:What is the purpose of ecation? Some people may say that the purpose of ecation should be to create a totally academic environment that separates from the outside world, for,they think, this situation allows students to focus on their academic research work without beingdisturbed by practical concerns. In fact, this suggestion is harmful to the scientific research work.
这是某一篇文章的开头。作者除了要注意不要使用疑问句以外,还有很重要的一点:总共两三句话,出现4个"Be"动词。这种写法,在英语里面被称作"non-act"的动词。"Be" 仅仅表示一种状态,例如:"i am here", "you are there". 对于母语者来说,"Be"动词其实就是写在纸上,而没有任何感情色彩。所以应该尽量避免成篇累牍地使用。留学生们的例子可以改为:
Some people argue that the purpose of ecation lies in its strength in creating a totally academic environment separated from the outside world. They think this situation allows students to focuson academic research by excluding outside disturbance from practical concerns. However, this suggestion in fact does harm to the scientific research work.
留学生们可以看到,使用了lie in, exclude, do harm to以后,句子更有色彩了。
3、避免重复使用单词或者词组。
尽量避免重复使用单词或者词组。特别是近距离集中在某一两句话里使用。
例如:The author argues that to understand one’s own culture, one must know about at leastone another culture which is distinctly different from one’s own culture. While as I am concerned, Ican’t agree with the author’s assertion.
这一个开头,总共两行字,却连续出现了4个One,3个culture。如果同学把这段话大声朗读一下,就会觉得别扭、好笑了。连续使用相同的单词或者词组(包括短句),体现的是作者词汇量匮乏,写作风格较差,遣词造句能力不强。给读者的感觉就是昏昏欲睡。
很容易的留学生们就可以改正:The author argues that the knowledge of another distinctly differentculture helps us to truly understand our own. However, I disagree with this assertion.
这句话把原来的三句分句合成了并无冗长感觉的一句。精简的同时,也恰当地避免了重复多次使用culture,one的问题。用了"this assertion",也避免了在近距离使用两个"author"。
4、避免使用从句套从句的超长句子。
学术性的文章,应当避免追求华丽词藻和句型。作为非母语者,留学生们在语感上面已经处于劣势。为了避免缺乏语感而造成的很多语法上面、句子结构上面的小失误,留学生们更应该尽量避免使用长句。看了很多作者的文章,长句造成的后果通常有:单复数混淆,it、that指代不清,从句两头时态不符,连接介词错误,等等。
例如:Things happened in the past, known as history, is great treasure for us huan beings,through and only through studying the past can we gain valuable experience which serves as ameans of guiding our development of the society.
例子中作者用了3处逗号,而事实上面,从句间关系并非密不可分。留学生们可以很轻松的分成三句话,作者写得安心,读者读得舒心,做到真正的言必达意。
History consists of the things happened in the past and it is a great treasure to human beings.Through and only through studying the past thoroughly can we gain valuable experience fromhistory. The historical experience serves as a means of guidance for the new development in thesociety.
5、避免陈词滥调等废话。
例如:For getting a satisfying score, students have to prepare for and review their textsfrequently, remember all the knowledge they have learned deep in mind, enlarge their learning if itis possible and so on, especially when examinations are coming. All these efforts, no matter whattheir aims are, will surely lead to a corresponding paying back.
段中的这一句"no matter what their aims are",在整个上下文表达上面没有任何实质性的意义,完完全全是句废话。
② 求一些关于学术英语写作的英文书。。。
Academic Writing: An Introction
http://books.google.co.nz/books?id=aoSGGx7ukXYC&printsec=frontcover&dq=academic+writing&hl=zh-CN&sig=lrGBVcArjpf356IFKsoVbg-j9M8#PPA12,M1
Academic Writing: Writing and Reading Across the Disciplines
http://books.google.co.nz/books?id=PXTfc1bMNUkC&printsec=frontcover&dq=academic+writing&hl=zh-CN#PPA42,M1
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③ 学术英语写作中需要引用common knowledge吗
学术英语写作就像写论文,怎么可以和普通作文相提并论。学术英语回写作具有更强的严谨性,答如果说用常识去写作会显得不够严谨因此必须用专业的对你所在的专业上的知识的理解进行词汇、句型、格式的选择。最好对专业方面具有一定程度的理解后再去写。你最好写草稿。切记不可马虎对待,同时最好要有数据、专业理论等去支持你的观点。记住,英语写作最忌讳的就是千篇一律,不可盲目套用格式套用其他不符合论文的措辞以及不可盲目套用其他非论文文体去写作。每一种英文文体都有其固定的用词、写作逻辑思路。
④ 学术英语写作和其他英语写作的区别
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⑤ 学术英语写作中,引用一些信息,但拼错作者名字算剽窃吗
不算吧,只有用别人的文章或观点,不加署名,才算是剽窃
⑥ 学术英语写作
英语专业写作和一般英语的写作不同之处是要求更高一些,会有写作专业。专首先是字数要求,考试的时候英属语字数要比平时训练时少很多其次是谋篇布局,英语专业写作在上课的时候会景不同的文章分类,议论文,记叙文,说明文,应用文等;然后根据类别学习练习英文写作最后是词汇和句式要求,英语专业写作中同一个词的出现频率不能太高,句式强调复杂多变。总结三个词语:unity,coherence,variation。
⑦ 学术英语写作 余莉 梁永刚 版 课后习题
In my opinion,success means brilliant achievement in our work.In other words,no matter what we do,making outstanding contributions to the development of our country and bringing help and happiness to others is success.
To achieve success,we should,first of all,have a clear long-term goal in our life.Besides,we should have short term goals in different periods of life.As we know,it is these short term goals that make our long-term goal possible.Second,we should be both perseverant and hardworking.Whatever we do,there are always two possibilities:success and failure.
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⑨ 收到美国顶级名校Offer,学术英语写作到底怎么做
可以寻求专业的学术翻译,使用专业的学术词汇,