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英语概括写作五步法

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『壹』 英语写作方法有哪些

英语写作方法抄有哪些:

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『贰』 什么是五步法写作文

第一次写800字作文,可难坏了孩子,看完这些作文,老师都笑了
语文老师也知道突然增加一倍字数的作文对孩子们来说很难,肯定会有孩子完不成作业。可是第二天收上作业后,看到第一次写800小作文的孩子们,为了凑字字数使出“十八般武艺”,老师也忍不住笑了。
第一位同学:一眼看上去,卷面非常整齐,字写得很认真值得表扬。主题也很明确,描述了自己和小朋友打乒乓球的过程,只不过把每一拍都记录了下来。

第二位同学:上一位同学打乒乓球,这位同学打扑克牌,不过字体有些潦草,书写有待加强。但是思路更加严谨了,每一句话都想好了“走牌路数”。老师看完只有一种感觉,孩子在家没少玩扑克牌呀!

第三位同学:这位同学书写很认真,但是满满的“哈”字实在太明显了,老师只能评了一句“凑字数”,恐怕要挨批评了。

第四位同学:这位同学“凑字数”凑得很有技术含量,主题是“爷爷过生日”,然后详细地记录了每一位到场的亲戚。分类也很明确,哥哥们放在一起、伯伯们放在一起,值得表扬!

看完孩子们的800字作文,别只顾着笑,提高孩子作文水平才是重点
看过了这四位小学生的作文,相信很多家长也跟老师一样忍不住笑 了,笑过之后还是要回归到孩子的学习当中,为什么孩子要“凑字数”呢?
原因无非三个不懂作文、 没有思路、没有素材!
写作文跟看图写话不一样,写作文更加考验孩子的整体把控、逻辑思维、素材储备等。刚升入三年级的孩子阅读量不达标,根本不知道“作文”是什么?应该怎么写?
如果你的孩子也不会写作文,可以从以下三个角度引导:
1)彩图激发阅读兴趣,了解作文
三年级的孩子还处在“玩心重于学习”的阶段,普通的作文书密密麻麻的文字会造成孩子反感。而彩绘、文字,根能吸引孩子的阅读兴趣,加深理解能力。
2)认真讲解写作思路,启蒙创作
孩子们不会写作文绝大多数是不理解“作文怎么写”,家长可以从最简单的“总分总”结构开始讲述写作思路。
3)海量素材积累总结,提高质量
“素材”是写作最重要的一部分,丰富的素材能够充实文章内容,无形中增加了字数,不需要孩子绞尽脑汁地“凑字数”了,比如古代人物、外国名人、历史事迹等等,积累得越多写作的时候才能妙笔生花。

『叁』 五步法写英语作文有什么好处,用汉语写一篇八百字左右的心得体会

写作是听、说、读、写四项语言技能中不可分割的重要组成部分,是语言生成能力的重要表现形式。因此,《普通高中英语课程标准》对八级写的技能提出了四项具体的要求,1)能写出连贯且结构完整的短文,叙述事情,表达观点和态度;2)能根据课文写摘要;3)能在写作中做到文体规范,语句通顺;4)能根据文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报。为了检查考生是否达到相应级别的写作技能,测试学生综合运用英语的能力,看是否能用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流,高考英语试卷中设计了书面表达题。
书面表达题既不属于专项训练中的汉译英,又不同于扩写、改写或缩写,也不同于考生自由发挥的命题作文。这种题型有具体的语言环境,对所要表达的材料的对象、时间、地点、内容、数字均有具体限制,是一种有一定条件的半开放性作文。这种题型的难度就在于他要求考生具有一定的审题能力,阅读能力,字、词、句的组织搭配能力。他要求考生根据命题所设计的语言环境和具体内容写一段完整的英语短文,内容包括日常生活和一般活动。体裁包括记叙文、说明文、议论文。要求做到运用语言灵活,恰当、语意连贯,文理通顺,内容完整。
写作技能的训练和培养是中学英语教学中的重点和难点,也是高考成功的关键点。据调查这一题失分较高,许多考试望题兴叹,无从下手,中等水平的考生虽能写上几句,但只能是残句断篇,表达无意。高考书面表题失分严重的现象,也给中学英语教学带来了不少的负面影响,学多学生放弃对英语写作的训练,致使学了近十年英语也写不出几句简单的话,更不用说完整的英语短文了。如果了解了书面表题的特点,掌握了一定的方法,通过正确的引导和训练,能够有效地提高学生的写作水平。
一、认真审题,明确主旨
审题是答好书面表达题的前提和关键。审题的目的在于明确所要表达的内容,主旨以及与此有关系的文体、格式等。通过审题首先要明白题目呈现的形式,是以文字叙述、还是以图表提供的信息;明白是要求写信、通知、简介、报道、寻物、招领、还是日记、便条等,这一步很重要,它决定着考生要组织那一方面的材料,也决定着写作时语言的选择。其次,找到文章中要出现的人物,以便确立谁是动作执行者;明白事情发生的地点,以便选用恰当的状语或定语;了解事情发生的时间,以便确定文章所需要的时态;然后,要搞清事情发生的原因、过程、结果等内在联系,以便挑选恰当的词语。另外,还要清楚题目中的外显条件和内隐条件,搞清除了能直接利用哪些线索进行描述外,还要考生补充和适当发挥哪些内容,以便满足题目数字的要求以及行文的连贯。要走好第一步首先不要单独图快而仓促行事,而要抓住主要内容,即要点。不要脱离试题要求,随便编造一些与题目内容无关的内容。因此,审题时应利用题目中的文字要求,按表达顺序课题直接列出1、2、3、。。。。。等要点。这样可以避免动笔时离题或遗漏要点。
二、概括要点,处理信息
该题通常以图示、表格、连环画、漫画、文字叙述等形式提供给考生。考生要彻底理解所给图示、表格、连环画、漫画的内容,如数字特点,项目关系,懂得连环画、漫画的寓意,明确图上人物的年龄、职业、活动内容,明确事件发生的时间和地点等。标出连环画所示的故事发生的起因,发展过程,结果。明白材料要你表达什么。然后转化成文字内容,将要点以词、词组的形式表示出来。这一步是对审题的继续和发展,又为下一步要点的英语表述打下了基础,因此,也是十分重要的。
三、选词组句,表达要点
该题虽说不得逐条翻译,但要点的翻译也是必要的。在明确体裁,把握好要点之后,用准确的语言简要地表达出来。这时应作到1)尽量运用六种简单英语句型结构:主谓状、主谓宾、主系表、主谓宾+宾、主谓宾+宾补、There be 句型。2)句子易短不易长,结构易简不易繁;3)不追求华丽的辞藻,不抠字眼;4)充分利用多种表达方式,选择自己最熟悉,最有把握的词句;5)遵循英语表达习惯,直译意译相结合,避免英语的“汉语味”;6)应注意主谓一致,时态正确,句子结构合理。有的考生认为这一步比较难,实际上,在做好了第一、第二步之后,选词组句的难度已经降低了,稍具基本工的考生经努力是能够达到这一步要求的。
四、加工整理,连句成篇
词连成句时,根据文章体裁特点,可选用用并列、递进、条件、因果、专折等意义的连词把所有的句子根据行文特点,故事的发展顺序,依次连接来,使之成文,使得句与句、段与段之间语意连贯,结构完整。同时在表达正确的基础之上,搭配词和句,如介词短语,现在分词短语、过去分词短语的巧妙搭配。句与句之间,如简单句和复合句、并列句之间的合理搭配。这些都能使得文章主题准确、生动、形象地表达,使文章具有一定的表现力。这一步能有效的体现考生是否具有较高的写作能力,是否达到课标的八级要求,是否满足高考选拔优秀人才的需要。
五、查漏补缺,避免错误
在连句成篇的基础之上,从书写格式、单词拼写、词语的运用、句子时态、动词语态、标点符号、文章长度、要点完整等方面逐一查找,出现问题时及时补救,使文章更加完美。最后,字迹清楚、书写规范地抄写在答题纸上,使文章的整体面目干净、整洁。

『肆』 英语写作方法

英语写作方法六大原则:
1. advanced words (高级词汇原则)
2. adverbial advanceed (状语提前原则)
3. phrases preferred (短语优先原则)
4.compound sentence, composite sentence and sentence of special kind (并列句、复合句和特殊句式原则)
5. long and short sentences alternately (长短句交替原则)
6. passages in paragraphs(短文分段分层原则)
高分作文的五大特性
1. sense of order (条理性: 段落完整,层次分明)
2. accuracy (准确性: 语法准确,用词精当)
3. fluency (流畅性: 层次清晰,行文连贯)
4. conciseness & variety (简洁、多样性: 语言简洁,不重复)
5. ideological content (思想性: 文章立意高,表达个人观点内容积极向上)

过渡词的使用
过渡词是一种关系指引词,一般由副词或起副词作用的短语承担。此外,代词、连词、上下文的近义词等也可作过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”,在文章中发挥着连接上下文的作用,学会恰当地运用过渡词会使文章结构紧凑,启、承、转、合,过渡自然,融会贯通,连成一体。
1、根据意思和作用的不同,过渡词可以分为以下十六类:
(1)表并列关系的过渡词:
and, also, as well, as well as, or, too, not only…but also, both … and, either … or, neither…nor等。
(2)表递进关系的过渡词:
besides, in addition(加之,除……之外), moreover(此外,而且), what’s more, what’s worse等。
(3)表转折对比的过渡词:
but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first… whereas the second, once…now, on the one hand … on the other hand, some…others等。
(4)表原因的过渡词:
because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, e to(由于), for this reason, owing to, as far as, considering that, seeing that等。
(5)表结果的过渡词:
so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, thereby, hence, so…that, such…that?, accordingly等。??
(6)表条件的过渡词:
if, unless, on condition that, as/so long as等。
(7)表时间的过渡词:
when, while, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on,? eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning / year / century, after a while, in a few days, now, presently, finally, at last, all of a sudden, form now on, at present, immediately, the moment等。
(8)表特定的顺序关系的过渡词:
first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, afterward(s)(后来), meanwhile(几乎同时), thereafter(在那以后), last, finally, eventually(终于)等。
(9)表换一种方式表达的过渡词:
in other words, that is to say, to put it another way等。
(10)表进行举例说明的过渡词:
for instance, for example, take … as an example, namely, such as, like, in other words, that is to say, that is等。
(11)表陈述事实的过渡词:
in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。
(12)表强调的过渡词:
certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely等。
(13)表比较、对比的过渡词:
like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, be similar to, rather than, on the contrary, by contrast, one one hand…, on the other hand, otherwise 等。
(14)表目的的过渡词:
for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to等。
(15)表总结的过渡词:
in a word(总之,简言之), in general, in short(总之), above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。
(16)表增补的过渡词:in addition, furthermore, again, also, besides, moreover, what’s more, similarly, next, finally 等。
2、文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成,在修辞中称为启、承、转、合。“启”就是开头, “承”是承接,“转”是转折,“合”是综合或总结。
(1) “启”。
用于表示“启”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落或文章的开头:
过渡词: first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to being with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, at present, lately, currently,
过渡句:It is often said that…,
As the proverb says…,
It goes without saying that…,
It is clear/obvious that…,
Many people often ask …
(2) “承”。
表示“承”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中:
过渡词: second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what
is worse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt,
过渡句:It is true that…,
Everybody knows that…,
It can be easily proved that…,
No one can deny that…
The reason why …is that …,
There is no doubt that…,
To take…for an example (instance) …,
We know that…,
What is more serious is that…
(3)“转”。
用于“转”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中:
过渡词:but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any case, at any rate(无论如何), nevertheless(虽然如此), otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, inspite of ..., yet, instead,
过渡句:I do not believe that…,
Perhaps you’ll ask why…
This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to…,
Though we are in basic agreement with …, yet differences will be found,
That’s why i feel that…
(4) “合”。
用于“合”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中:
过渡词: in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking,to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, above all, thus,after all(毕竟), eventually, hence, in short, in conclusion, in a word, in sum(总之), on the whole(就整体而言), to sum up
过渡句:From this point of view …
On account of this we can find that …
The result is dependent on …
Thus, this is the reason why we must…

长短句结合
(1)句子既要生动,又要简明扼要。
(2)在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、复杂句和复合句并用,还可以使用简化句等,一些较复杂的结构如独立结构,分词结构等也可以使用。
(3)可以使用一些特殊句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力,以增加文章“亮点”。强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。(这是我上初中时英语老师给我的,帮助了我,希望也能帮助你。。)

『伍』 英语写作中的过程写作法有哪些


1.(失去生命)die:

<形>

1.(不顾生命;拼死)tothedeath:


2.(达到极点)extremely;todeath:


3.(不可调和的)implacable;deadly:


4.(固定;死板;不活动)fixed;rigid;inflexible:


  1. 5.(不能通过)impassable;closed

『陆』 英语写作考试中outline概括的一般方法有什么技巧

其实就是总-分的结构。先写一句提示下文的概括性的话,继而进行解释或者介绍: 1.表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.
2)The reasons for this are as follows.
3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek.
5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
例如:
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2.表示好处
1)It has the following advantages.
2)It does us a lot of good.
3)It benefits us quite a lot.
4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us.
例如:
Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
3.表示坏处
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2)It does us much harm.
3)It is harmfulto us.
例如:
However,everything dividesinto two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching televi- sion.
4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient, possible)for sb.to do sth.
2)We think it necessary to do sth.
3)It plays an important role in our life.
例如:
Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon, computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5.表示措施
1)We should take some effective measures.
2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties.
3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
例如:
The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.
6.表示变化
1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2)A great change will certainly be proced in the world’s communications.
3)The computer has brought about many changes in ecation.
例如:
Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
7.表示事实、现状
1)We cannot ignore the fact that...
2)No one can deny the fact that...
3)There is no denying the fact that...
4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
5)However,that’s not the case.
例如:
We cannot ignore the fact that instrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems, we can start by ecating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.
8.表示比较
1)Compared with A,B...
2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV.
3)There is a striking contrast between them.
例如:
Compared with cars,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly,they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to people’s health by giving them e physical exercise.
9.表示数量
1)It has increased(decreased)from...to...
2)The population in this city has now increased (decreased)to 800,000.
3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15% compared with that of January.
例如:
With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on ecation has increased.
再如:
From the graph listed above,itcan be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.
注:“From the graph listed above,it can be seen that”见句式12。考生将句式9和句式12结合在一起,便可较好地写出2002年6月CET -4、6短文写作的第一段。
10.表示看法
1)People have(take,adopt,assume)different attitudes towards sth.
2)People have different opinions on this problem.
3)People take different views of(on)the question.
4)Some people believe that...Others argue that...
例如:
People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success.
Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However, others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.
再如:
Do“lucky numbers?really bring good luck?Different people have different views on it.
注:一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始,考生应掌握这一写作方法。
11.表示结论
1)In short,it can be said that ...
2)It may be briefly summed up as follows.
3)From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that ...
例如:
From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary,however, its method should be improved.
注:例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句;例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。
12.套语
1)It’s well known to us that ...
2)As is known to us,...
3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about.
4)From the graph(table,chart)listed above,it can be seen that ...
5)As aproverb says,“Where there is a will,there is a way.?
例如:
As is well known to us,it is important for the students to know the world outside campus.
The reason for this is obvious.Nowadays,the society is changing and developing rapidly,and the campus is no longer an“ivory tower?.As college students,we must get in touch with the world outside the campus.Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graate.
再如:
Does it pay to be honest?This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.

『柒』 英语作文的写作方法及技巧

您好!
一般应做到
内容切题:不能走题、偏题
表达清楚:要让别人知道你想说什么,不要用你认为能看懂的汉语式英文句子
意义连贯:中英文化差异造成思维方式和文字表述方式的不同,英文表述更注重事实,所以写英语作文不要过多的进行心理、环境描写,120个字的作文结构要缜密,理由和例子要简洁有力,说明问题,不要东拉西扯。
句法多变:为避免文章平淡、呆板,可使用不同的句式:强调句、倒装句、否定句等等
语言正确:不要犯低级的语法错误
英语作文其实不难,如果你的英语底子不好,不太擅长使用比较复杂的语法,词汇量也比较有限的话。建议用最简单的句子表达意思,句式越简单越好,能表达意思就好,一些生辟的单词如果不会不需要直译,可以用些词组。能表达意思就好,如果不会用用多了反而容易出错,平时作业时可以慢慢积累,可以试着用些当作练习,考试时就不必了,原因就不多说了。我觉得要写好英语作文还是平时多积累些,加上一些练习,比如平时可以多看些英语美文,如果有时间也可以刻意记些,时间长了语感自然就出来了,考试时有可能不知不觉的就闪出了平时的记忆。
多用连接词!
递进型:besides
;what's
more
;let
alone解释型:that
is
(to
say);in
other
words转折型:however;but;yet;otherwise列举型:for
example;such
as
;on
the
other
hand因果型:since;therefore;as
a
result并列型:and;or;also;as
well
as总结型:in
a
word
;in
short;
on
the
whole;in
conclusion见解型:in
my
opinion;speaking;as
far
as
I
am
concerned
祝您成功

『捌』 高考英语概要写作该如何下手

1.题型介绍
◆选材特点
(1)所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;
(2)所选材料体裁没有限制,以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。
◆评分参考
阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:
(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;
(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
(3)上下文的连贯性;
(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。
注意:理解准确,涵盖全部要求,完全使用自己的语言,准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇,得分相应比较高。相反,如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象,得分档次将会大大降低;所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。
2考查能力
概要写作,简言之就是对所读过的文章简要概括,写出文章的中心大意,也可称之为摘要。写概要时,读者要是把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来,而不是抄袭文章的原句,更不是把细节性信息作为中心,而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换,对文章的具体信息进行概括,再用合适的语言表述出来。这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力,同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。因此,概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达,是二者的有机结合体,是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。
3写作步骤
1)细读原文。首先要仔细阅读短文,掌握文章主旨和结构,明确各段的大意。
2)弄清要求。新高考的概要写作是写全文概要,不是写某一部分的概要,或者就某些问题写出要点。
3)列出原文要点。分析原文的内容和结构,将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分。
4)在写作时要特别注意下面几点:
(1)概要应包括原文中的主要事实,略去不必要的细节。
(2)安排好篇幅的比例,概要应同原文保持协调,即用较多的文字写重要内容,用较少的文字写次要内容。
(3)注意要点之间的衔接,要用适当的关联词语贯通全文,切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子,但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语,以免显得生硬。
(4)不排斥用原文的某些词句,但不要照搬原文的句子,如果不能完全用自己的话语表达,至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换,如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好。
(5)计算词数,看是否符合规定的词数要求。

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