『壹』 英语作文纠错.
有些句子我都不知道怎么改啊，很chinese english的感觉～说点语法小错误吧～
disperse us attention--our attention
So this habit will rece our work efficiency may lead to the mistakes .
是什么样的文章？雅思的话最好不要用so,用therefore之类的比较正式。may 前面要加and或that,不然没有主语或是个错误的复句。
use earphone listen to concert to cause hearing for a long time , have loud injury to we student .
这句好难改啊～我是中国人都有点不太明白。we student -严重的错误。也许你可以写成：if students spend too much on listening the conert by earphone,it may effect the sense of hearing of students.
choose some melody in a quick rhythm it will make student feel nervous but choose one song in a slow rhythm will make student asleep in summer and winter .
我觉得choose是多余的，你硬要写的话应该要写成choosing,其实直接写quick rhythm melody就可以吧～make student fall asleep 更好吧～
其他的就是注意句式的多样性，你一直在重复listening to the music while doing homework,3次。
就说这么多！
『贰』 英语作文 纠错 有高级词汇能用上的也帮忙说下
The Spring Festival is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do ring the holiday. Diffecent people have different ideas.
The girs think we should stay at home. Because we should relax ourselves and the homes are comfortable and COZY.FinalLy, the fare is low. The boys said that we should travel some places. If we do that we will not only increase our knowledge but also broaden the horizon.
However the boys said the girls' idea WAS not great , because we COULDN;T go through the naturAl by ourselves .And the grils said the boys' idea WAS too expensive and WAS not easy to PUT INTO PRACTICE.
PersonlLy ,I'd like to stay at home . Because the weather is so bad . I'm afraid of the cold wind . I think the home is the best place to stay . I can do something , like doing homework , watching TV , drawing...
『叁』 英语作文！求老师们纠错！纠错越多悬赏越多！
our destination was Chang Xing Island .
『肆』 英语作文纠错
The correct sentences as follows:
I have three reasons to prove my word.
He always makes me happy when I encounter some difficult things.
He always stops me from doing wrong things.
The influence is both good and bad.
『伍』 英语作文纠错 帮忙看下有无很严重的语法,用词错误
简单纠正一下语法错误，供参考
At present,social pratice has been （playing ） increasingly important role in our college life.It's nessecary for college students to take part in social pratice
In fact,most of college students are busy（ with their study ）and pay less attention to social practice.Undoubtely,college students have benefited a lot from social experience that couldn't be learned in textbooks.In addition,college students can improve themselves.
In my oppion,I think it's necessary for college students to( be an active participant ) in social practice.The students spend lots of time in playing computer games and shopping on line nowadays.All in all,it's good for college students to take part in social practice.
『陆』 大家有没有好的英语纠错软件或者语法纠错软件推荐
英语语法来纠错、语法纠错方面源whitesmoke是比较不错的，目前版本是2011，分为executive和general等版本，软件非常棒，推荐： http://hi..com/whitesmoke2011/blog/item/c3b1ddcd380fb20d4854036d.html
『柒』 英语作文最后一段纠错~谢谢
前面的长句显然是套用的，没有问题。内容提到问题的紧迫性，必须采取有效措施，如种树以减少温室效应。你接上的句子，语法不妥，我建议重组句子：
......considering the urgency of the problem,effective measures must be adopted before things deteriorate,for instance,we should plant more trees which could absorb the greenhouse gas so that the rate of global warning will sharply decrease. 【However, few people take this issue seriously even though they understand that a suitable climate will make them live a better life. Therefore, it is high time that concerted efforts and measures be taken to enhance the awareness of protecting the environment and to put an end to this situation; only then can our society become more colorful and harmonious to live in.】
【英语牛人团】
『捌』 纠错，英语作文纠错。我今年初三，帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有什么错误，谢谢~
1.Because I think it cannot only help us learn what is happening throughout the world,but also help us learn more knowledge. [can not分开来写]
2.Summer is hot and we can felel comfortable when we are simming。[feel 拼写错误]
3. And I think it is a waste of time to go to a summer school .[这句话换个位置，放在这段最后很奇怪，跟前面一句话连接不起来]
4.你专think重复使用太属多次了，可以用 I consider / I believe/in my opinion 等
5.注意连词的使用 可以用 In addition / Moreover 不要总用And
『玖』 我想练习写英语四级作文，但是没人批改，感觉做的没什么用，有没有人推荐一下哪个网站能批改英语作文的，
不好意思我不知道什么批改网 但是关于英语作文 可以分享一些有用的图片给你 多看看并学以致用对提高写作有好大作用的
『拾』 写完英语作文无人批改纠错怎么办
新东方现在有个新东方批改网，可以帮你批改，你注册提交一下就行