Ⅰ 英語作文，修改語法錯誤
Is money everything ?
As is firmly believed ,money is very essential to us. With money we can live in luxurious houses, eat nice food, travel to wherever you like. However, since money can bring us so many things, does this mean that money is everything? The answer is obviously no.
Firstly, money can't help us have true friends, though you may find that the richer you are, the more people would like to be your friends. Friendships of this kind are always not genuine; once you lose your fortune you lose your "friends". Only with sincerity can we make true friends. Money plays an unimportant role in making true friends.
Secondly, money can't buy life. Whether rich or poor, God is equal with everyone, he didn't allow money to turn the wheel of time backward, however rich a person is, he is bound to leave the world. Only these who have a positive attitude to life won't feel regret when he says goodbye to the world.
Apart from what have been mentioned above, there are still many things that money is unable to do. Money can't give us a dependable lover, money can't offer you happiness, neither can money provide you with a healthy body...
Taking all the factors into account, we can finally reach the conclusion that money isn't everything.
寫的不錯，只是語法錯誤不少
Ⅱ 自己寫英語作文怎麼才能檢查語法上的錯誤
雖然WORD是一個辦法,但考試時能用word嗎?
建議你多做改錯題,能找出別人的錯誤也當回然可以發現自己答的不足.不要一個詞一個詞地檢查,要整句地觀察,分析句子結構,從而找出錯誤.
最基本的是鞏固語法知識,多用,熟悉了下意識也會寫對.
Ⅲ 寫一篇英語作文、幫忙看下有語法錯誤嗎。
in the study：in study
play computers :play on computer
i have you study more hard: i have studied much harder than before
pass into: get into
it is a different answer: it's not the case.
let me to be fresh : make me feel refreshed
be ready to learn: be ready for class
school and classroom become: school has become
they provide an opportunity : it offers me a golden opportunity
I still fell happy: I still feel happy.
語法抄錯誤太多了，改了一下，這襲樣想進入重點高中，很難
補充：找我的改就不錯了，初三就這個水平，再往好里改你們老師就該懷疑了，也要故意買個破綻懂嗎
Ⅳ 我寫的英語作文有語法錯誤嗎
副詞做狀語:firstly，secondly
Ⅳ 一篇英語作文，求檢查修改語法錯誤
如果做題目的話 有實意的詞 首字母大寫
第一段 應該是 「have been learning」 後面的逗號最好改成分號或句號版 因為逗號不權能連接兩個完整的句子
第二段 teachers 應該改成 teacher 因為interest 是不可數名詞
第三段 應該是get over these problems
第四段 應該是 get it over
另 可以吧 speaking 改成 oral English 這樣顯得更高級
希望我的回答可以幫到你~
Ⅵ 如何在寫英語作文的時候少范語法錯誤
多點閱讀，和分析句子結構
劃分句子的主謂賓
Ⅶ 我的這篇英語作文有語法錯誤嗎
句子開頭是不是沒復復制制全？
第一個：訓練營是training camp，你是寫多了個n吧。而且這句後面的從句如果是要表達為了跟人比賽所以邀請人的話我覺得用so that we can比較好，比賽劃船可以用have a boat racing。
第二個：時間和日期在英文里是分開的，反正我是沒見過時間+of+月日這種結構：其次日期的表達是寫先寫月份後寫序數詞的日期，表示某月的第幾天。
改成at 7：00 a.m，april 5th.
Ⅷ 寫了一篇英語作文，求檢查修改語法錯誤，謝謝！
When I fail後面用的都是一般現在時，這里最好也用表示狀態，不表過去
Ⅸ 我自己寫得英語作文，水平很差，請大家指出語法錯誤！
good bad這種詞用的太多了吧，比如第一句就可以用student's quality，is是不對的要去掉，study greads？你是想說學習成績吧，grade，that後面那個judge本身是動詞，後面depend也是，你要麼變成to judge，或是judging。in the judge students也是把the去掉，改成judging。然後最後一句可以接到前一句，不然太短了，可以是...that the school record is no longer the absolute criteria for judging student's quality.
第2段第一句可以寫成There're several possible explanations for the phenomenon.因為如果用reasons for the phenomenon，總是有點不對勁的感覺，我是看了兩遍這句話才知道你想表達的意思。後面above more(這種沒見過，不存在吧？)....what's more....一堆more，第一次可以用比如first of all,後面那個可以用further more，what's more太隨意了。另外那個become focus on這個就不對，同時出現兩個謂語動詞，好歹也加個to或變個動名詞形式吧。可以改成the student's comprehensive quality has became the focus of our society's attention.後面也是，可以改成the school record of students has grally faded into insignificance when to judge a student's quality.
最後一段this change，你看你第一段說a lot of changes，說實話我也沒明白你都說了哪些change，好像你只說了一個，那麼第一段可以改成單數，但是只用個change總感覺不太合適，既然是評判標准就應該把這個『標准』加上，比如a great change of the criteria for judging.....
Ⅹ 這篇英語作文有什麼語法錯誤
句子開頭是不是沒復制全？
第一個：訓練營是training camp，你是寫多了個n吧。而且這句後面的從句如回果是要表達為了跟答人比賽所以邀請人的話我覺得用so that we can比較好，比賽劃船可以用have a boat racing。
第二個：時間和日期在英文里是分開的，反正我是沒見過時間+of+月日這種結構：其次日期的表達是寫先寫月份後寫序數詞的日期，表示某月的第幾天。
改成at 7：00 a.m，april 5th.