❶ 大神能看看這篇英語作文有沒有什麼語法錯誤嗎
基本上一句一個以上，如果加上詞彙錯誤那還得乘以2倍，建議重寫，不懂的詞彙你可以別用。
❷ 看英語作文有沒語法錯誤
樓主你好，您的短文很精彩，
您的這篇英語作文沒有語法錯誤，但是有一處單詞專錯誤：There
are
a
lot
of
problem
on
the
earth
such
as
water
pollution
and
air
pollution.（您文章的第屬一行）應該變成=可數名詞變復數時應該加s。
❸ 誰能幫忙看看我的英語作文有沒有語法錯誤在線等
Nowadays, when we talk about the freedom to college student, we kept different opinions .some of us think that college student should have more freedom than before, but some others don』 agree with it.
Some people think that the college student should have more freedom than before, because freedom is very important to students. They have to study many different things everyday .They have to learn how to manage their time, their work, and so on. And students are the master of the country in the future, they should concern more about the future of the country, they have to learn how to express their reasonable opinion, how to monitor government. And it can help students to learn how to build a more hopeful country in the future.
However, some others think that students should have less freedom than before, because in their opinion, students is too free on that way. They may waste too much time on other things rather than learning .so it harmful to students. Students' ty is learning, therefor they should spend more time on it.
I agree that students should have more freedom than before, because they are still very young, they should learn more about how to build a more hopeful country .how to help others, which is very important for a man.
中間有不少錯誤，和不符合表達習慣的地方，我都給你改了，你再看看吧。
❹ 看看這個英語作文有沒有語法錯誤
increasinly ----increasingly
a great number of cities
They have heardthe official report that a great number of city appear the growing number of green lands.
For one thing,the green land have a large number of green plants.And green plant can bring fresh air.for another thing ,green land is good for our health.
It is high time that we protected the green land in city.
❺ 英語作文檢查有沒有錯誤
第一句:把you know 刪掉，讀起來太別扭，一看就知道不是純種的英語，然後把之後的那個so 去掉， 將其之前的句號變成逗號。整個句子就是As Shanghai hosts the 2010 World Expo, I went to Shanghai with my former classmates ring the summer holidays.
第三行有語法錯誤：應該是we arrived,lived
The school is very large and there are many imposing [im'pəuziŋ] buildings.不知道你在講什麼。
In the wonderful place,there were several black swans,which surprised us a lot.把the 換成this
What attracted me was a robert.你是想說機器人嗎？應該是robot
The visit was not a bit meaningful,but made me not a little tired.那個a bit 和not a little tired 用在這里很怪（我只語法）
There are many delicious western food in Shanghai.We tried starbucks。這句話語有邏輯問題。你是在說只有上海有starbucks 嗎？而且starbucks 是麥咖啡的啊，可以說說其他西方的食物。要不然酒吧之前那句here are many delicious western food in Shanghai改了。
It』s a little expensive。在little之前加個 bit
❻ 幫忙看一下英語作文有沒有語法錯誤
My favoritething is a（去掉a) bike. It is made of(of 改為from) steel, rubber and plastic and it is made inGuangdong. It`s been with me seen(since) I was six. My mom gave it to me as a birthdaygift. It is special because I learned how to ride a bike on it.(去掉on it) And I used toride the bike in the garden on weekends when I was little(young). It is seem as the(as the 改為to be the)memory of my childhood.
❼ 英語作文，幫我看看有沒有什麼語法錯誤
1 warm的比較級是warmer.
2 We will waiting是錯誤的用法，應該用動詞原形wait.
3 最後一內段，All student is agree 是錯誤的用法，應該用復數形式容All students are agreed.
4 最後一個單詞用復數形式memories.
❽ 幫我看看這篇英語作文有沒有語法錯誤
i
had
a
unforgettable
experience
i
heard
some
one
walking
i
cried,
because
i
was
so
fearful.
when
i
can't
hear
the
walking
sound.....
i
stop
crying
and
started
to
watch
tv......
i
was
more
frightened
than
before....
my
parents
didn't
back
home
until
11pm
不知道你現在上幾年級，先幫你這么改一下吧回，你看看答合理嗎
❾ 英語作文，能不能幫忙看看有沒有語法錯誤
第二段when引導的時間狀語從句是一個完整的句子，根據語境，謂語動詞應用一般現在時回，即stands。後面unless引導的從答句中用or表「或者」，後面的動詞要用三單，即lets。第二段最後一句中homework為不可數名詞，不加s。最後一段中help用法錯誤。help只有兩個用法:help sb do（幫助某人做某事，主動用法）和help+句子，因此可改成help you so that you can be a better student than before。
希望可以幫到你呦XD
❿ 幫忙看一篇英語作文有無語法錯誤並指出
供參考
I have a great dream . I (i) want to be an astronaut when I (i)
grow up . I (i) am fascinated with the (surprised at) universe (univers)
. It (it) is very beautiful (beautifui) and interesting (intretsting) .
I (i) like (liked) the universe (univers) very much. I (i) know something
about it. I (i) know there is a solar system(1) . I (i) admire (amired)
Yang Li Wei (yangliwei) and other astronauts. They (they) are very great
and cool . S0 (so) i will study hard. I (i) hope my dream will come
true. I believe (i belive) in myself(2) . I (i) can achieve my dream.
(1) solar system似乎不止一個
可以考慮用 some/many solar systems
(2) 可以用have confidence 來代替believe