① 急求糾正英語翻譯的語法錯誤。
From ancient times to nowaday, there were lots of wars happened. What were those wars really fight for? Perhaps for power, perhaps for honor, or perhaps for love? I think the movie "Troy" has the best explanation.
"Troy" the film was adapted from the Greek mythology. It talks about the Prince of Paris Troy Paris Spencer fell in love with a beautiful Sparta girl Helen, and brought her back to the Troy. Sparta King of the Greek city-state, under the command of the Agamemnon, led the fleet to catch up with Troy, and siege attacked for ten years. In the end, the Greek forces used "Trojan" to attack Troy and finally took the city. The film was released in 2004 in the United States.
By watching this film, I have a more profound understanding of the concept of the hero. Achilles, a true hero, does not yield to any power and fight for honor. As he himself said: I am not fighting for an indivial, I am fighting for the whole of Greece, for the Greek warriors and their wives and children. Although he failed in the end, but he is still a true hero.
我盡力了,幫你添了點改了點
以後別用翻譯器翻譯了...求採納
② 請幫我檢查一下這首翻譯的英文詩有沒有語法錯誤，並改正一下。若您有更好的翻譯，請告訴我，謝謝！
I will always remember you.感受一下這句話是什麼意思，要表示「我一直記得你」為什麼要用將來時呢？好像此時此刻之前，對方在你的心裡都不是不存在的，只是現在的某一件事情讓你徹底記住了他，是不是？
我這里把你的「記得」理解為「牽掛」，不知道對不對呢？因為我覺得「記得」和後面的「喜愛」、「眷顧」等的對比不是很強。
所以我建議把四個「wil「去掉，改成：
The sun is always caring the moon,no matter how much the moon likes the stars.
太陽一直關注著月亮，無論月亮有多麼喜愛星星
The stars is always unwilling to leave the sky,no matter how much the sky misses the earth.
星星一直留戀著天空，無論天空有多麼思念大地
The earth is always nourishing the flowers, no matter how much the flowers favor me.
大地一直滋養著鮮花，無論鮮花有多麼眷顧我
I am always keeping you in heart, my dear,no matter how much you love her.
而我一直記得你，無論你有多麼熱愛她
③ 給我糾正一下英語作文的語法錯誤行么，很急
（1）love不可數，且there be句型用就近原則，所以第一句的are改為is 如下：There is a lot of the love of my parents.
(2)逗號前後的東專西可有修飾關系，所屬以第二句中的are可以去掉直接使用形容詞 如下： innumerable
（3） 逗號前後的東西一定要有聯系，故第三句的 remember 動詞原形不能對單獨使用，如2所說需要表修飾，且這里為主動記住 如下： remembering also can not finish.
（4）Mum大寫
（5）刪去of mom and Dad take care,
（6）improve 為提高的意思 disease 為疾病的意思 故最後兩句不能說疾病一天一天地提高 所以改為 如下： My disease left me a way day by day【我的病一天天離我更遠了】
望採納 謝謝！
④ 請英語高手幫我看看我翻譯的語法錯誤.謝謝!
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第三行制 position 改為 locate 通過調用 你最好重新
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第六行 realize改成 be realized
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第八行 改成 this paper is based on the particular
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能力有限 就能改這些了 可能包含錯誤 僅供參考
⑤ 誰英語比較好 幫我改改有語法錯誤的句子 別用翻譯工具 俺需要純人工的。
朋友你確實有蠻多的語法錯誤阿，你這些翻譯估計是網上自動翻的吧，呵呵版。我來幫你糾權正下吧，首先第一句的分析是個動詞，改為analyse，第一句應該為analyse the characters of Thackeray novels in Victorian era background . 第二句是個短語，主語是女性形象，應為the Image of Women shaped in Thackeray novels ,第三句的悲情色彩應為the tragic，改為the tragic of Thackeray Novels，第四句the main performance of Pessimistic color.最後一句Pessimism就是悲觀情緒的意思，應為the main reason of causing pessimism.
希望我的翻譯能讓你有所幫助。
⑥ 這是篇英語四級的翻譯，幫我改正一下語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤。謝謝。拍的很清楚，看不清的問我~
In Huaifang,Shandong,the kite represents not only
a toy but also a sign of culture of
this city.Huaifang is famous for its name of The
Kite City,owning a long history of about 2400 years.
It's said that Mo Zi ,a philoshopher in chinese
ancient ages,spent three years creating the first
kite in the world,but which dropped and broke when flown
on the first day.However ,it's also believed that
kite was created by Lu Ban ,a carpenter in chinese history
,whose kite was made from wood and bamboo,and flew constantly
for three days before it dropped.
按原文進行的修改
⑦ 請幫我改正一下我翻譯的英文的語法錯誤~~~~~
第一次聽到你復的歌聲，制我心裡一角似乎是你照亮。你走了，我等。在此期間，我總是想起你，我心中的天使，你終於回來了，你的笑容還是那麼的清晰，就像你的歌在我心中盪起漣漪。毫無疑問，你不再是以前的孩子，你留鬍子，你想讓每個人都知道你並不是在新的成果。這是值得我們肯定的，但是你現在是年輕的必要開始留鬍子？那隻會讓人感覺很別扭。如果你不，我們不會強迫，你必須記住，我們永遠是你的
⑧ 一篇很短的英語自我介紹，請大家幫我糾正一下語法錯誤，謝謝！！
Good afternoon， ladies and gentlemen~！
It is really my honor to have this opportunity for this interview. I will introce myself briefly. I am 20 years old,born in Sichuan province , which is a beautiful place in china, and i am still a sophomore at Sichuan University Jinjiang College. My major is Environmental Art. I spent most of my time studying and have acquired most of the knowledge of my major ring school time, and the scholarships returned My efforts。
I think i am a Creative guy since Kindergarten,and had published an idea in Magazine. I always believe I could be a good designer。
Always, I'm attracted by something fresh, like new environment ,new proct. Maybe I'll meet some problems in the near future, but nothing is impossible only if we keep on learning~!
France is a Famous country for its romantic and artistic culture. As other designers, France is also attractive to me. If I had the opportunity to be there, I think my design capability will be greatly improved.
Thank you for your attention!
最後的confession就免了吧……
⑨ 急需一位英語高手來幫我翻譯一下，並且糾正語法錯誤，不通暢的地方，急！！
下面我幫你除去了文章里的「中式英語「：
I started learning English at the age of ten. During my study I encountered many problems. I often asked my English teacher how to study English better. I now know a few good ways of learning English:
1) Listen well and read both in class and after class everyday.
2) Practise speaking with your teacher and classmates.
3) Practise writing after the school.
4) The most important thing is not to give up.
If you follow these steps, after a while, you will improve your English and even find it interesting.
希望幫到了你。