Ⅰ 求英語高手來幫我看下，我寫的有沒有語法錯誤。
It is my pleasesure這句多餘可省略a chance to talking with you，to 後talk用原形，table tennis so on，在so on前加and，my everyday is so full,I enjoy my life.這句很中文，建議不要用了，專everyone have ，have變has.what's the good habits ?what's the bad habits這句要不屬把what』s變what are，要不去掉habits的s will be able to make ，be able to多餘This my all the words,換成That's all what I want to say。
Ⅱ 哪位英語高手幫我看下有沒有語法錯誤（急）
The world will never be the same once you (see) it through the eyes of Forrest Gump. Forrest Gump was born in a small town in Alabama in the USA. He only has an IQ of 75. His mother and his friend Jenny always encourage him to live as an ordinary person.
To (their) surprised, Forrest has (well developed body with simple mind). His dramatic life begins when he runs onto a football field to escape his class bullies. He becomes a football star in a university.
After his graation, he becomes a soldier, (and joins) the war in Vietnam. After the war, he meets many famous people.
The movie is over, but I know that it won』t be over in everybody』s heart.
A loving and friendly nce can also conquer the world.
不妥之處，已改，並用「（）」標出。
Ⅲ 這篇英語作文有沒有語法錯誤
很抱歉，英語和漢語出入太大，改不了，只能重寫，
l like a person who is named Vae
我喜歡的人——許嵩
The past, the first such serious like a will probably forever remains a stranger.
這輩子，第一次這樣認真的喜歡一個也許會永遠是陌生人的人。
perhaps, you will be of the feelings of contempt, an infidel.也許，你們會對我的這種感情嗤之以鼻，不屑一顧。
But,i really like Vae.
但是，我真的喜歡許嵩。
Becausehe is so fond of his song,and because he is more like his songs. i think it will continue, i believe!
因為他的歌而喜歡上他，又因為他，更加喜歡他的歌，我想這會持續很久，我相信！
No commercial positioning and packing, the team has announced plans and vae independence. they do is so simple
沒有商品化的定位和包裝，沒有企宣團隊的策劃和炒作，Vae獨立的做自己，就是這樣簡單。
Vae has said, a song. even a memory one day there was no man to hear of my song, i have one last fans, vae.
Vae曾說，一首歌一個回憶。即便某日沒有人再聽我寫的歌，我還有最後一個歌迷，叫Vae。
But, i'd like to say, i would like him very long time, and perhaps future one day, i'll forget him, but at least, i don't want to give up. don't want to leave. vae - the only love you!
只是，我想說，我會喜歡他很久很久，也許將來的某一天，我會忘掉他，但是至少，我現在不想放棄，不想離開。
Ⅳ 看我寫的英語句子有無語法錯誤
Since the (是特指，要有the）activity has been held （強調對現在的影響，可以）,not only do the students（改成」學生們「） do the cleanings (打掃衛生是「do the cleanings",算是固定用法內吧） actively, (那個throw rubbish的最好去容掉，因為do the cleanings已經涵蓋了）but also greet teachers（「老師"用復數） and (改」as well as「為」and「） help them voluntarily.
Ⅳ 英語作文 130字 看看我寫的有沒有語法錯誤 能完善文章的加懸賞分
Having a good learning habit can obviously improve the learning effect, but the learning effect can also make the learning habit more suitable for yourself. Their interactions will ensure you to learn efficiently.
Making plans is a useful habit that can make your life run regularly and save times. Owing to the plans, you will be forced to finish the works on time, and have extra times to do some
extra-curricular activities, in order to understand the knowledge and concepts better.
During the learning period, I found a lot of problems that can make learning a difficult task to accomplish. Among the problems, I think being unable to focus ring classes is worst, and will cause me to waste a lot of time re-learning the lessons after classes are over. So, in order to kick this bad habit off, I should make a goal to ensure that I will focus ring classes, and to make learning more efficient.
改了。
Ⅵ 英語作文，幫我看看有沒有什麼語法錯誤
您好！
第一句話有點啰嗦，不應該這樣講，a student of our school，這有些過於中式英語了，回你可以直接說I'm the monior of .....class .
第二段答At first，用的不是很恰當，這不是步驟。可以用：To start with，或者 From the beginning。
最後一句話有語法錯誤，應該是Looking forward to you attendance. （期待您的出席）
中間還有一些大小寫需要改進你自己看看
望採納謝謝
Ⅶ 幫我看下英語作文有沒有語法錯誤 不要在意單詞拼寫
你好！你的文章寫得很不錯，幾乎沒有很明顯的語法失誤。現在對個別表達稍作修改如下，修改處見【】：
I'm a Chinese student,and I'd like to offer my help 【for you to learn Madarine】.I hope you can keep your word teaching me English 【in return 作為回報】.
I think I can do this well,not only【 because】 I'm a Chinese,but also I'm very interested in
learning Mandarin.My favorate subject is Chinese,I think I can do you a favor.
To speak mandarin well ,I have some advice for you.First, speak Mandarin 【every day in the
morning and in the evening】.Second ,watch some Chinese films.This can【 be helpful for your Chinese learning 避免重復使用同樣的短語或詞彙】
For exchange ,I want you to talk with me online to correct my 【English 】pronunciation.I hope
you can introce 【the cultures of some countries】 to me.I think it can help me learn English
well.
I'm looking foeward to hearing from you soon.
祝你開心如意！
Ⅷ 我想用英語寫日記或者作文，但是我怕語法用錯老是不敢寫怎麼辦
語法不是主要問題，簡單了解就可以了，其實你現在最主要的是多去讀一回些文章，分析一些答文章。你的問題簡單地歸結為語法問題，我看不妥，其實英語寫作有很多技巧可循，有一定的模式。多去閱讀分析才是實際的提高方法，熟讀唐詩三百首,不會作詩也會吟，就是這個道理吧。另外你如果剛接觸英文寫作的話，建議你多去背誦一些好的文章，因為沒有輸入就沒有輸出。
祝：順利！
Ⅸ 英語作文，幫我找找有沒有語法錯誤
第一段兩處小錯：九月前的the 去掉，新圖書館要加the。
第二段第二句語法不對。
第三段第二句謂語動詞不對，第三句語法不對。
Ⅹ 我用英語寫的日記，有語法錯誤嗎
make up 組成構成 彌補補考 化妝 編造 和好 和解
一個句子里不能同時出現兩個謂語動詞 所以 using相當於非謂語動詞