下面英語有語法錯誤么

A. 下面這段英語有哪些語法錯誤，或表達的比較牽強的地方呢哪些地方可以說的更漂亮些

貌似比較中式英語
XiaoZhang,are you free this weekend ? Would you like to go along with me to attend an insurance trade fair in HangZhou .Are you convenient for a 2-day business trip ? Its topic is closely related to our business .Since my secretary XiaoLin is sick ,he in not able to go with me. Considering that you have some related experience in this area, I think you are the best choice to take the place of XiaoLin. I will provide you with some infomation about the important companies that will participate in the fair. At last ,would you be so kind as to book 2 tickets for me from Shanghai to Hangzhou at 9.30 on Saturday. Thank you very much.
注意細節，改了些小詞。
希望能幫到你O(∩_∩)O

B. 下面的英語有語法錯誤么

First of all, Shanghai has recently begun to enter the rainy season, so it often rains, so I suggest you should prepare an umbrella in advance to prevent you from being caught by the rain after you get off the plane。來
無太大錯誤自
[搭配錯誤] 搭配 prepare umbrella 無此用法，疑似中式英語。
[推薦表達] so : therefore/thus/consequently/accordingly/as a result/for that reason/hence/that』s why

C. 英語高手進！！！！！！！！！！（看一下下面的對話里有沒有語法錯誤，仔細點哦）

I didn』t feeling well-->I don』t feel well
When do you sleep yesterday?-->When did you sleep yesterday?
I have to study for my the final exam-->I have to study for my final exam
you alway look so healthy-->you always look so healthy
I love every kinds of exercise-->I love every kind of exercise
When are you usually go to sleep?-->When do you usually go to sleep?
I』am really appreciate that-->I really appreciate that.

D. 下面這段英文如何翻譯有沒有語法錯誤

我的大學生活即將結束，（college life 應該是campus life)
我下一階段的生活將是投入社會活動
next period of my life is to involve in social activities.
當我在四年的大學生活中，我常常提醒自己提高自己的能力，努力提高自己
During my four years campus life, I always reminded myself of improving the abilities, kept going on, kept making progress
我全力投入大學的各種活動。

課外，我讀許多專業和輔修的書籍。
I read many academic books about my major subject and optional subject outside class.
我在日常生活中很簡朴
I keep simplicity in daily life
我熱愛體育，熱愛生活，對於未來充滿形象
I love sports , I love my life, I am certainly confidence with my future.
我相信，能力才是最重要的，
I believe, It is the ability that most matters.
是的我能行。
Yes , I can do it.

E. 下面的英語有語法錯誤嗎

that/this is my plan for the vacation這樣表達即可。It is my plan for the vacation，這樣表達才正確，以上是常用的表達方式

F. 下面兩段英語有語法錯誤么 最後一句that是可加可不加么

On the other hand，some students play games，chat with friends ，see the pictures or watch films on the Internet the whole day. They are not interested in their subjects. It』s very dangerous for them!

The Internet』s advantages and disadvantages are shown clearly to us. I think（that） we should make good use of it and not inlge in it.

在非正式場合下，that在引導賓語從句時，可以省略。內你上述句子即為這種情容況。

G. 下面英語有語法錯誤么

i大寫。後半句語義有問題。紙質書需要搬運，需要找地方（改成被動）

H. 英語中，下面一並列句有沒有語法錯誤

ok

I. 下面這篇英語作文有語法錯誤么 是什麼等級的 如果30滿分能給幾分

如果評分標準是中國英語考試的標准，你寫的挺好的。
但如果我作為一個托福黨的角度看，，濃濃的中式英語的味道。
嗯~ o(*￣▽￣*)o總之還不錯啦

J. 英語中，下面一句話有沒有語法錯誤

有。應該刪去is