Ⅰ 請幫我看看這篇英語作文有沒有語法錯誤 謝謝
that let me fall in love with travelling 改成 that made me fall in love with travelling
I can not only enjoy visiting many wonderful scenery 改成 I can not only enjoy visiting many wonderful sceneries.
Also I make so many new friends ring the journey. 改成 Also I can make so many new friends ring the journey. 這樣時態上才較為統一。
However, travelling is wonderful, but the end of a journey always makes me sad. 改為 Travelling is wonderful, but the end of a journey always makes me sad. 即去掉However，因為它與but意思重復。
Every time when I say goodbye to the friends who travel with me, 改為 Every time when I say goodbye to the friends who travelled/have travelled with me, 時態不正確
I can』t stop to cry 改為 I can』t stop crying 意思是」禁不住落淚「
because we have so many good time together and I don』t want to be apart. 改為 because we have had so many good time together and we don』t want to be apart. 時態問題和人稱問題。
travel around the world is my dream 改為 travelling around the world is my dream 主語從句
Ⅱ 誰幫我看一下這篇英語短文有沒有語法錯誤
有一點點小錯誤啦~~修改了下~~
記得要注意大小寫吖！！
just then,a huge figure was moving silently towards the captain』s house. captain king was very afraid.he thought,was that a gork? he peeked outside.it was really a gork. the gork seemed notice him. soon the gork started to damage his house. suddenly captain king ran into his car and drove it off. following the gork, he entered a tunnel. the gork was very angry that it was too large to cross the tunnel. soont he soldiers arrived . the gork had to fly away. captain king was safe again.
Ⅲ 英語作文，幫我看看有沒有什麼語法錯誤
您好！
第一句話有點啰嗦，不應該這樣講，a student of our school，這有些過於中式英語了，回你可以直接說I'm the monior of .....class .
第二段答At first，用的不是很恰當，這不是步驟。可以用：To start with，或者 From the beginning。
最後一句話有語法錯誤，應該是Looking forward to you attendance. （期待您的出席）
中間還有一些大小寫需要改進你自己看看
望採納謝謝
Ⅳ 幫我看看這篇英語文章有沒有什麼語法錯誤
我能說錯誤真心不是一般的多嗎- -！
i am 19 years old就行了，不要加上this year，不然就變成中文式英語了版，i love reading and surfing the internet，love doing sth或者love to do sth，另外and的前後要權一致，要麼都是名詞，要麼都是動詞，i am a outgoing person who like making friends，我是一個外向喜歡交朋友的人，少了連接詞，take an active part in sth積極參與某事，你把一大堆的名詞強制翻譯（用的難道是翻譯軟體？）應該翻譯成I will take an active part in various things to enrich my life,後面這句也是強制拼湊的，I will also do more exercise to make myself more heath and mature
Ⅳ 大家幫我看看我寫的這篇英語短文有沒有文法錯誤，急！在線等謝謝！
As is known to many students in mainland, 小寫the University of Hong Kong is a palace of knowledge with sophisticated equipment and academic freedom學術自由. Apart from it, the international atmosphere of study and abundant opportunities also hold great appeal to me. As far as I am concerned, studying in the University of Hong Kong can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizon去掉s, so I am eager to study in the University of Hong Kong.
With a passion for engineering, I chose BENG as my first choice. I have a good ability of innovation and learning so I think it will be a suitable curriculum（curricular是形容詞） for me. What is more, with the rapid development of science and technology, more and more people who major in these subjects are needed. We can not ignore the fact that China is not mature enough in some areas of technology compared with some developed countries, so I consider it to be a proper choice for me. In addition, I took BSC(AC) and BSC as my second and third choice.
As for me, I am good at study and always get good grades in the exams. With an optimistic attitude, I can (could改成can) overcome difficulties positively. I wish I could make(改掉do )some achievements in engineering field through my perseverance and efforts. Besides, I am keen to make a contribution to the society by（加個by好點)using my knowledge過去分詞作定語 studied in the university in the future.
Ⅵ 誰能幫我看看這篇英語作文有沒有語法錯誤
I like play ingand playing computer games
My report ends
Ⅶ 誰英語好的幫我看一下這篇短文有沒有什麼語法錯誤
The Spring Festival, Chinese New Year,is the most important festivalfor all of us. All family members get together on New Year'Eve to have a big meal.At the same time, everyone celebrates to each other.At about 12 o'clock,some parents and children light crackers.The whole sky is lighted brightly. We may watch the fireworks excitedly.How busy it is!
On the first early moring of one year, many senior citizen get up early and they stick the reversed Fu or hang some couplets on the front door. Some house's windows are sticked on red paper cutlings.The Chinese New Year lasts fifteen days. So ring the fifteen days, we always visit our relatives from door to door. At that time, children are the happiest because they can get many red packets form their parents,grandparents, uncles, aunts and so on. The last day of the Chinese New Year is another festival. It names the Lantern Festival. So the Chinese New Year comes to the end.
Ⅷ 這篇受傷的經歷（英語作文）大家能幫我看看有哪一些語法錯誤以及改進建議多謝！
寫的不錯，書寫方面需要提高
Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom,my monitor told us that our class teacher,Mr Sun,had passed away in a traffic accident.It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Monday morning.I couldn't accept the fact until the headmaster came to tell us the truth.
Mr Sun was a middle-aged teacher.He was full of sense of humour.We all liked him very much because of his excellent teaching.His lessons were usually very lively and interesting.We all liked to attend his class.He was an experienced teacher.
Ⅸ 麻煩幫我看看這篇英語作文有沒有語法錯誤。
One day, Lucy』s mother asked Lucy to go shopping and gave her a shopping list. Lucy bought all the things on the list. When it was time to pay for them, she found she had left her money at home. So she went back home quickly and took her purse from the chair. She got the money to pay for the things. Then she said goodbye to the shop-keeper and took the things home.
只改了幾個標點，要分清句子和句子的關系，誰和誰是一句專。其他都很屬好
Ⅹ 大家幫我看看這句英文是不是有語法錯誤，幫忙改一下~
很地道的句子，就是有點長，沒有問題也不別扭。
The quality of her performance and composition left me with the impression that she was a young woman blessed with a remarkable talent for music with unlimited potential in composition which, If trained properly, will take her very far indeed.
主要結構是
The quality left me with the impression 從句同位語主要意思是she has a remarkable talent