⑴ 英語作文 語法錯誤 考研
with the passage of time 應該是沒有這樣的用法的，可能有但是不符合英國人對語言的用法，後面回那句話你用了答兩個謂語： revolves,has aroused,你前面你可以用後置定語或者定語從句表示如revolving,walk of life用way of life會更好，人生各路一般用way,可以把selling去掉，而且用with一般是伴隨狀語，這里用定語從句更好，或者直接插入boasting,realize又成為了這個句子的第二個謂語，你可以用and把句子隔開。
這篇文章主要就是句子中出現多個謂語，以及謀些片語的固定搭配不熟悉，建議多記一些固定的片語，這個作文大概可以打十二分左右吧
⑵ 為什麼英語作文那麼差，經常語法錯誤
1.句子成分殘缺不全
We always working till late at night before taking exams。(誤)
We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正)
We should read books may be useful to us. (誤)
We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)
2.句子成分多餘
This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (誤)
One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (誤)
The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)
3.主謂不一致
Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (誤)
Some think that reading should be selective. (正)
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My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (誤)
My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)
4.動詞時態、語態的誤用
I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (誤)
I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)
⑶ 幫忙看一下我寫的這篇英語作文有什麼重大語法錯誤，幫忙改一下，提一些寫作建議。萬分感激。（四級作文）
寫的不錯，ingoring 拼寫錯誤，其他沒問題
What the drawing vividly depicts is that people play computer in modern life when working,playing,staying at home or sleeping.The picture illustrates that the time of people play computer increasingly than before.Playing computer account for more time than before.
This no deny that computer have important impact in modern life.It can broading our horizon,working efficultly communicating conveniencly.Whereas,this is a largely harm to our eyes because play computer long time.We concentrate on computer,ingoring other interesting incidents.
⑷ 英語 英語作文 語法錯誤
你好，
首先，第一句沒有什麼問題，只是我不明白你那句「arouse the attention from all walks of life」是什麼意思。「Prevention of the mountain」可改成「impediment of the mountain」，不內過意容思差不太多，我只是覺得prevention聽起來有點怪。「Excellent scenery」可改成「magnificent scenery」。下一句「detect」改成「notice」吧，有點奇怪。「Has conquer」應該改成「has conquered」。最後一句我也沒看能解釋一下嗎。
第二段第一句把「but」改成「yet」比較好吧。「Dazzing」是啥，你是想說「dazing」還是「dazzling」？「MaYun is greatly robust」把is改成「was」。剩下的就沒啥問題了！我給你推薦一個查英語語法的網站，還蠻好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下，可能有些我疏漏的點。
如果有幫助到你請採納一下，謝謝！
⑸ 英語作文中常出現的語法錯誤有哪些
時態 三人稱單數的變化 單詞過去式，過去分詞的變化 固定句型的用法（如：打電回話的固定模式……） 固定片語（答如：there be) 動名詞作主語謂語動詞用單數等的語法 還有like後面接動詞的ing形式，would like+動原這些易混淆的地方……
⑹ 求幫忙分析這篇英語作文中的語法錯誤~
Amy Chua ,an America-bornChinese
was a professor of Yale who wrote Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother and the book came out in 2010.
The content of the book is about how the writer teaches his two daughter in Chinese traditional ways.
This book has an effect on the readers by raising the question of what kind of ecation is better for children, the American one or Chinese one ?
The Chinese version was sold in 2011, which made a lot of Unexpected reaction from Chinese mothers who disagreed with the writer
the lastest news is that Amy』 The eldest daughter has been admitted to Harvard and Yale
⑺ 這個英語作文有那些語法錯誤容易被扣分
這個字寫得丑就不說了, 改作文是很快的, 字都丑的話再好的文筆都不會高分回. 其次
1,第二行two main reasons應用復數.
2,according for是錯答的, according to才是正確的,這是固定搭配.
3,deny後面最好加個that
4,fake goods 當然是不好的啦,啰嗦, 直接改成: these goods are unsafe
5,needlessly to say, 副詞修飾動詞
6,suggetions on
7,第二句完全不懂,意義不明.不過你既然最後一段寫建議,就不應這么多廢話.首先應該it is without saying that,does是助動詞不改的話這句話就沒有謂語了. 第二,bettle是什麼,你想寫battle吧, 就算是battle也不夠好, 如果你想表達為打壓,打擊應該用crackdown. the government should crackdown,你一介市民能做什麼. doubt拼錯了,請注意正確書寫
8,about 改成against比較通順
⑻ 看一下這篇英語作文有那些語法錯誤容易被扣分
我參加過高考閱卷，按高考標准這篇作文得分在平均分以下。
主要需改進之處：回1）書寫答和卷面都有改善空間，比如塗改越少越好，字越漂亮越好，字母占格符合英語習慣等。2）常識：逗號後邊不大寫。3）論述要有理有據表述邏輯清楚。你開頭說有兩個原因，可後面並不是圍繞兩個原因論述，跑題了。4）明顯語法錯、錯別字要減少：two reason(s) ,interestion, needing, (a)better job(s) 5)消滅漢語式英語：you feel society needing; I think shoud choose
看得出你已經很努力了，再把模版背熟一些，再把字練好一些，結果會不一樣！
⑼ 這篇英語作文有什麼語法錯誤
句子開頭是不是沒復制全？
第一個：訓練營是training camp，你是寫多了個n吧。而且這句後面的從句如回果是要表達為了跟答人比賽所以邀請人的話我覺得用so that we can比較好，比賽劃船可以用have a boat racing。
第二個：時間和日期在英文里是分開的，反正我是沒見過時間+of+月日這種結構：其次日期的表達是寫先寫月份後寫序數詞的日期，表示某月的第幾天。
改成at 7：00 a.m，april 5th.
⑽ 我寫的英語作文有哪些語法錯誤，請指點一下。
本篇文章重復用詞太多，造成這種現象主要原因就是條理不清晰。注意指示代詞的使用，沒必要來回重復