㈠ 幫忙看一篇英語作文，有沒有語法錯誤
第一句就有點錯誤，什麼叫to ask more than the coffee and dounts ？然後問題還有很多。用詞有很多不太准確的地方或用的版不好的地方（權不標准或不書面），寫文章不能只用get,can,do這些詞的，首先這些太口語，其次頻率使用的太高了（不是說不能用，而是盡量少用）。關聯詞也沒有，說句實話，我有點看不懂這篇文章，你是想講種族歧視吧？
上述都是建議，說得有些直，希望不要生氣^_^
如果能給我中文，我可以幫你寫寫看
㈡ 怎麼判斷英文句子的對錯.不是說內容的對錯，而是句子
那就需要自己熟練的掌握語法與各種固定結構了，這個是日積月累的過程，望採納
㈢ 一篇英語作文（請幫我檢查一下有無語法錯誤）
How do we keep healthy?It is an important question.as more and more people had died from different kinds of diseases,we all wants to have a healthier body.But what could we do to stay healthy?Fristly,we could exercise more as a lazy man is often a weak man.Secondly,we need to have a balanced and healthy diet.As food containing lots of protein,calcium,vitamins and fibre,we should eat more of these as our body needs them the most.Thirdly,we should have enogh sleeping hours.Fourthly,we need to keep happy and bright.Last but not least,we mustn't smoke or drink as it is not good for our health.Also,we should stop our parents from drinking and smoking too as it is a way of showing our love to them.
㈣ 哪位高手我檢查一下英語作文有無語法錯誤。急！！！在線檢查！！
1.Today is my birthday. I invited my friends and classmates. We _had_ fun together. Time flew. _We_ _have_ all _gone_ home_, but_ I really enjoyed this day.
2.I went to Qinghai _this summer_. _There_ is a _stylish_ yellow _rod_ _and_ large tracts of grassland. There is _the_ blue sky. We went _horse_ riding_, and_ played with the sheep. I enjoyed the trip _very much._
嚴肅說，rape字勿亂用，這字是強奸的意思。要版說一支桿，權用rod。
㈤ 英語 英語作文 語法錯誤
你好，
首先，第一句沒有什麼問題，只是我不明白你那句「arouse the attention from all walks of life」是什麼意思。「Prevention of the mountain」可改成「impediment of the mountain」，不內過意容思差不太多，我只是覺得prevention聽起來有點怪。「Excellent scenery」可改成「magnificent scenery」。下一句「detect」改成「notice」吧，有點奇怪。「Has conquer」應該改成「has conquered」。最後一句我也沒看能解釋一下嗎。
第二段第一句把「but」改成「yet」比較好吧。「Dazzing」是啥，你是想說「dazing」還是「dazzling」？「MaYun is greatly robust」把is改成「was」。剩下的就沒啥問題了！我給你推薦一個查英語語法的網站，還蠻好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下，可能有些我疏漏的點。
如果有幫助到你請採納一下，謝謝！
㈥ 英語作文，幫我看看有沒有什麼語法錯誤
您好！
第一句話有點啰嗦，不應該這樣講，a student of our school，這有些過於中式英語了，回你可以直接說I'm the monior of .....class .
第二段答At first，用的不是很恰當，這不是步驟。可以用：To start with，或者 From the beginning。
最後一句話有語法錯誤，應該是Looking forward to you attendance. （期待您的出席）
中間還有一些大小寫需要改進你自己看看
望採納謝謝
㈦ 英語作文，檢查是否有語法錯誤
This essay is crap. Anyway, I correct it to look better.
The progress of science has made great changes to people's lives. Almost everyone has his own private car. In the street, everywhere is a busy scene. There are a lot of people and vehicles. However, people never stop to interact. Nowaday, we seldom home-cook, we often eat in a restaurant. In the evening, the home is very quiet, very few family will have the whole family members together. The street, brightly lit, is forever fill with noise. Whatever things you need, you can go to the store to buy. As such, family meeting becomes less. People just call, chat on the Internet. Everyone's mind is only thinking of money. The former happy life has disappeared. Everyone needs to slow down and enjoy life.
㈧ 一篇英語作文，鑒定一下有沒有語法錯誤。
a good teacher in my mind
i had a good teacher called miss lily（此處應該是姓，而不是名）.
she was a（空格） foreign language teacher at my junior high school,she was from america,but she could(全文都是過去式，此處也應該是過去式) speak chinese very fluently(副詞) 。 miss lily was kind and fun, which was my first impression of miss lily. sometimes,she used computer to let us whach(let後加動詞原形) english movie but didn't have（動詞原形）chinese subtitle .
one day,i failed in exams and i felt so sad .miss lily ask me to her office and sang（sing的過去式是sang） a song for me, i can remeber the song called <hero>
i don't forget her,because never have a teacher care for me like her.
㈨ 英語作文 語法錯誤 考研
with the passage of time 應該是沒有這樣的用法的，可能有但是不符合英國人對語言的用法，後面回那句話你用了答兩個謂語： revolves,has aroused,你前面你可以用後置定語或者定語從句表示如revolving,walk of life用way of life會更好，人生各路一般用way,可以把selling去掉，而且用with一般是伴隨狀語，這里用定語從句更好，或者直接插入boasting,realize又成為了這個句子的第二個謂語，你可以用and把句子隔開。
這篇文章主要就是句子中出現多個謂語，以及謀些片語的固定搭配不熟悉，建議多記一些固定的片語，這個作文大概可以打十二分左右吧
㈩ 幫忙看一篇英語作文有無語法錯誤並指出
供參考
I have a great dream . I (i) want to be an astronaut when I (i)
grow up . I (i) am fascinated with the (surprised at) universe (univers)
. It (it) is very beautiful (beautifui) and interesting (intretsting) .
I (i) like (liked) the universe (univers) very much. I (i) know something
about it. I (i) know there is a solar system(1) . I (i) admire (amired)
Yang Li Wei (yangliwei) and other astronauts. They (they) are very great
and cool . S0 (so) i will study hard. I (i) hope my dream will come
true. I believe (i belive) in myself(2) . I (i) can achieve my dream.
(1) solar system似乎不止一個
可以考慮用 some/many solar systems
(2) 可以用have confidence 來代替believe