1. 英語作文改正（包括語法，單詞使用不準確等等） 萬分感謝！
Last winter holiday,I went to Harbin with my mother. It's very cold in winter.There is snow and ice everywhere and you are always in a white world.You must wear warm clothes.The most exciting thing is playing with snow.Skating is also very interesting there. I will' always remember Harbin,for the snow,the ice and all the beautiful things.I love Harbin.
2. 英語作文語法更正
what is your favorite project?
let me tell you.
to learn english is very interesting.
but because of my laziness/ but because i am lazy.
my english is not good.
i will learn english well.
3. 英語作文一篇，麻煩幫忙修改~！（語法，通順，擇辭，優美,邏輯）
THIS IS ME
Hello every,I'm Ekaterina.
I study in(at) 成都七中育才學道分校.My favorite subject is music,I do well in singing and dancing. I believe that music can make people pure,so I want to be a musician when I grow up.There are no borders for music in the world,but if you want to sing to other nations,you should use their languages in songs.When I understand that,I konw the import of learning Enlish.Fortunately,my parents let me learn English when I was a little girl.There are nothing easy in the world,and there are nothing boring in the world.Now,I can speak Enlish well,and also like English very much.
That's all,thank you.
再的都對
4. 幫我看看我自己寫的這段英文語法對不對求大神 Hello,friend,I'm glad to r
問題不少
weak up後面逗號改成句號
後面定語從句用法不對，country後面版的that放到know後面
rich後面改句權號
discuss後面加about our 直接discuss business會很奇怪 後面改句號
take改成taken
but後改成didn't pay for it句號
後面你是想說 有什麼想知道的直接問我 嗎 如果是這樣的話 應該是 You can ask me anything that you want to know
後面send改成prepared
最後直接改成 Once you pay for the proct, I will immediately deliver it.
結尾應是：
sincerely
xxx（你的名字或公司名
5. 求幫忙修改一下我的英語作文 語法錯誤啥的 謝謝拉
「 you always have so much expectations!」 I slammed the door as if it could make their mouths shut up and ran away from that house where was full of cold ness and blame. The cold wind in the street blew on my face like a knife and (I sank through the floor). In my parents』 words, it sounded like I had no future anymore, I was so lazy and decadent that i were a pig (for slaughter) .Their requests and expectations were just like a heavy mountain on my back which made me could not breathe.
Walking in the street, I suddenly saw a familiar figure --- Jason, the 「king」 in my primary school! My memory of childhood was blurry all the time but when I saw his face ,he recalled all the past to me.
Jason was a typical school bully in our primary school. Fights were the normal things for him. I was his deskmate and we were good friends in fact.He looked like didn't care about anything and I bet that he never had a complete class.I have not seen him after graating from the primary school.
I said hello to him, 「 How are you recently?」
Jason looked at me as if i asked something embarrassing and an unknown emotion flashed from his eyes, 「Hi, it』s been a long time.」
「You must have had a good time now.」 I said, 「 You are so bright in our perimary school .I remember those things all the time.」
Jason said, 「No, in fact, I quited from school and work in a restaurant for a long time.
I suddenly realized that maybe my primary school cl assmate did not live as good as I imagined. His clothes was shabby and his face was also older than ours.
「Why you leave school?」 I asked.
「Oh, it is a long story.」 Jason said, 「Sometime I admire you to have such a responsible parents who concerned of you.」
「How can you think so!」 I was really surprised, 「 You can』t imagine how noisy they are! They try to keep you studying all the time and give you tasks endless.
「Shut up!」 he roared at me and drove mad and i heard the hard,sharp thrusts of his breath. We were in silence for a while and he stared at me in a nearly sympathetic sight. 「You don't know what you have and how happy you are now! If my parents had ecated me anything or just care about me , I wouldn't be what I am now!」
Suddenly it was like a hand touching my heart, I realized that parents』 care and control was so rare that could lead me to the correct road. It was like the scissor pruned the askew branches. Maybe it would difficult to obey but it could help you grow up .
「Thank you.」 I said to Jason sincerely,for his roar and mention.
I turned back and ran home.I knew I must open that close door.
親〜小錯誤太多了咯〜時態、過去時怎麼寫、大部分我都幫你改過了、還有一句用虛擬語氣、括弧的是我沒看懂你的意思、還有一些搭配意思對的、但不這么用、自己改咯〜
6. 給我糾正一下英語作文的語法錯誤行么，很急
（1）love不可數，且there be句型用就近原則，所以第一句的are改為is 如下：There is a lot of the love of my parents.
(2)逗號前後的東專西可有修飾關系，所屬以第二句中的are可以去掉直接使用形容詞 如下： innumerable
（3） 逗號前後的東西一定要有聯系，故第三句的 remember 動詞原形不能對單獨使用，如2所說需要表修飾，且這里為主動記住 如下： remembering also can not finish.
（4）Mum大寫
（5）刪去of mom and Dad take care,
（6）improve 為提高的意思 disease 為疾病的意思 故最後兩句不能說疾病一天一天地提高 所以改為 如下： My disease left me a way day by day【我的病一天天離我更遠了】
望採納 謝謝！
7. 這是一篇需要更改語法的英語作文=L= 英語大大快來幫我一把
嗯fake commodities 是兩個詞……是排版問題嗎？
*第一節可以直接變成一句話：...China today, that...
*the beginning of 可作 the emergence of, beginning我也說不出哪兒不對，但是意思稍微欠那麼一點兒……
pharmaceutical (拼錯了
這句話的介詞似乎有問題……理論上應該是There are lots of fake commodities in XXX instry。那你想表達「從這個行業到那個行業」，這是一個同位語。所以應該是There are lots of fake commodities in various/almost all instries, from pharmaceuticals to food（嗯這里好像instry也不用做重復，可以這樣直接說東西）
buy這個動詞強調動作，這句話也就變成了「很多人害怕他們會去買假貨」。可以變成「have bought（買到了假貨）」或者「will get（會買到假貨）」
「In order to..."一句，我的理解是」為了放心，所以人們傾向於高價購買商品「？如果是這樣的話，」make people assured「加上之後主語是另一個they在這樣的上下文中有讓」別人「放心的意思。可寫作"In order to be assured, customers tend to..."
high price 是兩個詞？但是這個地方也不能用high price，不能和spend一起用。可以是to spend a good sum of money/ to buy goods of high price
"in my opinion..."句：首先復數一般不需要和the連用，而且這里也無需特指，所以可以是"A fake commodity is..."或是"Fake commodities are..."
這句話的後半段意思是否是」假貨是不良廠商為了牟利（的手段）「？一個是manufactures應作manufacturers。句子也有一些語法問題，如果我理解的句意沒錯的話……保留一下你原文的詞句，這句話的翻譯可作"In my opinion, unscrupulous manufacturers proce fake procts in order to generate maximum profits"。 這里 to reap benefits 不妥，這主要是褒義，或者隱喻的用法。
I think this must be? might be?可能是原文筆誤
*中文中雖說」和什麼有關「，英文中常直接寫作」有什麼引起/引發了什麼「，但似乎並不怎麼重要= =
*既然這里說了"Internationally"，不如上一節的開頭也說"domestically"，也顯得結構比較完整
"The reason"一句應作"The reason is thatChina has too many fake commodities"原文中缺少從劇中的動詞，也一般不那麼說
"In order to"一句，是否是指」為了中國的形象和人們的安全「？In order to是連詞片語，後面必須跟著動詞（所以in order to ensure是對的）。可作"In order to rebrand China's image/re-image China and to ensure..."。事實上，表達」為了某樣東西「的時候可直接使用介詞for，因此也可作"for the image of china and the safety of..."
"the safety of people",此處應該去掉原句中的介詞，或者保留介詞變成"...of the people in China"——因為介詞表示限定，必須有特指。事實上，不如改成"...of Chinese citizens"，避免詞語重復……（不知道你是什麼標準的作文要求哈
"can not"應作"should not"，前者是「不可能（被虛假廣告騙）」的意思
*secondly前面得分號那裡其實可以斷句？
"the supervision ability"應作"supervisory abilities"，或直接作"improve their supervision"
"circumstance be solved"處，circumstance所指的「情況」不是中文裡有問題的「情況」，只是一種描述的「情況」。所以這里還是應該用"problem be solved"
最後的"persecution"我不太確定你的想法……persecution」一般指政治上的迫害。如果表達「不再受假貨的荼毒」這樣的話可作「be free from the threats of fake commodities」(不再受假貨的威脅)
註：標注星號的只是用詞問題，其餘的是語法問題。
嗯其實寫完了之後想也許你只想讓我幫你改完把成品給你就好了……但總之我還是把大概的理由羅列了一下，希望能對你有幫助
因為只要求改語法所以就只改了一些語法（可能沒改全（應該不會改錯（喂
希望你能加油哦！不知道你這篇文章是哪種考試用的文章，除了語法以外英語寫作還有其他技巧上的也可以多注意一下
其實英語語法不算語言裡面很難得，想想我們中文多微妙啊他們可死板了……我覺得多看看記記下一篇就不會有問題啦（何況網路翻譯君自己的語法也……
另：順手輸入了fake commodity搜索，發現了 My view on fake commodities的例文，也許對你有幫助。
http://www.360abc.com/article/2135.html
8. 我寫的一篇英語作文，幫忙改下語法謝謝
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classmate
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everybody
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learn
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learning
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"他們不會答嘲笑你"
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9. 英語作文改錯，希望能把有語法錯誤的地方改正一下，一定要准確，20分。
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10. 求改正我的英語作文的語法錯誤。
1 higher paying -high paid
Professionals who make -get這里make不對
there are several benefits to a good ecation-to 改為for
2 condition was the biggest obstacle at me-at 改為for
So I hardly worked for my living expenses spending in china表意不清，我不知道你想表達內什麼意容思