A. 求英语大神指导，，我写的这篇作文有什么可笑的语法错误，就是特别突出的语法错误，，请指出，，越多越好
Wild animals
Animals are our friends, but many people kill "friends" for their fur and meat. The people have killed a lot of wild animals. So many kinds of animals are in danger. Meanwhile, the green house effect makes temperature rise, therefore, the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live. Now, just imagine, what will happen if there aren't animals? The world will happen a chain of events, we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die! Therefore, we should protect wildlife animals. I think First, every country's government should make the nature reserves bigger and bigger. Then, they should make the wildlife animals have enough food to eat. But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
你的观点还是很好的.打字上可能有些错误, 我这里给你改过来了.然后,我给你修改了大部分句子,如下：
The people have killed a lot of wild animals. So many kinds of animals are in danger.
改为：These people have killed so many wild animals that some species are in danger of extinction.
Meanwhile, the green house effect makes temperature rise, therefore, the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live.
改为：Meanwhile, the greenhouse effect leads to temperature rise, which results in iceberg getting melted and animals like polar bears will lose their habitats.
The world will happen a chain of events ,we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die!
改为： A chain of events will happen in the world. We people won’t have meat to eat and we will get ill and may even die in the end!
But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
改为：But there is still a long way to go before we can make these two points come true.
B. 英语语法错误带来的笑话
aback attempts to box-haul his ship.
C. 求英语达人，看看下面这段英文的语法错误，或者表达不对的地方。
As the only senior consultant from Ernst & Young's Performance Improvement in Dalian, I have tried my best(spare no effort) to cooperate with senior leaders and project managers to complete various projects in Dalian, and help them communicate with customers actively, satisfy their real needs and deliver the work with the high quality. On this basis, actively establish, maintain and strengthen internal and external relationships, and tap the potential business opportunities for EY. In 2011, with my efforts, I (不能用help) assisted directors in carrying out three new contracts in Dalian, the total amount of money add up to more than 15 million RMB. Dalian Finance Training Project has created a new Ernst & Young consulting business area. Internet of Things(你想表达？) is a new instry in China. As the well-known consulting firm, Ernst & Young firstly offered the Internet of Things（？） instrial strategic planning to the customers of Dalian Software Technology Park, meanwhile, also assisted the listing of Dalian High-tech Zone Internet of Things Instrial Base, helping the zone to settle the strategic development position and objectives. Low-carbon instry is one of the development goals in recent years, the “low-carbon instry strategic planning” project of Dalian High-tech Zone aims to help clients to settle development plan, implementate plan and so on, the project is also a demonstration project of Ernst & Young, a pacemaker in Ernst & Young internal project exchange. This year, I also assisted the partners in carrying out the projects billing(?) and find the best time of project billing, ensuring the customers’ smooth payments.Until now, the sum from the Dalian projects we actually got came to more than 10 million. In this year, in the continuous learning of knowledge of the new field , I basically completed the established goals; the goals of this year mainly in the following aspects were summarized by
有些地方我没懂...已用问号和括号标记，文章还没写完吧，我是英语专业大三学生，希望能帮上忙
D. 求英语句子语法因翻译错误的笑话
英国威尔士郡斯旺西官员一时疏忽，将写有“我不在办公室”的路标赫然立在回路口旁。
法新社答1日报道，根据相关规定，威尔士所有路标均应用英语和威尔士语两种文字标识。
斯旺西当地一名官员发送电子邮件请人帮忙将“居民区，重型车辆禁止入内”译成威尔士语。收到回信后，这名工作人员未经确认就把回信内容打印，制成标牌，立在一处路口旁。
这名工作人员没想到，他当时收到的是一封系统自动回复邮件，内容为“我不在办公室，请发送任何需要翻译的文件”。
懂威尔士语的当地人注意到标牌后，立即向有关部门指出问题。斯旺西政府一名发言人说：“一意识到翻译错误，我们立即将它取下。正确路标将尽快就位。”
E. 英语语法用错的尴尬场景，你有遇到过吗
Long time no see. 好久不见。是不是觉得熟悉得不能再熟悉了呢？然内而到现在还没能发容现有什么问题呢？
其实，Long time no see 属于有语法错误的中式英语，其最早出现的时间可以追溯到19世纪末，由大批移民美国的华籍劳工创造，而成为了一个美式英语短句。其后随着英美之间的商业和海事往来而进入了英式英语的领域。其他同样因此而进入英式英语词汇的洋泾浜英语还有“no can do”（不能做）和 “chop chop！”（赶快！）
F. 英语语法有哪些常见错误
您好
常见英语语法错误
1．句子成分残缺不全
We always workingtill late at night before taking exams.（误）
We are alwaysworking /We always work till late at night before taking exams（正）
We should readbooks may be useful to us. （误）
We should readbooks which may be useful to us. （正）
2．句子成分多余
This test is end,but there is another test is waiting for you. （误）
One test ends, butanother is waiting for you. （正）
The driver of thered car was died on the spot. （误）
The driver of thered car died on the spot. （正）
3．主谓不一致
Someone/Somebodythink that reading should be selective. （误）
Some think thatreading should be selective. （正）
My sister go tothe cinema at least once a week. （误）
My sister goes tothe cinema at least once a week. （正）
4．动词时态、语态的误用
I was walkingalong the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. （误）
I was walkingalong the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. （正）
We have little time to read some books which we interest. （误）
We have littletime to read some books in which we are interested. （正）
I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. （误）
I have beenstudying in the college for two years（正）
5．词类混淆
It is my pointthat reading must be selectively. （误）
In my opinion,reading must be selective. （正）
Honest is so important for everyperson. （误）
Honesty is soimportant for everyone. （正）
The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. （误）
The old man washit by a car when he was crossing the street. （正）
6．名词可数与不可数的误用
Too much tests aredisadvantage for students’ study. （误）
Too many tests aredisadvantageous to students. （正）
In modern society, people are under various pressures（误）
In modern society,people are under various kinds of pressure. （正）
7．动词及物与不及物的误用
The trafficaccident was taken place at the junction of two highways. （误）
The trafficaccident took place at the junction of two highways. （正）
Because of his excellent performance, the boss rose his salary. （误）
Because of hisexcellent performance, the boss raised his salary. （正）
8．介词to和不定式符号的混淆
Too many testswill do harm to cultivate our independent thinking. （误）
Too many testswill do harm to the cultivation of our independent thinking. （正）
All these contributed to solve the serious problem. （误）
All thesecontributed to the solution to the serious problem. （正）
9．情态动词的误用
It may not good toour health. （误）
It may be not goodto our health. （正）
They should spent much time. （误）
They should spendmuch time. （正）
10. There be句型的误用
There exists somenew problems such as being dishonest. （误）
There exist/arisesome new problems such as being dishonest. （正）
There are many way to solve the tuition and fees of college ecation. （误）
There are manyways to raise the money for the tuition and fees for college ecation. （正）
1.动宾搭配不当
We must payattention to it and make solutions to the problem. （误）
We must payattention and find a solution to the problem. （正）
It also may help you to make success. （误）
It may also helpyou succeed/obtain your goal. （正）
2.根据中文逐字硬译
If someone’sfamily situation is not well, he can apply for loan to bank. （误）
If one’s family isnot well off, he can apply to the bank for a loan. （正）
Let alone touch the outside world of campus/keep a good body health（误）
Let alone get intouch with the world outside of the campus/keep fit（正）
上面这些错误比较典型、集中，请大家务必要注意，其他的错误，如单词拼写、大小写、标点符号的误用等，可谓千姿百态，无奇不有，在此就不一一列举。
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G. 生活中常见英语语法错误
问题：
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这句话确实在生活中很常见，因此大家都觉得没有什么错误。
我已经很多年回没有学习语文了。觉得这个答问题很有趣，
于是仔细分析了一下，感觉错误是这样产生的。
“意外”是一个名字，“是”是一个动词，“可以”在这里也是一个动词。
“避免”同样是一个动词，动词属于实词，当实词“避免”与后面的结构助词“的”结合在一起时，构成了名词短语“避免的”，即“避免的”是一个名词。
好，现在可以来分析一下整个句子的组成了。
名词“意外”作主语，动词“是”作谓语，动词“可以”也只能作谓语，名词短语“避免的”当然是作宾语了，这样的“主-谓-谓-宾”的结构，在语法上是错误的。
修正：
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一种简单的办法，是改成“主-谓-宾”的结构。由于有两个动词可供选择，因此也有两种方案：
a、意外是避免的。
这样修改的话，语法上没错，但逻辑上不对。
b、意外可以避免的
这样修改语法和逻辑上就都正确了
还有一种修改方法，即方案C：
c、意外可以避免。
不过在这种方案中，“可以”是副词，“避免”是动词了，句子变成了“主-谓”结构。
H. 在口语中有哪些常见的英语语法的错误表达
在国外，老外们抄有时候会避免使用陈述句，因为陈述句的表达显得生硬、没礼貌，会给人命令的感觉。这时尽量使用疑问句，否定句或从句，以积极的、建议的、比较的、人性的语气代替消极的、命令的、直接的、武断的语气，举例：点餐时，想要一杯咖啡，中式英语：I want to have a coffee. 地道英语：Could I have a coffee,please?
I. 什么是英语语法错误
1．句子成分残缺不全
We always working till late at night before taking exams.（误）
We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams（正）
We should read books may be useful to us. （误）
We should read books which may be useful to us. （正）
2．句子成分多余
This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. （误）
One test ends, but another is waiting for you. （正）
The driver of the red car was died on the spot. （误）
The driver of the red car died on the spot. （正）
3．主谓不一致
Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. （误）
Some think that reading should be selective. （正）
My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. （误）
My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. （正）
4．动词时态、语态的误用
I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. （误）
I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. （正）
We have little time to read some books which we interest. （误）
We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. （正）
I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. （误）
I have been studying in the college for two years（正）
5．词类混淆
It is my point that reading must be selectively. （误）
In my opinion, reading must be selective. （正）
Honest is so important for everyperson. （误）
Honesty is so important for everyone. （正）
The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. （误）
The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. （正）
6．名词可数与不可数的误用
Too much tests are disadvantage for students’ study. （误）
Too many tests are disadvantageous to students. （正）
In modern society, people are under various pressures（误）
In modern society, people are under various kinds of pressure. （正）
7．动词及物与不及物的误用
The traffic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways. （误）
The traffic accident took place at the junction of two highways. （正）
because of his excellent performance, the boss rose his salary. （误）
because of his excellent performance, the boss raised his salary. （正）
8．介词to和不定式符号的混淆
Too many tests will do harm to cultivate our independent thinking. （误）
Too many tests will do harm to the cultivation of our independent thinking. （正）
All these contributed to solve the serious problem. （误）
All these contributed to the solution to the serious problem. （正）
9．情态动词的误用
It may not good to our health. （误）
It may be not good to our health. （正）
They should spent much time. （误）
They should spend much time. （正）
10. There be句型的误用
There exists some new problems such as being dishonest. （误）
There exist/arise some new problems such as being dishonest. （正）
There are many way to solve the tuition and fees of college ecation. （误）
There are many ways to raise the money for the tuition and fees for college ecation. （正）
1.动宾搭配不当
We must pay attention to it and make solutions to the problem. （误）
We must pay attention and find a solution to the problem. （正）
It also may help you to make success. （误）
It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal. （正）
2.根据中文逐字硬译
If someone’s family situation is not well, he can apply for loan to bank. （误）
If one’s family is not well off, he can apply to the bank for a loan. （正） Let alone touch the outside world of campus/keep a good body health（误）
Let alone get in touch with the world outside of the campus/keep fit（正）
上面这些错误比较典型、集中，请大家务必要注意，其他的错误，如单词拼写、大小写、标点符号的误用等，可谓千姿百态，无奇不有，在此就不一一列举。