❶ 简单的英文书面表达。不要出现任何语法错误或用中文式英语。必须保证拿满分。
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❷ 初中英语书面表达常见错误有哪些
1．时态误用
主要表现在两方面：1）学生写作之前没有判断整篇文章主要用哪种时态，常出现该用一般现在时的句子，用了一般过去时；而该用将来时的句子，用了完成时。2）时态构成表达错误。由于学生对各种时态掌握不好，常常将所学的各种时态混淆，以致出现如下的错误如，I‘m go to school by bike. He told some children that there are some places of interest in Beijing.
2. 汉语式英语
由于受汉语的影响，再加上对英语句子结构掌握不好，导致学常常按汉语的词序来翻译句子，在学生的作文中常常见到这样的句子： You can be bus. In china have different places of interest. In autumn is best season for traveling.
3. 逻辑错误
在做书面表达的过程中，有的学生一拿到考题慌慌张张开始写，在写作之前没有构思好先写什么后写什么，哪些内容应该详写，哪些内容应该略写，而是一边写一边构思，从而导致整个文章逻辑不清，层次感不强，整篇文章不知所云。
4．单词拼写错误
由于部分学生平时不注意记忆单词，基础知识掌握不牢固，所以在文章中常出现单词拼写错误如，September 写为 septber because 写为 beacause
5. 缺少衔接
有些学生虽然在词汇运用书面表达方面能够达到基本要求，但由于句子之间没有添加适当的衔接成分，使句子之间和文段之间缺乏必要的过渡和连贯，影响了信息的传递和表达效果。
6．文体不对
中学阶段要求学生掌握的文体主要有说明文、记叙文、议论文和应用文，其中应用文又包括通知、请假条、书信和电子邮件等，由于一些学忽视了各种体裁的写作特点，从而导致文章体裁格式不正确如：将写信的日期写在信末；写请假条不写署名等。
❸ 英语书面表达（找错）
语法上没问题,我建议把drink healthy drinks改为have healthy drinks
❹ 英语一个书面表达，禁止用翻译器，不得有语法错误，要附翻译
现在的小孩子怎么都懒成这样了？
不管是作业也好，为了考试也罢，这点东西都让别人帮忙，书干脆别念了。
哪怕自己写出来，让网友帮忙修改润色挑挑毛病也好啊。
❺ 英语写作文 老是语法错误犯得很多 怎么办才好
背经典范文，句式，一句句死扣 从简单的练起 练到脱口而出 像说HELLO
❻ 英语书面表达错误纠正 请看下面例子 请各位高手帮帮忙，明天考试要考到，非常急！！！！！！！！
My friend Yu Peng has a1 biclyle . He 2 bought it five yiears ago3. It is made in Wuhan. He bought it in a street market and ride it to school almost everyday. Sometimes 4he has to have it repaired. He said he was5 going to buy a new one made in Tianjin.
我觉得有以上5个错误，其中错误1只要用横线划出就行，错误2、3、5属于时态专语法错误，要根据该生属以前是否学过这个知识点为根据，4是词汇积累方面不够。
因材施教，看这个学生平时的性格和自尊心等。没什么，因为他们不会才要学，只要讲解清楚，让学生明白为什么错，错在哪，再轻松说几句，学生反而会高兴的
❼ 英语写作文时语法错误很多，该怎么处理
平日多读多听，会对写作有帮助。
❽ 一篇英语书面表达 希望不要有语法错误 尽量用九年级的词汇 尽快啊 谢谢各位了
My parents and I decide to have a trip next week, but we have different opinopns on where to travel.
My father's favourite place is HongKong. The average temperature in HongKong next week will be 20℃. So we can enjoy many outdoor activities such as taking a sunbath at the beach, sightseeing and shopping. We can go to HK by plane.
My mother prefers Haerbin. The average temperature in there next week will drop to -30℃. Though it will be quiet cold outside, but it might be an unique experience because of the ice and snow festival which is to be held next week. She chooses trains to get there.
In my opinion Hangzhou is the best place to go. The average temperature in there next week will be about 10℃. If we go to Hangzhou, we can not only find the lake a perfect delight to the eye but also find it a joy to stroll along the busy streets, taste famous Hangzhou dishes and buy some special local procts. And we slao get there by train.
Compared these three places, though they all have their own advantages, we finally consider HK our destination. Because in one hand, the good weather with comfortable temperatures in HK will be convenient for us to travel the whole city. On the other hand, traveling by plain is faster, more comfortable and more convenient than by train. So we can spend less energy on the travel time and spend more time in HK.
I'm looking forward to this trip to HK.
❾ 英语书面表达，要求翻译大约80词，无语法错误，分别写两篇，追求速度者优先采纳，急求！！！！！
手工翻译如下：回答
The school sports meeting was held in October, and most of the students took an active part in it. I like running very much, and I won two gold medals: the 100-meter race and 4×100-meter relay race. Our class won six gold medals in total, and four of them were won by the girls.
❿ 英语书面表达，要求翻译大约80词，无语法错误，分别写两篇，20分钟内完成，追求速度者优先采纳，急求
And other infectious diseases before, the AIDS infectious disease may take a generation's life, and make another generation lose both. So we must not let cultural, racial, and social barriers to stop we engage in we have to do work. We can't give up our work because the government's work efficiency low. This is an undeclared war that everyone must attend, only in this way can we win.