Ⅰ 英语作文，修改语法错误
Is money everything ?
As is firmly believed ,money is very essential to us. With money we can live in luxurious houses, eat nice food, travel to wherever you like. However, since money can bring us so many things, does this mean that money is everything? The answer is obviously no.
Firstly, money can't help us have true friends, though you may find that the richer you are, the more people would like to be your friends. Friendships of this kind are always not genuine; once you lose your fortune you lose your "friends". Only with sincerity can we make true friends. Money plays an unimportant role in making true friends.
Secondly, money can't buy life. Whether rich or poor, God is equal with everyone, he didn't allow money to turn the wheel of time backward, however rich a person is, he is bound to leave the world. Only these who have a positive attitude to life won't feel regret when he says goodbye to the world.
Apart from what have been mentioned above, there are still many things that money is unable to do. Money can't give us a dependable lover, money can't offer you happiness, neither can money provide you with a healthy body...
Taking all the factors into account, we can finally reach the conclusion that money isn't everything.
写的不错，只是语法错误不少
Ⅱ 自己写英语作文怎么才能检查语法上的错误
虽然WORD是一个办法,但考试时能用word吗?
建议你多做改错题,能找出别人的错误也当回然可以发现自己答的不足.不要一个词一个词地检查,要整句地观察,分析句子结构,从而找出错误.
最基本的是巩固语法知识,多用,熟悉了下意识也会写对.
Ⅲ 写一篇英语作文、帮忙看下有语法错误吗。
in the study：in study
play computers :play on computer
i have you study more hard: i have studied much harder than before
pass into: get into
it is a different answer: it's not the case.
let me to be fresh : make me feel refreshed
be ready to learn: be ready for class
school and classroom become: school has become
they provide an opportunity : it offers me a golden opportunity
I still fell happy: I still feel happy.
语法抄错误太多了，改了一下，这袭样想进入重点高中，很难
补充：找我的改就不错了，初三就这个水平，再往好里改你们老师就该怀疑了，也要故意买个破绽懂吗
Ⅳ 我写的英语作文有语法错误吗
副词做状语:firstly，secondly
Ⅳ 一篇英语作文，求检查修改语法错误
如果做题目的话 有实意的词 首字母大写
第一段 应该是 “have been learning” 后面的逗号最好改成分号或句号版 因为逗号不权能连接两个完整的句子
第二段 teachers 应该改成 teacher 因为interest 是不可数名词
第三段 应该是get over these problems
第四段 应该是 get it over
另 可以吧 speaking 改成 oral English 这样显得更高级
希望我的回答可以帮到你~
Ⅵ 如何在写英语作文的时候少范语法错误
多点阅读，和分析句子结构
划分句子的主谓宾
Ⅶ 我的这篇英语作文有语法错误吗
句子开头是不是没复复制制全？
第一个：训练营是training camp，你是写多了个n吧。而且这句后面的从句如果是要表达为了跟人比赛所以邀请人的话我觉得用so that we can比较好，比赛划船可以用have a boat racing。
第二个：时间和日期在英文里是分开的，反正我是没见过时间+of+月日这种结构：其次日期的表达是写先写月份后写序数词的日期，表示某月的第几天。
改成at 7：00 a.m，april 5th.
Ⅷ 写了一篇英语作文，求检查修改语法错误，谢谢！
When I fail后面用的都是一般现在时，这里最好也用表示状态，不表过去
Ⅸ 我自己写得英语作文，水平很差，请大家指出语法错误！
good bad这种词用的太多了吧，比如第一句就可以用student's quality，is是不对的要去掉，study greads？你是想说学习成绩吧，grade，that后面那个judge本身是动词，后面depend也是，你要么变成to judge，或是judging。in the judge students也是把the去掉，改成judging。然后最后一句可以接到前一句，不然太短了，可以是...that the school record is no longer the absolute criteria for judging student's quality.
第2段第一句可以写成There're several possible explanations for the phenomenon.因为如果用reasons for the phenomenon，总是有点不对劲的感觉，我是看了两遍这句话才知道你想表达的意思。后面above more(这种没见过，不存在吧？)....what's more....一堆more，第一次可以用比如first of all,后面那个可以用further more，what's more太随意了。另外那个become focus on这个就不对，同时出现两个谓语动词，好歹也加个to或变个动名词形式吧。可以改成the student's comprehensive quality has became the focus of our society's attention.后面也是，可以改成the school record of students has grally faded into insignificance when to judge a student's quality.
最后一段this change，你看你第一段说a lot of changes，说实话我也没明白你都说了哪些change，好像你只说了一个，那么第一段可以改成单数，但是只用个change总感觉不太合适，既然是评判标准就应该把这个‘标准’加上，比如a great change of the criteria for judging.....
Ⅹ 这篇英语作文有什么语法错误
句子开头是不是没复制全？
第一个：训练营是training camp，你是写多了个n吧。而且这句后面的从句如回果是要表达为了跟答人比赛所以邀请人的话我觉得用so that we can比较好，比赛划船可以用have a boat racing。
第二个：时间和日期在英文里是分开的，反正我是没见过时间+of+月日这种结构：其次日期的表达是写先写月份后写序数词的日期，表示某月的第几天。
改成at 7：00 a.m，april 5th.