① 这篇英语短文有没有语法错误。
改为the new life has already started.
We bring our dreams on the new journey of learning.I think it will be an important change in our life.注意首字母大写回！答
② 帮我看一下这段英语短文有语法错误么谢谢
Yes,unlike south,where is(非限定性定语从句) so hot in summer,Mudanjiang has a cozy weather.Though so many people think it’s really cold in the winter, when it comes (though和but不能同时用，一句话内只能用一个，去掉哪一个都可以）,the snow is(用一般现在时就可以) very beautiful .What’s more,people can make a snowman with friends(朋友应用复数形式，根据语义可知） and family outside（outside为副词，表示在外面，前面不用介词） and will feel very happy, meanwhile,government will build（will后加动词原形） a snow castle that tourist and resident can come(can情态动词，后加动词原形） here and play together（“来这玩”是汉语式的英语，最好改成这样，用and连接两个并列短语),which is all made of ice(be made of由...制作) .And at night ,the colorful light which puts on the ice will all be lit up(用被动形式),you will feel living in fairy tales world.At last I want to say,Mudanjiang doesn’t(第三人称单数） have too much pressure to live in,and when you get here （here是副词，前面不用介词）,you will feel relaxful(relax是动词，此处应为形容词） and comfortable,you can don’t worry about the natural disasters here either （否定句中的 ”也“ 用either）.If you want to see some scenic spots,Jingpo Lack and so many beautiful scenes are (都用复数形式）all the good choice.
大概就改这样了，有一些可能也不太对，参考着来吧
③ 此段英语短文是否有语法错误
有好几处语法错误： “If you are a pretty girl ”哦虚拟语气，其中are应该为were； _处用at,楼上朋友已经说明； sweater表一类时，不用加s,因此句中是正确的； If you can’t afford these clothes中afford后加to; 最后一句中 for yourself 改为 by yourself ; 类似于 for only $30 的，其中的 for 全改at
④ 请问这篇英语小短文有几处语法错误
仅供参考：
比较明显的问题：1 Now I'm finding it (正在找)----------Now ，I have found it （已经找到）。
Now I’ riding by myself. -------Now I'm riding it （by） myself (ride 表骑自行车为及物动词）
In the primary three(你是用电脑翻译的？)-------In the third grade ,
2. In th third grade,the bike be bought by my father,everyday go to school,I have remembered that father always rubbed his eyes in that big wind with grain of sands entered his eyes---------一逗到底.
When I was in the third grade ,My father bought the bike .（没必要用被动语态看起来别扭）
就算是被动也是was bought
I sat at the back of the bike,liking to kicked scree I saw 。liking ?从没看到过 直接，kicking the scree I saw 做伴随状语 或者 改为 ，fond of doing .
3.每天上学，我已经记得。。。。。？！Every day ,When my father sent me to school ,he always rubbed his eyes in that big grains of sand were hiting his face {everyday(adj.日常的每日的 )与every day 每天 ；每日 做状语 sand 做“沙子”不可数 沙滩可数
The boys wre palying on the sands }
4. Time goes by,nowdays the person ride the bike is me,my backpack is the thing that sits on the bike seat,maybe I'm my father and my backpack is me.又一逗到底，一个句子中没有连接词and but or so yet for nor 等时只能出现一个谓语动词
"Time goes by ."="With time going by ,“一个后面是逗号一个后面是句号
5.最后一句有点瞎扯。
建议用简单句子 简单单词 写作文 。写完后检查一下。感觉还是有底子的~~~ ：）
⑤ 英语短文看下有没有语法错误并改正 谢谢!
Nowadays, more and more people prefer talking about vocational ecation or college ecation,
because it plays a significant role in daily life. It has caused substantial impact on the society.
The number of people who take the college entrance examination has been decreasing these years.
Some people consider vocational ecation an advantage to job-hunting, while others argue
that a college diploma is more important. In my opinion, college ecation is more advisable for
most people. First, college ecation is systematic and students can learn a lot in many aspects.
Unlike vocational ecation, which always focuses on just one job skill, college ecation enables
students to develop different potentials. Second, to obtain a higher degree, such as a master's
degree, one has to go through college ecation to a bachelor's degree first.
In a society where any job skill may become outdated quickly with the appearance of new
technologies, the limitations of vocational ecation prove even more serious. Only college
ecation can prepare us for future challenges.
Waste not, want not.的意思是“不浪费就不会缺少任何东西。”用在这里不太合适，可以考虑删除。
⑥ 英语作文！帮我看看这一段我写的有没有什么语法错误！
AND IS GOOD FOR OUR HEALTH, IF WE DON'T HAVE A HEALTHY EATING HABIT,IT CAN BE HARMFUL TO US
SO,ONLY A HEALTHY LIFESTYLE CAN DO GOOD TO OUR HEALTH
直接改了，望采纳版啦权
⑦ 英语 英语作文 语法错误
你好，
首先，第一句没有什么问题，只是我不明白你那句“arouse the attention from all walks of life”是什么意思。“Prevention of the mountain”可改成“impediment of the mountain”，不内过意容思差不太多，我只是觉得prevention听起来有点怪。“Excellent scenery”可改成“magnificent scenery”。下一句“detect”改成“notice”吧，有点奇怪。“Has conquer”应该改成“has conquered”。最后一句我也没看能解释一下吗。
第二段第一句把“but”改成“yet”比较好吧。“Dazzing”是啥，你是想说“dazing”还是“dazzling”？“MaYun is greatly robust”把is改成“was”。剩下的就没啥问题了！我给你推荐一个查英语语法的网站，还蛮好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下，可能有些我疏漏的点。
如果有帮助到你请采纳一下，谢谢！
⑧ 写的一篇英语小短文，求问有语法错误吗
最后一句应该是：i hope you can be friend with her.
另外，第二行你还不如直接写her chinese name is Zeng Yi.没必要介绍她的名，她版的姓具体是权什么
⑨ 看看这个英语短文有无语法错误
The Best way of transportation with the rapid development of our society
the growing number of peoplehave the private car-more and more people have their private cars
privatecars environmental pollution as well as 改为， going out
such as 改为 as a result
for the begood for our healthy and protecting environment and saving energy改为：
for the good of our health,environmental protection and energy saving
ofgo out is ride bicycle改为of going out is riding bicycle
⑩ 这篇英语短文有没有语法错误
unforggetable是错的,应该是unforgettable.
Boarders decided to out having some fun这句,应是Boarders decided to go out to have some fun. "out"作动词意思是"伸出".
and had breakfast这句错了,应是"had a breakfast"
Then wo went to the cinema里的wo应是we吧?
Sacrifice加个书名号好一些.
We think Chen Kaige...错了,应是We thought...
appreciate the snow前要加to,因为是and连接的...
the pleasure-boat ticket is too expensive又是时态错误,is改was
more expensive than in normal times中,应在than后加which
the air in city makes me feel...就不说了,还是时态.make改made
(其他的错误不太好打了,你注意一下搭配上的错误吧. )