❶ 大神能看看这篇英语作文有没有什么语法错误吗
基本上一句一个以上，如果加上词汇错误那还得乘以2倍，建议重写，不懂的词汇你可以别用。
❷ 看英语作文有没语法错误
楼主你好，您的短文很精彩，
您的这篇英语作文没有语法错误，但是有一处单词专错误：There
are
a
lot
of
problem
on
the
earth
such
as
water
pollution
and
air
pollution.（您文章的第属一行）应该变成=可数名词变复数时应该加s。
❸ 谁能帮忙看看我的英语作文有没有语法错误在线等
Nowadays, when we talk about the freedom to college student, we kept different opinions .some of us think that college student should have more freedom than before, but some others don’ agree with it.
Some people think that the college student should have more freedom than before, because freedom is very important to students. They have to study many different things everyday .They have to learn how to manage their time, their work, and so on. And students are the master of the country in the future, they should concern more about the future of the country, they have to learn how to express their reasonable opinion, how to monitor government. And it can help students to learn how to build a more hopeful country in the future.
However, some others think that students should have less freedom than before, because in their opinion, students is too free on that way. They may waste too much time on other things rather than learning .so it harmful to students. Students' ty is learning, therefor they should spend more time on it.
I agree that students should have more freedom than before, because they are still very young, they should learn more about how to build a more hopeful country .how to help others, which is very important for a man.
中间有不少错误，和不符合表达习惯的地方，我都给你改了，你再看看吧。
❹ 看看这个英语作文有没有语法错误
increasinly ----increasingly
a great number of cities
They have heardthe official report that a great number of city appear the growing number of green lands.
For one thing,the green land have a large number of green plants.And green plant can bring fresh air.for another thing ,green land is good for our health.
It is high time that we protected the green land in city.
❺ 英语作文检查有没有错误
第一句:把you know 删掉，读起来太别扭，一看就知道不是纯种的英语，然后把之后的那个so 去掉， 将其之前的句号变成逗号。整个句子就是As Shanghai hosts the 2010 World Expo, I went to Shanghai with my former classmates ring the summer holidays.
第三行有语法错误：应该是we arrived,lived
The school is very large and there are many imposing [im'pəuziŋ] buildings.不知道你在讲什么。
In the wonderful place,there were several black swans,which surprised us a lot.把the 换成this
What attracted me was a robert.你是想说机器人吗？应该是robot
The visit was not a bit meaningful,but made me not a little tired.那个a bit 和not a little tired 用在这里很怪（我只语法）
There are many delicious western food in Shanghai.We tried starbucks。这句话语有逻辑问题。你是在说只有上海有starbucks 吗？而且starbucks 是麦咖啡的啊，可以说说其他西方的食物。要不然酒吧之前那句here are many delicious western food in Shanghai改了。
It’s a little expensive。在little之前加个 bit
❻ 帮忙看一下英语作文有没有语法错误
My favoritething is a（去掉a) bike. It is made of(of 改为from) steel, rubber and plastic and it is made inGuangdong. It`s been with me seen(since) I was six. My mom gave it to me as a birthdaygift. It is special because I learned how to ride a bike on it.(去掉on it) And I used toride the bike in the garden on weekends when I was little(young). It is seem as the(as the 改为to be the)memory of my childhood.
❼ 英语作文，帮我看看有没有什么语法错误
1 warm的比较级是warmer.
2 We will waiting是错误的用法，应该用动词原形wait.
3 最后一内段，All student is agree 是错误的用法，应该用复数形式容All students are agreed.
4 最后一个单词用复数形式memories.
❽ 帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
i
had
a
unforgettable
experience
i
heard
some
one
walking
i
cried,
because
i
was
so
fearful.
when
i
can't
hear
the
walking
sound.....
i
stop
crying
and
started
to
watch
tv......
i
was
more
frightened
than
before....
my
parents
didn't
back
home
until
11pm
不知道你现在上几年级，先帮你这么改一下吧回，你看看答合理吗
❾ 英语作文，能不能帮忙看看有没有语法错误
第二段when引导的时间状语从句是一个完整的句子，根据语境，谓语动词应用一般现在时回，即stands。后面unless引导的从答句中用or表“或者”，后面的动词要用三单，即lets。第二段最后一句中homework为不可数名词，不加s。最后一段中help用法错误。help只有两个用法:help sb do（帮助某人做某事，主动用法）和help+句子，因此可改成help you so that you can be a better student than before。
希望可以帮到你呦XD
❿ 帮忙看一篇英语作文有无语法错误并指出
供参考
I have a great dream . I (i) want to be an astronaut when I (i)
grow up . I (i) am fascinated with the (surprised at) universe (univers)
. It (it) is very beautiful (beautifui) and interesting (intretsting) .
I (i) like (liked) the universe (univers) very much. I (i) know something
about it. I (i) know there is a solar system(1) . I (i) admire (amired)
Yang Li Wei (yangliwei) and other astronauts. They (they) are very great
and cool . S0 (so) i will study hard. I (i) hope my dream will come
true. I believe (i belive) in myself(2) . I (i) can achieve my dream.
(1) solar system似乎不止一个
可以考虑用 some/many solar systems
(2) 可以用have confidence 来代替believe