一篇有语法的英语作文

① 以manners为主题，写一篇80词英语作文，以下短语可能会帮助你，最好不要有语法错误

② 写一篇英语作文、帮忙看下有语法错误吗。

in the study：in study

play computers :play on computer

i have you study more hard: i have studied much harder than before

pass into: get into

it is a different answer: it's not the case.

let me to be fresh : make me feel refreshed

be ready to learn: be ready for class

school and classroom become: school has become

they provide an opportunity : it offers me a golden opportunity

I still fell happy: I still feel happy.

语法抄错误太多了，改了一下，这袭样想进入重点高中，很难

补充：找我的改就不错了，初三就这个水平，再往好里改你们老师就该怀疑了，也要故意买个破绽懂吗

③ 谁能给我一篇关于写英语老师的英语作文！（80字左右）（不要有语法错误啊！！！！）

Ms. Gao isour English teacher .She is slim and beautiful with curly,long hair. She is in her early thirties. She is always full of energy and her lessons are always well-prepared . All of us like her lessons very much because we can gain much from her lessons. Besides, I admire that she is always friendly and kind so she can make friends easily with us outside the classroom. When we have any difficulties, we all like asking her for help.Ms.Gao is truly a wise teacher. 高老师我们得英语老师，她身材苗条、漂亮、卷花头长发。她30出头。她总是精力充沛，她的课总是精心准备。我们都喜欢上她的课因为我们可以从她的课收获很多。此外，我钦佩她总是很友善，因此她总能轻松地在课下和我们交朋友。当我们遇到困难总喜欢象她求教。高老师的确是相当聪明的老师。

自己的习作，看对你是否有帮助哟，祝你学习进步，更上一层楼！(*^__^*)

④ 这是一篇需要更改语法的英语作文=L= 英语大大快来帮我一把

1. 嗯fake commodities 是两个词……是排版问题吗？

2. *第一节可以直接变成一句话：...China today, that...
   

3. *the beginning of 可作 the emergence of, beginning我也说不出哪儿不对，但是意思稍微欠那么一点儿……

4. pharmaceutical (拼错了

5. 这句话的介词似乎有问题……理论上应该是There are lots of fake commodities in XXX instry。那你想表达“从这个行业到那个行业”，这是一个同位语。所以应该是There are lots of fake commodities in various/almost all instries, from pharmaceuticals to food（嗯这里好像instry也不用做重复，可以这样直接说东西）

6. buy这个动词强调动作，这句话也就变成了“很多人害怕他们会去买假货”。可以变成“have bought（买到了假货）”或者“will get（会买到假货）”

7. “In order to..."一句，我的理解是”为了放心，所以人们倾向于高价购买商品“？如果是这样的话，”make people assured“加上之后主语是另一个they在这样的上下文中有让”别人“放心的意思。可写作"In order to be assured, customers tend to..."

8. high price 是两个词？但是这个地方也不能用high price，不能和spend一起用。可以是to spend a good sum of money/ to buy goods of high price

9. "in my opinion..."句：首先复数一般不需要和the连用，而且这里也无需特指，所以可以是"A fake commodity is..."或是"Fake commodities are..."

10. 这句话的后半段意思是否是”假货是不良厂商为了牟利（的手段）“？一个是manufactures应作manufacturers。句子也有一些语法问题，如果我理解的句意没错的话……保留一下你原文的词句，这句话的翻译可作"In my opinion, unscrupulous manufacturers proce fake procts in order to generate maximum profits"。 这里 to reap benefits 不妥，这主要是褒义，或者隐喻的用法。

11. I think this must be? might be?可能是原文笔误

12. *中文中虽说”和什么有关“，英文中常直接写作”有什么引起/引发了什么“，但似乎并不怎么重要= =

13. *既然这里说了"Internationally"，不如上一节的开头也说"domestically"，也显得结构比较完整

14. "The reason"一句应作"The reason is thatChina has too many fake commodities"原文中缺少从剧中的动词，也一般不那么说

15. "In order to"一句，是否是指”为了中国的形象和人们的安全“？In order to是连词词组，后面必须跟着动词（所以in order to ensure是对的）。可作"In order to rebrand China's image/re-image China and to ensure..."。事实上，表达”为了某样东西“的时候可直接使用介词for，因此也可作"for the image of china and the safety of..."

16. "the safety of people",此处应该去掉原句中的介词，或者保留介词变成"...of the people in China"——因为介词表示限定，必须有特指。事实上，不如改成"...of Chinese citizens"，避免词语重复……（不知道你是什么标准的作文要求哈

17. "can not"应作"should not"，前者是“不可能（被虚假广告骗）”的意思

18. *secondly前面得分号那里其实可以断句？

19. "the supervision ability"应作"supervisory abilities"，或直接作"improve their supervision"

20. "circumstance be solved"处，circumstance所指的“情况”不是中文里有问题的“情况”，只是一种描述的“情况”。所以这里还是应该用"problem be solved"

21. 最后的"persecution"我不太确定你的想法……persecution”一般指政治上的迫害。如果表达“不再受假货的荼毒”这样的话可作“be free from the threats of fake commodities”(不再受假货的威胁)

注：标注星号的只是用词问题，其余的是语法问题。

嗯其实写完了之后想也许你只想让我帮你改完把成品给你就好了……但总之我还是把大概的理由罗列了一下，希望能对你有帮助

因为只要求改语法所以就只改了一些语法（可能没改全（应该不会改错（喂

希望你能加油哦！不知道你这篇文章是哪种考试用的文章，除了语法以外英语写作还有其他技巧上的也可以多注意一下

其实英语语法不算语言里面很难得，想想我们中文多微妙啊他们可死板了……我觉得多看看记记下一篇就不会有问题啦（何况网络翻译君自己的语法也……

另：顺手输入了fake commodity搜索，发现了 My view on fake commodities的例文，也许对你有帮助。

http://www.360abc.com/article/2135.html

⑤ 有关对英语语法认识的英语作文

My View on English Grammar Coures

  Languagu itself is one of the great inventions in human history,as great as the discovery of fire,the use of electricity,the invention of computer,etc.

    Thanks to language,we can talk,argue and sing ,and then a civilized,wonderful world birthed .However, i would prefer to see a beatiful sentence as a kind of art ,like the flaming sun rising in the morning ;the pure world covered by snow in winter , quiet and peaceful ; a curvaceous girl ,fascinatingly.

    Language is made up by sentences , words and some special symbols make up a sentence .  But if we put some words and some symbols together randomly ,that will not a sentence .So there must be some rules to organize these words ,that is grammar.

    A sentence or a article can not show its fascination without grammar . Grammar plays a role of the pillar in a sentence like the trunk of a tree. So we must realize the importance of learning English grammar lacking which any language is ephemeral and doomed .But many students do not pay enough attention to grammar , because they think grammar is useless and difficult ,they insist that the purpose of learning a foreign language is just to talk and chat and they don't want to be a writer ,so it is not necessary to spend lots of precious time on mastering a boring and nonsense thing .Maybe they are right in some ways .

    However , i hold a different opinion .I learn English not only just to talk or chat with people ,but also appreciate it ,i like enjoying beautifull and perfect things . Actually, that is two quite different attitudes : "If you start a job , just do it perfectly !" someone say , " we can't do everything well ,because our energy , our power is  limited ,so the most important things must come first !" the others disagree . Both are ok ,it is nonsense to argue who is right or who is wrong .

    In a word , if you want to touch the quintesence of English , you must learn grammar well ;if you have the courage to say to yourself / my heart will go on / just to try your best to learn grammer well , it is not a bad thing to you at least .

⑥ 以学习英语语法令我头疼为题写一篇英语作文

We study spoken English so as to make oral communications, so this order
of importance of oral English study should be followed: Fluency,
Accuracy, and Appropriateness. That is to say, we have to pay more
attention to practical communicating ability instead of only laying
emphasis on the grammatical correctness.Try to find some partners practicing oral English together and English
corner is a good place as where we may exchange English study
experience, widen our sight and improve interest in English.

望采纳谢谢 希望你取的好成绩

⑦ 我去了北京,写一篇英语作文,50个单词左右,带翻译,语法有错的

last sunday, my parents and I went to Beijing tour.The weather was particularly sunny,In the morning, we take a bus to the Badaling. Imposing Great Wall stretches for thousands of miles, and then boarded the go, feel the ancient wisdom and hard work.1:30 pm, we had lunch, and then went to the supermarket.In the evening, happily embark on return journey.I will also plan Guangxi Guilin, Xi'an and other places, enjoy the beauty of the country.

⑧ 写一篇关于介绍海伦凯乐人物经历的英语作文要高深一点最好是有点高中语法的120词左右

Helen Keller ( June 27, 1880 -1968 year in June 1st ) in nineteenth Century, blind and deaf American author, ecator, philanthropist, social activist. She to unremitting self-improvement indomitable perseverance, in Anne Sullivan under the help of the teacher, master English, law, German and other languages. Completed her a series of works, and is committed to the disabled benefit, set up charitable organizations, is the United States " time " as the United States of America ten hero ", was awarded the Presidential Medal of freedom " and other awards. Main works include " if you give me three days of light ", " my life ", " my teacher ".

海伦·凯勒（1880年6月27日-1968年6月1日)，19世纪美国盲聋女作家、教育家、慈善家、社会活动家。她以自强不息的顽强毅力，在安妮·莎莉文老师的帮助下，掌握了英、法、德等五国语言。完成了她的一系列著作，并致力于为残疾人造福，建立慈善机构，被美国《时代周刊》评为美国十大英雄偶像，荣获“总统自由勋章”等奖项。主要著作有《假如给我三天光明》、《我的生活》、《我的老师》等。

⑨ 求一篇没有语法错误的英语作文

miss
zhang
is
my
english
teacher.
she
is
very
beautiful
and
she
looks
like
a
fairy.
miss
zhang
treats
me
very
well,
so
she
is
my
good
friend.
my
english
is
not
well,
she
always
helped
me
and
told
me,"everything
will
be
fine!"
she
is
my
most
respectful
teacher,
because
she
not
only
teaches
me,
and
also
also
take
me
into
a
new
world.
我出国很久了，英语水平不错哦，我翻译得一定很好,
绝对回符合你的要求。答

⑩ 求写一篇英语作文 亲情与友情你觉得哪一个更重要 80字左右，初升高水平，不要有语法错误

Everyone has a lot of friends and he must have his own friendship as well. But usually only when you get into trouble, will you know what the true friendship is. The friend in need is the friend in deed. Only the real friends will help you when you are in trouble. If you establish your friendship when you are in trouble, make it go on forever.Please cherish everything that you have already possessed. Maybe you don't care about it now. But when you lose it, you will find that how important it is.