噢好多问题。很明显就是直接用中文翻译去英文的，基础不够好。
要修改的话，需要点时间。。
Ⅱ 英语作文改正（包括语法，单词使用不准确等等） 万分感谢！
Last winter holiday,I went to Harbin with my mother. It's very cold in winter.There is snow and ice everywhere and you are always in a white world.You must wear warm clothes.The most exciting thing is playing with snow.Skating is also very interesting there. I will' always remember Harbin,for the snow,the ice and all the beautiful things.I love Harbin.
Ⅲ 帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么问题吧~（单词拼写和语法）【书信】
亲爱的父母，
我很想你们（I miss you so much？）/我也很想你们（ I miss you too？），并且希望你们一内切顺利。今天我写信是要告容诉你们一些关于我在深圳这里的生活。
正如你所知道的,我很高兴再次参观深圳。自从我三年前第一次参观这儿，深圳又发生了巨大的变化。当提到深圳,人们永远不会忘记华强路。这是一个非常繁忙的商业区，当我有闲暇时间时，我经常访问这的IT数码商店，有时在周末的早上，我也会沿着这条路走走；除此之外，还有许多美丽的高楼大厦,当夜幕降临而街灯开始发光时，它们看起来非常壮观与华丽。
我期待着你门的来信。
致以最诚挚的问候。
真诚的（感觉这里用 Your loving son/daughter 会好一点，因为是给爸妈写信）
Kim
另注：spectacular and gorgeous 可以用 magnificent 或者 splendid替代 这两个词难度低一点。
Ⅳ 需要一篇 “每天保持好心情” 的英语作文 100至200单词左右 尽量以简单易懂的语法和单词写作
you known ,it is of important for us to keep a good mood in our dayly life.Therefore,how to keep a good mood has been heatly discussed around us recently
It is known to us all that having a good mood does good to all of us.On the one hand,it can not only do good to our work and study,but also improve our life quality.On the other hand,keep a good mood help a lot to both our mental and physical health.
and how can we students keep a good mood?Here are several ideas.Such as read intresting books ,have a lot of heipful hobbies,being kind and always share your fun with others more,and so on finally hope all the people have good mood every day .这是网上的一篇作文,我根据你的要求改了改,
Ⅳ 还有就是我的英语单词记得很好，但语法和英语作文一般，再次请教您
语法体现基础，高中的话建议买一本语法书，就是习题和3年真题的那种
作文是你表达能力，急的话背例句，想要长时间稳提的建议平时积累高级词汇，这个是作文闪光点之一，其次多用复合句，这个跟语法有很大关联的。
Ⅵ 用英语写一篇如何提高英语语法的作文，字数至少达到60个单词
It is known to all that English grammar is rather important .Here are several ways to improve our English grammar. Firstly, listen to the teacher carefully at class ,so that you can understand them better. Secondly, dong more practice is necessary ,because it can make you know how to use the English grammar . Last but not least ,correct your wrong answers and write the on your note-book, so that you can remmenber your mistakes and never make the mistakes. In a world ,working hard will be the best way to improve your English grammar!
Ⅶ 英语作文:怎样学好英语单词和语法
How to learn English well?（怎样学好英语）
English is one of the most important langnages in the world.（英语是世界上最重要的语言之一） It’s necessary to learn it well .（学好它是很有必要的）How do you study?（怎样来学呢？） Everyone learns English in different ways.（第个人学习英语都有不同的方法） The best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills. （提高英语的最好方法就是提高你的英语技能）They are listening , speaking , reading and writing. （它们是听，说，读，写）We should practice them every day. （我们应该都要练习它们）It’s very good for you if you are interested in Egnlish . （如果你对英语感兴趣的话，这对你有好处）You will find studying Egnlish is interesting and helpful.（这样做你会发现学习英语是一件有趣面又有所帮助的事） One more thing, remember“Practice makes perfect”！（记住，熟能生巧）
Ⅷ 关于酒驾的英语作文 100字左右 单词语法简单一些
The sake of safety
for the sake of safety of youself and for the happiness of your family never do drunk driving in your life！ driving is bound to generate severe consequence if we keep turning a blind eye to it. Firs and foremost, this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, passengers and pedestrians/goers, resulting in traffic accidents, injuries and even deaths. Besides, treating the injured and repairing broken cars mean a grievous waste of money, time and resources. Last but not least, this irresponsible driving will make the road a nightmare, and thus, it will causes serious losses of faith in governments and the society.
Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that drunken driving has been a grave problem with which we are confronted. Generally speaking, there are several reasons accounting for his phenomenon. Firstly, recent decades have witnessed the rapid development of people’s living standards. As a result, cars gained ever-increasing popularity and have found their way into our everyday life. Secondly, people participate in more activities or banquets than ever before, where they will drink liquor/strong wine. Then, they may get drunk but continue to drive.
In my opinion, it is necessary to ban on drinking while driving, and this will do good to not only other people but also the drinker himself. If we can keep on doing this, the road accidents will be decrease soon in the future.First, we must make posters and signs reminding people that it is wrong to drink and drive and it is also not healthy to drink at all.Second, People love money, we could fine drunk drivers much more money. Finally, we can promulgate the drunk driver’s name. People always care about their honor, so it will be a very useful way to stop them from drunk driving
Ⅸ 学英语作文or语法与词汇哪个重要
其实无所谓哪个重要，我觉得词汇是基础，就像一幢大楼的根基，而语法则是大楼的钢筋水泥，内通过容练习语法可以使自己对词汇的掌握更灵活，最后是作文，它是最终形成的大厦，是在根基的基础上，在刚劲水泥的填充下形成的。没有词汇的基础和语法的掌握，你就很难掌握学习写作，所以我觉得作文、语法、词汇它们三者是互相关联、融汇贯通的，一样重要!
Ⅹ 检查这篇英语作文。（语法，单词拼写，标点符号等错误）
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