Ⅰ 求英语高手来帮我看下，我写的有没有语法错误。
It is my pleasesure这句多余可省略a chance to talking with you，to 后talk用原形，table tennis so on，在so on前加and，my everyday is so full,I enjoy my life.这句很中文，建议不要用了，专everyone have ，have变has.what's the good habits ?what's the bad habits这句要不属把what’s变what are，要不去掉habits的s will be able to make ，be able to多余This my all the words,换成That's all what I want to say。
Ⅱ 哪位英语高手帮我看下有没有语法错误（急）
The world will never be the same once you (see) it through the eyes of Forrest Gump. Forrest Gump was born in a small town in Alabama in the USA. He only has an IQ of 75. His mother and his friend Jenny always encourage him to live as an ordinary person.
To (their) surprised, Forrest has (well developed body with simple mind). His dramatic life begins when he runs onto a football field to escape his class bullies. He becomes a football star in a university.
After his graation, he becomes a soldier, (and joins) the war in Vietnam. After the war, he meets many famous people.
The movie is over, but I know that it won’t be over in everybody’s heart.
A loving and friendly nce can also conquer the world.
不妥之处，已改，并用“（）”标出。
Ⅲ 这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
很抱歉，英语和汉语出入太大，改不了，只能重写，
l like a person who is named Vae
我喜欢的人——许嵩
The past, the first such serious like a will probably forever remains a stranger.
这辈子，第一次这样认真的喜欢一个也许会永远是陌生人的人。
perhaps, you will be of the feelings of contempt, an infidel.也许，你们会对我的这种感情嗤之以鼻，不屑一顾。
But,i really like Vae.
但是，我真的喜欢许嵩。
Becausehe is so fond of his song,and because he is more like his songs. i think it will continue, i believe!
因为他的歌而喜欢上他，又因为他，更加喜欢他的歌，我想这会持续很久，我相信！
No commercial positioning and packing, the team has announced plans and vae independence. they do is so simple
没有商品化的定位和包装，没有企宣团队的策划和炒作，Vae独立的做自己，就是这样简单。
Vae has said, a song. even a memory one day there was no man to hear of my song, i have one last fans, vae.
Vae曾说，一首歌一个回忆。即便某日没有人再听我写的歌，我还有最后一个歌迷，叫Vae。
But, i'd like to say, i would like him very long time, and perhaps future one day, i'll forget him, but at least, i don't want to give up. don't want to leave. vae - the only love you!
只是，我想说，我会喜欢他很久很久，也许将来的某一天，我会忘掉他，但是至少，我现在不想放弃，不想离开。
Ⅳ 看我写的英语句子有无语法错误
Since the (是特指，要有the）activity has been held （强调对现在的影响，可以）,not only do the students（改成”学生们“） do the cleanings (打扫卫生是“do the cleanings",算是固定用法内吧） actively, (那个throw rubbish的最好去容掉，因为do the cleanings已经涵盖了）but also greet teachers（“老师"用复数） and (改”as well as“为”and“） help them voluntarily.
Ⅳ 英语作文 130字 看看我写的有没有语法错误 能完善文章的加悬赏分
Having a good learning habit can obviously improve the learning effect, but the learning effect can also make the learning habit more suitable for yourself. Their interactions will ensure you to learn efficiently.
Making plans is a useful habit that can make your life run regularly and save times. Owing to the plans, you will be forced to finish the works on time, and have extra times to do some
extra-curricular activities, in order to understand the knowledge and concepts better.
During the learning period, I found a lot of problems that can make learning a difficult task to accomplish. Among the problems, I think being unable to focus ring classes is worst, and will cause me to waste a lot of time re-learning the lessons after classes are over. So, in order to kick this bad habit off, I should make a goal to ensure that I will focus ring classes, and to make learning more efficient.
改了。
Ⅵ 英语作文，帮我看看有没有什么语法错误
您好！
第一句话有点啰嗦，不应该这样讲，a student of our school，这有些过于中式英语了，回你可以直接说I'm the monior of .....class .
第二段答At first，用的不是很恰当，这不是步骤。可以用：To start with，或者 From the beginning。
最后一句话有语法错误，应该是Looking forward to you attendance. （期待您的出席）
中间还有一些大小写需要改进你自己看看
望采纳谢谢
Ⅶ 帮我看下英语作文有没有语法错误 不要在意单词拼写
你好！你的文章写得很不错，几乎没有很明显的语法失误。现在对个别表达稍作修改如下，修改处见【】：
I'm a Chinese student,and I'd like to offer my help 【for you to learn Madarine】.I hope you can keep your word teaching me English 【in return 作为回报】.
I think I can do this well,not only【 because】 I'm a Chinese,but also I'm very interested in
learning Mandarin.My favorate subject is Chinese,I think I can do you a favor.
To speak mandarin well ,I have some advice for you.First, speak Mandarin 【every day in the
morning and in the evening】.Second ,watch some Chinese films.This can【 be helpful for your Chinese learning 避免重复使用同样的短语或词汇】
For exchange ,I want you to talk with me online to correct my 【English 】pronunciation.I hope
you can introce 【the cultures of some countries】 to me.I think it can help me learn English
well.
I'm looking foeward to hearing from you soon.
祝你开心如意！
Ⅷ 我想用英语写日记或者作文，但是我怕语法用错老是不敢写怎么办
语法不是主要问题，简单了解就可以了，其实你现在最主要的是多去读一回些文章，分析一些答文章。你的问题简单地归结为语法问题，我看不妥，其实英语写作有很多技巧可循，有一定的模式。多去阅读分析才是实际的提高方法，熟读唐诗三百首,不会作诗也会吟，就是这个道理吧。另外你如果刚接触英文写作的话，建议你多去背诵一些好的文章，因为没有输入就没有输出。
祝：顺利！
Ⅸ 英语作文，帮我找找有没有语法错误
第一段两处小错：九月前的the 去掉，新图书馆要加the。
第二段第二句语法不对。
第三段第二句谓语动词不对，第三句语法不对。
Ⅹ 我用英语写的日记，有语法错误吗
make up 组成构成 弥补补考 化妆 编造 和好 和解
一个句子里不能同时出现两个谓语动词 所以 using相当于非谓语动词