下面英语有语法错误么

A. 下面这段英语有哪些语法错误，或表达的比较牵强的地方呢哪些地方可以说的更漂亮些

貌似比较中式英语
XiaoZhang,are you free this weekend ? Would you like to go along with me to attend an insurance trade fair in HangZhou .Are you convenient for a 2-day business trip ? Its topic is closely related to our business .Since my secretary XiaoLin is sick ,he in not able to go with me. Considering that you have some related experience in this area, I think you are the best choice to take the place of XiaoLin. I will provide you with some infomation about the important companies that will participate in the fair. At last ,would you be so kind as to book 2 tickets for me from Shanghai to Hangzhou at 9.30 on Saturday. Thank you very much.
注意细节，改了些小词。
希望能帮到你O(∩_∩)O

B. 下面的英语有语法错误么

First of all, Shanghai has recently begun to enter the rainy season, so it often rains, so I suggest you should prepare an umbrella in advance to prevent you from being caught by the rain after you get off the plane。来
无太大错误自
[搭配错误] 搭配 prepare umbrella 无此用法，疑似中式英语。
[推荐表达] so : therefore/thus/consequently/accordingly/as a result/for that reason/hence/that’s why

C. 英语高手进！！！！！！！！！！（看一下下面的对话里有没有语法错误，仔细点哦）

I didn’t feeling well-->I don’t feel well
When do you sleep yesterday?-->When did you sleep yesterday?
I have to study for my the final exam-->I have to study for my final exam
you alway look so healthy-->you always look so healthy
I love every kinds of exercise-->I love every kind of exercise
When are you usually go to sleep?-->When do you usually go to sleep?
I’am really appreciate that-->I really appreciate that.

D. 下面这段英文如何翻译有没有语法错误

我的大学生活即将结束，（college life 应该是campus life)
我下一阶段的生活将是投入社会活动
next period of my life is to involve in social activities.
当我在四年的大学生活中，我常常提醒自己提高自己的能力，努力提高自己
During my four years campus life, I always reminded myself of improving the abilities, kept going on, kept making progress
我全力投入大学的各种活动。

课外，我读许多专业和辅修的书籍。
I read many academic books about my major subject and optional subject outside class.
我在日常生活中很简朴
I keep simplicity in daily life
我热爱体育，热爱生活，对于未来充满形象
I love sports , I love my life, I am certainly confidence with my future.
我相信，能力才是最重要的，
I believe, It is the ability that most matters.
是的我能行。
Yes , I can do it.

E. 下面的英语有语法错误吗

that/this is my plan for the vacation这样表达即可。It is my plan for the vacation，这样表达才正确，以上是常用的表达方式

F. 下面两段英语有语法错误么 最后一句that是可加可不加么

On the other hand，some students play games，chat with friends ，see the pictures or watch films on the Internet the whole day. They are not interested in their subjects. It’s very dangerous for them!

The Internet’s advantages and disadvantages are shown clearly to us. I think（that） we should make good use of it and not inlge in it.

在非正式场合下，that在引导宾语从句时，可以省略。内你上述句子即为这种情容况。

G. 下面英语有语法错误么

i大写。后半句语义有问题。纸质书需要搬运，需要找地方（改成被动）

H. 英语中，下面一并列句有没有语法错误

ok

I. 下面这篇英语作文有语法错误么 是什么等级的 如果30满分能给几分

如果评分标准是中国英语考试的标准，你写的挺好的。
但如果我作为一个托福党的角度看，，浓浓的中式英语的味道。
嗯~ o(*￣▽￣*)o总之还不错啦

J. 英语中，下面一句话有没有语法错误

有。应该删去is