Ⅰ 请帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误 谢谢
that let me fall in love with travelling 改成 that made me fall in love with travelling
I can not only enjoy visiting many wonderful scenery 改成 I can not only enjoy visiting many wonderful sceneries.
Also I make so many new friends ring the journey. 改成 Also I can make so many new friends ring the journey. 这样时态上才较为统一。
However, travelling is wonderful, but the end of a journey always makes me sad. 改为 Travelling is wonderful, but the end of a journey always makes me sad. 即去掉However，因为它与but意思重复。
Every time when I say goodbye to the friends who travel with me, 改为 Every time when I say goodbye to the friends who travelled/have travelled with me, 时态不正确
I can’t stop to cry 改为 I can’t stop crying 意思是”禁不住落泪“
because we have so many good time together and I don’t want to be apart. 改为 because we have had so many good time together and we don’t want to be apart. 时态问题和人称问题。
travel around the world is my dream 改为 travelling around the world is my dream 主语从句
Ⅱ 谁帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语法错误
有一点点小错误啦~~修改了下~~
记得要注意大小写吖！！
just then,a huge figure was moving silently towards the captain’s house. captain king was very afraid.he thought,was that a gork? he peeked outside.it was really a gork. the gork seemed notice him. soon the gork started to damage his house. suddenly captain king ran into his car and drove it off. following the gork, he entered a tunnel. the gork was very angry that it was too large to cross the tunnel. soont he soldiers arrived . the gork had to fly away. captain king was safe again.
Ⅲ 英语作文，帮我看看有没有什么语法错误
您好！
第一句话有点啰嗦，不应该这样讲，a student of our school，这有些过于中式英语了，回你可以直接说I'm the monior of .....class .
第二段答At first，用的不是很恰当，这不是步骤。可以用：To start with，或者 From the beginning。
最后一句话有语法错误，应该是Looking forward to you attendance. （期待您的出席）
中间还有一些大小写需要改进你自己看看
望采纳谢谢
Ⅳ 帮我看看这篇英语文章有没有什么语法错误
我能说错误真心不是一般的多吗- -！
i am 19 years old就行了，不要加上this year，不然就变成中文式英语了版，i love reading and surfing the internet，love doing sth或者love to do sth，另外and的前后要权一致，要么都是名词，要么都是动词，i am a outgoing person who like making friends，我是一个外向喜欢交朋友的人，少了连接词，take an active part in sth积极参与某事，你把一大堆的名词强制翻译（用的难道是翻译软件？）应该翻译成I will take an active part in various things to enrich my life,后面这句也是强制拼凑的，I will also do more exercise to make myself more heath and mature
Ⅳ 大家帮我看看我写的这篇英语短文有没有文法错误，急！在线等谢谢！
As is known to many students in mainland, 小写the University of Hong Kong is a palace of knowledge with sophisticated equipment and academic freedom学术自由. Apart from it, the international atmosphere of study and abundant opportunities also hold great appeal to me. As far as I am concerned, studying in the University of Hong Kong can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizon去掉s, so I am eager to study in the University of Hong Kong.
With a passion for engineering, I chose BENG as my first choice. I have a good ability of innovation and learning so I think it will be a suitable curriculum（curricular是形容词） for me. What is more, with the rapid development of science and technology, more and more people who major in these subjects are needed. We can not ignore the fact that China is not mature enough in some areas of technology compared with some developed countries, so I consider it to be a proper choice for me. In addition, I took BSC(AC) and BSC as my second and third choice.
As for me, I am good at study and always get good grades in the exams. With an optimistic attitude, I can (could改成can) overcome difficulties positively. I wish I could make(改掉do )some achievements in engineering field through my perseverance and efforts. Besides, I am keen to make a contribution to the society by（加个by好点)using my knowledge过去分词作定语 studied in the university in the future.
Ⅵ 谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
I like play ingand playing computer games
My report ends
Ⅶ 谁英语好的帮我看一下这篇短文有没有什么语法错误
The Spring Festival, Chinese New Year,is the most important festivalfor all of us. All family members get together on New Year'Eve to have a big meal.At the same time, everyone celebrates to each other.At about 12 o'clock,some parents and children light crackers.The whole sky is lighted brightly. We may watch the fireworks excitedly.How busy it is!
On the first early moring of one year, many senior citizen get up early and they stick the reversed Fu or hang some couplets on the front door. Some house's windows are sticked on red paper cutlings.The Chinese New Year lasts fifteen days. So ring the fifteen days, we always visit our relatives from door to door. At that time, children are the happiest because they can get many red packets form their parents,grandparents, uncles, aunts and so on. The last day of the Chinese New Year is another festival. It names the Lantern Festival. So the Chinese New Year comes to the end.
Ⅷ 这篇受伤的经历（英语作文）大家能帮我看看有哪一些语法错误以及改进建议多谢！
写的不错，书写方面需要提高
Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom,my monitor told us that our class teacher,Mr Sun,had passed away in a traffic accident.It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Monday morning.I couldn't accept the fact until the headmaster came to tell us the truth.
Mr Sun was a middle-aged teacher.He was full of sense of humour.We all liked him very much because of his excellent teaching.His lessons were usually very lively and interesting.We all liked to attend his class.He was an experienced teacher.
Ⅸ 麻烦帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误。
One day, Lucy’s mother asked Lucy to go shopping and gave her a shopping list. Lucy bought all the things on the list. When it was time to pay for them, she found she had left her money at home. So she went back home quickly and took her purse from the chair. She got the money to pay for the things. Then she said goodbye to the shop-keeper and took the things home.
只改了几个标点，要分清句子和句子的关系，谁和谁是一句专。其他都很属好
Ⅹ 大家帮我看看这句英文是不是有语法错误，帮忙改一下~
很地道的句子，就是有点长，没有问题也不别扭。
The quality of her performance and composition left me with the impression that she was a young woman blessed with a remarkable talent for music with unlimited potential in composition which, If trained properly, will take her very far indeed.
主要结构是
The quality left me with the impression 从句同位语主要意思是she has a remarkable talent