Ⅰ 英语作文检查语法错误（回答后再加分）
An important lesson
I learned an important lesson in a school trip when I was in grade six. Our school always held trips at the end of each semester. All the students waited with excitement for that day. We filled up our bag with snacks the day before the trip, then I went to a beautiful park with all my classmate by school bus.
We followed the teachers to walk around the park first, and the history of the park were introced. Later on, the teachers divided us into a few groups, so we can see more details with smaller groups. However, we got some different opinions about going in which directions. Then my best friend and I decided to visit on our own. There were a lot of trees that are over a hundred years, and the lake looked green with the reflection of the trees. Some people were rowing boats in the center of the lake. We also rent a boat for half an hour; it was so romantic. After that, we wanted to have some new fun. We saw an old man, who had many white pigeons stood in the trees. My friend loved pigeons, so I asked the old man if we can feed the birds. He agreed. We put the corns on the ground and all the pigeons flied around us; they were as beautiful as snow. We had a great time to play with them. The sky was getting dark, and we remembered it was time to go back to the school bus. But we forgot where the entrance of the park was. We walked around and around, there was no one here except us. I almost started to cry. Suddenly, I heard someone calling my name. That was my teacher. I know that the school bus had waited for us over two hours - only two of us were missing. All the teachers were very worried.
The teacher ordered us to write a paragraph on realizing our mistakes. I was so regretful; I learned that I should always listen to the teachers and stay in the group, or it will be very dangerous. I will never do that again.
改完了。表示楼主思路很通畅，但是要注意断句。句号用的太多了，其实有些地方可以改为逗号的说。(^_^)
Ⅱ 有没有检查英语作文语法的软件
把文章复制到word里面，出现标注有红线或绿线的地方就是有问题的地方。
Ⅲ 自己写英语作文怎么才能检查语法上的错误
虽然WORD是一个办法来,但考试时源能用word吗?建议你多做改错题,能找出别人的错误也当然可以发现自己的不足.不要一个词一个词地检查,要整句地观察,分析句子结构,从而找出错误.最基本的是巩固语法知识,多用,熟悉了下意识也会写对.
Ⅳ 英语作文，检查是否有语法错误
This essay is crap. Anyway, I correct it to look better.
The progress of science has made great changes to people's lives. Almost everyone has his own private car. In the street, everywhere is a busy scene. There are a lot of people and vehicles. However, people never stop to interact. Nowaday, we seldom home-cook, we often eat in a restaurant. In the evening, the home is very quiet, very few family will have the whole family members together. The street, brightly lit, is forever fill with noise. Whatever things you need, you can go to the store to buy. As such, family meeting becomes less. People just call, chat on the Internet. Everyone's mind is only thinking of money. The former happy life has disappeared. Everyone needs to slow down and enjoy life.
Ⅳ 帮我检查一下我写的英语作文，检查一下语法、词组
Today is Sunday.It was Lily's birthday.She wore beautiful today.My friends and I bought her many presents,like chocolate,cards,toys,
comic books and so on.We played happily.Some sang and some dance.At last,we sang a birthday song,then had a cake.Lily looked happily,she said thanks to us,we all laughed.And we had a good time today.
Ⅵ 写英语作文怎么检测自己语法呢
I will very appreciate that you may give some help to me (for my study) in the later days.
Please allow me to introce myself here. 这句我觉得可以删掉，要么放在 第一段第一句后面。
likes to read a book -->Something like reading，taking a walk and so on.
although she is a woman, but full of wit,-->although引导的从句不能与but, however连用，但可与yet, still连用. 这个句子可以改成： even though she is a woman , but she is ful of wit..
Though I am quiet, but like to like-minded friends, learn together... 这个句子。。。。。。
I hope that they will be able to study abroad --> they ??
个人意见，仅供参考，不能保证百分百正确哦~
Ⅶ 英语作文，语法检查
很多错误。。。。。把你要表达意思写出来，我给你写。
Ⅷ 检查英语作文语法问题
I'm a Chinese high school student, graating from high school in June 2011.
After graation,I choose to go abroad to continue my study life ，The reason for that choice, in my opinion, is that good ecation will affect one's whole life . To receive the best ecation , therefore, I made the most critical decision in my life to go for my further ecation in Canada
First I think that a foreign university which attaches great importance to the ecation ability, is very useful for us to seek a job. The school not only offers ecation, but also provides me with a platform for free development. So i can put what i learn into practice ，and not just study textbook knowledge, I trust that with an analytical mind and the everlasting interest to find an answer will help me to complete in my study. In the process of studies，students can discuss and cooperate with each other to research the problem, the way I like very much.Second Studying abroad means to face a new environment, new friends, and a new life, which is probably not a bad thing because I can understand a lot of things I don't know， For example I can meet friends from different countries and experience different cultures. I think it must be my life precious wealth.
For the study in foreign countries ,I hope I can finish the undergraate course school work smoothly. In this period, I will participate in different kind school activities including the Student union. In addition I want to study business in the university .这句没看懂尼玛高端 = = because first I guess Modern social economic development soon ,Have a lot of enterprise development up, The enterprises needs a lot of commercial talents. second I'm very interested in finance。 I often focus on some financial information .
If possible I hope to finish master in Canada, I am sure after that I will come back to china and do something for my motherland,I'll work in a Chinese enterprise or found a company of own。
天哪楼主这错误是有多多= = 乱用标点和大写不说了 句子语法结构都没弄清楚。啰嗦中文式== 改到了看不懂的那一句！.
Ⅸ 写了一篇英语作文，求检查修改语法错误，谢谢！
When I fail后面用的都是一般现在时，这里最好也用表示状态，不表过去
Ⅹ 帮我检查一下英语作文，语法错误什么的 十万感激
xin hua senior school,has a history more than 100 years, with 48 classrooms and about 300 wonderful teachers, where near the mountain and with a river across it.
第一句复很别扭的，你制没必要为了弄长难句而写这种句子。可以这样：Xinhua Senior School- an excellent school with history of more than 100 years- is armed with 48 classrooms and 300 wonderful teachers. It is near a mountain with a river across it.
spend more time in doing sth with more practice so that they are able to know