⑴ 英语作文 语法错误 考研
with the passage of time 应该是没有这样的用法的，可能有但是不符合英国人对语言的用法，后面回那句话你用了答两个谓语： revolves,has aroused,你前面你可以用后置定语或者定语从句表示如revolving,walk of life用way of life会更好，人生各路一般用way,可以把selling去掉，而且用with一般是伴随状语，这里用定语从句更好，或者直接插入boasting,realize又成为了这个句子的第二个谓语，你可以用and把句子隔开。
这篇文章主要就是句子中出现多个谓语，以及谋些词组的固定搭配不熟悉，建议多记一些固定的词组，这个作文大概可以打十二分左右吧
⑵ 为什么英语作文那么差，经常语法错误
1.句子成分残缺不全
We always working till late at night before taking exams。(误)
We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正)
We should read books may be useful to us. (误)
We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)
2.句子成分多余
This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)
One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)
The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)
3.主谓不一致
Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)
Some think that reading should be selective. (正)
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My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)
My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)
4.动词时态、语态的误用
I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)
I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)
⑶ 帮忙看一下我写的这篇英语作文有什么重大语法错误，帮忙改一下，提一些写作建议。万分感激。（四级作文）
写的不错，ingoring 拼写错误，其他没问题
What the drawing vividly depicts is that people play computer in modern life when working,playing,staying at home or sleeping.The picture illustrates that the time of people play computer increasingly than before.Playing computer account for more time than before.
This no deny that computer have important impact in modern life.It can broading our horizon,working efficultly communicating conveniencly.Whereas,this is a largely harm to our eyes because play computer long time.We concentrate on computer,ingoring other interesting incidents.
⑷ 英语 英语作文 语法错误
你好，
首先，第一句没有什么问题，只是我不明白你那句“arouse the attention from all walks of life”是什么意思。“Prevention of the mountain”可改成“impediment of the mountain”，不内过意容思差不太多，我只是觉得prevention听起来有点怪。“Excellent scenery”可改成“magnificent scenery”。下一句“detect”改成“notice”吧，有点奇怪。“Has conquer”应该改成“has conquered”。最后一句我也没看能解释一下吗。
第二段第一句把“but”改成“yet”比较好吧。“Dazzing”是啥，你是想说“dazing”还是“dazzling”？“MaYun is greatly robust”把is改成“was”。剩下的就没啥问题了！我给你推荐一个查英语语法的网站，还蛮好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下，可能有些我疏漏的点。
如果有帮助到你请采纳一下，谢谢！
⑸ 英语作文中常出现的语法错误有哪些
时态 三人称单数的变化 单词过去式，过去分词的变化 固定句型的用法（如：打电回话的固定模式……） 固定词组（答如：there be) 动名词作主语谓语动词用单数等的语法 还有like后面接动词的ing形式，would like+动原这些易混淆的地方……
⑹ 求帮忙分析这篇英语作文中的语法错误~
Amy Chua ,an America-bornChinese
was a professor of Yale who wrote Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother and the book came out in 2010.
The content of the book is about how the writer teaches his two daughter in Chinese traditional ways.
This book has an effect on the readers by raising the question of what kind of ecation is better for children, the American one or Chinese one ?
The Chinese version was sold in 2011, which made a lot of Unexpected reaction from Chinese mothers who disagreed with the writer
the lastest news is that Amy’ The eldest daughter has been admitted to Harvard and Yale
⑺ 这个英语作文有那些语法错误容易被扣分
这个字写得丑就不说了, 改作文是很快的, 字都丑的话再好的文笔都不会高分回. 其次
1,第二行two main reasons应用复数.
2,according for是错答的, according to才是正确的,这是固定搭配.
3,deny后面最好加个that
4,fake goods 当然是不好的啦,啰嗦, 直接改成: these goods are unsafe
5,needlessly to say, 副词修饰动词
6,suggetions on
7,第二句完全不懂,意义不明.不过你既然最后一段写建议,就不应这么多废话.首先应该it is without saying that,does是助动词不改的话这句话就没有谓语了. 第二,bettle是什么,你想写battle吧, 就算是battle也不够好, 如果你想表达为打压,打击应该用crackdown. the government should crackdown,你一介市民能做什么. doubt拼错了,请注意正确书写
8,about 改成against比较通顺
⑻ 看一下这篇英语作文有那些语法错误容易被扣分
我参加过高考阅卷，按高考标准这篇作文得分在平均分以下。
主要需改进之处：回1）书写答和卷面都有改善空间，比如涂改越少越好，字越漂亮越好，字母占格符合英语习惯等。2）常识：逗号后边不大写。3）论述要有理有据表述逻辑清楚。你开头说有两个原因，可后面并不是围绕两个原因论述，跑题了。4）明显语法错、错别字要减少：two reason(s) ,interestion, needing, (a)better job(s) 5)消灭汉语式英语：you feel society needing; I think shoud choose
看得出你已经很努力了，再把模版背熟一些，再把字练好一些，结果会不一样！
⑼ 这篇英语作文有什么语法错误
句子开头是不是没复制全？
第一个：训练营是training camp，你是写多了个n吧。而且这句后面的从句如回果是要表达为了跟答人比赛所以邀请人的话我觉得用so that we can比较好，比赛划船可以用have a boat racing。
第二个：时间和日期在英文里是分开的，反正我是没见过时间+of+月日这种结构：其次日期的表达是写先写月份后写序数词的日期，表示某月的第几天。
改成at 7：00 a.m，april 5th.
⑽ 我写的英语作文有哪些语法错误，请指点一下。
本篇文章重复用词太多，造成这种现象主要原因就是条理不清晰。注意指示代词的使用，没必要来回重复