㈠ 帮忙看一篇英语作文，有没有语法错误
第一句就有点错误，什么叫to ask more than the coffee and dounts ？然后问题还有很多。用词有很多不太准确的地方或用的版不好的地方（权不标准或不书面），写文章不能只用get,can,do这些词的，首先这些太口语，其次频率使用的太高了（不是说不能用，而是尽量少用）。关联词也没有，说句实话，我有点看不懂这篇文章，你是想讲种族歧视吧？
上述都是建议，说得有些直，希望不要生气^_^
如果能给我中文，我可以帮你写写看
㈡ 怎么判断英文句子的对错.不是说内容的对错，而是句子
那就需要自己熟练的掌握语法与各种固定结构了，这个是日积月累的过程，望采纳
㈢ 一篇英语作文（请帮我检查一下有无语法错误）
How do we keep healthy?It is an important question.as more and more people had died from different kinds of diseases,we all wants to have a healthier body.But what could we do to stay healthy?Fristly,we could exercise more as a lazy man is often a weak man.Secondly,we need to have a balanced and healthy diet.As food containing lots of protein,calcium,vitamins and fibre,we should eat more of these as our body needs them the most.Thirdly,we should have enogh sleeping hours.Fourthly,we need to keep happy and bright.Last but not least,we mustn't smoke or drink as it is not good for our health.Also,we should stop our parents from drinking and smoking too as it is a way of showing our love to them.
㈣ 哪位高手我检查一下英语作文有无语法错误。急！！！在线检查！！
1.Today is my birthday. I invited my friends and classmates. We _had_ fun together. Time flew. _We_ _have_ all _gone_ home_, but_ I really enjoyed this day.
2.I went to Qinghai _this summer_. _There_ is a _stylish_ yellow _rod_ _and_ large tracts of grassland. There is _the_ blue sky. We went _horse_ riding_, and_ played with the sheep. I enjoyed the trip _very much._
严肃说，rape字勿乱用，这字是强奸的意思。要版说一支杆，权用rod。
㈤ 英语 英语作文 语法错误
你好，
首先，第一句没有什么问题，只是我不明白你那句“arouse the attention from all walks of life”是什么意思。“Prevention of the mountain”可改成“impediment of the mountain”，不内过意容思差不太多，我只是觉得prevention听起来有点怪。“Excellent scenery”可改成“magnificent scenery”。下一句“detect”改成“notice”吧，有点奇怪。“Has conquer”应该改成“has conquered”。最后一句我也没看能解释一下吗。
第二段第一句把“but”改成“yet”比较好吧。“Dazzing”是啥，你是想说“dazing”还是“dazzling”？“MaYun is greatly robust”把is改成“was”。剩下的就没啥问题了！我给你推荐一个查英语语法的网站，还蛮好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下，可能有些我疏漏的点。
如果有帮助到你请采纳一下，谢谢！
㈥ 英语作文，帮我看看有没有什么语法错误
您好！
第一句话有点啰嗦，不应该这样讲，a student of our school，这有些过于中式英语了，回你可以直接说I'm the monior of .....class .
第二段答At first，用的不是很恰当，这不是步骤。可以用：To start with，或者 From the beginning。
最后一句话有语法错误，应该是Looking forward to you attendance. （期待您的出席）
中间还有一些大小写需要改进你自己看看
望采纳谢谢
㈦ 英语作文，检查是否有语法错误
This essay is crap. Anyway, I correct it to look better.
The progress of science has made great changes to people's lives. Almost everyone has his own private car. In the street, everywhere is a busy scene. There are a lot of people and vehicles. However, people never stop to interact. Nowaday, we seldom home-cook, we often eat in a restaurant. In the evening, the home is very quiet, very few family will have the whole family members together. The street, brightly lit, is forever fill with noise. Whatever things you need, you can go to the store to buy. As such, family meeting becomes less. People just call, chat on the Internet. Everyone's mind is only thinking of money. The former happy life has disappeared. Everyone needs to slow down and enjoy life.
㈧ 一篇英语作文，鉴定一下有没有语法错误。
a good teacher in my mind
i had a good teacher called miss lily（此处应该是姓，而不是名）.
she was a（空格） foreign language teacher at my junior high school,she was from america,but she could(全文都是过去式，此处也应该是过去式) speak chinese very fluently(副词) 。 miss lily was kind and fun, which was my first impression of miss lily. sometimes,she used computer to let us whach(let后加动词原形) english movie but didn't have（动词原形）chinese subtitle .
one day,i failed in exams and i felt so sad .miss lily ask me to her office and sang（sing的过去式是sang） a song for me, i can remeber the song called <hero>
i don't forget her,because never have a teacher care for me like her.
㈨ 英语作文 语法错误 考研
with the passage of time 应该是没有这样的用法的，可能有但是不符合英国人对语言的用法，后面回那句话你用了答两个谓语： revolves,has aroused,你前面你可以用后置定语或者定语从句表示如revolving,walk of life用way of life会更好，人生各路一般用way,可以把selling去掉，而且用with一般是伴随状语，这里用定语从句更好，或者直接插入boasting,realize又成为了这个句子的第二个谓语，你可以用and把句子隔开。
这篇文章主要就是句子中出现多个谓语，以及谋些词组的固定搭配不熟悉，建议多记一些固定的词组，这个作文大概可以打十二分左右吧
㈩ 帮忙看一篇英语作文有无语法错误并指出
供参考
I have a great dream . I (i) want to be an astronaut when I (i)
grow up . I (i) am fascinated with the (surprised at) universe (univers)
. It (it) is very beautiful (beautifui) and interesting (intretsting) .
I (i) like (liked) the universe (univers) very much. I (i) know something
about it. I (i) know there is a solar system(1) . I (i) admire (amired)
Yang Li Wei (yangliwei) and other astronauts. They (they) are very great
and cool . S0 (so) i will study hard. I (i) hope my dream will come
true. I believe (i belive) in myself(2) . I (i) can achieve my dream.
(1) solar system似乎不止一个
可以考虑用 some/many solar systems
(2) 可以用have confidence 来代替believe