1. 谁英语比较好 帮我改改有语法错误的句子 别用翻译工具 俺需要纯人工的。
朋友你确实有蛮多的语法错误阿，你这些翻译估计是网上自动翻的吧，呵呵版。我来帮你纠权正下吧，首先第一句的分析是个动词，改为analyse，第一句应该为analyse the characters of Thackeray novels in Victorian era background . 第二句是个短语，主语是女性形象，应为the Image of Women shaped in Thackeray novels ,第三句的悲情色彩应为the tragic，改为the tragic of Thackeray Novels，第四句the main performance of Pessimistic color.最后一句Pessimism就是悲观情绪的意思，应为the main reason of causing pessimism.
希望我的翻译能让你有所帮助。
2. 请帮我修改3个英文句子，看看有没有语法错误，谢谢
it is a cartoon which was proced by Disney in 2006.
---没问题
she is a woman who makes great effort searching for herself.(努力寻求自我，或证明自我）
---she is a woman who makes great effort to search for herself
it is not pure Chinese culture or pure American culture neither.
既不是。。也不是。。的句型是这样的么
---it is neither pure Chinese culture nor pure American culture.
Before we integrate different culture forms, we need to think about what kinds of culture forms are popular in society. We should hybrid different culture forms what are lots of people having great interested in these culture forms.
---Before integrating different culture forms, we need to think about what kinds of culture forms are popular in society. We should hybrid different culture forms which are interested by lots of people.
3. 这个英语句子有没有语法错误谢谢
错误第一处，for 去掉，因为pity没有不及物动词用法，
第二处 those后面加who ，版定语从句关系词权who不能省略 ，
第三处 是not 前面要加上助动词 do ，don't feel …
第四处 是 ashamed of ，be ashamed of 固定短语
最后 phase from the heart 也有问题，具体不知道你想表达什么
4. 指出这个英语句子的语法错误及修改
引导词重复，that和whether保留一个即可，由于后句出现or not，则保留whether删去that
正确句子：
It is a problem whether we should assist her or not.
whether的常见使用方法：
1.whether和if都可以表示“是否”，引导宾语从句
You may wonder whether/if it is true. 你可能想知道它是否是真的。
2.当引导的从句中出现or not时，通常用whether，而不用if
I'm wondering whether you will come to my party or not tomorrow. 我想知道你明天是否来参加我的聚会。
3.to+动词的结构（即动词不定式）前只能用whether
Have you decided whether to accept the offer yet?你决定好是否接受那个报价了吗？
4.介词prep.后只能用whether
We're discussing the problem of whether to accept the offer.我们正在讨论关于是否接受报价的问题。
5.当宾语从句提到句首表示强调时，只能用whether引导，不能用if [2]
Whether he will come I am not sure.他是不是来我拿不准。
6.只能用whether引导主语、表语或同位语从句，不可用if
It was a question whether the girl should get married. 这个女孩是否应该结婚曾是个问题。
The question is whether they will support the plan. 问题是他们是否会支持这个计划。
The question,whether we need it,has not yet been considered. 我们是否需要它这个问题还没有被考虑到。
5. 请检查句子并改正语法错误英文
有问题 he will play
in future
6. 求哪位英语大神帮忙修改下我的英语演讲稿。我稿子里有很多语法错误低级句式还有好几个句子不会翻译
My dream
Hello, ladies and gentlemen! It’ my honorto speak to you here. Today, I’d like to talk about my dream.
Do you have a dream? If you ask me, myanswer is “Yes!”
I have a lot of dream. When I was a littlegirl, I wanted to be a princess who dresses up with beautiful dresses every day.When I was in the primary school, I liked painting. So I wanted to be apainter.
But today in here, I want to talk about thedream that I had in the middle school. When I was in the middle school, Iwanted to pass the artist exam and enter a good high school.
When I was a 8th grade student,I decided to major in art.
Obviously, that was a bold choice and Isuffered from negative words from other people. They thought it was bullshitbecause no one would test for art ring the senior entrance exam.
But that was my choice and I had to beresponsible for my choice. I didn’t know how other people viewed me because Ididn’t care that. Achieving my dream was my only concern at that time.
On the summer vacation of Grade 8, Istarted to learn painting. But in the second term of my 9th grade year,I could not learn it anymore. Why? It was because my mother didn’t allow me totouch the pencil or draw a picture. In fact, my grade was not that good enough.So my mother was angry at me and didn’t allow me to draw.
However, I couldn’t kill my passion towardsmy dream. The sprout of my dream had already germinated in my heart.
Then, I secretly drew and painted behind mymother’s back. At that time, the senior entrance exam came closer. I only hadtwo months left. Usually, I took my canvas with me all the time. Afterfinishing lunch, I didn’t take the nap and went to the art classroom forpractice from 1 pm to 2:30 pm.
At the noon of the second day, I took mydrawing to the dining room. My art teacher waited for me in that room andtaught me how to draw. I was waiting for her to come for one minute, twominutes, five minutes, ten minutes, twenty minutes, thirty minutes …. And shenever came. I didn’t know whether she will come or not, but I only knew thatwaiting for her was my only way to progress. During that period of time, I wasconfused. I threw the pencil, painted a picture, and tore that picture. I wasconfused. I was scared. I was in pain! But I never thought of giving up becauseit was my dream.
Thus, I continued the same process fordays. Finally, my artistic talent was revealed to the public because I passedthe artist exam with a high score and was able to enter one of the top highschool as a specialty student.
This was my dream that came true. Thank you for listening!
7. 请帮我把个别句子译成英文，并帮我改一下语法错误，谢谢大家！^_^
我帮你改了一下专,你看行属不行
Dear Mr./Mrs. ***,
My name is Cathy. I am twelve years old. Now,I am studying in Class Two,Grade Six. I come from Beijing,the capital city of China. I live in Peace Street in Chaoyang District, Beijing. I have many interests including swimming,reading etc. That's me.
Yours
Cathy
8. 英语句子错误，语法不规范，求修改
我刚搜了来一下，你写的这句之所以总源被认为有错是因为原文是个省略句，因为它是两个并列分句里的后一个分句，所以省略了好几个成分：
if it were a girl, it was to inherit the money unconditionally; but if a boy, only on the stipulation that in his minority he should never have ...
原文其实说完整了是：...if it were a boy, it was to inherit the money only on the stipulation that...
你把according to his father's will 加到这样一句上，就不会显示有错了。
9. 改正下列英语句子中的语法错误
1. 这样写的话，that 引导的是 the fact 的同位语从句，构不成句子，应该把它变成表语从句，改为 The fact is that ecation is the key to everyone’s success
2. this policy cannot be made e to its damage to human's health 和 more factors have to be taken into consideration 是并列句内，中间缺少并列连容词，应该改为 In general, this policy cannot be made e to its damage to human's health and more factors have to be taken into consideration.
3. According to the pie chart 是介词短语，不能充当主语，应该改为 The pie chart clearly highlights the detailed data in 1996.