① 请帮忙看一下我写的这段英语有没有语法错误。谢谢！！！
第一行：lived可以考虑改成have been living
第二行：had to describe可以改成have to describe
第三行：可以考回虑把the weather of 去掉，直接答改成 the winter is absolutely cold and the summer is always cool but too short here.
第四行：可以考虑不要I guess，因为句头已经有maybe了
倒数第二行的that Russian的that后面应该接一个完整的句子，不然也可以直接用the Russian and Japanese..
最后一行：in other cities
希望有用~
② 请帮我看一下这段英文有么有语法错误~(英语帝进~)
when you told me you would take me to travel to somewhere in china, I was so excited that I cannot sleep. Going travelling for holiday is always my dream, especially with you and my mum, if we can stay together and enjoy the beautiful view, I will feel real happy.
Because of the winter, the weather in Dalian is cold, I think our winter holiday will start by the end of January. when the students in Singapore are on holiday, ah, anyway if I can see you again, that's the best thing
please take care yourself and have a good mood everyday
供你参考,希望你满意,别忘加点分啊!
③ 谁能帮我看下这段英语有没有语法错误啊
Emergence of the modern era of proct design, nationalization, personalized, human-based and so on.没有谓语动词。 Everyday chairs, in addition to the functions should have, giving us the intuitive feeling mainly in the form.giving应该改为give。 It now appears that both our interior or public buildings, mostly single-seat design, no life, it seems to be home improvement and urban design in the accessories, not been given e attention.此句不通，结构混乱。恩both后面应改该跟。额，我想请问一下，你是不是直接用的在线翻译？这句话，恩，很大的错误。额，通篇看下来，句子的逻辑有很大的问题。
④ 帮忙看一下这两段英语有没有语法错误，谢谢！
the purpose of the pictureis to emphasize the importance of cooperation in our daily life 这句话就有了 to 前面要有个 is 作为谓语，不然第一句话整个看下回来没有一个谓语（尽管有两个动词）。答
So it is sensible for us to choose cooperationin the face of difficulties . 你的意思应该是说面对困难时XXX吧，但face 用得很生硬。后半段可以修改为 in face of difficulties.
Suppose we are work alone, our shortcomings may preventus from getting success. 前半句的suppose 应该改为supposing,同时去掉are 不然一个句子中三个动词争做谓语不恰当。
⑤ 看一下这段英语有没有语法错误
This is a queen who is a preety girl. she has many wonderful things,like the arm chair,the car and so on .one day ,"at "eight'o clock,she goes to the zooby her bike .she see many animals.she's favourite animal is rabbit .the rabbit is very lovely and smart.it like eatting cabbges.At nine'o clock.the queen goes bcke home .it's really a happy day.基本上小改了下，不知道楼主有没有学过过去式，学过的话，可能还版需要再改。权
⑥ (好的80分)看一下以下这段英语，有什么语法错误，请纠正，谢谢
We can find there are about 38 percent students failed the exam from this table. They need to change their __study habits_____(学习习惯回).
And as we know there are about 30% students can’答t sleep well at night. Some students maybe sleep just for a little time like me. It is harmful to them. If they didn’t sleep enough, they will not study well next day. So it is very important to develop a good study habit. We should keep in mind that your habits determine your future.
⑦ 请帮我看一下这段英文是否有语法错误，是否读的通，英语不好的拜托请不要来
这是对表格中的“就职或就劳”这个词的定义。
This is the definition about the word “employment” in the table.
第一栏中的”就职就劳“指的是从事被认为是职业的工作，它可以是被单位雇佣，个体经营或兼职的形式，或者是做个体经营开始前的准备工作或义务活动，原则上，1天的工作时间要多于4小时
原文：By “employment” in section1 we mean any kind of work contract in which workday, in principle, is stipulated to be more than 4 hours. It can be considered as an occupation in such forms as being employed by an employer, being self-employed or being employed on a short-term contract. To prepare for becoming self-employed or to carry out volunteer activities is also regarded as “employment” if the workday is more than 4 hours.
修改：The word “employment” in section1 refers to any kinds of work which can be considered as occupation, including being employed by a company, self-employment (or the preparation before self-employment), part-time job, volunteer activities and so on. But in principle, the working hours of a day should be more than four hours.
（如果是由于你加入了雇用保险或经营个体户事业而拒绝了职业介绍所介绍的工作，这种情况下，即使你的日工作时间未满4小时，也被认为是”就职或就劳“）。
原文：(If in the case that you failed to accept a referral from The Hello Work e to becoming the insured of unemployment insurance or becoming self-employed, you will be considered to be in the status of “employment” even though you work less than 4 hours.)
修改：If you reject the work introced by Hello Work e to that you have unemployment insurance or have self-employment, you are considered as “being employed” even if the working hours is less than 4 hours.
还有，如果你成为了公司的董事会成员，也被认为是”就职“。
原文：In addition, to be appointed as one of the company executive is considered as “employment” no matter whether the workday is less or more than 4hours.
修改：In addition, if you are appointed to be the members of the Board of a company, you are considered as “being employed” no matter whether the working hours is less or more than 4 fours.
另外，即使没有工资等报酬，也可以是“就职或就劳“。（符合下述第5项条件的无偿义务活动不属于”就职或就劳“。）
原文：If you satisfy the conditions of the “employment” defined above, you shall be recognized to be in the state of “employment” even though you obtain no remunerations like salary etc. from it. (Volunteer activity satisfying the following condition 5 is not considered as “employment”)
修改：Besides, if you satisfy the conditions of “employment” defined as above, you shall be considered as “in the state of employment” even if you receive no remunerations such as salary etc from it. (Volunteer activity which satisfying the fifth condition below is not considered as “employment”)
⑧ 帮我看一下这段英语短文有语法错误么谢谢
Yes,unlike south,where is(非限定性定语从句) so hot in summer,Mudanjiang has a cozy weather.Though so many people think it’s really cold in the winter, when it comes (though和but不能同时用，一句话内只能用一个，去掉哪一个都可以）,the snow is(用一般现在时就可以) very beautiful .What’s more,people can make a snowman with friends(朋友应用复数形式，根据语义可知） and family outside（outside为副词，表示在外面，前面不用介词） and will feel very happy, meanwhile,government will build（will后加动词原形） a snow castle that tourist and resident can come(can情态动词，后加动词原形） here and play together（“来这玩”是汉语式的英语，最好改成这样，用and连接两个并列短语),which is all made of ice(be made of由...制作) .And at night ,the colorful light which puts on the ice will all be lit up(用被动形式),you will feel living in fairy tales world.At last I want to say,Mudanjiang doesn’t(第三人称单数） have too much pressure to live in,and when you get here （here是副词，前面不用介词）,you will feel relaxful(relax是动词，此处应为形容词） and comfortable,you can don’t worry about the natural disasters here either （否定句中的 ”也“ 用either）.If you want to see some scenic spots,Jingpo Lack and so many beautiful scenes are (都用复数形式）all the good choice.
大概就改这样了，有一些可能也不太对，参考着来吧
⑨ 求大神帮忙看一下这段英语有没有语法错误！
考研英语作文吧 但从语法上来讲 存在小问题 不过感觉还是可以多看几个模板 多运用几种句型
As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, two young people are having a football match. One of the football player is preparing to shoot, but he thinks the goal keeper is so strong that it is impossible to shoot in. Yet the goal keeper is nervous,for he is afraid that he can’t defend the goal successively, feeling that he is too small and lack of ability to defend the goal. It is obvious that both of the football players are not confident enough in themselves.
在考研英语里应该还是很忌讳用逗号直接间隔句子的
不过考完研半年多了 技巧什么的也扔的差不多了……
⑩ 看一下这段英语有语法错误吗
could makes 应该是make
, to relax or to go to bed这里or后面的to去掉，避免重复