大学英语四级写作例题解析

❶ 大学英语四级写作如何得高分

单词、短语的运用

较难的单词替代简单的单词。在单词方面上，建议在考试前两三个月背好四级词汇，四级词汇不仅能让我们容易地看懂题目，也能帮助我们在写作时替换掉简单的单词。

多运用较高级的短语。多运用一些较高级的短语，能为文章增添色彩。另外，如果有些词语难以用单词表达，这时可以使用短语来代替。

句型的运用

多运用高级的句型。例如倒装、被动、现在进行时、现在完成时等等，也可以运用一些固定的句型。

增加一些名人语句、谚语等。平时可以多积累一些常见常用的名人语句、谚语，必定能获得加分的机会。

排版合理、文章有逻辑

有一个醒目的作文题目。一个醒目的作文题目能立即吸引老师的眼球，自然获得加分。

文章一般使用三段式。第一段是文章的开头，主要介绍文章的大概内容，一定要写好，这是老师改卷时比较看重的一段。可以设置悬念、提出疑问、使用反问为文章添加色彩。

第二段是文章的内容。把你的观点解析清楚，建议举一些反例来说明，通过对比加以分析。另外，句子前后连接要有逻辑性。

最后一段是总结。这一段也很重要，必须写好，主要是作文章的总结。还可以从个人角度，从社会角度，提出一些对未来的建议。

字体要漂亮

字体漂亮是很重要的。老师改卷的时候，第一眼看的是你的字体，如果你写得漂亮，你的文章在老师的第一印象中是很优秀的。如果你的文章的确写得很好，老师会大大加分;如果你的文章还需要努力，老师看在你字体这么漂亮的份上也不会扣你那么多分。

❷ 谁有英语四级作文题目及范文,麻烦发一下,越多越好.(最好有心得)

大学英语四级考试作文（附范文）
1．书信
例1：感谢信
（1） 给小何写信感谢他接待你在云南旅游
（2） 回忆美好的旅行经历
（3） 邀请小何来你的家乡做客
June 17th , 2006
Dear Xiao He,
Thank you ever so much for having invited me for the tour of Yunnan, your home province. I had a fantastic time with you and your family. Your great hospitality will be unforgettable throughout my life.
When I think of those gorgeous places of scenic beauty you showed me around, I couldn’t be more delighted. And the pineapple pie Grandma prepared for me is out of this world. I had never had so delicious food! Indeed, I am still missing your snug log-cabin, small and cozy, which was turned into my dream house in fairy land those nights.
Would you come to Harbin, my home town, some time this summer vacation? Harbin, a beautiful place frequently referred to as Oriental Paris, offers a picture of another kind. I can assure you another pleasant tour. My family and I cannot wait to see you here.
Yours,
Li Ming
例2：投诉信
（1）陈述你对学校图书馆的不满
（2）列举图书馆存在的问题
（3）希望能够得到改进
September, 11
Dear President,
I am a sophomore with the Department of Law. My name is Wang Ming. I am writing to you today to intimate you with something undesirable that I have found in the University Library.
You may or may not realize how much our library, the landmark of our university or even of our town, weighs in our minds. It is a place we are most proud of and where we like to spend most of our time. In such an honorable place we have noticed recently some phenomena which hurt our eye. Some seats in the reading rooms are ‘permanently reserved vacant seats’, that is, some students “occupy” some seats they never come to use. What a terrible waste of valuable resource! Some other students are too noisy, talking among themselves, leaving mobile phone beeping anytime. And some library staff is ill-mannered and rude and not helpful most of time. These and other undesirable things have already done damage to the fame of our university and caused a lot of inconvenience to the users.
Dear President, we hope that something can be done to change and reverse the current situation. Let our cozy, comfortable, quiet, effective library come back.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely,

2．记叙文 例：A Welcome Back Celebration
1.杨玲生病，情绪低落.
2.班上同学准备cheer her up.
3.举办一场欢迎party.
Yang Ling is my fellow classmate and friend. Recently she had a terrible condition and has been hospitalized for over a month. She was depressed, sad and downhearted. She told us so many things are working against her, and she didn’t know how to change and redirect herself.
The day before she was released from hospital, we, some of her friends decided to give a surprise to cheer her up the next day. That night, she came back, shoulders bent and head fallen. She was so deep in her bad mood that she didn’t realize that her dorm is the only one in the building that is dark. She turned the key in the lock and opened the door when the room was suddenly lit like a bright day. Her eyes sparkled with delight and surprise. She saw all her classmates crowded in this tiny room. Everyone was holding something in his hand, flowers, fruits, cards, cheering, “Welcome back!” She was so moved that she burst into tears. And smile returned to her pretty face. She said “Thank you all.” heartedly.
Ever since that day, happiness and delight have stayed with her. Life is so wonderful.

3．论说文
例：Buying or Borrowing Books?
（1） 有些人认为书应该借来看
（2） 有些人认为书应该买来看
（3） 你的选择？
Buying or Borrowing Books?

Books can arm us with knowledge and information we need to make success of life. There are generally two ways in which we can have access to books: borrowing or buying. While millions are borrowing books, I still think buying them best suits me and gives me the greatest pleasure.

Many people choose to borrow books. For one thing, borrowing books can save us huge amounts of money. For another, if we borrow books from the library or friends, we normally have deadline to finish them. And consequently we can read more books in a limited time, just as a famous Chinese saying goes, “books can not be read unless borrowed.”

I believe that advantages for buying books are more obvious and compelling. Firstly, we can keep the books as long as we wish. Secondly, we can take whatever notes on the margin of the pages of the books. Finally, the process of selecting and keeping books can be a great fun.

4．口语作文
例：工作总结演讲
1. 简述上周五系学生会搞的一次以环保为主题的到某一湖区拾trash的活动。
2. 上述活动的效果及存在的问题。
3. 你的建议。
My fellow students,
Last Friday, the Students’ Union of our Department organized a clean-up project to Zhongshan Lake. The purpose of this project is to enhance(加强)the environment awareness of general public. Late in the afternoon around 4, a group of 35 volunteers went to the park where we pick up the trash(垃圾)left by some tourists. As head of the group, I would like to report to you on the event.
Actually, we did a wonderful job. When we were collecting the trash near the lake, many people paused to watch and then came to our help, showing considerable appreciation and support. But our work still left some to be desired. For one thing, since our project started late in the afternoon, hours were not long enough to attract enough people as we had predicted. For the other, lots of people passed by apparently not knowing what we were doing. But for these two drawbacks, our project could have been much better and more effective.
So, following are two of my suggestions: next time we have similar activities, try to start earlier, say in the morning. In this case we can put in more hours. And also, as we are getting along, we can put up some posters to tell people what we are doing and call their attention to environment protection. Thank you.

5．图表作文

A： staying at home
B: traveling
C: doing social investigation
D: other ways

From the two charts, we can see that in the past ten years the students who go traveling and do social investigations ring vacations have increased greatly while those who stay at home have decreased a lot.
There are several reasons for the changes. Firstly, with the development of economy, many people have become better off. Students can get financial support from their parents for traveling. Secondly, tourism has greatly developed over the past ten years. Many new scenic spots have been built and exploited. In addition, the students today are expected and encouraged to participate in facing the real world. In this way they can obtain the necessary experiences required when they go job-hunting upon graation.
From the changes in the charts, we can predict that more and more college students will make their vacations interesting and worthwhile by going to the outside world instead of staying at home.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Studying Abroad. You should write at least

120 words following the outline given bellow:

1. 近几年来越来越多的学生选择留学

2. 出现这种现象的原因

3. 这种现象可能带来的影响

四级模考参考范文：

Recent years have witnessed a phenomenon that more and more students swarm into foreign countries to finish their ecation.They have not considered our homeland as the unique place to enrich their knowledge any more. Instead, some excellent boys and girls whose financial condition is fine simultaneously began to pay their attention on some oversea prestigious colleges and institutions and dream to get degrees there.

There are several reasons to cause this change. First of all, with the globalization and much more frequent communications with developed countries, most of the people in China get to realize the wide gaps in many fields, especially in science and technology,between China and western countries. They thirst for studying aboard to get ready better for the fierce competition in the job-hunting market. Moreover, the life in foreign countries is usually attractive to young people and studying aboard may satisfy their curiosity.

Besides, the rapid development of our mother country and the remarkable growth in our income make going abroad to study available, which is almost impossible to average Chinese students in the past.

The move-out of our students changes our society a lot.

On one hand, being students in foreign universities will widen their view and offer them more possibility to get favorite jobs. And consequently their success will draw more latecomers to do the same thing.On the other hand, if the majority of them will not go back to China to work in the future, our fatherland will probably suffer a significant loss which may be difficult to be estimated by money.

毕业的问题
1、Studying Abroad or Home
(1) 现在有越来越多的人想出国留学。
(2) 出国留学与在国内学习的对比。
(3) 你的观点。
Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, more

❸ 大学英语四级题型及分值分布

总分：710分，写作部分占整套试卷的15% =106.5分，听力部分占整套试题的版35%=248.5分，阅读部分占整套试题的35%=248.5分，英权语四级翻译部分占试卷的15%：106.5分。选词填空每题3.55分，其余每题都是7.1分。

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