① 如何在寫作中合理地使用「高級」詞彙
在英語測試中，經常要求學生根據所提供的材料寫出一篇150詞左右的書面表達內。但許容多學生由於對詞彙的掌握功底膚淺，所寫的文章常常平淡無味，缺乏文采和感染力。因此，要想在書面表達中取得較高的分數，除了注意自己文章內容的充實外，還要在詞彙上狠下功夫，在文章中適當使用幾個「高級」詞彙，讓閱卷老師眼前為之一亮，從而增加得高分的可能性。如何正確合理地使用「高級」詞彙呢?本文從以下幾點加以論述。一、學好課本、注意積累要想使得自己的文章富有文采，首先必須注意詞彙的妙用。在課本學習中有些詞彙能恰到好處地表達作者的意圖、情感和感受，學生對此也有所感悟，但一離開課本，進人具體的寫作時，許多學生就不能將所學的詞彙正確運用，更不知哪些詞彙的運用更勝一籌。因此在學習中學生必須注意這方面的積累，現通過課本中的詞彙加以論述。1.「這任務對我而言很難。」This 15 a diffieult task for me.如果將句中的diffieult改用Challenging一詞，寫出的句子效果可能更好。2.「他正在開會，他一有空我就通知你。
② 英語寫作時怎麼加強高級詞彙的使用
這個就是要靠平日的積累咯，可以多看看GRE的閱讀（不用做題讀它的文版章就可以），每個權不認識的詞都記下來什麼意思、怎麼用（這些只要有字典就可以做到），或者多看看例如BBC、CNN之類的英文新聞，學習一下他們的詞彙和句子的使用。你也可以參考英文原版小說啊。
另外，寫作要好的話，高級詞彙只是一方面，清晰的邏輯、准確地表達自己的觀點也很重要。而且這是一個長期而艱苦的過程，不可能一蹴而就。
③ 英語寫作的高級詞彙有哪些
1.增補(Addition)
in addition另外,furthermor e此外,again,also,besides,moreover此外 ,similarly,finally最後
2.比較(Comparison)
in the same way,likewise同樣地,similarly,equally,in comparison比較起來,just as同樣地
3.對照(Contrast)
whereas然而,in contrast與此相反,on the other hand,instead同樣,however然而,nevertheless然而,unlike,even though即使,on the contrary,while
4.因果(Cause and effect)
because,because of,for,since,e to,owing to,thanks to,as a result(of),accordingly,hence,so,thus
5.強調(Emphasis)
certainly,above all,indeed,of course,surely,actually,as a matter of fact,chiefly,especially,primarily,in particular,undoubtedly,absolutely,most imprtant
6.讓步(Concession)
although,though,after all,in spite of,nevertheless,still,provided,while it is true.
7.例證(Exemplification)
for example,for instance,that is,namely,such as,in other words,in this case,by way of illustration.
8.總結(Conclusion)
to sum up,to conclude,in a word,in short,in brief,all in all,in all,to put it in a nutshell,in summary
9.推斷(Inference)
therefore,as a result(of),consequently,accordingly,so,otherwise
10.時間和空間(Time and space)
afterward,after,first,later,then,soon,outside,near,beyound,above,below,on the right(left),in the middle,opposite,in front of
11.啟承轉合
1)、啟
A proverb says.At present.
As the proverb says.Currently.
Generally speaking,.Now,.
In general,.On the Whole.
It is clear that.Recently.
It is often said that.Without doubt,.
2)、承
First(of all),.Moreover,.
Firstly,.No one can deny that.
In the first place,.Obviously.
To begin with,.Of course,.
Also,.Similarly,.
At the same time.Therefore,we should realize that.
Certainly.There is no doubt that.
In addition,.What`s more,.
In fact.It can be easily proved that...
Meanwhile.
3)、轉
But...Still,.
But the problem is not so simple...
There is a certain amount of truth in this,but we still have a problem with regard to.
However,
.To our surprise,.
Nevertheless,.Unfortunately.
On the other hand,.
Yet difference will be found and that is why I feel that.
Others may find this to be true,but I do not.I think.
4)、合
④ 英語作文中的常用高級詞彙，就是可以代替類似good,bad,happy,sad這些低級詞彙的詞，考
【一】原因 【表示原因高級句型】
1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.
accountable for
對…應負責任
1. Public officials can finally be held accountable for their actions.
終於要對政府官員實行問責了
2. Every person is accountable for his own work.
每個人都要對自己的工作負責.
3. One of the principles of our legal system is that people are accountable for the foreseeable consequences of their actions.
我們的法律體系的原則之一是人們要對他們可以預見的行為後果負責。
4. The president struck back at critics who say he should be held accountable for conditions that contributed to the riots.
一些批評家指出總統應對導致騷亂局面的情形負責，總統對此予以駁斥。
5. I am accountable to my superiors for my actions.
我應該為自己的行為對上司負責.
A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).
contribute to
v.捐獻vt.促成 ；投稿
Drink contributed to his ruin.
酗酒促使他毀滅。
She seldom contributes to the discussion.
她在討論中很少發言。
Their inventions have contributed to the development of electrical engineering.
他們的發明有助於電氣工程學的發展。
This is Chekhov's contribution to Russian literature.
這是契訶夫對俄羅斯文學的貢獻
lead to
把…帶到；領到；（道路）通向；導致
【1】【把…帶到, 領到】
The bell-boy led us to our rooms.
旅館服務員把我們帶到了我們的房間。
【2】【(道路)通向】
All roads lead to Rome.
條條道路通羅馬。
【3】【導致, 引起】
In given conditions, a bad thing can lead to good results.
在一定條件下, 一件壞事可以導致好的結果。
An ordinary cold can soon lead to a fever.
一場普通的感冒很快便會引起高燒
account for
說明（原因、理由等）；導致，引起；（在數量、比例上）占；對…負責
【1】【（數量或比例上）占】
Computers account for 5% of the country's commercial electricity consumption. 計算機佔去該國商業用電的5%。
【2】【導致；解釋】
Now, the gene they discovered today doesn't account for all those cases.
不過，他們現在發現的基因無法解釋所有的病例。
【3】【為…提出理由;對…作出說明】
How do you account for the company's alarmingly high staff turnover?...
你怎麼解釋這家公司高得令人憂慮的人員流動率？
【4】【對（行動、政策等）負有責任】
He said only 200 of the train's 600 passengers had been accounted for.
他說火車上的600名乘客中僅有200名乘客的信息得已查明
【5】【將（錢款）列入預算】
The President and the President alone must account for his government's reforms. 總統必須為他的政府改革負責，而且是負全責
【6】【殺死；消滅；打敗】
In the first ten days of May our squadron accounted for at least seven enemy aircraft... 5月的頭10天里我們中隊至少報銷了7架敵機。
In the final they accounted for Brentford by three goals to two.
決賽時他們以3比2擊敗了布倫特福德隊
【1】The answer to this problem involves many factors.
【2】The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...
【3】The factors that contribute to this situation include...
【4】The change in ...largely results from the fact that...
【5】We may blame ...,but the real causes are...
【6】Part of the explanations for it is that ...
【7】One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...
【8】Another contributing factor (cause ) is ...
【9】Perhaps the primary factor is that …
【10】But the fundamental cause is that ...
【二】比較【表示比較高級句型】
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.
2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that...
5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
6.Like anything else, it has its faults.
7.A and B has several points in common.
8.A bears some resemblances to B.
9.However, the same is not applicable to B.
10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.
12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.
13. The same is true of B.
14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...
【三】批駁【表示批駁的高級句型】
1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that...
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6) It makes no sense to argue for ...
7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ...
9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ...
【四】後果【表示後果高級句型】
1. It may give rise to a host of problems.
2. The immediate result it proces is ...
3. It will exercise a profound influence upon...
4. Its consequence can be so great that...
【五】舉例【用於舉例高級句型】
1) A good case in point is ...
2) As an illustration, we may take ...
3) Such examples might be given easily.
4) ...is often cited as an example.
【六】證明【用於證明高級句型】
1) No one can deny the fact that ...
2) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...
4) Recent studies indicate that ...
5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ...
6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ...
【七】開篇【用於開遍的高級句型】
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...
6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.
7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...
8) According to a recent survey, ...
9) With the rapid development of ..., ...
【八】結尾【用於結尾的高級句型】
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...
3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...
4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...
5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.
6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...
7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop
up.
8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...
10) Taking all these into account, we ...
11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
（一）段首句
1. 關於……人們有不同的觀點。一些人認為……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗話說（常言道）……，它是我們前輩的經歷，但是，即使在今天，它在許多場合仍然適用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in
many cases even today.
3. 現在，……，它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更為糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What
makes things worse is that______.
4. 現在，……很普遍，許多人喜歡……，因為……，另外（而且）……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
5. 任何事物都是有兩面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and
disadvantages.
6. 關於……人們的觀點各不相同，一些人認為（說）……，在他們看來，……
People』s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To
them,_____.
7. 人類正面臨著一個嚴重的問題……，這個問題變得越來越嚴重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成為人的關注的熱門話題，特別是在年青人當中，將引發激烈的辯論。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are
right on their way.
9. ……在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用，它給我們帶來了許多好處，但同時也引發一些嚴重的問題
。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a
lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根據圖表/數字/統計數字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。很顯然……，但是為什麼
呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can
be seen that______ while. Obviously，______，but why?
（二）中間段落句
1. 相反，有一些人贊成……，他們相信……，而且，他們認為……。
On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.
2. 但是，我認為這不是解決……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。
But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.
3. ……對我們國家的發展和建設是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是…
…
______is necessary and important to our country"s development and construction. First，
______.What"s more, _____.Most important of all,______.
4. 有幾個可供我們採納的方法。首先，我們可以……。
There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______
5. 面臨……，我們應該採取一系列行之有效的方法來……。一方面……，另一方面，
Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing，
______For another，______
6. 早就應該拿出行動了。比如說……，另外……。所有這些方法肯定會……。
It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these
measures will certainly______.
7. 為什麼……？第一個原因是……；第二個原因是……；第三個原因是……。總的來說，……的主要原因是由
於……
Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For
all this, the main cause of ______e to ______.
8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好壞兩個方面一樣，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。
However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own
disadvantages, such as ______.
9. 盡管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.
10. 完全同意……這種觀點（陳述），主要理由如下：
I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.
⑤ 英語寫作如何使用高級詞彙
1.注意使用片語、習語來代替一些單詞以增加文采。如用make use of替代版use,用catch sight of替代see等。
2.使用一些很有「洋味」的詞語權。如
Thank you for sharing the time with us.(用share不用spend)
The way he views the world is very practical.(用view而不用look at)
The noise nearly drove me mad.(用drive而不用make)
3.避免重復使用同一單詞或短語。如
I like reading while my brother enjoys(不用likes) watching TV.
希望對你有幫助～
⑥ 英語作文得不了高分，求幾個高級詞彙
你得先說你來是幾年結自的啊？
不過可以給你寫建議，所謂的高級詞彙就是把你新學的單詞用到作文里。
因為很多學生對新詞掌握不熟悉，總有以前學過的簡單詞彙，所以用詞不出彩。
讓給你說幾個還真不如你自己學的單詞全面，而且更合適。
所以，強化基本功很重要哦~
⑦ 高考英語作文真的不能用高級詞彙嗎
不會的，高來考的英語講源究的是思路清晰明了，盡量用簡單一點的詞彙，可以讓閱卷老師有耐心去看。 你想，閱卷老師有那麼多卷子去閱讀。一定不會細看每一篇文章，都只是看個大概。 首先你應該保證你的文章開頭和街尾絕對無錯，老師看過了以後就會去看中間，盡量不用復雜的單詞，寫一些清晰的小句子。用幾個從句。 這樣寫作文，如果不出現語法錯誤和單詞錯誤，書寫工整，上22分應該沒問題。如果對作文有更高的追求，就需要多讀英語文章，學會寫一些華麗的句子，書寫練到爐火純青，極限就是24.5了。Good luck！
⑧ 英語六級的填空題翻譯題和寫作中，能用出答案的高級詞彙，但用錯形態或過去時現在時不分，能給分么··
填空題恐怕很難拿到分
翻譯和寫作主要看你表達的意思，但時態不對肯定會扣分的。
與其在這里揣測，還不如好好復習來得實際。
⑨ 高考英語寫作中的高級詞彙有哪些呢
①詞彙篇 單詞可以說一個人單詞量的展現，如果總停留在使用very good等小學詞彙，那老師把你當成發育不完全也正常.所以要使用一些高級詞彙（就象是給文章穿上了成人內衣），我不建議大家用考綱以外的詞彙（當然你能用更好），夏哥可以教你用高級替換簡單詞彙~~ severe 替換掉serious（嚴重的） a severe water shortage嚴重缺水 needy替換掉 ppor（ 貧窮的） wealthy 替換掉 rich （ 富裕的） benificial 替換掉 good （有益的） undesirable 替換掉 bad （不好的，不受歡迎的） nevertheless 替換掉 however（然而，不過） fundamental / significant 替換掉 important（ 重要的） relevant 替換掉 related （有關的） ....is highly relevant to....... extraodinary 替換掉 surprising （驚人的，非凡的） provided/providing （that）替換掉 if （如果.....） promote /strengthen 替換掉 improve （提高，加強） More should be done to strengthen instry's links with universities. 應該做更多的事情加強工業界和大學的聯系. cope with 替換掉 solve（ 解決） motivate 替換掉 encourage（ 激勵） We are looking for someone who will be able to motivate the staff to work hard.我們在尋找能激勵職員們努力工作的人. jeopardize 替換掉 be bad to （損害，危及） Failing exams could jeopardize her future. 考試不及格危及她的前程. ease 替換掉 relieve （減輕，緩解） To ease the problem of ..... 為了緩解....的問題.....
well-being 替換掉 happiness （幸福，安康） pros and cons 替換掉 advantages and disadvantages（好處和壞處） You must consider all the pros and cons of the matter before you make a decision.在你做決定之前，必須考慮這個問題的正反兩個方面. approach / method 替換掉 way（方法，方案） adopt 替換掉 use （採用，採取） the aged 替換掉 old people（老人） adolescents 替換掉 the young （青少年） employment 替換掉 job（就業） affair 替換掉 thing （事情，東西） bent 替換掉 gift （天賦，愛好） catastrophe 替換掉（ disaster 災難） subscribe to 替換掉 agree with（ 同意） tend 替換掉 want（趨向於..想要.....） I am tending to another customer at he moment. acquire 替換掉 gain （獲得（尤指知識上的）） administration 替換掉 government （政府部門） contribute to 替換掉 cause （引起） extremely 替換掉 very （非常的） frown on sth 替換 disagree with sth （ 不同意） for instance 替換掉 for example （例如） advocate 倡導 compensate for 彌補..... Spare no efforts for努力 In contemporary society 在當今社會 A vast amount of 大量的 be abundant in 富有... on ones own account 為了某人自己的利益
at ones own risk 自行負責 on account of 由於 On no account絕不要 arise from 由....引起 Are these any matters arising from the last meeting？ 這些事情都是由上次的會議引起的嗎？ assess 評估，評價 Examinations are not the only means of assessing ones ability. 考試不是評價一個人能力的唯一方法. authentic 真實的，可信的 graal 逐漸的 There has been a graal improvment in ...over the last two years. 過去的兩年中...逐漸改善. ....multiply rapidly ...迅速增加. ripe 時候成熟的 The country is ripe for change. 國家已是時候改變. trend 趨勢，趨向，潮流 The trend at the moment is that .... 現在..是一個趨勢..... emphrasize 強調，重視 I』d like to emphrasize how important it is to .... sustainable development 可持續發展
②句型篇 英語裡面常用的句型也就那麼幾個，盡量往裡套。能用到以下句型的千萬別用一般陳述句，能用長句千萬別用短句，最好一句話老長.每個句型我都弄個例句~~ 倒裝：
Not only di he speak correctly，but he spoke easily. Here comes a bus. Seldom have we felt as comfortable as here . 雙否： The postman never fails to come on time . 被動： Many things can be done to solve this problem . 非限定： The man is from the UK，which we can tell from his accent. 定從： This is the reason why he came late. This is the reason for which he came late. The school (that/which) he once studied in is very famous 讓步： Child as he is ，he can speak many foreaign languages. 獨立主格： （With）There being no bus, we had to go home on foot. The men moved slowly forward, neck deep in the water, with their officers guiding them.
③常用句子篇——起到一個首飾的作用，讓文章更銷魂~~~~ 這個有點頭疼，多背一背吧~~~ Some changes have taken place in the past five years． 在過去的5年中這里發生的一些變化. A great change will certainly be proced in the world』s communications． 在世界的溝通與交流方面產生了巨大的變化. This is a phenomenon that ..... 有一個...的現象........ It has increased（decreased）from．．．to．．．
...從...增加到了........... People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth． 人們對..有不同的態度. When it comes to ..., some think ... 當談到...一些人認為.......... There is a public debate today that ... 當今有一個公共的爭論關於........... Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 最近這個問題得到了關注. Now there is a growing awareness that... 現在....的意識增強了. Many indivials, if not most, harbor the idea that…. 有許多人，不是特別多，懷有這樣的想法..... it is universally acknowledged that..... ....是一個社會的共識..... Just imagine what would be like if... 設想一下如果...... It is of great benefit to us. ...對我們是有很大的好處的. It has more disadvantages than advantages． 它有很多的優點和缺點. It plays an important role in our life． 它在我們的人生中扮演了很重要的角色. ... this story is not rare. 這樣的故事不少見. ..., such dilemma we often meet in daily life. 這樣的事情我們在生活中經常遇到. ..., the story still has a realistic significance.這個故事很有現實意義. But some others have just the opposite opinion. 一些人有相反的意見. But every coin has two sides. 每個硬幣都有兩面.（即每件事情都有兩
As for me, I'm in favour of the latter opinion.我支持後者. promote the public awareness of 增強了...的公共認識 The government should take effective measures and immediate actions. 政府應該採取及時有效的措施. To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see... 為了理解...的真相......，認識到....也是重要的. A study of ... will make this point clear .一項研究使這個觀點更清楚了. There is no point(use) in doing.....做...是沒有意義的. Distinguished scientific accomplishment is a matter of opportunity and of continuous and concentrated effort over long years. (很優美的句子,值得借鑒) from the …point of view 從…角度來看 最近, XXXXX現象引起了人們的廣泛關注 Recently, the phenomenon of (that) …… has aroused wide public concern 隨著社會(科技)的發展,人們開始注意到XXXX的重要性 Along with the advance of the society (science and technology), people are attaching much importance to …… Take ... for an example, it is a very obvious case . 拿..來說，這是個很明顯的案例. Some people argue that….., whereas others maintain that…. 一些人爭論.....另一些人支持....觀點. 就我個人而言(老實說), 我全力支持前者(後者) As for me, I am in high favor of the former (latter) Personally, I side with the former (latter) Frankly speaking/ To be frank/ To be honest/ Honestly speaking, it is the former (latter) that I approve of 我認為(在我看來,就我看來,我的觀點是, 我想….) I am convinced that…. As far as I am concerned, ….. To my point of view, ….. From where I stand, …… We should take some effective meas
⑩ 英語作文，要求使用高級句式，高端詞彙（雅思水平）不要高考範文那種低水平的，限時明天中午，感謝
我依然飛翔
即使翅膀斷了，心也要飛翔。
——題記
無盡的黑夜侵蝕著我那無盡的愁思，周圍是可怕的靜寂，我起身來到窗前。
風很冷，繞過起伏的窗簾，刺透了我麻木的神經，我哆嗦了一下，縮了縮脖子。外面的燈光將整個院子充斥成白晝，半禿的樹在瑟瑟秋風中顫抖，幾片枯黃的樹葉頑強地守著崗位，又終於堅持不住，一頭栽下來，飄然落在冰冷的水泥板上。
我嘆口氣，為那片悄然消逝的生命，更為自己無地自容的成績。我不明白為什麼上帝給人們勝利和歡樂的禮物時，後面總要拴上失敗和苦澀，我總是擺脫不了失敗雙手的侵噬，猶如風雨中哭泣的百合花，淡薄了對陽光的渴望和心中那份持久的傲世之氣。多少次苦苦尋求，又多少次茫然失落，夢猶如雪片漂灑的精靈，心已冷，意迷茫……
深夜的風無力地掀動著俯卧在地面上的枯葉，翻動，再翻動，一直到大樹的根下——那是生育樹葉的一棵樹。我忽然懂得：失去意味著新的獲得，衰落意味著新的開始。一片黃葉枯了，爛了，受侵蝕，受寒凍，當春暖花開時，它將是層層濃蔭中的一片。看到這里，我不覺釋然了。
失敗是成功的因素，沒有它，不會使你耳邊警鍾長鳴，失敗又是生命的重負，長久地背著它，跋涉的腳上會多磨出幾個不應有的血泡。朦朧中我感悟到風雨之後的陽光。「人生自信二百年，會當擊水三千年」！讓灑脫與風雨同行吧。只要青春還在，我就不會悲哀，只要陽光還在，我就不會孤獨，不會停歇，縱使陷身茫茫沙漠，希望的綠洲還在，我心依然飛翔。想到這里，我不禁笑了。
抬頭，不知何時，天上多了幾雙眨動的眼睛，黑暗過後必是黎明，陰霾散盡，依然是彩虹，狂沙淘盡方得金，揚起自信的風帆，迎難而上吧！別因一時的荒蕪而永別了心靈的田野。
帶著微笑出發，即使翅膀斷了，心也要飛翔。
放棄也是一種美麗
與其抱殘守缺，不如選擇果斷放棄。——題記
當我仰望燦爛的星空，用冷靜思索喧囂的人生，用激動開啟思想的大門，我不禁這樣想：有時候，應該學會選擇放棄，因為，放棄也是一種美麗。
抱殘守缺是苛求者臉上醜陋的皺紋，而果斷放棄是學者們臉上淺淺的酒窩。伴隨著臉上甜甜的酒窩，我們應該學會選擇放棄。
有這樣一件事，一位老人在火車行駛的途中，不小心把鞋弄掉了一隻，人們正在為他惋惜，而老人卻果斷地把第二隻鞋從窗口扔了出去。人們在驚詫的同時更加贊賞老人選擇的果斷放棄。
學會選擇放棄吧，不必用殘碎的石頭添補不盡完美的人生大廈。當你遇到一個毫無意義的問題，請選擇放棄……
山之所以成為山,是因為選擇放棄了平坦，水之所以成為水，是因為它選擇了放棄停駐。只有懂得學會選擇放棄的人才明白，山，如何站成一種尊嚴，水，如何淌成一脈智慧。
選擇放棄吧，俄國詩人普希金曾經說過：「我們渴望成功，但在成功的同時，必須有所放棄，讓失去變為可愛。」
有時失去並不是一種悲傷，而有可能就是幸運；有時失去，並不是一種憂愁，而恰恰就是一種歡樂。我們並不排斥執著，但同時也要學會放棄，讓我們學會選擇放棄吧，因為，放棄也是一種美麗。
只有學會選擇放棄，你的前途才會更加光明！
戰勝自己（4）
藍色的蛹，束縛著青春，帶來無限掙扎的傷痛；金色的蝴蝶，翩翩起舞，為您訴說破繭而出的新生的喜悅……
——題記
藍色的蛹
人們說我是一個「不合群」的病孩子，我自己認為也是。我不喜歡嘈雜的人群，我不喜歡別人無意闖進我的生活，我只喜歡靜靜地看著人流，無風吹過的心畔，激不起陣陣的漣漪，惟獨自己孤芳自賞。逐漸地，我為自己編織著藍色的蛹，含淚訴說著青春的傷痛，把自己重重包圍，只有藍色的憂郁陪伴著我……
破繭的掙扎
在藍色的蛹里，暗無天日，我見不著光明，看不到希望。我極力掙扎，孤獨感籠罩著我。我的心蠢蠢欲動了，我渴望破繭後的新生，渴望去外面的世界再次見到新生的太陽。可是我又害怕著畏縮在角落裡。我是如此矛盾，我渴望新生，卻害怕破繭後陽光的刺痛。青春，就是如此的神秘，它引領著人們走向成熟。強烈的新生慾望，使我破繭而出，走向光明……
金色的蝴蝶
破繭新生的蝴蝶，翩翩起舞。我不再孤獨，我的生命中再次點燃了愛和希望的燈盞，我勇敢地奔向藍天，在花叢中飛越，享受著陽光的和煦。化作金色蝴蝶的我飛向青春的絢爛……
左手青春，右手年華！青春是破繭而出的新生。沖破青春束縛的我，也如此美麗迷人！