『壹』 英語總結作文
如果你是要存檔自查,那麼我建議你自己寫,如果你要交差,那麼抄下面的
學期英語學習的總結
本學期我英語考試考了92.5分,在全班是中游偏上,成績不夠拔尖。總思考,對本學期英語學習總結如下:
第一,過分講究方法和技巧,而不願意下真功夫。語言的運用是一種技能,但這種技能不是專靠技巧能夠獲得的。太講究方法和技巧會被其佔用很多的時間和精力,而對學習的內容本身投入較少的時間和精力,因此反而會影響學習的效果。方法和技巧只能適當利用,並且要從自己的學習實踐中摸索出適合自己的方法和技巧才會真正管用。
第二,過分講究速度和效率,不願花時間經常重復(復習)已學過的內容。語言運用是一種技能,技能則只有靠熟能生巧,要不斷重復才會熟練,只有熟練了才會形成一種不假思索的技能。
第三,三天打魚兩天曬網,沒有恆心,不能長期堅持學習。技能的熟練要有一個過程,在這個過程中會遇到各種困難,但不能向困難低頭,要堅持不懈地反復學習,持之以恆。
第四,不重視聽力訓練。如果不練習聽力,只是默默地閱讀和背單詞,其結果不僅聽不懂別人講外語,而且閱讀水平也難以提高。聽力和閱讀都是以詞彙是基礎,學英語要有一定的詞彙基礎,沒有一定的詞彙基礎,你看再多的東西,聽再多的磁帶,也象看天書,聽天書一樣,看來聽去,看不懂,聽不進,最後搞得頭昏眼花,進而是去對英語學習的興趣,對英語產生厭惡感,要是達到這種程度你也就基本上完蛋了。
綜上,我要克服之前提及的缺點,彌補不足,爭取在新學年中英語成績更上一層樓!
『貳』 英語作文-英語演講比賽失敗後的總結
English is more and more popular among people. But there are many people can write English well, while couldn』t speak English fruitly. How to be a successful English speaker? I have some advice. First of all, speak English more. People should take every chance to speak as much English as possible. Secondly, be confident. Do not afraid to open your mouth. Everyone should have confidence for themselves. Third, try to think in the English way. Four, take every chance to do practice. Last, be patient to yourself. Anyone is able to do these; he will be a successful English speaker on day.
英語越來越受大家歡迎。但是有很多人是可以寫好英語,卻不能流利說出來。如何成為一個成功的英語演講者?我有一些建議。首先,多說英語。抓住每一個機會講盡可能多的說英語。其次,要有信心。不要害怕開嘴說話。每個人都應該對自己有信心。第三,嘗試用英語的思維方式思考。四,抓住每個機會來練習。最後,對自己有耐心。不管是誰能做到這些;總有一天他是可以成為一個成功的英語演講者的。
『叄』 閱卷老師總結:英語作文常見10大問題,你中槍否
有很多同學和家長都向我咨詢過提高英語成績的好方法。前段時間也給大家分享過一些英語單詞的記憶,英語語法,那麼今天我就著重講一下英語作文。
英語作文的寫作技巧固然重要,但是我們在寫作之前必須弄清楚要規避哪些常犯的錯誤,只有了解了這些常規性的錯誤,寫作時才會避免自己犯錯,英語作文得分自然不會低。
在我的教學經驗中,大部分同學幾乎都會犯這10完全可以避免的錯誤。
1. 審題不清
無論是語文作文還是英語作文,偏離了主題都是致命傷!只要偏題,不管你語言如何規范、准確,都會被判零分。所以,同學們在寫作之前一定要把題看清楚,最好是拿筆把關鍵詞勾畫出來,以免遺漏或錯誤理解導致偏題。
比如作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動,有些同學審題不清就容易寫成「我最喜歡的活動」偏離了「課外活動」這一主題,這樣寫出來的作文基本得分不高。
2.拼寫錯誤
單詞拼寫一直是很多同學的硬傷,單詞拼寫是由單詞記憶得好壞直接決定的。一篇文章里有大量的錯誤拼寫不僅會讓閱卷老師覺得英語基本功差,同時也直接影響作文內容的表達,閱卷老師都看不懂這篇作文,得分自然就很低。
因此我建議,同學們在平時的學習中要重視單詞背誦,如果在作文中有不確定的單詞,那最好是用一個比較簡單的同義詞來代替。
3.名詞單復數的錯誤
名詞的單復數是一個很重要的知識點,但是它其實是很簡單的,幾乎所有的同學都能掌握,但就是由於粗心大意經常寫錯。
例如「我父親和母親都是教師」這一句話,我經常看到很多同學這樣寫「my father and my mother is all teacher.」這里的「teacher」是「father」和「mother」的指代,是復數,用單數的「is」就是錯誤的。正確的應該這樣「my father and my mother are both teachers.」
而這種低級錯誤是完全可以避免的,另外,在改錯題和選擇題中也會出現這樣的情況,大家要注意這種送分題。
4.缺少動詞
因為語言習慣的不同,一些同學在作文中常缺少動詞,因為漢語的一句話中,可以不表達動詞,而在英語中則不行。
例如「我很高興我能來到中國」,這個句子沒有動詞作謂語,而用形容詞,但英語形容詞不能作謂語。很多同學這樣錯誤的翻譯「I happy I can come to china.」裡面就缺少主語「I」後面應該接的動詞做謂語,正確的應該是「I am happy I can come to china.」
5.缺少介詞、冠詞等
還有一些同學因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法,不了解中英文語言習慣的不同,也會出現明顯的錯誤,造成丟分現象。
例如:「因為大雨我們不能舉行運動會」錯誤的寫法為「because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.」正確的應該這樣寫「because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.」
6.代詞的錯用
在英語有很多代詞的形式,包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分。
此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞,而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的,代詞的誤用是考生最容易發生的錯誤。
例如:錯誤的寫法「I mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.」這里的「I」就用錯了,漢語中時常說「我母親……「,但是在英語中應該是」我的母親「,所以正確的應該這樣寫:「my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.」
7.句子不完整
有的同學沒有弄清楚英語中的句子結構,因此長出現只寫半句的現象。
例如:錯誤的「many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.」這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞,他不能獨立構成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤,修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來,把中間的句號改為逗號即可,正確的「many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.」
8.前後不一致
這也是很多同學常犯的錯誤:數量的不一致、時態不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。
例如:1. 「人一旦有了知識,他就能想干什麼就干什麼。」錯誤的寫法「when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.」這里one是單數第三人稱,因而本句的have應改為has ;同理,want應改為wants。這是典型的主謂不一致。因此,應該這樣改「when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)."
9.時態、人稱和數的搭配錯誤
漢語動詞無時態、人稱和數的變化,而對英語來說,這些都至關重要,這也是英語語法中的難點。
例如「當我到達車站時火車就已經開走了」,錯誤的寫法「when I get to the station the train leave.」這句就是典型的時態錯誤,錯誤的示例中用的一般現在時,但是第一人稱「I」在說出這句話時,無論是「到達車站」這件事還是「火車開走了」這件事都已經發生了,那麼當「我到達車站時」發生在說出這句話的現在之前,所以應該用一般過去時「get」應該改為過去式「got」;「火車已經開走了」是在「我到達車站」之前就開走了,所以是過去的過去,因此,要用had left(left是leave的過去式)。正確的應該是「when i got to the station the train had left.」
10.其他錯誤
除了上述的9點語法與拼寫的錯誤之外,還有單詞的大小寫、標點符號的錯誤等,以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。
其實這些錯誤都是基礎知識沒有掌握好或者粗心大意造成的,同學們平時應該多加練習,「熟能生巧」,只要做得多了,自然錯誤就少了。
『肆』 口語大賽總結用英語來說的小作文
把我所在的屋子的燈打開後,望著別的屋子黑的像隨時有白色的影子飄過,版我閉著眼睛,伸權手去探那個屋子的燈的開關,亮了。我鬆了口氣。
突然想起了敲門聲,我已經,想不做聲,忽然想起電視里說有的小偷先是敲門,如果沒有人就入室盜竊。怎麼辦?怎麼辦?
我慢慢走過去問:「誰啊?」我盡量放平心態,對方沒有迴音,只是敲門,是不是想等我開門再把我幹掉?如果不開門,他一定會用什麼方法進來啊!我心生一計——「爸,不知道是誰啊,就只敲門!」我對屋子喊。「得了,你爸根本沒在家!」老媽的聲音,我開門,對老媽說:「老娘啊,你要嚇死我啊!我差點就報警了!」手機就在我身旁。媽媽在那兒笑,而我只有嘆氣的份了!
怎麼樣,這個「第一次」是不是特別難忘?
『伍』 求《對這一學期的總結》大學英語作文 謝謝。
作為一名順利度過大一上半學期的學生,我受益頗豐。回顧加入北航來的點點滴滴,歷歷在目。作為一名合格的學生,我將在接下來的文章中對這半個學期的學習、生活、思想、活動四個方面進行總結。
學習方面,我克服了從高中到大學轉變的種種不適,並在各個科目上取得了初步的令人滿意的成績。經過一學期的鍛煉,我認識到了大學與高中在學習動機、學習動力以及學習習慣方面的重大區別,並有了一點心得。
1.高中的學習動機十分簡單,那就是高考,學生、老師、學校三位一體為高考,可以說是不擇手段。而大學,由於奮斗目標突然變得模糊,學習動機也變得模糊起來。學習的目的性偏弱,不知為何而學習,一門心思追求考試的通過。同時,由於高中的知識內容相對簡單,知識點相對少,社會聯系相對薄弱,知識理解要求程度相對較低,導致我們在高中階段可以拋開一切只謀書本;相反,由於大學課程緊密,知識難度高,要求理解陳獨強,並且學習的效率與效果直接與未來個人的發展前途息息相關,因此,大學的學習壓力大,學生的思想負擔也相對較重。加之奮斗目標的模糊,使得學習動機不很明顯。這一點,是在大學學習中需要的別注意的。
2.學習動力方面,由於高中的終極目標是高考,學生所面對的是多彩繽紛的大學生活,因此或多或少對未來都是樂觀的。而大學生直接面對社會,社會競爭所產生的種種現象隨著大學的逐步開放漸漸滲透到大學生活中,其中消極的一面尤其容易對大學生的心理健康造成危害。高中階段由於學習目標以及前景的清晰,使得學生、家長和學校三方面都敢於投入資本進行運作,學生的學習動力也由三方面共同得來。如學生自己的大學憧憬,家長對學生鼓勵以及獎勵制度,學校對於優等生的種種特殊待遇等等,都有可能成為學生的學習動力;而大學,則變得截然不同:首先,學校方面的動力消失。不得不提到的是,由於學校的前途、專業的就業前景等都已列入大學生的考慮范圍,學生對學校失去了高中階段的絕對信賴,因此,學校方面的支持效果普遍下降。雖然有獎學金等制度的刺激,但追根芥蒂,學生更關心的未來的發展前途,而不是完成學校的所謂各種「指標」;其次,是家長方面動力的削弱。由於大學生大多遠離家鄉,失去了來自父母方面的直接關心,心理上屬於薄弱階段。一方面,來自家庭的生活方面的支持突然消失,讓許多習慣的高中衣食無憂的學生產生強烈的不適應感。學生不由自主將注意力分散到生活中,造成學習動力下降。另一方面,學生的獨立支配感空前加強,使之對高中增經(部分)適用的學習方法產生盲目的懷疑,而急於找到一種獨立於從前的大學學習方法。這個因素因人而異,如果在尋找過程中產生焦躁情緒,則也會造成學習動力的下降。最後,由於部分學生在激烈的競爭中暫時迷失方向,奮斗目標也不清晰,造成學習動力下降。
3.學習習慣方面,高中的學習體制與小學、初中並沒有本質上的區別,因此高中階段的學習習慣大多是由多年的累積繼承而來。而大學由於學習的體制發生了一定的改變,加之學習動機和學習動力都有所不同,因此學習習慣也應作出相應的改變。
在生活上,我基本上都可以和同學們友好相處,和睦共處,互幫互愛,自己的事情自己做,形成獨立自理自立的良好品德。宿舍是一個大集體,八個人生活在同一個空間裡面,但是各自的生活習性都不相,這就需要大家互相理解和遷就,只有這樣才能和好相處,為我們的學習創造一個良好的學習和休息環境。這個方面我們宿舍就做得比較好。我初中就已經到外面讀書,因此很早就過著一種集體生活,所以我比較會理解別人,當然,我們宿舍的融洽和諧關系還很大歸屬於我們每一個宿友。可是最我我覺得自豪的是,進大學以來,我從來沒有一次光顧洗衣部,即使是在寒冷的冬天,我也堅持自己洗衣服,不給自己偷懶的機會。因為我知道惰性這樣東西是培養出來的,只要不給它一次機會,它就永遠沒有可能成為現實中的東西了。還有的是,我在生活中,始終保持干凈的作風,做到勤清潔,勤洗手,養成良好的衛生習慣。
思想方面,由於加入思想道德修養和形式與政策等課程,使我的思想道德水平得到了一定的提升。通過一學期的學習,我認識到了國家嚴峻的安全形勢以及個人前途與民族命運的密切聯系,使我深化、升華自己對於祖國和學習的認識,堅定了我對黨和人民的信心。
活動方面,我表現的比較積極。首先,我加入眾多社團,豐富了我的社會經驗和與人交往的能力。我一共參加了校舞蹈團、輪滑協會、計算機協會和微軟技術俱樂部。其中,微軟技術俱樂部要求面試,而我成功的通過了面試。縱觀上半學期,我共參加了2次系學生晚會,2次校學生晚會,1次歌手大賽。這些活動,豐富了我的課餘生活,使我的大學生活變得充滿快樂,並使我認識到了自己在藝術方面的能力。總而言之,我會繼續保持在參加活動方面的積極性,並將其和學習緊密地結合起來。
綜上所述,我的大學生活還存在著許多不足。我將在接下來的時間里努力奮斗,使自己取得更大的進步。
As a smoothly through the freshman half semester students, I benefited a lot. Review to join buaa dribs and drabs, vivid. As a qualified students, I will be in the following pages of this half semester's study, the life, thoughts, activity four aspects were summarized in this paper. Learning aspect, I overcame the transition from high school to college, and all kinds of discomfort in all subjects made the preliminary satisfactory scores. After a semester exercise, I recognized college and high school in learning motivation, learning motivation and study habits significant difference, and there was a little experience. 1. High school learning motivation is very simple, that is the university entrance exam, students, teachers, school for the university entrance exam, can saying is the trinity of means. While university, because goal suddenly become blurred, learning motivation also has become blurred. Learning, the purpose of weak, did not know why and learning, basically pursue exam through. At the same time, because of high school intellectual content relatively simple, knowledge relatively few, the social relation relatively weak, and knowledge understood requests degree comparatively low, lead us in the high school stage can throw away all the books; only seeks Contrary, because university course closely, knowledge, heay-ty requires an understanding ChenDuJiang, and learning efficiency and effect directly with future personal prospects are closely related, therefore, university study pressure big, student's thought is also relatively heavy burden. Together with the goal of the struggle of the fuzzy, make learning motivation is not very obvious. This, he was in college study need not pay attention. 2. Learning motivation, e to high school ultimate goal is to the university entrance exam, students faces is colorful and university life, so more or less for the future are optimistic. And college students directly facing society, social competition proced various phenomena as university graally opening it graally to university life, including negative side especially easy to college students' mental health hazard. The high school stage for learning goals and prospects of clear, make students, parents and school three respects dare to operate invested capital, the students' learning motivation also by three aspects together to come. If the university students' own parents, longing for students encouragement and rewards system for all kinds of top school special treatment, etc., are likely to become students' learning motivation, While university, then become vastly different aspects: firstly, the school of dynamic disappear. Have to mention is that because the school's future, professional obtain employment prospect, etc. Are all included in the scope of college students of school, students consider lost the high school stage of absolute trust, therefore, the school support general effect decline. Although have scholarship system for exciting, but probes, students were more concerned about future prospects, not finish school of so-called various "target", Secondly, the weakening of parents aspects power. Because most college students away from home, lost from the parents of direct attention, psychological belong to weak stage. On the one hand, from family life support suddenly disappeared, let many habits of high school well-fed glut of student proces strong incommensurate move. Students will involuntarily distraction in the life, cause learning motivation declined. On the other hand, the students' independent dominate feeling unprecedented strengthening, make to high thickening the (part) suitable learning method has the blind doubts, but to find an independence from the former university study method. This factor vary from person to person, if looking for proces in the process, it will also mood anxiety caused by learning motivation of decline. Finally, because part of students in the fierce competition in temporarily lost the direction, goals also not clear, cause learning motivation declined. 3. Learning habits, high school learning system and elementary school, junior high school and no essential difference, so the high school stage study habits are mostly by the cumulative by inheritance. But university because learning system has a certain change, coupled with the learning motivation and learning motivation is different, so study habits also should make corresponding change. In life, I basically can students and friendly co-exist harmoniously, help and love each other, do it ourselves to form independent self-care independence of good moral character. The dormitory is a larger group, eight people live in the same space inside, but their life habits are not and mutually, this needs everyone's mutual understanding and humored, the only way to get along, be reconciled for our study create a good study and the rest environment. This respect our dormitory will do better. My junior high school is already outside reading, therefore very early led a collective life, so I tend to understand others, of course, our dormitory of harmonious relationship is very big still belongs to each of our SuYou. But the most I I feel proud that entered university since, I never once patronize the laundry, even in cold winter, I also insist on my own laundry, don't give yourself the lazy opportunity. Because I know that something is inert developed, as long as we do not give it a chance, it never can become a reality of things. Still have, in my life, and always maintain clean style, accomplish often clean and wash hands, formed the good hygienic habit. Thinking, e to join ideological and moral cultivation and forms and policy course such as my moral level got certain ascend. Through a semester of study, I realized the national severe safety situation and personal future and national destiny close contact, make me sublime ourselves for the motherland and deepening, the study of understanding, strengthened my confidence of the party and the people. Activities, I am playing a more positive. First of all, I join many societies, enriched my social experience and the ability to relate to others. I've attended school dance, skating association, computer association and Microsoft technology club. Among them, Microsoft technology club request interview and, I successfully passed the interview. Spanning half semester, I have participated in 2 times department student party, 2 times of school student party, 1 time singing competition. These activities, enriched my extracurricular life, make my college life has become filled with joy, and made me realize their in artistic ability. In short, I will continue to keep participated in activities of enthusiasm, and its and learning closely together. To sum up, my college life still exist many shortcomings. I will be in the next few months of this struggle, make oneself to make greater progress.
『陸』 學年英語總結作文
英語作文 英語作文的基本要求:
首先,一個段落必須有一個中心即主題思想,該中心由主題句特別是其中的題旨來表達。整個段落必須緊扣這個主題(stick or hold to the topic),這就是段落的統一性(unity)。其次,一個段落必須有若干推展句,使主題思想得到充分展開,從而給讀者一個完整的感覺,這就是完整性(completeness or adequateness)。再者,一個段落不是雜亂無章的,而是有機的組合,句子的排列順序必須合乎邏輯,從一個句子到另一個句子的過渡必須流暢(smooth),這就是連貫性(coherence)。下面我們就對這三個標准分別加以說明。
1、統一性
一個段落內的各個句子必須從屬於一個中心,任何游離於中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。請看下例:
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主題句是段首句,controlling idea(中心思想)是take the long trip across the country。文中出現兩個irrelevant sentences,一個是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie,這一段是講的是Joe and I ,中間出現一個Bella是不合適的。還有,Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner這一句更是與主題句不相關。再看一個例子:
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit,但段中有兩個irrelevant sentences,一個是I bought two new suitcases last week,另一個是My mother was a premature baby。
從上面兩個例子可以看出,native speakers同樣會造出來irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果這種句子多了,造成偏題或離題,那問題就更嚴重了。
2、完整性
正象我們前面說得那樣,一個段落的主題思想靠推展句來實現,如果只有主題句而沒有推展句來進一步交待和充實,就不能構成一個完整的段落。同樣,雖然有推展句,但主題思想沒有得到相對圓滿的交待,給讀者一種意猶未盡的感覺。這樣的段落也不能完成其交際功能。例如:
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you proce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
本段的主題句是段首句。本段的兩個推展句均不能回答主題句中提出的問題。什麼是「a mind in turmoil」(心境不平靜)Physical work又如何能改變這種情況?為什麼它能起therapy的作用?讀者得不到明確的答案。因此,要達到完整就必須盡可能地簡明。例如:
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
段首句所表達的主題思想是一種看法,必須有具體事例加以驗證。上述兩個推展句只是在文字上對主題作些解釋,整個段落內容空洞,簡而不明。如果用一兩個具體的例子的話,就可以把主題解釋清楚了。比如下段:
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?
3、連貫性(coherence)
連貫性包括意連和形連兩個方面,前者指的是內在的邏輯性,後者指的是使用轉換詞語。當然這兩者常常是不可分割的。只有形連而沒有意連,句子之間就沒有內在的有機的聯系;反之,只有意連而沒有形連,有時行文就不夠流暢。
1)、意連
段落中句子的排列應遵循一定的次序,不能想到什麼就寫什麼。如果在下筆之前沒有構思,邊寫邊想,寫寫停停,那就寫不出一氣呵成的好文章來。下面介紹幾種常見的排列方式。
A.按時間先後排列(chronological arrangement)
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.
本段從「rose」(起床)寫起,然後是吃早餐(「not to miss breakfast」, 「closing at nine o'clock」),然後是「close to noon」,一直寫到這一天結束(「By nine——」)。
B. 按位置遠近排列(spatial arrangement)。例如:
From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的寫法是由遠及近,從遠處(「from a distance」)寫起,然後「get closer」,再到(「ten feet away」),最後是「inside the pagoda」……當然,按位置遠近來寫不等於都是由遠及近。根據需要,也可以由近及遠,由表及裡等等。
C. 按邏輯關系排列(logical arrangement)
a. 按重要性順序排列(arrangement in order of importance)
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
這一段談的是表達能力,它的重要性與職業,身份有關,從「not need much skill」或「of little importance」到「more important」,最後是「most important」。
b.由一般到特殊排列(general-to-specific arrangement)
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A —— the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and "sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
這一段談的是a writer's carelessness,先給出一個general statement作為主題句,然後通過5個 」perhaps」加以例證。
c. 由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-general arrangement)
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds, drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主題句是段首句,它僅提出一個問題:為什麼兩只貓會被搞混。然後對兩者進行比較,末句才下結論。
2)、形連
行文的邏輯性常常要靠適當的轉換詞語及其他手段來實現。請讀下面這一段文字並找出文中用以承上啟下的詞語:
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies —— in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, ring his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on schele. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.
本文中起承上啟下的詞語有兩種,一種是轉換詞語(transitional words or phrases),另一種是起轉換作用的其他連接手段(linking devices)。前者依次有:first, though, so, in particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and, consequently, and, finally.後者依次是:he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his. 本段中共有詞彙105個,所使用的轉換詞語及其他連接用語共26個詞,約占該段總詞彙量的四分之一。由此可見,掌握好transitions不僅對行文的流(smoothness)有益,而且對於學生在半個小時內寫120個詞也是不無好處的。
一個段落里如果沒有transitions也就很難有coherence了.我們看下面一個例子:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture, loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句開頭出現一個起過渡作用的」it」之外,沒有使用其他的過渡詞語.這樣,文中出現許多重復的詞語,全段讀起來也顯得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的過渡詞語來修飾的話,這一段就成了下面一個流暢連貫的段落:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
4、有損連貫性的幾種情況:
考生在寫作中經常出現下面幾種錯誤:
1、不必要的改變時態,比如:
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to die down, but they come after him anyway.
2、不必要的改變單復數,比如:
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3、不必要的改變人稱,比如:
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此寫作中,一定要注意時態,人稱以及數的變化是否正確,要注意保持一致。
英語作文的書寫格式
英文書寫應符合書寫規范,英文字母要寫清楚、寫整齊、寫美觀,字母的大小和字母之間的距離要勻稱。書寫應做到字形秀麗漂亮,通篇勻稱和諧。
寫英文字母要掌握正確筆順。如字母i,應該先寫下面的部分,然後再打點。有的學生卻按寫漢字的習慣從上到下寫,寫快了,就會把點和下面的十筆連在量起,顯得十分別扭。字形t應為兩筆。不少人卻將兩筆合成一筆,看上去不像t,倒像l或是e,難以辨認。另外,把r寫成v,把q寫成把g,把k寫成h等等,都是中學生書寫中常見的毛病。
不少人在四線三格的練習紙上書寫尚有規矩,能按字母的占格、高低和大小要求書寫,但在白紙或橫線紙上書寫,卻顯得十分幼稚拙劣。字母或跳上跳下,或一律寫成同一高度,占上中兩格的字母與佔中下兩格的字母完全沒有高低之別。這些現象都要防止。
另外,書寫時還要注意詞與詞之間要保持一定的距離,不能緊靠在一起。字母之間的連寫也應該按照習慣,不能隨意亂來。
在一篇字數有限的作文里,我們還要注意盡量不把一個單詞拆開移行。萬一要移行,則必須以音節為單位進行,如revolution這個詞,依照音節移行的原則可以按re-,revo-, revolu-這幾種方法移行。在移行時,我們還應特別注意以下幾點:
1. 單音節詞不能移行,即使是字母較多的單音節詞,如through等也不能例外。
2.縮略詞如Mr.,Dr.等不能和後面的名字拆開移行。
縮略的專用名詞如U.K.,U.S.A等也不能拆開移行。
3.時間、量度及貨幣單位應視為一個整體;不能分開移行。如;
11:00P.M.應寫在一行內,不能將11:00和P.M.分開移行;寫38℃時,不能將38和℃分開移行。
4.由「年、月、日」表示的日期,如果必須分開移行只能將「月、日」與「年」分開。如January 6,1980不能將January和6分開移行,但可以把January 6,和1980分成兩行。
5.含雙寫輔音字母的單詞,在移行時要將輔音字母拆開。如better可拆成better,necessary可拆成necessary。
但如果雙寫輔音字母屬於詞根,後面又加了後綴,就不能將兩個輔音字母拆開。如drill加上-ing後構成了drilling,就不可以將它拆成成dril-ling,而只能拆為drilling。
例文:
1.寵物:
A Talkative Parrot
A lady worked in a company. There were a lot of shops on her way to work. One morning, when she was walking to work, she passed by a new pet shop. She was so excited when she saw a parrot sitting beside the door. She really loved birds.
When she stopped to look at the handsome bird, it said to her, "Hey, lady, you are really ugly.」
This made the lady very angry. She quickly left the shop and went to work. On her way home, she passed the same pet shop again. This time the parrot saw her again, it said immediately:
"Hey lady, you are really ugly!"
The lady tried to control herself. She walked to the shopkeeper and told him that if the parrot said it again, she would have the police come and take it away. "I'm so sorry, madam. I promise it won't happen again," the shopkeeper said.
The next morning, when the lady walked past the pet shop, she pretended that she didn』t see it. But the parrot saw her at once and said to her quickly, "Hey lady."
She stopped and looked at the bird coldly. "Yes?" she answered in an angry voice.
The bird, sitting up straight and smiling at her, said, "You know."
2.人物:
Elizabeth Bennet (伊麗莎白)
The second daughter in the Bennet family, and the most intelligent and quick-witted, Elizabeth is the protagonist of Pride and Prejudice and one of the most well-known female characters in English literature. Her admirable qualities are numerous—she is lovely, clever, and, in a novel defined by dialogue, she converses as brilliantly as anyone. Her honesty, virtue, and lively wit enable her to rise above the nonsense and bad behavior that pervade her class-bound and often spiteful society. Nevertheless, her sharp tongue and tendency to make hasty judgments often lead her astray; Pride and Prejudice is essentially the story of how she (and her true love, Darcy) overcome all obstacles—including their own personal failings—to find romantic happiness. Elizabeth must not only cope with a hopeless mother, a distant father, two badly behaved younger siblings, and several snobbish, antagonizing females, she must also overcome her own mistaken impressions of Darcy, which initially lead her to reject his proposals of marriage. Her charms are sufficient to keep him interested, fortunately, while she navigates familial and social turmoil. As she graally comes to recognize the nobility of Darcy』s character, she realizes the error of her initial prejudice against him.
Bennet家庭的第二個女兒和最聰明和機智,伊麗莎白是自豪感和偏見的主演和其中一個在英國文學的最知名的女性角色。 她令人敬佩的質量是numerous—she是可愛的,聰明,並且,在對話定義的小說,她一樣精采地交談象任何人。 她的誠實、美德和活潑的機智使她在胡話之上起來,並且彌漫她的壞行為類跳起和經常惡意的社會。 然而,她的伶俐的口舌和傾向經常做倉促評斷帶領她迷路; 自豪感和偏見本質上是故事她(和她真實的愛, Darcy)怎樣克服他們自己的個人failings—to發現浪漫幸福的所有obstacles—including。 伊麗莎白必須不僅應付一個絕望的母親,一個遙遠的父親,二非常表現的更加年輕的兄弟姐妹,並且幾位勢利,對抗的女性,她必須也克服Darcy她自己的錯誤印象,最初帶領她拒絕他的求婚。 而她駕駛家族和社會動亂,她魅力是充足保持他感興趣,幸運地。 當她逐漸來認可Darcy』s字元的貴族,她體會她對他的最初的偏見錯誤
『柒』 英語單詞競賽總結500字作文
一個星期天,吃完晚飯後,我想玩個游戲.爸爸好象猜出了我的心思,決定要和我來一場英語單詞大賽.
我們請媽媽來當裁判,我是紅方,爸爸是藍方,比賽規則很簡單:第一輪是必答題,每人回答三個問題,答對加一分,答錯或答不出都不加分.第二輪是搶答題,由於沒有搶答器,只需最先舉手,就能答題.到最後看誰的分數高,誰就是贏家.
比賽開始了,媽媽先問爸爸:"'樹葉'用英語怎麼說?""樹葉,恩......"哈哈!爸爸出師不利,答不上來了!"'學校'用英語怎麼表示?"爸爸想了一會兒,說:"school!"媽媽點了點頭:"藍方答對一題,加一分!""第三個問題:'太陽眼鏡'怎麼說?""'太陽眼鏡'用英語說應該是......"爸爸又答不上來了,急得抓耳撓腮,臉紅脖子粗.第一輪結束,爸爸只答對了一題.
輪到我了,媽媽問我:"'魚'用英語怎麼說?"fish!"我脫口而出.媽媽激動地說:"紅方加一分!"爸爸坐在一旁無奈地搖了搖頭.媽媽接著問:"'年輕'英語怎麼說?"我不假思索地回答:"young!""回答正確在加一分!'友好的'用英語怎麼說?"我歪著腦袋想了想,故意裝出想不出來的樣子,說:"友好的,友好的......"爸爸在一旁得意的笑起來:"答不出了,答不出了吧!"媽媽急得直跺腳,不停地向我使眼色.我沖媽媽笑了笑,大聲喊:"K-I-N-D!"媽媽高興得滿臉通紅,一邊拍手一邊說:"幹得好!再加一分!""看來我輸定了!"爸爸一臉沮喪地搖了搖頭.
"下面是搶答題.'校長'怎麼說?""headmaster"這一次爸爸搶答對了,加了一分"'乾燥的'怎麼表示?""dry!"我搶答對了,也加了一分.
半個小時之後,英語單詞比賽結束了,我21分,爸爸13分."我贏了!"我興奮地又蹦又跳.咦,爸爸哪兒去了?噢!原來他拿起了我的英語書在那兒補習呢!
『捌』 急求英語作文《期末開始總結》
期末總結
一轉眼,半個學期過去了。回顧這過去的半個學期,有喜有憂,現總結如下:
在日常生活上:以前我是一個衣來伸手飯來張口的「小公主」,而通過這半年老師和同學們的幫助,使我養成了獨立性,不再嬌生慣養,現在我已經能做一些力所能及的家務了。
在學習上:我深知學習的重要性。面對二十一世紀這個知識的時代,面對知識就是力量,科學技術是第一生產力的科學論斷,我認為離開了知識將是一個一無是處的廢人。以資本為最重要生產力的"資本家"的時代將要過去,以知識為特徵的"知本家"的時代即將到來。而中學時代是學習現代科學知識的黃金時代,中國的本科教育又是世界一流的,我應該抓住這個有利的時機,用知識來武裝自己的頭腦,知識是無價的。首先,合理安排時間,調整好作息時間,分配好學習、工作、娛樂的時間。時間是搞好學習的前提與基礎,效率和方法更為重要。其次,要保質保量的完成老師布置的作業,老師布置的作業一般是她多年教學經驗的總結,具有很高的價值,應認真完成。認真對待考試,考前認真復習。另外,積極閱讀有關書籍和資料,擴大自己的知識面;經常提出問題,與同學討論,向老師請教;搞好師生關系,師生相處得融洽和睦;抓住點滴時間學習一些其它專業領域的知識,知識總是有用的。在這學期的期中考試中,盡管取得一些成績,但離心中的目標還很遠,仍需繼續努力,抓緊自己的學習。知識無止境,探索無止境,人的發展亦無止境,我還有很多的知識需要學習。
以上是我對高一上學期期末一些方面的個人總結,我將結合這個小結回顧過去,確定未來的發展目標,我對未來充滿信心。自然,這需要老師們的精心培養和同學們的真誠幫助。
這個學期結束了。在這個學期里,老師為我們的學習付出了許多心血,我們也為自己的學習灑下了許多辛勤的汗水。這次期末考試,我的每門功課,都取得了比較好的成績。
總結這個學期的學習,我想,主要有以下幾個方面:
第一,學習態度比較端正。能夠做到上課認真聽講,不與同學交頭接耳,不做小動作,自覺遵守課堂紀律;對老師布置的課堂作業,能夠當堂完成;對不懂的問題,主動和同學商量,或者向老師請教。
第二,改進了學習方法。為了改進學習方法,我給自己訂了一個學習計劃:(1)做好課前預習。也就是要擠出時間,把老師還沒有講過的內容先看一遍。尤其是語文課,要先把生字認會,把課文讀熟;對課文要能分清層次,說出段意,正確理解課文內容。(2)上課要積極發言。對於沒有聽懂的問題,要敢於舉手提問。(3)每天的家庭作業,做完後先讓家長檢查一遍,把做錯了的和不會做的,讓家長講一講,把以前做錯了的題目,經常拿出來看一看,復習復習。(4)要多讀一些課外書。每天中午吃完飯,看半個小時課外書;每天晚上做完作業,只要有時間,再看幾篇作文。
第三,課外學習不放鬆。能夠利用星期天和節假日,到少年宮去學習作文、奧數、英語和書法,按時完成老師布置的作業,各門功課都取得了好的成績。參加少兒書法大賽,還獲得了特金獎。
經過自己的不懈努力,這學期的各門功課,都取得了比較好的成績。自己被評為三好學生,還獲得了「小作家」的榮譽稱號。
雖然取得了比較好的成績,但我決不驕傲,還要繼續努力,爭取百尺竿頭,更進一步,下學期還要取得更好的成績。
『玖』 英語作文:總結本學期的得與失
在五年級上抄冊著一個學期,我得少失多,都是因為我上課不聽講的原因造成的。
在這個學期里,我在前段時間表現好可以,但是到了後半學期,成績有所下降,是因為我上課不聽講,做小差,上課很苦悶,下課就很爽快,都是因為我迷上了電腦,一到星期六或星期天,我就經常早上玩很久的電腦,下午才依依不捨的離開電腦下去跟小朋友玩游戲。還有以前我在班上的成績應該可以在前十的,而現在絕對沒有了,許多老師看中我的,但現在已經對我失去了希望,這都是我的失。。。。。。
而我的得只有交了許多朋友,讓我的人緣旺了起來、快樂度增長了,開心了,除了這些我沒有得了,與上面的失比起來,實在是太渺小了,所以我決定五年級下冊這個學期一定要上課認真聽講,不開小差,做個好學!!!
『拾』 求一篇總結整個學期情況的英語作文
1.
I have a brother and a sister.I have four subjects ,they are Chinese,English,maths and politics.Of all the subjects,I like English best,so I am good at it.I like sports too.I usually play ball games and go to see the films.I like vegetalbes and fruit.
我有一個哥哥和一個姐姐。我學四門課程,語文,英語,數學和政治。我最
,所以我學得很好。我喜歡運動。我經常打球和去看電影。我喜歡吃蔬菜和水果
2.Time flies so fast, hurried imperceptibly, another year. With the ending of the senior high school entrance examination this year, I finally realized that, I will go to the graating class, perhaps, is already. The word class, I used to be a label two years ago, remember that year and it does not match the relaxed. Now re-examine this word, but not clear. For the unknown future, I always have such a loss. But for a year before, now I write this summary. In fact, this year is very magical year, even if there are too many cracks and regret. Learning, from this semester, give me a big blow or non physical course. A not perfect memories. Mr. Liu Chang also points out, this semester I am really not very stable. In fact, in my own words, is too stable, has been in the class of median, will on average. Overall, think may still miss Liu said "no breakthrough", I thought level is so narrow. But I kept trying, I believe that my hard work is not the average person can match. Some people say it's no use. I admit that some people really useless, because they don't need, they have good enough. Of course, this semester physics problems I think and mathematics. I was not very top that, more or less affect the physical. The following is a mathematical. Or that sentence: my work is not the average person can match. Life is not fair, so you have to get used to it. This is one of Gates's advice. So, now I will be calm and many. Even though sometimes more efforts are not made and others have the same results, I still would like to, at least, I tried. Chinese. The same physical, this semester's language is to enter a low ebb. The practice result again and again, every time I would push deeper trough. Dection scoring than score more, find no reason for such. Is wrong. Wrong really desperate. And the mid-term exam can finally slightly calm my heart. At the end, do not want to say, give and take is not proportional, composition, selection, also do not know to read...... English. In addition to the mid-term exam just rub a 95 point boundary, have a look again and again I unit volume, only from the back numbers. As English experimental class people, such result...... Reflection! English no progress from the middle school, my old soon be eaten...... In the sports meeting, I'm afraid I have to say, is inversely proportional to the pay and harvest. Why I practiced so much, the 800 can back nearly 20 seconds??? Hope God can see my efforts. There is a basketball, must learn to use the left hand, is a waste of time or over obstacles. Some bad things have happened in this semester, I don't want to say. The teacher said very true, I also want to understand a lot, I will try, I was really too...... Don't want to say many, I hope a better future!!!時間過得真的好快,匆匆忙忙不知不覺間,又是一年。隨著今年的中考的落幕,我也終於意識到,我即將升入畢業班,或許,是已經吧。畢業班這個詞,曾經是我兩年前的一個標簽,猶記當年與之不匹配的輕松。現在重新審視這個詞,卻不復當年的瀟灑。對於未知的未來,恐怕總是有著那樣一份茫然。而對於之前的一年,我現在就寫下這份總結。其實這一年還算是很神奇的一年,縱使有著太多的裂痕和遺憾。學習上來說,從這個學期,給我以很大打擊的恐怕非物理莫屬了。一次次不完美的回憶。
老師也指出,這個學期我真的很不穩定。其實用我自己的話說,就是太穩定了,一直處於班中
,將將上平均分。縱觀全局,覺得可能還是劉老師總說的「沒有突破」吧,本人思維水平就是這么狹隘。可是我一直在不停地努力著,我相信我的刻苦不是一般人能夠
的。有人說那沒用。我承認那對一些人真的沒用,因為他們不需要,他們已經足夠好。當然,這學期物理出現的問題我認為還是和數學有關。我數學本來就不算是特拔尖的那種,多多少少地影響了物理。那面下面就來說數學。還是那句話:我的刻苦不是一般人能夠
的。「生活是不公平的,你要去適應它。」這是蓋茨的一句忠告。所以,現在我也算是坦然了許多。即使有時再多的努力也不能取得和別人一樣的成果,
的會努力,至少,我努力了。語文。同物理一樣,這學期的語文也是進入了一個低谷吧。一次次統練成績,一次次將我推入更深的低谷。扣得分比的得分要多,去找不出這樣那樣的原因。就是錯。錯的真是挺絕望的。而期中考試終於可以稍稍安撫我的心。期末,不想說了,付出和收獲是不成正比的,作文,選擇,還有尚不知道的閱讀……英語。除了期中考試勉強擦著95分的邊,看看我一次次的單元卷,就只接從後面數分吧。身為英語
的人,這樣的成績……反思反思!英語從上中學就沒有進步,我的老本快被吃光了……在體育上,恐怕我要說,付出是和收獲成反比的。為什麼我練得這么刻苦,800竟然能退上近20秒???希望老天能看到我的努力。還有就是,籃球一定要學會用左手,要不然過障礙時太浪費時間。再有這學期發生的一些不好的事,我不想再說了。老師說的真的很有道理,我也想明白了很多,我會去嘗試的,以前的我真的是過於……不想再說很多了,希望未來的我更好!!!