導航:首頁 > 英語寫作 > 英語作文寫作平行展開法

英語作文寫作平行展開法

發布時間:2021-01-25 16:13:02

A. 英語寫作方法

英語寫作方法六大原則:
1. advanced words (高級詞彙原則)
2. adverbial advanceed (狀語提前原則)
3. phrases preferred (短語優先原則)
4.compound sentence, composite sentence and sentence of special kind (並列句、復合句和特殊句式原則)
5. long and short sentences alternately (長短句交替原則)
6. passages in paragraphs(短文分段分層原則)
高分作文的五大特性
1. sense of order (條理性: 段落完整,層次分明)
2. accuracy (准確性: 語法准確,用詞精當)
3. fluency (流暢性: 層次清晰,行文連貫)
4. conciseness & variety (簡潔、多樣性: 語言簡潔,不重復)
5. ideological content (思想性: 文章立意高,表達個人觀點內容積極向上)

過渡詞的使用
過渡詞是一種關系指引詞,一般由副詞或起副詞作用的短語承擔。此外,代詞、連詞、上下文的近義詞等也可作過渡詞。過渡詞猶如「橋梁」,在文章中發揮著連接上下文的作用,學會恰當地運用過渡詞會使文章結構緊湊,啟、承、轉、合,過渡自然,融會貫通,連成一體。
1、根據意思和作用的不同,過渡詞可以分為以下十六類:
(1)表並列關系的過渡詞:
and, also, as well, as well as, or, too, not only…but also, both … and, either … or, neither…nor等。
(2)表遞進關系的過渡詞:
besides, in addition(加之,除……之外), moreover(此外,而且), what』s more, what』s worse等。
(3)表轉折對比的過渡詞:
but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first… whereas the second, once…now, on the one hand … on the other hand, some…others等。
(4)表原因的過渡詞:
because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, e to(由於), for this reason, owing to, as far as, considering that, seeing that等。
(5)表結果的過渡詞:
so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, thereby, hence, so…that, such…that?, accordingly等。??
(6)表條件的過渡詞:
if, unless, on condition that, as/so long as等。
(7)表時間的過渡詞:
when, while, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on,? eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning / year / century, after a while, in a few days, now, presently, finally, at last, all of a sudden, form now on, at present, immediately, the moment等。
(8)表特定的順序關系的過渡詞:
first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, afterward(s)(後來), meanwhile(幾乎同時), thereafter(在那以後), last, finally, eventually(終於)等。
(9)表換一種方式表達的過渡詞:
in other words, that is to say, to put it another way等。
(10)表進行舉例說明的過渡詞:
for instance, for example, take … as an example, namely, such as, like, in other words, that is to say, that is等。
(11)表陳述事實的過渡詞:
in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。
(12)表強調的過渡詞:
certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely等。
(13)表比較、對比的過渡詞:
like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, be similar to, rather than, on the contrary, by contrast, one one hand…, on the other hand, otherwise 等。
(14)表目的的過渡詞:
for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to等。
(15)表總結的過渡詞:
in a word(總之,簡言之), in general, in short(總之), above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。
(16)表增補的過渡詞:in addition, furthermore, again, also, besides, moreover, what』s more, similarly, next, finally 等。
2、文章段落之間的邏輯關系主要由過渡詞來完成,在修辭中稱為啟、承、轉、合。「啟」就是開頭, 「承」是承接,「轉」是轉折,「合」是綜合或總結。
(1) 「啟」。
用於表示「啟」的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落或文章的開頭:
過渡詞: first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to being with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, at present, lately, currently,
過渡句:It is often said that…,
As the proverb says…,
It goes without saying that…,
It is clear/obvious that…,
Many people often ask …
(2) 「承」。
表示「承」的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落中的第一個擴展句中:
過渡詞: second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what
is worse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt,
過渡句:It is true that…,
Everybody knows that…,
It can be easily proved that…,
No one can deny that…
The reason why …is that …,
There is no doubt that…,
To take…for an example (instance) …,
We know that…,
What is more serious is that…
(3)「轉」。
用於「轉」的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落中的第二個擴展句中:
過渡詞:but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any case, at any rate(無論如何), nevertheless(雖然如此), otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, inspite of ..., yet, instead,
過渡句:I do not believe that…,
Perhaps you』ll ask why…
This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to…,
Though we are in basic agreement with …, yet differences will be found,
That』s why i feel that…
(4) 「合」。
用於「合」的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落的結論句或文章的結論段中:
過渡詞: in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking,to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, above all, thus,after all(畢竟), eventually, hence, in short, in conclusion, in a word, in sum(總之), on the whole(就整體而言), to sum up
過渡句:From this point of view …
On account of this we can find that …
The result is dependent on …
Thus, this is the reason why we must…

長短句結合
(1)句子既要生動,又要簡明扼要。
(2)在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句型,而應注意句式的變化,如長短句結合,簡單句、復雜句和復合句並用,還可以使用簡化句等,一些較復雜的結構如獨立結構,分詞結構等也可以使用。
(3)可以使用一些特殊句式,如強調句、感嘆句、倒裝句等,增強語句的表現力,以增加文章「亮點」。強烈建議:在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長後短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然後在闡述幾個要點的時候採用先短後長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。(這是我上初中時英語老師給我的,幫助了我,希望也能幫助你。。)

B. 英語作文—任務寫作,高手幫幫忙!

The bike of the goody was stolen ,and his wife wrote to the newspaper and told them ,then a lot of kind-hearted people helped them ,even somebody gave them a bike jast as they fond it 。
----------------------------------------------------------------------
After i finished the story ,i was shaked by the kind-hearted strangers 。How great they are !At this moment ,i thought a lot 。
One day ,there was something wrong with my computer ,i could not use it for writing 。So i send a list to the Internet for help ,after several seconds ,there is a kind-hearted person told me a method ,but it is not useful foe me 。Just at this moment ,i had another important thing to do immediately ,so i left my computer 。
After i finished my work ,i found there were so many people went to answer my question 。And some of them were so good that i could not decide the best answer 。Then ,i gave the choice to the mass population 。Finally ,the answer was decided because of the most votes 。Though the best answer was decided ,we could not say the others was not good ,and we should give our thanks to all of them 。
----------------------------------------------------------------------
After all ,i think that the modern society is in great need of kind-hearted people ,because there are so many people in trouble ,and with our help ,they would live a better life ,and the society would be nicer and nicer 。

C. 考研英語一作文第二段平行展開法

平行展開法是第二段中最為實用的展開方法,也是消除模板作文的最好利器。在觀點明確後,從下面給出的萬能角度中找到需要的角度,用句子進行羅列就可以了。平行展開法中可以用到的11個方面的萬能角度如下:
角度一:物質回報
【例】It can improve one』s living standards and make an easy and comfortable life.
角度二:時間角度
節約時間【例】saves time/takes up little time/occupies little time.
浪費時間【例】As we all know, the days of youth should not be frittered/idled away and time should be cherished, but wastes hours, lavishes days and even squanders years which leads us to say it kills and even murders youngster』s prime time.
角度三:效率角度
【例】makes people weary of other important things, discourages them to learn more, and they finally lose their interest to learn, which leads to their low grades/low efficiency/underachievement.
角度四:方便和快捷
【例】provides people with up-to-date, concrete and accurate and vivid information.
角度五:安全形度
【例】can secure his food and shelter.
角度六:身心健康
【例】By doing people stay healthy, and therefore prevent heart diseases, hypertension, diabetes or fattiness.
角度七:生活娛樂
【例】People go to amusement parks to relax themselves; they go to the seaside to enjoy sunshine or fresh air; they try sea food and taste local flavors; they visit places of interests in order to contact different custom; they go to museums to broaden their views on…

D. 英語作文的寫作方法及技巧

您好!
一般應做到
內容切題:不能走題、偏題
表達清楚:要讓別人知道你想說什麼,不要用你認為能看懂的漢語式英文句子
意義連貫:中英文化差異造成思維方式和文字表述方式的不同,英文表述更注重事實,所以寫英語作文不要過多的進行心理、環境描寫,120個字的作文結構要縝密,理由和例子要簡潔有力,說明問題,不要東拉西扯。
句法多變:為避免文章平淡、呆板,可使用不同的句式:強調句、倒裝句、否定句等等
語言正確:不要犯低級的語法錯誤
英語作文其實不難,如果你的英語底子不好,不太擅長使用比較復雜的語法,詞彙量也比較有限的話。建議用最簡單的句子表達意思,句式越簡單越好,能表達意思就好,一些生辟的單詞如果不會不需要直譯,可以用些片語。能表達意思就好,如果不會用用多了反而容易出錯,平時作業時可以慢慢積累,可以試著用些當作練習,考試時就不必了,原因就不多說了。我覺得要寫好英語作文還是平時多積累些,加上一些練習,比如平時可以多看些英語美文,如果有時間也可以刻意記些,時間長了語感自然就出來了,考試時有可能不知不覺的就閃出了平時的記憶。
多用連接詞!
遞進型:besides
;what's
more
;let
alone解釋型:that
is
(to
say);in
other
words轉折型:however;but;yet;otherwise列舉型:for
example;such
as
;on
the
other
hand因果型:since;therefore;as
a
result並列型:and;or;also;as
well
as總結型:in
a
word
;in
short;
on
the
whole;in
conclusion見解型:in
my
opinion;speaking;as
far
as
I
am
concerned
祝您成功

E. 初中英語作文寫作技巧

初中英語作文高分秘訣
1. 動筆之前,認真審題
《中考考試說明》指出,書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意?就是要認真審題,看到考題後,先不要急於動筆,要仔細看清題目要求的內容。在自己的頭腦中構思出一個框架或畫面,確定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下筆,看懂題意,根據圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節、主體時態、活動時間、地點等。
2. 圍繞中心,擬定提綱
書面表達評分原則有四條:
(1)內容要點;
(2)運用詞彙和結構的數量;
(3)運用語法結構和詞彙的准確性;
(4)上下文的連貫性。
由此可見,要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點,同學們要充分發揮自己的觀察力,把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。根據短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結尾,設想幾個承上啟下的連詞,將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下,形成提綱,寫時切忌結構分散,廢話連篇,嚴重跑題。書面表達,內容廣泛,題材多樣,要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記,要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況;如果是書信,則要注意書信的格式,注意短文字數不要低於或超過規定的字數太多。
3. 語言通順,表達准確
(1) 避免使用漢語式英語,盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用,以避免重復和呆板。
(2) 多用簡單句型,記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態動詞等較復雜的句型。
(3).注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。
1) 語態、時態要准確無誤。
2) 主謂語要一致,主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。
3) 注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。
4) 注意冠詞用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。
5) 注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
標點符號特別注意漢英的不同,例如:
漢語 英語
A. 句號 。 .
B. 省略號 …… …
C. 頓號 、 無
(4) 描寫人物時,要生動具體,例如:
1) 外表特徵:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2) 服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3) 內心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4) 感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5) 動作描寫:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5) 上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則,因此同學們應把寫好的句子,根據故事情節,事情發生的先後次序(時間或空間),使用一些表示並列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法:
1) 表示並列關系的過渡詞:and, as well as, or …
2) 表示轉折關系的過渡詞:but, yet, however …
3) 表示時間關系的過渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4) 表示空間關系的過渡詞:near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5) 表示比較關系的過渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as …
6) 表示對照關系的過渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7) 表示遞進關系的過渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8) 表示因果關系的過渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9) 表示解釋說明的過渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10) 表示強調的過渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11) 表示目的的過渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12) 表示列舉的過渡詞:for example , such as …
13) 表示總結性的過渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …

4. 不會表達,另闢蹊徑
中考作文給分是以要點和語言准確度而定,不以文采打分。造句越簡單准確越好,造復合句容易出錯,容易被扣分,閱卷場上有句話:「錯誤面前人人平等,文採好不加分」。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達,可採用變通的辦法,化難為易,化繁為簡。總之,所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。
(1) 迂迴而行
當漢語詞義不會用英語表達時,可以想一個與這個漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴展思路,然後從英語中找出一個與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。
(2) 小詞大用
漢語中有些語意看來很復雜很文雅,但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。
(3) 借花獻佛
有時書面表達中需要的單詞或片語或許在試卷中的其他地方出現。因為剛剛做過題,記憶猶新,那麼就可信手拈來,為我所用。
5. 錦上添花,量力而行
如果你還有時間和精力,想把書面表達寫得更好,那麼,請注意以下幾點:
(1) 句型多樣化,不要I(We)……到底,使人覺得乏味。
(2) 適當使用一些並列句或主從復合句。
(3) 進一步描繪人或事物時,適當使用定語從句。
(4) 適當使用分詞或分詞短語,烘托謂語動詞。
(5) 偶爾使用一下倒裝句,增加新鮮感。
(6) 適當調換一下狀語在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。
(7) 上下句子緊接時,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以節省篇幅。
6. 書寫工整,卷面整潔
字跡要清晰,讓閱卷人看得清楚,不可字跡潦草,難以辨認,要保持卷面的整潔。
7. 寫完之後,勿忘檢查
中考作文時,由於時間緊、內容多,同學們出錯在所難免。因此,改錯這一環節必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據要點、語言准確性、上下文的連貫性來給分,根據錯誤多少來扣分。因此,中考時花幾分鍾時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手:
(1) 格式是否有錯。
(2) 拼寫有無錯誤。
(3) 語言是否用錯。
(4) 時態、語態錯誤。
(5) 標點錯誤。
(6) 人稱是否用錯。
【注意】此時不宜在卷面上作較大的改動,以免顧此失彼,影響全局。
總之,只要平時同學們多練習寫作並有意運用上述方法和技巧,合理分配時間,在中考時一定能寫出高質量的作文,得到令人滿意的考分。

F. 英語考研作文平行展開法句子是什麼意思

因題干表述不完整,無法正常做答

G. 「水平展開」和「平行展開」的區別

水平展開,同一件事情平展到其他機種
垂直展開,一個現象往下挖掘到單一機種細節
平行展開,將垂直展開的活動 像水平展開一樣 延展到其他機種
也就是說水平展開 是淺層面 延展,平行展開 是 深層面的延展

閱讀全文

與英語作文寫作平行展開法相關的資料

熱點內容
老公的家教老師女演員 瀏覽:788
圓明園題材電影有哪些 瀏覽:806
歐洲出軌類型的電影 瀏覽:587
看電影可以提前在網上買票么 瀏覽:288
有沒有什麼可以在b站看的電影 瀏覽:280
今晚他要去看電影嗎?翻譯英文。 瀏覽:951
林默燒衣服的那個電影叫什麼 瀏覽:133
哈莉奎茵與小丑電影免費觀看 瀏覽:509
維卡克里克斯演過哪些電影 瀏覽:961
什麼算一下觀看的網站 瀏覽:710
大地影院今日上映表 瀏覽:296
朱羅紀世界1免費觀看 瀏覽:311
影院容納量 瀏覽:746
韓國最大尺度電影 瀏覽:130
八百電影 瀏覽:844
手機影院排行榜在哪看 瀏覽:182
韓國有真做的電影么 瀏覽:237
歐美愛情電影網 瀏覽:515
一個女的去美國的電影 瀏覽:9
金希貞的妻子的朋友 瀏覽:610