Ⅰ 英語寫作——句子段落篇章part two
這個什麼都沒有啊，怎麼答題呢，如果把題目完整的放上來，可能答題的人會更多一些，質量也會更好一些，有的時候也要站在答題者的角度。
Ⅱ 怎樣寫好英語段落
段落是文章的縮影。寫好了段落，就能比較成功地寫出較好的文章。經過中學英語基礎階段的學習之後，大學英語的寫作重點就從選詞造句轉移到了聯句成段和聯段成篇上。進行段落層次上的寫作訓練，是寫好英語文章的關鍵一環。下面介紹的是段落結構。
段落（ paragraph ）是由表達單一中心思想（controlling idea or central idea ）的一組句子（包括主題句 topic sentence,推展句supporting sentences及結論句concluding sentence）構成，是文章結構的基本獨立單位。本講我們將就主題句和中心思想這兩個方面展開討論。
主題句與推展句
1． 主題句
主題句（topic sentence）是表達段落主題的句子。它用以概括段落大意，要求全段其他文字都圍繞它展開。請看下例：
My mother has passed along to me certain rules for getting along with others. Don't argue with parents; they will think you don't love them. Don't argue with children; they will think themselves victimized. Don't argue with spouses; they will think you are a tiresome mate. Don't argue with strangers; they will think you are not friendly. My mother's rules, in fact, can be summed up in two words: Don't argue.
主題句中提出的 "certain rules" 指的是什麼？展開句中通過四個 "Don't argue --" 逐一加以交代。從結構來看，這是一個比較典型的段落，它包括了主題句，推展句和結論句（即本段中的末句）。
1．1 主題句的位置
主題句通常放在段落的開端，其特點是開門見山地擺出問題，然後加以詳細說明。其作用是使文章的結構更清晰，更具說服力，便於讀者迅速地把握主題和想像全段的內容。主題句可以放在段中起到承上啟下的作用，或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。但初學者比較難於掌握，因而在四級考試中，考生應盡量採用將主題句放在段落開頭的寫作手法。
例1: Our life today depends very much on energy. In towns and in villages, on farms and in factories, machines have made life easier than it used to be. The machines use energy, and energy is needed for heating, lighting, communications, carrying goods -- everything. Factories and instrial plants use a great deal of energy to make the things that we use and buy and sell.
這段文字所講的主要是能源問題。第一句就概括性地提出「我們目前的生活很大程度上依賴於能源」。而隨後出現的三句都是具體事例，對第一句進行說明和論述。我們可以斷定第一句為該段的主題句（斜體部分）。
例2: （主題句）No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements. （推展句1）Much as we may pride ourselves on our good taste, we are no longer free to choose the things we want, for advertising exerts a subtle influence on us. （推展句2）In their efforts to persuade us to buy this or that proct, advertisers have made a close study of human nature and have classified all our little weakness.
以上這段由三句話組成。第一句是主題句，直截了當指出無人不受廣告影響這個主題，接著列舉兩個推展句對其補充和支持，指出我們已無法自由選擇所需的商品，理由是廣告商已仔細研究了我們
Ⅲ 描寫不知道的英語段落
個人覺得來非常棒!源是關於毅力和成功的勵志段落,還引用了諺語.
就是最後一個句子小改一下：
Persistence, a characteristic of being great, always paves the way to success.
Ⅳ 英語段落寫作，急急急急
There is a shop at the north gate.when you go into the
park through the north gate,you will find a large square on
your right and you will see lots of trees and flowers around
you.in the west of the park,there is a playground.
Sometimes some children fly kites on it and some people
sit on the grass and chat.in the middle of the park,there is
a lake.there are many boats on it.there is a hill in the
east of the park.
The park is very beautiful.Isn't it?I love it very much
Ⅳ 英語段落的寫法
好模糊。對你的問題2中理解。
先簡單的說：
1.左對齊
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independen2.左縮進2個字元（和中文的一樣）
I do not understand ehy people confuse cat， prissy， whith rhw one I had saveral years ago. Henry. the two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine//
如果你的意思是如何寫好一個段落，那麼請繼續往下看
首先，一個段落必須有一個中心即主題思想，該中心由主題句特別是其中的題旨來表達。整個段落必須緊扣這個主題（stick or hold to the topic），這就是段落的統一性（unity）。其次，一個段落必須有若干推展句，使主題思想得到充分展開，從而給讀者一個完整的感覺，這就是完整性（completeness or adequateness）。再者，一個段落不是雜亂無章的，而是有機的組合，句子的排列順序必須合乎邏輯，從一個句子到另一個句子的過渡必須流暢（smooth），這就是連貫性（coherence）。下面我們就對這三個標准分別加以說明。
1、統一性
一個段落內的各個句子必須從屬於一個中心，任何游離於中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。請看下例：
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we』d always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主題句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。文中出現兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，這一段是講的是Joe and I ，中間出現一個Bella是不合適的。還有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner這一句更是與主題句不相關。考生在四級統考的作文卷上常常因為造出irrelevant sentences（不相關語句）而丟分，值得引起注意。再看一個例子：
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一個是My mother was a premature baby。
從上面兩個例子可以看出，native speakers同樣會造出來irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果這種句子多了，造成偏題或離題，那問題就更嚴重了。
2、完整性
正象我們前面說得那樣，一個段落的主題思想靠推展句來實現，如果只有主題句而沒有推展句來進一步交待和充實，就不能構成一個完整的段落。同樣，雖然有推展句，但主題思想沒有得到相對圓滿的交待，給讀者一種意猶未盡的感覺。這樣的段落也不能完成其交際功能。例如：
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work ---- you proce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
本段的主題句是段首句。本段的兩個推展句均不能回答主題句中提出的問題。什麼是「a mind in turmoil」（心境不平靜）Physical work又如何能改變這種情況？為什麼它能起therapy的作用？讀者得不到明確的答案。由於四級統考的作文部分只要求寫一篇100～120個詞的三段式短文，每一段只有大約40個詞左右，因此，要達到完整就必須盡可能地簡明。例如：
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
段首句所表達的主題思想是一種看法，必須有具體事例加以驗證。上述兩個推展句只是在文字上對主題作些解釋，整個段落內容空洞，簡而不明。如果用一兩個具體的例子的話，就可以把主題解釋清楚了。比如下段：
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can』t swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?
3、連貫性（coherence）
連貫性包括意連和形連兩個方面，前者指的是內在的邏輯性，後者指的是使用轉換詞語。當然這兩者常常是不可分割的。只有形連而沒有意連，句子之間就沒有內在的有機的聯系；反之，只有意連而沒有形連，有時行文就不夠流暢。
1）、意連
段落中句子的排列應遵循一定的次序，不能想到什麼就寫什麼。如果在下筆之前沒有構思，邊寫邊想，寫寫停停，那就寫不出一氣呵成的好文章來。下面介紹幾種常見的排列方式。
A．按時間先後排列（chronological arrangement）
B. 按位置遠近排列（spatial arrangement）
C. 按邏輯關系排列（logical arrangement）
a. 按重要性順序排列（arrangement in order of importance）
b.由一般到特殊排列（general-to-specific arrangement）
c. 由特殊到一般排列（specific-to-general arrangement）
2）、形連
行文的邏輯性常常要靠適當的轉換詞語及其他手段來實現。
4、有損連貫性的幾種情況：
考生在寫作中經常出現下面幾種錯誤：
1、不必要的改變時態，
2、不必要的改變單復數，
3、不必要的改變人稱
因此寫作中，一定要注意時態，人稱以及數的變化是否正確，要注意保持一致。
Ⅵ 英語段落寫作
Now in the today's society,the phenomenon of the corruption overflowed.As far as I am concerned,the reason for it is that many penple relax vigilance.The rensons for it are listed as follow.Firstly,weather a state is good or not depend on the common people's estimation.As a famous saying goes,"If you are not inquire into it, you will not have a right to speak".So only the common people improve vigilance do they estimate correctly,which can rece the phenomenon of the corruption .Secondly,only under the common people's supervision, can the government serve his people better.After all ,it is disgraced for they to do some corruption behaviours .If everyone improve vigilance,the government dare not do some things that is harm to people .Thirdly,everyone should improve vigilance and stop the bad behaviours as soon as he find the corruption behaviours ,which can avoid the further development of the corruption.
Ⅶ 英語段落寫作的結構要點 要英文回答
The structure of an English essay is separated into three parts.The introction,the body paragraphs and the conclusion.
The introction is where you introce your ideas and give an overview of what you are going to write about.By reading this,the examiner should have a good idea of the content of your essay.
Then you go on to explain your ideas in detail.It is perferred to have one idea per paragrph.Each paragraph should consist of a main statement,an explination and an example to support your idea.
Finally,the essay should end in a conclusion.A conclusion is where all your ideas are summerised and reinforced.The conclusion should end with something that leaves the readers thinking.
Ⅷ 求精彩的英文人物外貌描寫，最好是名著里的！
（1）《呼嘯山莊·中英對照》——Mr. Heathcliff and I entered the huge maindoor. It could have been any Yorkshire farmhouse kitchen, except that there wasno sign of cooking, and no farmer sitting at the table. Mr. Heathcliffcertainly does not look like a farmer. His hair and skin are dark, like agipsy's, but has the manners of a gentleman. He could perhaps take more carewith his appearance, but he is a handsome. I think he is proud, and alsounhappy. 希斯克利夫先生和我進到極大的正房。它很像是約克郡一個普通農家的廚房，只是沒有做飯的跡象，桌旁也沒坐著農夫。希斯克利夫先生看上去顯然不像個農夫，他的頭發和皮膚是深色的，像吉卜賽人，但有紳士的派頭。他還能對自己的外表再多上點兒心，但已經算得上英俊了。我覺得他很高傲，而且鬱郁寡歡。
（2）360doc個人圖書館——女性描寫1：Alice is 20 years old. She is a little overweight. But she is tall andfairskinned, so she looks healthy. Her hair is jet-blacked and straight. Shehas a very pleasant smile and she always has a twinkle in her eye. Whensmiling, Alice』s dimples will appear who receive them feel very special. Whenshe works, she always put on her glasses. She always dress very elegant andtidy. Because of her fair skin and kindness, we all like her very much. 艾麗絲20歲了，她有一點胖，但是由於她很高而且皮膚白皙，所以看上去很健康。她有一頭烏黑的直發。她時常燦爛地微笑，兩只大眼睛閃閃發光。露出兩個特別的酒窩。她工作的時候，總是戴上眼鏡。她的穿著優雅而整潔。由於她很善良，我們都很喜歡她。（【評析】用並列連詞和連接副詞及片語連接兩個獨立的句子，使之成為並列句。在寫作時根據相鄰的兩個句子所包含的觀點選擇適合的連詞也會令文章生動。）
女性描寫2：While her physical beauty was astounding, it was herinvisible beauty that I shall always remember. She really cared about otherpeople and was an extremely talented listener. Her sense of humour couldbrighten you entire day and her wise words were always exactly what you neededto hear. She was not only admired but also genuinely respected by members ofboth sexes. 盡管她美得驚人，但我更對她的內在美記憶猶新。她總是很關心身邊的人，並且擅長傾聽。她的幽默感總是可以使你整天都感到非常開心，而她智慧的話語更是能道破天機。無論男人或是女人，不僅羨慕她，而且打心裡尊重她。
男性描寫1：He was standing on a raised platform in a corner ofthe room.he was a wizened old man with wrinkled face and a sad expression overhis shoulder was thrown a rough brown coat, all torn and full of holes, histhick boots were old and patched ;and with one hand he leant on a rough stick, while with theother he held out his battered hat for money. 他站在屋子角落一個支高的檯子上，他是一個老人，滿臉的皺紋和悲傷的表情。他的肩膀上搭著一件粗糙，破爛的棕色外套，他的厚靴子上也打了補丁，他用一個手倚著一根拐杖，另一隻手拿他的破帽子討錢。
男性描寫2：Robert is 21 years old. He is about 5 feet, 9 inchestall. His face is long and narrow. His eyes are green. His hair is light brown.He doesn』t look very Italian. He smiles a little and usually has a friendlylook on his face. He isn』t fat and he isn』t thin. His build is average. 羅伯特21歲了，他身高大約5.9英尺，臉瘦瘦長長的，綠眼睛。淺棕色的頭發，看起來不大像義大利人。他總是面帶微笑，非常友好。他不胖也不瘦，中等身材。
（3）《德伯家的苔絲》——On an evening in the latter part of May amiddle-aged man was walking homeward from Shaston to the village of Marlott, inthe adjoining Vale of Blakemore or Blackmoor. The pair of legs that carried himwere rickety, and there was a bias in his gait which inclined him somewhat tothe left of a straight line. He occasionally gave a smart nod, as if inconfirmation of some opinion, though he was not thinking of anything inparticular. An empty egg-basket was slung upon his arm, the nap of his hat wasruffled, a patch being quite worn away at its brim where his thumb came intaking it off. Presently he was met by an elderly parson astride on a graymare, who, as he rode, hummed a wandering tune. 五月下旬的一個傍晚，一位中年男子正從沙斯頓趕回自己的家鄉—馬洛特。該村莊坐落在與沙斯頓毗鄰的布雷克摩(或布萊克摩)山谷里。這位中年人拖著兩條蹣跚的腿，步態傾斜，整個身子總是向左邊歪著。他偶爾也把頭輕巧地一點，彷彿是對什麼事情表示贊同，其實他什麼都沒想。他胳膊上挎著一隻盛雞蛋的空籃子，帽子的絨面皺皺巴巴的，摘帽子時大拇指接觸的那個地方已經磨損了一大塊。不一會兒，一個騎著灰色母馬、隨口哼著小調的老牧師迎面而來。
Ⅸ 描寫學習英語的段落
寫出好段落語句需要學會觀察：
一是多看，二是多練。這里的「多看」即指回多觀察。這就說明答：要寫好語句，要掌握嫻熟的語句寫作手法，就要多觀察，學會觀察，觀察是寫作的必要前提和基礎。
(一)觀察決不要僅僅局限於「用眼看」。廣義的更有實際意義的觀察是指要將人的五官全部調動起來：用耳朵去聆聽，用身體去感受，更重要的是要用心、用腦去思索，這樣的觀察才會更加細膩、深刻。
(二)觀察過程中要注意運用好「爛筆頭」。俗語說得好：好記性不如爛筆頭。好多同學每天看到的挺多，思索的也挺多，但是不善於隨時記下來，這樣就會使觀察到的材料付之東去，許多有價值的東西也會白白浪費掉。
(三)觀察尤其要注意持之以恆。你要將觀察生活、思索生活貫穿於你生活的每一天，這樣你才會寫出妙文佳作來。 學會觀察對於寫好段落語句有著巨大的奠基和推動作用，離開了觀察，你往往會感到難以下筆。願你學會觀察，不斷培養，提高贊成的觀察能力，在寫作實踐中取得得大的進步。
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