『壹』 2010宣武區中考二模英語作文範文
3、書面表達。(計10分)
假如你叫李平。最近，你就使用電子詞典的問題調查了各方面的意見(見下表)。現在，請你根據表格中的信息用英語給某報社編輯寫一封信。
注意：1.信件須包括寫信原由及表格所列內容;
2.書信格式正確;
3.書寫整潔;
4.詞數在80個左右。
生詞提示：electronic adj.電子的 explanation(S)n.解釋，說明
發表意見者 對使用電子詞典的不同意見
同學 有用,方便,節省查閱時間
家長 便於攜帶,多數家庭買得起
英語教師 對單詞的解釋太簡單,不該使用
本人 會使我們變懶惰,不該使用
Dear Editor，
Recently(最近) I made a survey(做調查) about the use of the electronic dictionary.My classmates think that the electronic dictionary is useful，convenient and it can help to save time looking up the words.The parents also think the electronic dictionary is easy to carry and most families can afford it.But my English teacher doesn』t think we should use it，because she/he thinks its explanations for the words are too simple.I suppose the electronic dictionary will make us lazy and we shouldn』t use it.
Yours，
Li Ping
4.看圖作文
同學們，看到下面的四幅圖片及相應的報道後，你感到最擔憂的是哪兩種情形?請簡述你擔憂的理由並提出建議或希望。
要求：⒈ 從所給素材中任選兩種情形進行闡述，不可多選或少選。
⒉ 條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確;
⒊ 詞數 80 ～ 100。
參考詞彙： 建議 suggest v. suggestion n. 氣體 gas n. 污染 pollution n.
THE POLLUTIONS
① One third of the world"s people don"t have enough clean water.
② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.
④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.
這道看圖作文題，主題和圖片連接得不是很緊密。從考查的形式上來說，雖是看圖，實質上卻屬於提示性的作文。這個作文應該結合個人的觀點，選擇的餘地還是很大的。做這個題應該注意幾個方面：
1、認真讀題。注意，題目雖然給了四幅圖，但是卻只要求寫其中的兩個就行。
2、題意要求的是闡述個人的觀點-最擔憂的兩種情形。而不是對圖片進行描述。
3、結合所給的提示。提示中，對每種污染都進行了闡述，考生可以這些描述進行寫作。
4、注意字數，語法，拼寫等，避免錯誤。
下面是兩個例文，大家可以參考一下。
範文：觀點一
The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can"t live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or proce more waste gas. We"d better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.
範文：觀點二
The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People can"t sleep well if there is too much noise. That"s why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldn"t make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isn"t allowed, they will be fined, and we can also proce the cars which can"t make terrible noise.
The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of stbins or paper bags.
【九、夢想和未來】
這是一個老話題，中考常考，難度較小。
1.我的夢想是當一名醫生(my dream is doctor)
I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: to be a doctor. Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain. May let the human change the health. At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully. Therefore, I hoped future I might be a doctor.
2.以後十年內我的生活(MY LIFE IN TEN YEARS)
In ten years,I think I "ll be a reporter.I wiil live in an apartement with my sister.Because I don"t like living alone. And I can play with her inth aparement.So in ten years,I willba a good reporter.I will meet a lot of interesting and faous people and I willgo to another places on business.In ten years,i will have many different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle.I think I will go shopping with my sister as long as I have time.And I will go to london on my vacation.
So,my life in ten years will be better and better!
3.新學期的打算(The plan for the new term)
Another new term comes again,so i should have a study plan to promot myself.
Firstly, I descide to finish my homework more carefully than before. And pay more attention to the knowledge which i didn"t know it clearly.
Secondly,I will do a lot of reading to widen the range of my knowledge, and try to combine thoery to practice.
Finally,I will learn to adjust to be more positive and more helpful.
That"s what I plant to do in a new term.
【十、煩惱篇】
這類作文難度較大，掌握基本句式，背誦範文非常必要。
典型例句：
1.I am sorry to hear that……
2.you shoud learn to forget……
3.you had better……
4 you shoud learn to relax
5.you can ask your teacher for help
例文：
(陝西省卷)假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的筆友Alice 給你發來的e-mail,請你根據e-mail 的內容給她寫一封回信，與她交流看法，並幫她排憂解難。提示詞語：listen to, mother"s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile 寫作要求：1.語句通順，書寫工整;2.可用所給提示詞語，也可以適當發揮;3.詞數在60-80左右
Dear Han Mei,
I"m afraid I"ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, "Be careful while crossing the street." "Put on more clothes." "Did you do a good job at school?" and so on. I"m annoyed(煩惱)。What shall I do?
Alice
範文：
Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas/advices for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it』s not a good way, but it shows your mother』s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother"s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.
If your mother doesn』t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.