英語寫作賞析

⑴ 賞析英語作文

Of all the subjects the first the last one of the most 最高級
Though neither ……nor 關聯詞
lively and interesting kind and friendly形容詞貼切符合教師身份內
enjoy 含享受之意容

⑵ 評析英語作文

首先的你的用詞不夠好，大量口語話的用詞和拼寫，在書面表達這是應該避免的。例如，首句中的many可以改為a plenty of 或者numerous；第二行中的mom最好寫成mother；另外你用and作為開頭太多了，或許這樣可以調節句式，但是畢竟不是正式用法，你可以把and小寫，直接作為並列從句。
第二，你的文章不是太簡潔，雖然寫夠了70詞，但是並沒有傳達出很多信息。例如，「she asked me for the resons and telled me to believe ···」一句，ask實際就有tell的意思，你可以把它改成，she ask me the reason and to beliece myself.
第三，你的文章邏輯性不強，也就是說連接詞用的太少，句子間的過渡太突兀了。例如，首句你可以寫成when I got "c "in a English test,I was very nervous.and I cried in my bedroom. At that moment my mom came in.你可以用連接詞把文章整個串起來，這樣的話時態就比較清晰，句式也復雜，邏輯性就強了。

⑶ 英語作文賞析一句話的結構

自己寫吧！
1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，…
3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地說……
4.As the proverb says， 正如諺語所說的，
5.It has to be noticed that… 它必須注意到，…
6.It's generally recognized that… 它普遍認為…
7.It's likely that … 這可能是因為…
8.It's hardly that… 這是很難的……
9.It's hardly too much to say that… 它幾乎沒有太多的說…
10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特別注意的是
11.There's no denying the fact that…毫無疑問，無可否認
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 沒有什麼比這更重要的是…
13.what's far more important is that… 更重要的是…

⑷ 英語作文欣賞某人80詞左右

My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.
Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.
Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.
This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

⑸ 英語作文賞析，急。

這篇文好方面應該是思路清晰,觀點全面深刻.

全文用了whenever 引導的狀語從句， 虛擬語氣從句（但是用的是一般時態 ）， disposable chopsticks 指的是一次性筷子，翻譯得很到位，出彩句：I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help our world a better place to live in.其中用了多個從句和不定式
不足的:
有部分語法和邏輯錯誤:
I should try to use both sides of a piece of paper .paper在這里是不可數名詞，表統稱；a piece of paper 才是表達紙張的意思
I will not use( something )like paper cups and disposable chopsticks beacuse they're made of wood.
For me,I can try to save electricity in my daily life.前面的everyone是can 後面的I 最好保持一致
For example,if i am the last person to leave the classroom,I will always remember to turn off the lights不一定是晚上才開燈

PS.在中國式作文是很不錯的一篇文了 ，但是以外教的眼光來看就顯得有點「中式」英語.也許是被外教退文退得多了，挑了很多毛病而不是好的方面來說 還請見諒哈~

⑹ 4級英語作文要範文和評析

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[BSR96]: A. Bonner, A. Shruf, and S. Rozen. LabFlow-1: A Database Benchmark for High Throughput Workflow Management. In Proc. of the 5th. Intnl. Conference on Extending Database Technology,pages 25-29, Avignon, France, March 1996

⑺ 用英語寫一篇外國文學作品賞析，800字左右

最好LZ 要自己花點心思，哪怕參考現成的文章但是加上自己的理解也成，最起碼要挑本自己喜歡的書？

我很喜歡簡愛，所以下面這篇簡愛的賞析供LZ參考。不是我寫的，是外國人寫的。
這書真好^_^

Jane Eyre is the rare book that manages to be good by virtue of ineffable charm alone, despite not having very much going for it in terms of overall plot.
There is something more going on in Jane Eyre than mere charm, true, something authentically powerful--if, as will be see, brief. But the power of Jane Eyre has less to do with the conflict of great forces that typifies great works of literature, and more to do with the subtle irritation of a delayed resolution to its most important episode. Instead of a race between values through the people who represent those values, Jane Eyre tasks us with a race to turn its pages and find out its secrets--still a race, but a race whose victory, barring the boredom of the reader, is assured.

The word "episode" above is a clue to the larger problem. Jane Eyre is a novel built on episodes, loosely tied together by their common, likable and eponymous protagonist. Jane Eyre is an orphan in the care of her brutal relatives, who despise her e to her outspoken character combined with her low social station. They eventually foist her off on the grim boarding school of Lowood.

As a narrator, Jane is ideal: objective enough to provide us with a good account of events, outspoken enough to bump the plot along whenever it needs bumping, and virtuous enough never to frustrate our expectations. Often enough, our viewpoint is hers; only we're not quite so witty and we're without quite so apt an eye for injustice--again making Jane, in page-after-page of her revelations, a delight to read. The novel's rhetoric is also inventive, accomplishing its routine narrative tasks via devices more elaborate than are probably necessary, yet with something fresh about each.

Jane's attempt to chide herself into abandoning her interest in her brooding employer, Edward Rochester, takes the form of a contest between two mental pictures, and the inevitable attempt by Rochester to coax out Jane's feelings involves an elaborate and well-detailed ruse involving disguises and a gypsy fortuneteller. The book, and its narrator, both definitely have charm: we like Jane, we like what she says, and we want to see what she will say next.
What We Like About Jane Eyre

Where we like Jane the most is in the book's principal episode, which involves Jane working as a governess for a young charge of dark, Byronic Rochester amidst the mysteries of his dark, Byronic estate Thornfield--all revealed, of course, after many dark, Byronic outbursts of extreme sentiments that Charlotte Bronte probably enjoyed writing very much. And, Rochester is actually enjoyable: a match for Jane in terms of wit, impressive in his authority, and sympathetic in his vulnerability. He's likable enough, in fact, that once Jane begins to speculate on the possibility of becoming closer still to her employer, we realize that we like the idea of these two becoming a pair. Suddenly, the story floods with tension. We're no longer reading just because we happen to like Jane, but because we're invested in a likable outcome.
More: we're invested in a likable outcome that seems increasingly threatened by Rochester's secrets. Bronte hints at these with the facility of a mystery novelist: she knows the ideal times to drop a scream from the walls or a mysterious guest from the past into our laps. In her continued ability to strain, felicitously, at the bounds of rhetoric, she raises the novel to a level no mystery writer usually wants to attempt.

And the conclusion, when it finally hits, is worth the wait--not only raising the level of tension and rhetoric, but also the thematic level of the book as well. The Rochester episode is the story that everyone remembers from Jane Eyre, and the one part of the book that deserves to be called truly great.

But then there's the rest of the book, which isn't great; it's just there. Jane's school is infested with typhus, Jane meets her long-lost cousin, Jane is tempted to run off and become a missionary: really, how does this stack up to Thornfield? And why does it need to be there at all, other than filling in a necessary gap in time before Rochester can come storming back in on his black horse (figuratively, of course, considering certain events in the plot) and make the story interesting again?

It needs to be there, one might think, because the story isn't about Rochester and Jane; it's about Jane--which would be true. But, if the story is about Jane alone, relegating Rochester to a brief but important incident in Jane's life, then it's not a great story. With her her likable, narratorial qualities, Jane may be a great narrator, but she makes an extremely lousy dynamic character, even if she is involved in a typhus scare.

Jane is objective, outspoken, and virtuous throughout, which means she's not particularly susceptible to temptations (except those Rochester provides). That means that Rochester is crucial to the real, emotional conflict of the book--crucial to the power of the book. The rest is just Jane being Jane, which may be fun to read, but it doesn't intersect with any real threat, any real conflict of values that lends a great book its electric charge.

So what the novel has to its name is rhetorical brilliance, a good episode that doesn't take up nearly a large enough percentage of the page count, and a lot of needless distractions.
There are great books that are structurally unbalanced, even structurally deranged, Don Quixote being maybe the prime example, but even Don Quixote is unusually good about keeping its Quixote chapters strictly separate from its "filler" chapters, allowing the knight to remain his untarnished self throughout its plot, and throughout our memories.

Whereas Bronte, in taking as her narrative logic an episodic structure united by an ideal protagonist, gives her book a larger measure of consistency at the expense of diluting its overall strength. Thus Jane Eyre remains a beautiful sandcastle while it's being experienced, but not one of which much (save its brief heart) remains after the tides of time and memory crash down over its Thornfieldean parapets.

⑻ 英語作文賞析怎麼寫呀

畫出語法、短語

⑼ 大學英語作文評析的目錄

第一部分 議論和說明文
1 The Importance of Confidence
2 Winners and Losers
3 My View on Opportunity
4 No Peace,No Development
5 Technology
6 Science and Technology
7 Space Researdh
8 The Internet and US
9 How Does the Computer Change Our Life
10 Computer Crime
11 Online Chatting
12 My View on China's Unemployment Today
13 Environmental Pollution
14 Traffic and Population
15 Western Regions Development
16 The Best Preparation for Life and Career
17 Job Interviews
18 My Ideal Job
19 Migrant Workers,a Blessing or a Curse?
20 Re-employment of laid-off Workers
21 A Boom in Alt Ecation
22 Project Hope
23 How to Do Well in an Exaamination
……
第二部分應用文
第三部分圖表作文