A. 初中英語作文教學淺談
[初中英語作文教學淺談]初中英語作文教學淺談英語課程標准明確提出,基礎教育階段英語課程的任務是:激發和培養學生學習英語的興趣,使學生樹立自信心…使學生掌握一定的英語基礎知識和聽、說、讀、寫技能,形成一定的綜合語言運用能力;…為他們的終身學習和發展打下良好的基礎,初中英語作文教學淺談。英語寫作是初中英語教學的一大重點。每年中考,英語書面表達所佔的分值都不低,可以這樣說,中考英語就是競爭英語寫作,誰的寫作水平高,他的英語分數自然遙遙領先,勝人一籌。英語寫作也是一大難點。就象漢語寫作一樣,學生具有畏難情緒。面對作文,許多學生往往望而卻步,一臉茫然。如何輔導學生書面表達,寫出語法現范、內容健康,語言地道的優秀作文呢?一、作文輔導的過程應由簡到難,循序漸進其實,作文輔導的過程貫穿於整個英語教學的始終。學生從初中一年級的簡單的回答問題、日常對話到初三能夠流暢連貫地表達自己的思想,這其中都包括作文教學的成份。學生只有熟練掌握每一個句型結構,每一個話題,才能夠寫出准確的句子來。而句子是構成作文的基本單位。眾所周知,聽說讀寫四大技能中,聽和讀是輸入,而說和寫屬於輸出。沒有大量的輸入,是不會有靈活的"輸出"的。因此從初一年級開始,就應該扎扎實實,一步一個腳印地訓練學生的聽說讀寫基本技能,為學生的寫作打下扎實的基礎。作文訓練的過程也是由易到難,循序漸進的。剛開始通常要求學生寫簡單的幾句話即可。比如:Hello!MynameisGina.Thisismyfamily.Thisismyfather.Thisismymother.Thesearemybrothers…經過幾年的訓練,逐漸培養學生學會寫三五個句子,十多個句子,以至更多,作文指導《初中英語作文教學淺談》。最終達到用英語這門語言簡單的表達自己的思想。作文訓練重在堅持和積累,重在英語文化的潛移默化的熏陶。《英語新目標》教材以單元編排,每個單元一個話題,每個單元都由易到難,最後落實到以話題為主的書面寫作上來。這些話題生動有趣,貼近學生生活,題材廣泛,給學生以發揮的空間和餘地。每個學生可根據個人特長以及自己對同一事物的不同見解,寫出與眾不同,富有個人特色的作文來。因此決不能因為趕進度或別的什麼原因忽略甚至刪除這一階段的書寫訓練,因為欲速則不達。別以為書面表達是中考的事情,到了初三再練習吧。要知道,任何知識都是一個長期的積累的過程,語言學習更是如此,決不可能速成。二、階段訓練與專項訓練相結合,大面積提高作文質量初三年級是學生初中的關鍵階段,是學生一生的一個重要轉折點。這一階段抓得好,學生的寫作水平會有突飛猛進的提高。英語教師在這一階段就要進行專項與綜合兩個方面的訓練。教師本人要做到心中有數,有的放失。前半年時間可要求學生堅持寫英語日記,一般每兩天一篇,題目自定,對學生的日記寫作要求可不必過高,我的要求把這兩天英語課堂上所學的單詞或短語,靈活地運用到日記中。或者寫自己的想法和心理話,總之,內容隨意,由學生自己安排。我主要要求人人必須動起手來。動手寫作,讓學生有機會將所學的語言知識充分地利用起來;動手寫作,讓學生主動地思考句子的結構時態;動手訓練,使學生養成了勤於動腦,勤查工具書的習慣。有一種見人見事都想用英語翻譯出來的沖動和慾望。這期間學生的作文一定是豐富多彩,富有個人特色的。待學生對作文有了一定的興趣,扎實的基礎,嘗到了一定的甜頭之後,是要把這匹脫韁的野馬"收"回的時候了。後半年要依據中考類型進行針對性的專項訓練:看圖作文,提示作文,圖表作文,綜合文體作文等等。綜合文體作文又包括,記敘文、描寫文,說明文,應用文。應用文又包括書信、日記、通知、便條…等等要有目的有系統地進行訓練。每四天左右要求學生寫一篇限題作文,每次給學生一個題目,或者用資料書上的作文題,或者往年中考作文,要求學生寫作。並由科代表按時收交。〔初中英語作文教學淺談〕【征服畏懼、建立自信的最快最確實的方法,就是去做你害怕的事,直到你獲得成功的經驗。】
B. 關於中學英語作文題材
有人請教一位哲學大師"人活著靠什麼呢?" 哲學大師:"呼吸." "那麼,"那個人再問:"呼吸又為了什麼?" 哲學大師風趣盎然:"呼者,為出一口氣;吸者,為爭一口氣." 妙不可言!人生漫漫長路,活著的時候,每分每秒都在呼吸,每年每月都在奮斗,拼搏,為名也好,為利也好,為生存也罷,有些人難道不是在為出一口氣?有些人不也在為爭一口氣嗎?俗話說:"成敗在 呼吸之間",一呼吸正描繪出一種人生! 一.你的銀行 假如有一家銀行,每天在你的帳戶里存入86400元,限令你必須把這筆錢當天用完,沒有用完第二天自動取消.你會怎麼辦? 其實,有這樣一家銀行----它的名字啊時間.它每天給你86400分鍾.每天夜裡把你沒有妥善利用的時間銷掉,不準你把余數記帳,也不準透支,那是你自己的損失.不能回顧到昨天,明天也不能預支.我們的責任是用寶貴的一分一秒,充分享用時間給我們的一切. 二.《生命中的大石塊》文摘與賞析一天,時間管理專家為一群商學院的學生講課。 「我們來做個小測驗」專家拿出一個加侖的廣口瓶放在桌子上,隨後,他取出一堆拳頭大小的石頭,把它們一塊塊地放進瓶子里,直到石塊高出瓶口再也放不下去了。他問:「瓶子滿了嗎?」所有的學生應道:「滿了。」他反問:「真的?」說著他從桌子下取出了一桶礫石,倒了一些進去,並敲擊玻璃壁使礫石填滿石塊間的間隙。「現在瓶子滿了嗎?」這一次學生有些明白了,「可能還沒有。」一位同學應道。「很好!」他伸手從桌下又拿出一桶沙子,把它慢慢倒進玻璃瓶子。沙子填滿了石塊的所有間隙。他又一次問學生:「瓶子滿了嗎?」「沒滿!」學生們大聲說,然後專家拿起一壺水倒進玻璃瓶直到水平與瓶口齊平。他望著學生,「這個例子說明了什麼?」一個學生舉手發言:「它告訴我們:無論你的時間表多麼緊湊,如果你真的再加把勁,你還可以干更多的事!」「不。」專家說,「那還不是它的喻意所在。這個例子告訴我們,如果你不先把大石塊放進瓶子里,那麼你就再也無法把它們放進去了。那麼,什麼是你生命中的『大石塊』呢?你的信仰、學識、夢想?或是和我一樣傳道授業解惑?切切記得先去處理這些『大石塊』,否則你會終生錯過了」。 ——摘自《青年博覽》2000。6 藍欣 譯賞析:《生命中的大石塊》是一篇寓含哲理的敘事短文。一位時間管理專家領著學生做了一個實驗。通過實驗,學生和專家都談了對生活的感受。一個學生發言說:「它告訴我們:無論你的時間表多麼緊湊,如果你真的再加把勁,你還可以干更多的事!」這個感受很好,它有兩層意思:一是要擠時間,正如魯迅說:時間就像海綿里的水,只要你肯擠,它總是有的。擠時間就可以在有限的時間內辦更多的事,提高時間利用率;二是科學安排才能更好地擠出時間來:就像往瓶子里裝石塊,先裝大的,其次裝小的,然後填沙子、添水。科學利用時間,才能擠出更多的時間,辦更多的事。但專家卻不同意,因為他的感受更深刻,他把裝瓶子與人生選擇聯系起來,告訴我們一個深刻的人生哲理——人的生命中,什麼是最重要的、將決定你前途命運的「大石塊」呢?諸如:你的信仰、理想。你的學識、本領。。。。。。一定要先把那些重要的「大石塊」解決好,然後再一步步去解決人生其它一些問題,切莫被眼前的小沙子遮住視線,或纏住身軀,那樣你的人生「瓶子」將裝不進太多的東西,也將毫無價值。 《語文報》賞析 2001。4。9 三.另一片風景希爾.西爾弗斯在《失去的部件》一書中講述了這樣一個童話一般的故事,一個圓環失去了一個部件,於是它旋轉著去尋找這個部件.因缺少這個部件,它只能非常緩慢地滾動,這樣它就有機會欣賞沿途的鮮花,並可以與陽光對話,同蝴蝶吟唱,和地上的小蟲聊天......這些都是它完整無缺,快速滾動時所無法注意,沒有享受到的.有一天,這個圓環終於找到了丟失的那個部件,它很高興、又開始滾動起來.可是,因為完整,滾得太快,它失去了所以的朋友,不能再從容地賞花、也沒有機會聊天,一切都變得稍縱即逝......這個圓環最後在一片草地上丟下了那個找到的部件,又成為一個有缺陷但己快樂的圓.四.花籽的命運狂風過後,兩粒花籽從遠處飄來.一粒落在山邊的土地上,一粒落在山崖石縫里.不久,山邊的這粒花籽吐出了在翠綠的嫩芽.由於土地、光線充足,它迅猛地成長,很快就花朵滿枝了.石縫里的這粒花籽,經過痛苦的掙扎,好不容易才露出瘦弱的芽兒.山邊的這棵花看在眼裡,樂在心頭,心想:這大概就是命運吧.強烈的優越感使它氣十足.它很瞧不起石縫里的這粒花籽,時不時用陰陽怪氣的腔調對其諷刺挖苦.日子一天天地對去,不知不覺間,石縫里這粒花籽也開出許多花兒來,而且十分掄眼.從此,爬山鍛煉身體的人們,經過這里時無不駐足觀賞,並大為贊嘆--這花真頑強,太可愛了!這下山邊的花可受不了了,悻悻地說:"我長得這么漂亮,你們卻視而不見,偏偏欣賞起它來,真是可笑!"然而,人們依然不去理會它,因為它太普通了. 其實,人生何嘗不是如此----命運是無法選擇的,但卻是可以改變的.沉醉於優越的生活條件,往往孕育出平庸,而坎坷的經歷往往成就了輝煌. 五.痛苦的理由列印度有一個古老的故事,說佛祖為了消除人們的疾苦,就從人間選了100個自以為最痛苦的人,讓他們把自己的痛苦寫在紙上.寫完後佛祖說:"現在請你們把手中的紙條相互交換一下."結果,這100個人交換看了別人的紙條這後,每個人都非常驚奇.過去,總以為自己是最"不幸"的人,現在才知道很多人比自己更好痛苦,那還有什麼消沉的理由呢?. 六.百合花有個鄉人,大年初一早晨打開門,發現門前有一個裝骨灰的陶罐.他知道這是鄰居對他的詛咒,兩家世代有仇.他沒有怒氣沖沖地找上門去,而是拿著陶罐,到田裡裝了泥土,並種了一棵百合花......有一天,花開了,他悄悄地把這盆花送到了仇人的家門口,就在那一天,仇人羞愧地來到這位大度的鄉人家裡道歉.人心是易動的,要懂得怎樣去打動它,詛咒的泥土,也能開出百合. 七.等待三天應邀訪美有女作家在紐約街頭遇著一位賣花的老太太.這位老太太穿著相當破舊,身體看上去比很虛弱,但臉上滿是喜悅.女作家挑了一朵花說:"你看起來很高興.""為什麼不呢?一切都這么美好.""你很能承擔煩惱."女作家又說,然而老太太的回答令女作家大吃一驚."耶穌在星期五被釘在十字架上的時候,那是全世界最糟糕的一天,可三天後就是復活節.所以.當欠遇到不幸時,就會等待三天,一切就會正常了.""等待三天",這是一顆多麼普通而不平凡的心.我從來就不承認與生俱來的命運,但相信人生並非盡是鶯歌舞,四季如春,總是伴隨著幾多不幸,幾多煩惱.其實,每個人的心,都好比一顆水晶球,晶瑩閃爍,然而一旦遭受不測,背判生命的人,會在黑暗中漸漸消殞,而忠實於生命的人,總是將五顏六色,折射到自己生命的每一個角落...... 八.呼吸 有人請教一位哲學大師"人活著靠什麼呢?" 哲學大師:"呼吸." "那麼,"那個人再問:"呼吸又為了什麼?" 哲學大師風趣盎然:"呼者,為出一口氣;吸者,為爭一口氣." 妙不可言!人生漫漫長路,活著的時候,每分每秒都在呼吸,每年每月都在奮斗,拼搏,為名也好,為利也好,為生存也罷,有些人難道不是在為出一口氣?有些人不也在為爭一口氣嗎?俗話說:"成敗在 呼吸之間",一呼吸正描繪出一種人生! 3.14 15:26 九.一張雪白的紙說 [黎巴嫩]紀伯倫 一張雪白的紙說:"我天生是純潔的,我要永遠保持純潔.我寧可被燃燒成白凈的灰,也不願讓黑色接近我,讓不潔之色接近我." 墨水瓶聽了白紙所說的話,黑色的內心暗自好笑,但它從來不敢接近她.彩色筆也聽到了白紙的話,也從來不挨近她.於是這張白紙確實永遠保持了純潔----純潔----然而空虛. 十."分段論"的啟迪 在1984年的東京國際馬拉松邀請賽和1996年的義大利國際馬拉松邀請賽中日本選手山田本一均奪得世界冠軍.當記者請他談談經驗時性情木訥、不善言談的山田本一的回答像迷"用智慧戰勝對手.令人不得要領. 10年後,這個迷才被揭開.山田本一在他的一本自傳中說:每次比賽之前,我都要乘車把比賽線路仔細看上一遍並把沿途比較醒目的標志畫下來.比如第一個標志是銀行,第二個標志是一棵大樹,第三個標志是一座紅房子......這樣一真畫到賽程終點.比賽開始以後,我就以百米的速度奮力向第一個目標沖去;等到第一個目標後,我又以同樣的速度沖向第二個目標;四十多公里的賽程,就被我分解成這么幾個小目標輕松地跑完了.起初,我並不懂得這個道理,我把我的目標定在四十多公里外終點線上的那面旗幟,結果我路了十幾公里就疲憊不堪.我被前面那段遙遠的路程給嚇倒了. 分段實現大目標----這就是山田本一"分段論"給人的啟迪. 為什麼許多孩子都沒能成為他們父母所希望的"龍",不可忽視的一點恐怕就是給孩子所定的目標太大了,就像一座"大山"一樣,把孩子嚇倒了了,壓垮了.如有的父母非要孩子每門功課,每次考試都拿100分不可,98分都不依,這能不"壓垮"孩子么?如果給孩子制訂目標:這個學期75分,下個學期80分......我相信每個孩子都能輕松實現目標. 為什麼我們周圍總有一些人做事半途而廢,其中的原因大概不是因為難度大,而是覺得成功離得太遠,因此,往往做了個開頭就感到力不從心.如果你的目標是一個企業家那麼,不妨把企業家這個目標分解成若干個小目標:一般職員、銷售員、部門負責人......然後,一個目標一個目標地去實現,這樣,成功的把握就會很大. (1)題目:那一幕,我難以忘懷
親人的重逢,朋友的惜別;獲得成功的時刻,遭遇失敗的瞬間;誤會冰釋後的擁抱,絕處逢生時的歡笑……這一幕幕難以忘懷的畫面,長久地定格在我們記憶的屏幕上。
讓我們用深情的筆觸描繪這一幕幕畫面。
(2)仔細閱讀下面的文字,不脫離材料內容,任選一個角度立意,自擬標題,聯系生活,寫一篇文章。
①花和人都會遇到各種各樣的不幸,但是生命的長河是無止境的。(宗璞《紫藤蘿瀑布》)
②在快樂中我們要感謝生命,在痛苦中我們也要感謝生命。快樂固然興奮,苦痛又何嘗不美麗? (冰心《談生命》)
③生命中不光有風和日麗,也有苦雨凄風。面對風雨,我們要堅信:黑暗過後是黎明,寒冬過後是陽春。用你的激情點燃生命的火把,去迎接生命的挑戰。(高建群《感謝創傷》) (4)當冰雪阻斷歸路,我們沒有放棄;當聖火遭遇屈辱,我們團結反擊。如今,當地震撕裂大地,我們仍要以這樣一種聲音告訴世界:中國人將依然與堅強同在。
請以「戰勝自己,堅強起來」為題作文
提示與要求:
(1)為了突出你的個性,希望選擇你最能駕馭的文體(詩歌除外),寫你最熟悉的內容,盡量表達你的真情實感,千萬不要抄襲或套用!
(2)為了更好地表達你的意思,使你的文章內容充實,文章不要少於600字。
(3)為了便於老師評閱你的文章,請你注意:格式正確,書寫工整,標點恰當,卷面整潔,盡量少寫錯別字,少出現病句。
(4)你的文章中不要出現真實的人名、地名、校名等。(5)認真閱讀下邊這則材料,按要求作文。
《紅樓夢》里有這樣一個故事:香菱本來不懂詩,她隨薛寶釵進大觀園後,見賈寶玉與眾姐妹結社詠詩,才「苦志學詩」,她「一天就忙忙碌碌梳了頭,去找黛玉改詩」。學習有了一點心得,就立即談出來,向別人請教,聽取指點幫助。眾姐妹們稱她為「詩魔」,拿她取笑,她行之若素。經多次請教,幾易其稿,「精血誠聚」,終於寫成一首「新巧而有意趣的吟月好詩」。
要求:①自選角度,自定主題,自擬題目,寫一篇600字以上的文章。②書寫工整,正確使用標點符號。 ③文中不得出現真實的人名和校名。
(6)題目:不可忘卻的記憶
要求:①能運用記敘、議論、抒情的表達方式。②字數600以上。③書寫工整,正確使用標點符號。④文中不得出現真實的人名和校名3COME文檔頻道。
C. 初中英語作文16篇
一、Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn』 have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People』s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government』s efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .
二、Save the earth
How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world .
It』s our ty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn』t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We mustn』t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better .
三、Improve our environment
Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ?
We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a stbin . Don』t spit in public places . Don』t draw on public walls . It』s our ty to keep our earth clean and tidy .
四、Pollution around us
In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. It』s very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they proce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand ) . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We haven』t enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. It』s very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .
五、Make our world more beautiful !
Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans . It』s our ty to take care of the nature around us . Animals and plants are our best friends ., and we should share the world with them . We shouldn』t kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals』 home . We must plant more trees and grass , they can make the world greener . The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have . Let』s do our best to make the world beautiful.
六、Keep our school clean
We are studying in this school. It is our ty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. We shouldn』t leave rubbish here and there. Don』t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school . We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I』m sure our school will be more beautiful .
七、My country life
I like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. It』s very quiet . What a nice place I live in !
八、How to learn English well
As we know , English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China . English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world . But how to learn it well ?
The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well . At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . We should spend enough time in practicing English . If we keep on working hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day .
九、How I learn English
Hello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well . I like English very much . I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class , I listen carefully , speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary . After class , I do my homework carefully . I watch English movies and listen to English songs . I have booked an English newspaper . It』s Times English Post , I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good methods . I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day . That』s all .
十、How I improved my English
When I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.
Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.
十一、The importance of English
English is the most widely spoken in the world. It』s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand. It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. It's widely used for business between different countries. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English, too. It is really a bridge to so much knowledge . English is used by travellers and business people around the world. It's one of the world's most important languages as it is so widely used. That's why more and more people in China are interested in learning English.
English is so useful that we must learn it well . Now let』s work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our class .
十二、I want to be an inventor
TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They have greatly changed our life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient. Our life will become better and better. Now I am a high school student. I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.
十三、I want to be a tour guide
I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people to come to China from all over the world. Most of them don』t know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting places in China. I can be one of the guides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on , I must study hard. I am going to learn English every day. I will try my best to make it come true.
十四、I like the Internet
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It』s very useful. I often search the Internet for some information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet.
The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try ?
十五、The Internet
The Internet is becoming more and more important to us. Without it, we can』t do work better. We can go shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games. It』s bad for our eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot .
十六、Computer
Computer is a wonderful machine. It's a great invention in many years. It develops very quickly. The smallest computer is as big as a note-book. We call it pocket computer. Computer becomes more and more important in many ways. It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages. It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it. It can give us a lot fun.
D. 初中英語作文
Earthquake
Kuanghou the devil,
Dark, horror, grief, despair ,,,,,,
It caving in to people indiscriminately mercilessly.
Yes,
We despair, had to give up,
We have swallowed up the darkness that our hearts.
However,
A bright flame Chengqi all the hope,
Our hearts are warm again,
Good people with their那顆fiery heart,
Re-ignited the torch of life.
To panic, no grief, despair no longer ,,,,,,
We will never give up hope.
Listen to the ,,,,,,
We have heard the call of all is,
We must call for a strong, strong!
We do not have been overthrown!
We have not abandoned!
We are strong, is the master of fate!
Because ,,,,,,
All our hearts are together,
No one flinched!
Thanks! From the bottom of the heart-chuen!
We use it to watering the flower of life!
Love the sunny,
We bathed in the warmth,
Life will never be the flower withers.
Hand-in-hand, Xinlian Xin,
We move forward together,
This land,
We all love very deep ,,,,,,
地震,
惡魔的狂吼,
黑暗,驚恐,悲痛,絕望、、、、、、
它向人們肆意地傾瀉無情。
是的,
我們曾經絕望,曾經放棄,
我們曾經認為黑暗吞噬了我們的心。
可是,
光明的火焰撐起了所有的希望,
我們的心靈被再次溫暖,
良的人們用他們那顆火熱的心,
再次點燃生命的火炬。
再驚恐,不再悲痛,不再絕望、、、、、、
我們永遠不會放棄希望。
傾聽、、、、、、
我們聽到的是所有人的呼喚,
呼喚我們要堅強,要堅強!
我們並沒有被打倒!
我們並沒有被拋棄!
我們是強者,是命運的主人!
因為、、、、、、
我們所有的心都在一起,
誰也不退縮!
感謝!是發自內心深處的泉!
我們用它來澆灌生命之花!
愛的陽光普照,
我們沐浴溫暖,
生命之花永不會凋謝。
手牽手,心連心,
我們一起向前邁進,
這土地,
我們都愛得很深沉、、、、、、
四川地震英語詞彙作文知識專題
May 12th is an ordinary day in 2008,itis in this day that shocking earthquake happened in Sichuan province,China.The earthquake destroyed nearly everything in Wenchan county Sichuan province. It was terrible.We can't describle the scene what we saw with any words.thousands of people were injured even died. And thousands of children became such unlucky ones who lost fathers or mothers , they longed to have families to continue their lives .I am sympathetic to their fate ! But I believed that we can fight against the fate and change it .For example ,there many people keeping living without food or water for about 100 hours ring the earthquake!
What an unbelievable thing it is !their great spirits showed the powerful life vitality of humans!However,they must keep fighting against the death .Many schools were destroyed and there were many students and teachers who left us forever.Sadness,hoplessness and different kinds of danger spreaded out here and there !
But ,fortunately ,love is around us :the Communist party helps us ,the army helps us ,the people all over the world help us .They offer us with money ,goods ,love and so on !For example ,li lian ji, a warm-hearted man ,offered us with 20 million yuan !
With the help of the such a large love ,we will over come the damage of the earthquake and face our beautiful future !
再看看這里:
http://www.yingyu.com/zhuanti/2008/519ai.htm
E. 初中英語寫作課的講法
初三英語寫作公開課課教學設計
課型:專題復習課
教學內容:初三英語書面表達專題復習
教學目標: 1.指導學生掌握書面表達語篇結構的組織技巧。
2.幫助學生學會使用常用的連接詞、過渡詞和過渡句,提高文章的連貫性。
3.培養學生在有限的時間內快速構思、羅列提綱的能力。
4. 指導學生小組合作評改學生習作。
教學重點: 1.幫助學生學會使用常用的連接詞、過渡詞和過渡句,提高文章的連貫性。
2. 培養學生在有限的時間內快速構思、羅列提綱及擴展成文的能力
教學難點:1.幫助學生學會使用常用的連接詞、過渡詞和過渡句,提高文章的連貫性。
2. 培養學生在有限的時間內快速構思、羅列提綱及擴展成文的能力討論法
教學方法:自主學習,合作學習
教學輔助手段:電腦(或實物投影儀)
學情分析:
1. 書面表達是寫的一種途徑,是英語交際的重要組成部分。初中階段對於英語寫作的要求,實際上是「有指導的寫作」(Guided Writing)。它通過提供情景(文字、圖畫、表格),讓學生用學過的英語語言來描述事物或事件並表達一定的思想,以此達成和檢驗對所學英語語言知識的實踐應用能力。客觀地說,書面表達一直是我們英語教學的一個難點,也是學生應試的一個難點。
從中考英語試卷的抽樣調查情況來看,英語寫作是得分最為薄弱的一個題項。究其原因,一是學生寫作練習的時間少,二是教師平時缺乏對學生進行系統的寫作知識的指導。(比如,如何用詞、句、組段、謀篇等)。這些原因造成了學生從最初不會寫盲目寫到不願寫。懼怕寫,直至最後拒絕寫的惡性循環。
2. 學生分析 我校學生生源較差,學生英語學習兩級分化嚴重,因此盡管經過3年的學習與訓練,仍有相當一部分學生作文得分在6-7分之間甚至更低。書面表達中式英語較多,連貫性較差。很多學生對書面表達中快速構思和羅列提綱能力較差。本堂課希望通過指導、幫助提高學生學會使用常用的連接詞、過渡詞和過渡句,提高文章的連貫性,幫助學生在有限的時間內快速構思、羅列提綱能力。
二、教學流程設計
步驟 目的 教師活動/方法 學生活動/方法
1. warm-up Attract the Ss attention. Let them focus on the topic
Lead out the importance of using the conj.s properly in English writing. Ask Ss:
1. What do they think of the English writing? Easy or difficult?
2.What troubles them most in their writing? Answer the questions, and tell their feelings about English writing.
2. task 1 Ss compare two Ss』s writing and evaluate it
Let Ss realize the importance of using the conj.s
1. have Ss compare two Ss』s writing and evaluate it
2. tell Ss it』s very important to use the conj.s properly 1. compare the two Ss』 writing in pairs and evaluate it, understand the importance of using the conj.s
3. task 2
Lead Ss to learn how to organize a composition, how to use the conj.s and how to write a good composition 1. have Ss complete the exercises, underline the conjs , topic sentences, supporting sentences and conclusion sentences of a student』s composition
2. Analyze the composition together 1 Ss complete the exercises, underline the conjs , topic sentences, supporting sentences and conclusion sentences of a student』s composition
2..Ss learn how to organize a composition, and how to use conj.s properly.
4. task 3 Lead Ss learn to list the outline of the composition, and complete the writing. And evaluate it together
1. help Ss to learn how to list the outline of a composition.
2.Have Ss write the composition
3. have Ss evaluate their writings 1. Ss learn how to list the outline of a composition.
2. write the composition
3. evaluate their writings in pairs
summary
and homework 1. Summary how to write a good composition.
2. Homework
Rewrite the composition and complete the other exercises
課後反思:
本節課從提問學生寫作中最大的困惑入手,引出本節課的主要教學目標,在寫作中學會構思和使用連詞。通過比較兩篇學生的英語習作,讓學生認識到連詞在英語寫作中的重要性。通過分析一篇學生的範文,讓學生了解怎樣去運用關聯詞,怎樣去組織一篇文章,最後讓學生根據提供的材料完成一篇習作,並互相評價,修改。
我認為本節課在以下幾個方面處理得較好:
1. 課堂教學組織嚴謹,教學各個環節環環相扣,很流暢,由提問引出主題,通過比較學生習作認識到連詞使用的重要,通過分析學生習作教學生學會怎麼運用,最後進行實踐。
2. 學生書信寫作練習的設計比較新穎。從一位學困生的角度,用廣州話說出對老師的感激,及今後的打算,容易引起學生寫作的興趣。
3. 考慮到本校學生生源的實際情況,寫作任務經過了層層分解,從文章結構的構思,到語言的組織,時態的運用等給足了提示,使寫作任務的難度降低了,讓大部分學生都可以完成寫作任務。
不足方面:因時間關系,學生寫作的時間不太夠,還有一小部分學生沒有按時完成寫作任務。習作的點評也不夠時間處理,只點評了一篇習作,如果能找各個層次的學生習作進行點評就更好。
F. 初中英語作文範文(5篇)
1. By the side of Du Liu River,there is beautiful village.It』s my hometown.
The river is clear and long.In it there are lots of fishes and all kinds of stones.Flowers and grass grow all over the banks.They are red ,yellow,green,blue and white.All of them form a beautiful picture of nature.If you look at it carefully by yourself,you must be much pleasure.
There are many trees on the bank of the river,the trees are big and tall.Like big umbrellas .In summer,birds sing in them,people read ,play and talk under them. Then the natural parks are formed.Do you want to come here .The people not only are very kind and warm-hearted,but also are hard-workink.
So I love my hometown .Love everything of my hometown..I hope my hometown richer and ric
2.Dear mom:
Today is October 10th..It』s your birthday.I want to say:「Thank you ,mom.I love you,mom.」
I am thirteen years old now,and I can know many things.You are a great mother. You not only work at office,but also do housework at home.You always say:「We should be helpful and kind.」You ask me to eat healthy food and keep take exercese .Every morning,we run together.Every evening,you help me with my English.For me and our family you do everything.You are toilsome,mom.I will study harder and won』t let you down.
Happy birthday,mom.I hope you healthy and young forever.
3.Rong Jiang ,Gui Zhou is my hometown a small city lived Dong(侗),Miao(苗),Shui(水),Yao(瑤)people.There has beautiful mountains、clear water and long history.
It is named Rong Jiang because of banyans.There are many big and tall banyans by the side of the rivers.The banyans are old-age around hundreds of years. They are like soliders keep guard our homeland.They also like big umbrellas keep out wind and rain for people in the four seasons. Ancient Banyans Group is a smart sight at my hometown.
Rong Jiang is famous for watermelon and its special local procts.In summer, watermelons are mature.In the fields are all over the delicious watermelons.Everyone loves them.When you are thirsty,you can partake a piece of watermelon,the immortal you are.My hometown has many special local procts,such as juan fen(卷粉) 、solt fish(腌魚)、solt meat(腌肉)、solt vegetable(腌菜) ect.They are very delicious,too.Welcome to my hometown and taste the toothsome foods.
I love my hometown,love the mountains、the rivers and the people.I must study harder.Then I can make my hometown more beautiful and richer in future.
4.English is more and more important around the world. So we must try our best to learn English well.Plenty of students have trouble in learning English. Ihave four golden ways in learning English. First, we must concentrate on listening to the teacher , because it's the most important . We can learn a lot in class. Secendly, we must be able to read aloud . Maybe you feel difficult , but don't stop reading. Don't be afraid of making mistakes, you must believe that you can do better . Thirdly ,you should do more practice by writting . If you study English by these ways , you'll be a successful student.
5.My Strict Mother
趙世傑
In my memory, people always say 「Strict father, kind mother.」 The fact isn』t like that in my family. I have not only a strict father, but also a strict mother.
When I was there years old, Mother cursed me hard because I broke a bowl. That made me frightened. After that day, I tried to do everything carefully in case she scolded me badly. I knew she only wanted me to do well.
Perhaps I said some wrong words when I played with my younger cousin. My father scolded me, so did my mother. She never tells me why she treats me strictly. I think it is hard work that made Mother strict and confident.
My dear mom, could you treat me kindly? I would be more wonderful if you were not so strict!
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G. 初中英語作文格式及範文
一、書信格式
1 .信頭。指發信人的地址和日期。從信紙的上端中央往右寫。第一行寫單位名稱,第二行寫門牌號和路名,第三行寫市名、省名、國名,第四行寫發信日期。學生寫信時第一行寫班級名稱,第二行寫系科名稱,第三行寫學校名稱,第四行寫市、省名稱,第五行寫國家名稱,第六行寫發信日期。如果是國內信件,國名可以不寫。要特別注意英文地址寫法順序是從小單位到大單位。日期的寫法有美英之分。英國的寫法是:日,月,年,如 10th of October , 2002 .美國的寫法是:月,日,年,如 October 10 , 2002 .例如:
Xiangyang Middle School (向陽中學)
No . 120 , Xinhua Road (新華路 120 號)
Cangzhou , Hebei Province 061001 (滄州市河北省 061001 )
P . R . of China (中華人民共和國)
October 20 , 2002 ( 2002 年 10 月 20 日)
2 .信內地址。指收信人的姓名和地址。低於信頭 1 — 2 行,從左邊開始寫。第一行寫姓名、頭銜,第二行寫單位名稱,第三行寫門牌號及路名,第四行寫市、省名稱,第五行寫國名。寫往學校的信,第一行寫姓名、頭銜,第二行寫系科名稱,第三行寫學校名稱,第四行寫市名、省名及郵政編碼,第五行寫國名。商業往來信件及公函必須寫信頭和信內地址。親友、熟人之間的信可以不寫信內地址,信頭處寫發信日期就行了。它與信封上收信人姓名、地址完全一樣。
3 .稱呼。就是對收信人的稱呼。信內地址下隔一、二行寫稱呼,其左側與信內地址第一行對齊,稱呼後面一般用逗號,但正式函件稱呼後多用冒號。對不相識的男子,單數常用 Sir , Dear Sir ,或 My Dear Sir ;復數常用 Dear Sirs 或 Gentlemen .對不相識的女子,單數常用 Madam , Dear Madam ,或 My Dear Madam ;復數常用 Madams 或 My Dear Madams .對比較熟識的男子,普通稱 Dear Mr .。。即可。對比較熟識的女性,普通稱 Dear Mrs (或 Miss )。。。即可。
4 .正文。是書信的主要部分,一般從稱呼下方隔一至兩行處開始寫正文。每段的第一個字母一般要縮進 3 — 5 個字母的空格。正文的內容要表達清楚,語言要簡單明了,態度要誠懇禮貌。如果信中涉及的事情不多,可以一段到底,如果要講的事情多,則可以分成幾段,段與段之間常隔 1 — 2 行。
5 .結束語。是寫信人對收信人的謙稱,寫在正文的下面 2 — 3 行處,從信紙中央偏右的地方寫起,一般用 Yours (第一個字母大寫)。若是親戚(包括家人),可以寫 Your loving son / sister / brother / daughter 等之類的表達法,若是對朋友,可以寫 Your friend ;若是對老師,可以寫 Your student .
6 .簽名。一般寫在結束語之下。
二、信封
英文信封的寫法與漢語不同。收信人的姓名及地址應寫在信封中下部,且先寫姓名後寫地址。寄信人的姓名及地址應寫在信封的左上角,若是普通書信,也可寫在信封背面。郵票貼在信封的右上角。在信封上常見的附加說明有「 Urgent (急件), Express (快件), Registered ( Regd )(掛號信), Airm ail (航空信)等」,要根據實際情況選用。下面是信封的格式:
怎麼樣,同學們?會用英語寫信了嗎?做一道中考題練練吧。
( 2002 河北省)根據提示和要求完成下面短文。
假如你( Li Lei )在去年夏令營認識的一個朋友 Jim 從英國給你寄來一件禮物—一件紅色的襯衫,並附有一封信。在信中他向你問好,他想知道你近來在忙些什麼。請你給他寫一封回信( 100 個詞左右)表示感謝。回信要包括以下內容:
①向 Jim 問好並對他表示感謝。
②禮物是你最喜歡的顏色,尺寸很合適,你非常喜歡。
③告訴 Jim 你近來很好,上周剛過完生日,生日聚會很熱鬧。詢問 Jim 的近況,並表示希望他能來中國。
注意:①信的格式已經給出。②信中不得使用真實的人名、地名。
65Zhonghua Street
Shijiazhuang 050000
Hebei , China
June 21st , 2002
Dear Jim ,
How are you ? ____________________________________________________
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範文..
Your friend ,
Li LeiMy dearest Mother,
The mother『s day is coming and I would like to say "Happy mother『s day" in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day, I will stay away and can『t give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself, so don『t worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can『t be at home, I hope you have a wonderful mother『s day.
Love,
Your so寫作知識輔導——記敘文
Hi , dear friends .前幾次講的內容你們掌握了嗎?這次我要給大家說說初中階段常見的幾種文體——記敘文、描寫文、說明文的寫法。咱們先說說記敘文吧。
記敘文是以寫人、敘事為主要內容的一種文體,也是英語作文中最普遍、最基本的文體。它一般包括兩種:事實記敘文和想像記敘文。事實記敘文是寫真實事情,常用一般過去時;想像記敘文是寫虛擬的故事,常用一般現在時。它們的特點都是通過對人物、事件和景物的描寫,表現文章的主題和作者的思想感情。
記敘文寫作的基本要求是什麼呢?
①要有明確的中心思想。②記敘要清楚明白。③線索要清晰。④要有恰當的敘事角度。⑤選材要詳略得當。
具體地說,記敘文寫作要把握以下幾點:
1 .記敘文所記敘的事件必須相關連。要有開頭( beginning )、中間( middle )和結尾( end )。在必要時加入沖突( conflict ),以使情節曲折,跌宕起伏。一般說來,寫記敘文應把握好六個要素: who (何人)、 what (何事)、 when (何時)、 where (何地)、 why (何因)、 how (怎麼)。初中階段多為敘事短文,一般應包括 where , who , what 這三個最基本的東西。
2 .寫作時觀點的掌握非常重要。記敘文常用第一人稱或第三人稱兩種人稱記述。用第一人稱的角度記敘,使人感到親切,讀者很容易產生身臨其境之感,相信真有其事。這種形式常用在寫自傳、本人的經歷或記敘耳聞目睹的事件;用第三人稱的角度記敘,使人感到客觀。這種形式常用在對重大事件的客觀報導,以及記敘他人的經歷或事跡。
3 .常見的敘述方式有:①順敘。按事情發展的順序或時間順序進行敘述。②倒敘。把事情的結局或某個突出的片段提到前面敘述,然後再按照事情的順序敘述下去。③插敘。在敘述過程中,由於某種需要,暫時把敘述的線索中斷一下,插入有關的另一敘述。④夾敘夾議。一方面敘述事情,一方面對這件事情加以分析或評論。
請看下面的例文。要求:寫一篇題為 Planting Trees 的文章。
Planting Trees
It was fine on March 12 , 2001 . I got up early that day . All the students in our school went to the hill to plant trees .
We arrived at the hill at eight o'clock . The teacher asked each of us to plant at least six trees . Then we started digging , planting and watering . We all worked so hard that we could finish our tasks ahead of tim e . Among us , Wang Lin , our monitor set a good example for us . Though he was ill , he worked harder . When he finished his task , he went on to help others without even a little rest . He was wet all over after work .「 I must learn from him ,」 I said to myself . Looking at the lines of the young trees , we smiled happily , forgetting our tiredness .
這是一篇記敘文,記敘了 2001 年 3 月 12 日上山植樹的情況。文章主題鮮明,有條有理。 when (何時)、 where (何地)、 who (何人)、 what (何事)等交待的清清楚楚。
描寫文是以描寫為主要表達方式的文體,所謂描寫就是作者用生動、形象的語言對
人物、事物和環境作具體形象的描繪和刻畫,描寫的主要作用是:①展現美麗的自然景色;②描寫人物的外貌和內心世界;③交待人物活動的自然環境和社會環境。 在寫作過程中,作者可以按空間位置順序,由遠及近,由上及下,由外到內,由前到後組織材料,也可以按作者視線轉移的順序組織材料,先看到的先寫,後看到的後寫。描寫的基本方法按性質可分為主觀描寫和客觀描寫兩種。所謂主觀描寫就是在描寫過程中摻入作者自己的感受,寄託自己的主觀感情,塑造自己的理想的形象;客觀描寫就是在描寫過程中,作者不帶或很少帶主觀的感情色彩,而只對人物或某物的特徵客觀地、就事論事進行描寫。
請看下面的描述文:
Sunset
In order to see the sunset , I got everything ready before 5in the afternoon . Then I went to the East Hill .
At that time , the sun was already in the west but it was still shining . Its light was so bright that I couldn't even open my eyes . When I arrived at the East Hill , the light became a bit yellow . After a short while , it was completely golden , then red . The sun nearly set . It was like a big red ball . The cloud around it was also painted red . Little by little the cloud covered more and more of the sun . At last it disappeared behind the cloud . It was dark and I hurried back .
本文交待了看日落的時間、地點,詳細地描寫了日落的全過程。文章主要採用了客觀描寫方法,語言簡潔,描寫具體、生動。
下面該談談說明文了。
說明文是以說明為主要表達方式的文體。它主要用來說明事物的特點、發展變化規律、分析前因後果,目的在於使讀者獲得必要的信息,使人們對事物有個清晰、完整的了解和認識。說明文分為三種類型:實體事物說明文,包括說明書、廣告、解說詞等;事理說明文,包括理論性概念解釋、書文簡介、教材等;文藝性說明文,即要把說明的對象擬人化,進而編成一個故事介紹給讀者。
寫說明文要注意以下幾點:
1 .要抓准特徵。對某一事物予以說明,首先要弄清從哪些方面加以說明才能准確地反映被說明的事物。一般說來,說明事物可以從被說明事物的顏色、形狀、形態;性質、性能、習性;原因、原理;作用、用途、功能;危害、影響;結構;操作過程;發生、發展的規律等方面著手。但是,每一事物都有它自己的特徵,因而顯示出了這一事物與其他一事物的根本區別,因此,在說明事物時,不要面面俱到,要抓住事物的特徵,這樣才能使讀者得到具體而深刻的印象。
2 .層次要分明。說明事物要注意條理,否則就不可能說清復雜的事物。例如說明事物的結構,就要按照構造的順序來說明,或從上到下,或從前到後,或由外到里,或由主到次。又如說明四季的變化,就要按照時間的順序( spring , summer , autumn , winter )來寫。
3 .解析要清楚。對各種知識所作的解釋,對某種事物所作的說明,都要清楚明白。
4 .表現手法要多樣。常見的說明文方法有:①下定義。②舉例子。③運用比喻、比擬的方法。④做比較。⑤引用數字。⑥分類別。⑦列圖表。
5 .用詞要力求准確。引用的數據要絕對可靠,文字要簡明扼要,一目瞭然。這是寫說明文在語言文字上的要求:
請看下面的例文:
Hello , friends ,
You are warmly welcomed to our school . I'm Wu Dong . I'm very glad to be your guide . First , I'd like to tell you something about our school . It was set up in 1957 . The number of students is over 1200 , and the teachers about 100 . There are altogether 20classes . Besides the teaching buildings , we have a library for different kinds of subjects , and a school-run workshop .
We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon . After classes , we join in various activities , such as ball games , painting , singing and dancing .
Now let me show you around our school . This way , please .
本文是一篇說明文,是由學生接待來訪的朋友,向人們介紹本校的情況。本文目的明確,材料准確、詳實,語言簡練,並能按一定的順序來寫,是一篇較好的說明文。
怎麼樣?會寫這幾種文體了嗎?試著寫兩篇吧?
1 .記述一次郊遊活動( outing ),包括下列內容:
①時間、地點:上星期六,海邊。
②活動內容:去時花了幾個小時,到海邊後搭帳蓬,在露天生火做飯,講故事,唱歌,做游戲。
③自己感想:盡管很累,大家玩得很痛快。
要求:用第一人稱寫,詞數 70 左右。
2 .向明中學的「英語角」活動開展得有聲有色。請你用英語為一家英文報紙寫一篇 80 — 100 字的簡訊。